TUM HI HO - NIBIR SS **PART 12 - PAGE 43 complete** - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

unres😆
6th post un re ng after my comeback😆🤣
Sorry 4 late comments...😳

Wah Nishi... 👏 tu toh ek damm ROMANTIC WRITER nikali... Pehle Update main hi KISS😳🤣

U knw wat.. Aftr NiBir I like RaKa bond & I m happy ki tune apne SS ki shuruwat RaKa Se ki.. Awieee.. Father-Son duo I love itt👏👏👏

This dialogue of Ramesh Cracked me... Dammad ki K ness ka asar unpar bhi aa gaya..🤣🤣Kya Dialogue maara hai Sasur ne...!!!🤣

Ramesh- areee...wo Teri biwi h... Mujhse kya puch rha h...

Loved Kabir's Monologues.. Gud use of Words Nishi..👏

nisha ab chahte hue bhi tujhse door nhi ja paunga ... mera har sapna tere sath h.. Pahli bar pyaar ko samjha h use khone nhi de Sakta...tujhe chod k nhi ja sakta


nisha main nhi janta tu mere liye kuch feel karti hai ki nhi but main tere liye jo feel karta hoon... uss hisab se mujhe itna vishwas hai k tu bhi mujhse pyaar karne lagegi... tu meri life mai bht matter karti hai islie mai tujhe chod k khi bhi nhi jaunga...kabhi bhi nhi...


Nisha..😲 Apne Pati ko Sothe huye Kiss karthi hai aur jab jaagtha rehtha hai tab kick maarthi hai
Kya Biwi Mili hai Bechare Kabirey ko🤣

& Nisha Bahana Toh acha keh dethi... MAKHI MARR RAHI THI vo bhi KISS karke??😲🤣🤣

Last Part's Monologue with "HARKATEIN" I love dat word yaar.. N I was 🤣

mujhe samjhne m thoda tym lagega par teri harkatein kuch na kuch to jaroor bta dengi... Abhi to bht kuch karna h... Tu aise hi to mujhe kiss nhi karti... Bs thodi aur hatkatein fir confirm ho jayega ki tu chahti kya h.. Fir tu khud mujhe bolegi ... Ruk ja kabir...


👏👏👏This is 4 U Nishi..🤗
Do Write More..🤗 Q Ki DMM(Dil Maange More)😳😆🤣

Doosara comment bhi abhi karungi..😆🤣
🤗



awwweee... saru baby ...
tumhara comment padhne k bad mera dil garden garden ho gya...
see i m blushing 😳
mere dialouge k itni tareef

big hug 🤗

n ha tumhare DMM k iksha puri karne k poori koshish rahegi..
n abt word HARKATEIN ...
tumhe kai sare bhari bharkam hindi k words sunne ko milenge bcoz mujhe hindi language use karna hi accha lagta h ...
bcoz hindi m emotion khul k ate h...

now for me its party time..🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
sorry guys ...
sabko comment nhi kiya islie...😳
thanx to all for appreciating my work 🤗 🤗
i will try k aur bhi acchi story likh saku age bhi...😳😳
kuch accha na lage to plss let me know mai try karungi use sudharne ko...

FIR SE...
THANX TO ALL FOR LIKING AND APPRECIATING MY WORK...😊😊

😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
PART - 3

Raste m chalte chalte ...

Kabir- nisha... Time kitna jaldi beet jata h na ... Abhi humari shadi hui thi aur ab 3 months khatam bhi honewale h...

Nisha-(kabir k bat se nisha k dimaag m apne aur kabir k sath bitaye har moments chalne lage) unhi moments m khoye huye... Ha kitni jaldi tym beet gya..

Kabir-(man m agar mera plan shi kam kiya to tere man k aadhi bat to bahar aa hi jayegi )

Nisha- kaash hum time ko rok sakte hote...un palo ko rok sakte hote jinme hume khushi milti h..us insan ko jisse hum...(nisha stops suddenly on realizing k wo kya bolne ja rhi thi )

Kabir- nisha jisse hum kya ??

Nisha- wo jisse hum.. Jisse hum ... Aa..aapni sari bat sharee karte h...

Kabir- really ??

Nisha- ha aur kya ??( kabir se najar churate hue...)

Aachanak zor k hawa chalti h. .. Dhool udane lagti h.. Nisha kabir k paas ati h... Apne stole se apna aur kabir ka face cover kar deti h...

Kabir-(surprisingly seeing nisha) Bijali kadakti h... Nisha kabir ko zor se hug kar leti h...

Kabir-(still feeling surprised)

Nisha-(apna face uthati h...)

Nisha aur kabir share an eyelock... Both lost in eachothers eyes... Both totally lost in love but ek dusre k feelings k liye sure nhi... Dheere dheere kar k their faces paas ane lagte hai...Nisha aur kabir k lips k bich bs 1 inch ka frk rehta h... Tabhi zor se barish start ho jati h.. They both come back to their sense...

Nisha hug break karte hue piche mudti h ...ghar jane k liye age badhti h... Kabir piche se nisha ka hath pakad k

Kabir-nisha...mai 2 hafte m yahan se ja rha hoon... Tujhse ek chiz mangna chahta hoon...

Nisha-(her heartbeating very fast) ( hesitantly) kya ??

Kabir- tera do din..

Nisha-(apne tears ko control karte hue) matlab ??

Kabir- maine picnic plan k h... Tere aur cousins k liye..

Nisha-(apne man m tu kyu kar rha h ye sab.. Tu chala jayega fir m kaise rahungi tere bina...)

Kabir- degi na ??

Nisha- (apne aansu pochte hue) hmmm...

Kabir- (apne man m i knw mujhe tujhe sach bta dena chahiye but ye bhi janta hoon k tu bhi pyaar karti h aur mujhe bs wo pyaar pana h...tere mooh se sunna hai kit u bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai) thanx...

Nisha- ghar chal warna bimar pad jayega...

Ghar aake...

Nisha kapade change karne k liye bedroom m jati h... Apne aur kabir k kapade nikalti h... Kabir ko aawaj lagati h...

Nisha- tere kapde nikal diye h change karle...(kah k washroom m chali jati h) 10 min bad...

Kabir-(walk k time hue incident ko sochte hue) kamare m ata h...

Kabir apni trousers change kar k shots pehnta h... Tabhi nisha washroom se nikalti h... Kabir usko dekh k mesmerized rah jata h..

Pink color k night suit m...uska face aur bhi glow kar rha h..uspe ye bheege hue Baal...

Nisha- tune abhi tak change nhi kiya ... Thand lag jayegi...

Kabir- kar rha hoon... Tabhi achanak se light chali jati h...

Nisha- tu change kar m candles lgati hu...

Kabir- shirt utarta h... Nisha candle jalati h... Mirror k pas rakhti h..tabhi uski najar kabir pe padti h... Jo k without shirt apne Baal poch rha hota h...

Nisha-(kabir ko dekhte...kaise batau tujhe k tujhse kitna pyaar karti hoon.. Ye duri jo hamare bich h ise khatam kar dena chahti hoon..chahti hoon k tujhe wo sare haq du jo tera h...par tujhe kaise khu samjh nhi aa rha...tu pyaar karta bhi hai ya nhi mujhe nhi pta...)

Kabir see nisha staring him with eyes full of desperation...

Kabir-(ye mauka h..tere man k bat samne lane ka...agar tere dil m mere liye kuch bhi h to tu mujhe apne kareeb ane se nhi rokegi) Kabir without shirt dheere dheere kar k nisha k taraf jana shuru karta h...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

hope you guys will enjoy...😊😊

do comment n let me know 😊😊

galtiyaan bhi bta dena yaar 😆😆

Edited by naina.majik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Nice update
nibir walk was very nice
kabir toh pura k hogaya hai full on romantic mood mein hai
waiting for the next update and ofcourse their picnic and some romance
ritika
Can u pm me plz pretty plz
Edited by mishrialways - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
nice update...continue soon...n ty for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Nice update

nibir walk was very nice
kabir toh pura k hogaya hai full on romantic mood mein hai
waiting for the next update and ofcourse their picnic and some romance
ritika
Can u pm me plz pretty plz


yup... i will do nxt time for sure..
buddy list m add kar liya hai..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Wow...nibir walk, rain nd thunder sequence full on filmy tha, kash serial me dekhne milta
Nisha starring kabir awww... 😳
Thnx for pm nd update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Nice update. ..kabir in romantic mood..excited for the picnic. .but if they come close now will they go to picnic..😉
Continue soon. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
😳dono ke lips 1 inch doori par☺️
aur baarish😉
shirtless kabiraa n pink night suit main nisha My Gm activated🤣

nice part yaar
update nxt part soon

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