TUM HI HO - NIBIR SS **PART 12 - PAGE 43 complete**

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oh nakhrewaali

@oh_nakhrewaali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Awesome👍🏼...
continue soon😊...
loved the banner❤️

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mika17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Thnku for the pm

Lovely update

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sonal

@SONAL30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Nice start dear👏

Loved it n thanks for the pm

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Saranya Senan M C

@SaruSenan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

unres😆
6th post un re ng after my comeback😆🤣
Sorry 4 late comments...😳

Wah Nishi... 👏 tu toh ek damm ROMANTIC WRITER nikali... Pehle Update main hi KISS😳🤣

U knw wat.. Aftr NiBir I like RaKa bond & I m happy ki tune apne SS ki shuruwat RaKa Se ki.. Awieee.. Father-Son duo I love itt👏👏👏

This dialogue of Ramesh Cracked me... Dammad ki K ness ka asar unpar bhi aa gaya..🤣🤣Kya Dialogue maara hai Sasur ne...!!!🤣

Ramesh- areee...wo Teri biwi h... Mujhse kya puch rha h...

Loved Kabir's Monologues.. Gud use of Words Nishi..👏

nisha ab chahte hue bhi tujhse door nhi ja paunga ... mera har sapna tere sath h.. Pahli bar pyaar ko samjha h use khone nhi de Sakta...tujhe chod k nhi ja sakta

nisha main nhi janta tu mere liye kuch feel karti hai ki nhi but main tere liye jo feel karta hoon... uss hisab se mujhe itna vishwas hai k tu bhi mujhse pyaar karne lagegi... tu meri life mai bht matter karti hai islie mai tujhe chod k khi bhi nhi jaunga...kabhi bhi nhi...

Nisha..😲 Apne Pati ko Sothe huye Kiss karthi hai aur jab jaagtha rehtha hai tab kick maarthi hai
Kya Biwi Mili hai Bechare Kabirey ko🤣

& Nisha Bahana Toh acha keh dethi... MAKHI MARR RAHI THI vo bhi KISS karke??😲🤣🤣

Last Part's Monologue with "HARKATEIN" I love dat word yaar.. N I was 🤣

mujhe samjhne m thoda tym lagega par teri harkatein kuch na kuch to jaroor bta dengi... Abhi to bht kuch karna h... Tu aise hi to mujhe kiss nhi karti... Bs thodi aur hatkatein fir confirm ho jayega ki tu chahti kya h.. Fir tu khud mujhe bolegi ... Ruk ja kabir...

👏👏👏This is 4 U Nishi..🤗
Do Write More..🤗 Q Ki DMM(Dil Maange More)😳😆🤣

Doosara comment bhi abhi karungi..😆🤣

Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago

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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Nice start..
I loved it
Please update soon

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picadally

@picadally

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

This was good kabir seems to be in a naughty mood. 😆 pata nahi nisha ka kya haal karega 😆

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Lekha

@Echo.of.Hope

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

makkhi hata rahi thi🤣

do cont.soon

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Nishtha

@naina.majik

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

PART - 2

Kabir bedroom me ake...

Kabir- nisha... Mai abhi market se ata hoon...kuch chahiye to phone kar

dena...

Nisha- par iss waqt market jane k kya jaroorat pad gyi ??

Kabir - kya ?? are mai kya apni marzi se market bhi nhi ja sakta...??

Nisha - m..m..maine to aisa nhi kha... (slow voice m bolte hue... Mere

kahne se tu har kuch karta to sabse pahle mai tujhe london na jane ko hi kah deti...)

Kabir- ( nisha k bat sunne k koshish karte hue )... tune kuch kha ??

Nisha - n..n..nhi to... tune kuch suna ??

Kabir - nhi...mai bas thodi der m ata hoon..

Kabir nisha se bahana mar k GH jata hai dada ji se picnic k liye permission lene

Kabir gangwal house jake picnic k liye permission leta h..

Dada Ji man jate h

Jwala- jiju suddenly ye plan ??

Kabir- kyu k is tym ye jaroori h..

Sukku- matlab

Kabir- .mujhe kuch pta karna h...

Sukku- aur tujhe hmari help chahiye

Kabir-not really but ha...but plss nisha ko mat pta lagne dena

Sukku- ok

Kabir- chalo ... Kal subh nikalte h... Sab ready rehna... mai chalta hoon tumhari behan gusse m laal peeli ho rhi hogi...

Nisha ghar pe...

Nisha- ye kabir kha rah gya...isko pta h mai akele hoon fir bhi ghoom rha h... Phone karti hu...

Nisha kabir ko phone karti hai...

Kabir- hello... Ha bol...(piche se kuch ladkiyon k aawaj ati h)

Nisha- (ladkiyon k awaaj sun k ) kha h tu ??... Aur tere piche ye kaun bol rha h..

Kabir- koi nhi h...ek min ek min r u jealous ??

Nisha - tu pagal h kya ?? mai aur jealous wo bhi tere liye ... itne bure din bhi nhi aye h mere..

Kabir - oh... chal phone rakh aa rha hoon bs.. (jhoot bolna to koi isse seekhe)

Nisha-(jealous feel karte hue..kaun thi wo ??)... (Aapne man m ye tu kya soch rhi h

nisha... Wo jahan bhi jaye jo bhi kare tu use kaise rokegi... Aaj wo yahan kal london chala jayega to kya karegi ?? )

Door bell bajati h... Ayi ek min.. Nisha gate kholti h..

Kabir dher sare saaman k sath gate pe khada...

Nisha-kabirrr ye sab kya h...?? Tu itna saaman kyu lekar aya h..

Kabir- relax...maine socha m jane se pahle sara samaan tujhe deta jaun..

Nisha- kabir k bat se sad ho jati hai... (aankh m aansu bhar jate h aur waha se bedroom m chali jati h )

Kabir bedroom mai aake...nisha k ko notice karte hue

Kabir-(apni bat ka nisha pe asar dekh k khush hota h) kya hua ?? Chup kyu ho gyi ?

Nisha- nhi bs yuhi..

Kabir-bs yuhi (man hi man khush hote hue) OK...

Nisha-sona nhi h tujhe...chal sote h..

(Suddenly kabir kehta hai...)

Kabir-mera walk pe jane ka man h...

Nisha- itni rat ko ??

Kabir-ha pta nhi kyu kuch ajib lag rha h yha ??

Nisha-matlab ??

Kabir-boring boring types...

Nisha-accha...Tu ja mai rukti hoon

Kabir-(ab kya kru socha tha chalne ko taiyar hogi par ye to...) (Idea) ( ab dekhta hoon tu kaise nhi chalti h ) apna phone dekhte hue nisha se kehta h ... Nisha m abhi aya imp call h..

Nisha-(man m... Aisa kaunsa call h ki ise alag jake bat karni pad rhi h) (nisha age badhti h aur chup k kabir k bat sunne k koshish karti h)...

Kabir- ha ha mai aa rha hoon tum whi ruki rehna... Ha pta h mausam bht accha h.. Walk pe chalenge..sirf m aur tum...

Nisha-(ye kaun h jiske sath ye walk pe jayega ?? )(gusse m... mai bhi dekhti hu ye mere alava kiske sath walk pe jata h)

Kabir-mai walk kar k ata hoon...

Nisha-(jor se chillate hue ) rukkk...mai bhi chal rhi hoon...

Kabir-(smiling mischievously)(man m dekha madam kam kar gya idea) par nisha tu to...

Nisha-mera bhi man karne lga to...kyu tujhe kisi aur se milna h kya ??

Kabir-(smiling hesitantly) nhi to...

Nisha-to chal

Kabir- mera plan kar rha h tumpar meri Mrs. J...

Hope you guys like it..

do comments n let me know ur views..😊😊