The Broken Bond - Moresh SS (Epilogue, Page 49) 9/9 - Page 40

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Batake karo...I'll be ready...😆

Okay 😆

Shwetsss🤗 Saru with her SUPERLATE comments 4 Chapter 13 to 15 😆 Socha sabka comment ek jagah par kar du..😉 I hope IF mere iss comment ko OVERLIMIT na bol de🤣

Sabse Pehle Sorry frm My side😳 for this late comment😛 I just read all these parts in a row😊
Thank U 4 waiting patiently 4 my comments🤗 spl hug 4 dat😛

Chap 13:😳

Excellent Shwettss👏 I loved this chap 4 two reasons😉

1. Viren ke khilaaf Dadiji ke muh se niakle huye GOLDEN WORDS🥳
2. Ramesh's outburst & he stood 4 his dignity🥳

Quoting my fav parts in @BOLD😛

"Here is one son who is reaching heights, achieving his dreams and my other son, my eldest son, has pulled down my business which I had built all these years..." lamented Dadaji sadly, with anger and contempt evident for his first son.

I was Whistling at these GOLDEN WORDS🥳

He knew he let his father down, but he expected support and few motivating words to carry on his fight against the loss, to pull up the business back to its equilibrium.

Oh really VIREN???😡🤢 U want support frm family😡 where were u when Ramy needed his bro's supports???😡😡 Bade aaye support maangne🤢

"Actually...I have my investors meeting in a few minutes...and it's very important...So I have to leave now..." Ramesh completed the sentence highly punctuated.

I was ROFL ng at this dialogue...🤣🤣🤣 Viren ne KYA socha tha & KYA kaha Ramy ne...🥳🤣 Ramy Rocked 🤣& Viren Shacked🤣

Waise mera guess partial hi sahi par sach tha..😉 Viren ke mann mein Ramy ke investors ko apne aur laane ki icha thi...😡 Selfish kahikaa😡 I m gald dat Ramy ne iss baar apne baare mein socha👏

Viren & Rupan 😡🤢

Now, I am being taunted and insulted because I am financially stronger than others in the family. What am I supposed to do then??

Ramy thoughts were excellently penned down👏👏👏 @BOLD This one was my fav😛

Extreme sadness filled the air, a sadness mixed with their failure as parents.

Felt bad 4 Dadu & Dadi...🤔

Chap 14:😳

Another superb update👏👏👏 filled with confused thoughts of the brothers😊

Jwala-Kirti convo was nice😊 @BOLD The taunt dat killed Mohan👏

"Do elder siblings turn from being selfish, to be caring and concerned for the younger ones? Especially when in need?"

Still Mohan is not willing to react or listening to the essence of wat Jwalu said to him.. 🤢 pathetic Mohan.. really pathetic...🤢

He was yet to find an easy escape route from the current problem. "Is it my problem? The fight is between Bhaiya and Ramesh. Ramesh is leaving the house," Mohan told himself. "Why am I worried? Let's see what happens and then decide."

Dolly & Ramy convo was emotional & its the root cause where Ramesh had decided to think abt his decision...👏👏👏

"One cannot be forced to live in a place where he or she feels suffocated. We have to let them leave to live."

@Blue Very well said👏👏👏

RL talks.. 👍🏼The fight b/w ramy's heart & mind regarding wat his family thinks of him excellently written Shwets👏👏👏👏

@Bold Perfect👏👏👏

Viren continued fighting his thoughts through the entire night, anger, guilt, regret and frustration filling his dreams.
Ramesh sat in his room contemplating if his family really loved him or not, if he was really needed in the house or not.

Mohan sat in his room, worrying what his brothers would decide the next day.

Chap 15:😳

Shwetss👏👏👏 Beautifully written👏👏👏

At start how u presented the scenario in three brothers' rooms loved it 👏👏👏

They both had always resolved the conflict so easily apologizing to each other, without realizing that they were just suffixing their conflict with a comma and never a full stop

It PERFECT ly explained the conflicts b/w Viren & Ramy👏

I think we should stop acting as if nothing is wrong among us."

"I know you all love me a lot. But...I want to be equally respected too. Also, I don't want my children to face any disrespect because their father was an incapable man who couldn't keep his words, every time he said he would leave the house."

I loved the decision of Ramy👏👏👏 I m happy dat Dadu agreed to it😃

Ramy's decision is Sensible Decision I must say👍🏼

No! I have to at least for once prove to my kids that I do care for my family and not selfish at all times."

OMG😲 Mohan Spoke???😆 Spl Clap toh banthi hai iss baath par👏👏👏👏

Finally A Happy settlement is shown...👏👏👏

Abhi ke liye itna hi..😆 Wl read & Comment 4 EPILOGUE tomorrow...😃

Finallyyy Vo Pal aa gaya Shwetsss😆 I read the EPILOGUE🥳

The Bestest EPILOGUE U can expect 4 this Story👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Loved it to the core🤗👍🏼

As Usual Will point out my fav parts😉 @BOLD My fav😆🤣 Padh lena poora comment q ki yeh aakhiri Comment hai😛 & Aakhiri UNRES on this SS😛🤣

I had always said dat I was nt a regular viewer of NAUC & wat attracted me to NAUC was NiBir bt I also admit My sec fav bond in this show was RaKa & RN bond

And Shwetss tumne to Epilogue ka start hi Mere Fav RaKa se shuru kiaa iskeliye Spl hugs🤗 plus spl clap👏 toh banthi hai BOSS😆🤣

The excitement in Kabir's Words😳 His "Papa" sounds so much soothful Awwiee😳 & RaKa Hug Awwiee 😳Sooo sweett & Cuteee Thanks u 4 this superb scene👏👏👏

Now the father-son (in laws) duo were going to see their dream RaKa academy coming true.

This one sentence added more beauty to the RaKa Scene Mujhe GB(Gooseberms) aaye

Kabira's "Samosawale tauji" made me remember Viren-Kabira scenes in NAUC & I m smiling😃

Ramy in Kitchen Scene was also nice 👏

Ramy-Mohan Scene talking abt Rupan's Matching Saree & Blouse was soo hilariouss😆🤣 Bechare Mohan ko 7 baar change karna pada😲🤣🤣🤣👏👏👏

Kirti-Manav😃 Wow She married a Business man😛 Manav ka ek dialogue tha bt dat was funny tooo🤣🤣🤣 Kirti wl def win competition🤣 & bechare uske Sasurji ka comment made me laugh more...🤣 Kinna dartha hai re Mohan ji aap apne Rupan se...😆🤣

"So much courage to talk against your wife! I envy you..." replied Mohan leaving everyone laughing.

Saurav-Varsha😲 Surprise 4 Me😆 Well I like DoSa personally😉 still I m glad dat U made Saurav to marry someone else😛 & made Dolly an Independant Woman😉 Claps 4 thinking different 😉& literally shacking ME😆👏👏👏👏👏

Kabir's praise 4 Nishu & Ramy's taunt was again giving me a Wide smile😃 The Father-Son duo Rackss

Sukku ke sudden rejection when he was asked abt spl girl in his life made me think "Daal mein kuch toh kaala hai"😉🤣 & See Bante ne Ladki patayi bhi kon Christain - Jenny🤣 I was Rofl ng 🤣at Ramy-Sukku convo abt Jenny 🤣 Bechare Ramy ko passene aa gayee🤣🤣🤣🤣

Bunty- Jwalu scene was cute...😆 Their Fights were soo sweet😃🤣 Bunty aur Jwalu bhi settled ho gaye

Dadu ki Entry🥳

I was singing "Tune maari entriyan ki Sab ke mann main baji Ghantiyan Tang Tang Tang Tang"😆

"Good!" said Dadaji taking Viren by surprise. "Viren...It's a husband's right to complain about their wife just like a wife does about their husband...Do you think they do it because they hate their wife?" asked Dadaji setting in a chair.

I loved Dadu the most in this Epilogue😳dan in all other 15 parts of this SS😉 aur iska reason yeh hai ki See Dadu ne Ramy ko bulana 4 Supporting him to walk Aww... 😳So sweet nah😊 Moreover dekho He too joined the Hubby club 4 complaining abt Wifeys'🤣🤣🤣

"See...I love Saroj!" said Dadaji happily. "I love Lakshmi!" "I love Nisha!" "I love Kirti" "I love Varsha" "I love Rupan" continued, with everyone looking at Viren. Viren looked away, trying to leave the place but Ramesh caught him in time. "Come on Bhaiya! You have to declare your love for Bhabhi now...Come on..."

Aur sabse zyada mujhe Shackk 😲& Khushi 😆tab mili when Dadu said "I love Saroj"☺️ Oyee hoyeee🥳 ek seethi toh banthi hai nah?🤣🤣🤣

Viren ko sab tease kar rahe the I was ROFL ng again🤣🤣🤣

Sukku-Ramy talk ka ek aur part hai jo mujhe sabse zyada Hilarious laga🤣🤣🤣

"Why don't you try and understand?" asked Sukku desperately but continued taking a deep breath. "Papa! It's a movie where I might have to some intimate scene...So...It's...Can I do it? It would be a great opportunity..." "Great opportunity for what?" questioned a shocked Ramesh.

Great Opportunity 4 What????🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 OMG shwetss😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Tum bhi nah🤣🤣🤣

I liked how Sukku tuk Ramy advice & How Ramy wisely advised & assured him to help..😛Waise manna padega Ramy ke Intusion ko beta bike se car ki demand ki chat se pakad liya bete ke zindagi main koi ladki hai..😆🤣🤣🤣 SO Shmaartt aaa😎🤣🤣🤣

Jab se EPILOGUE start hua hai I was wondering kiss cheese ki celebration ho rahi hai & When U said all were standing with their jodi's I was wandering 4 My NiBir🤣🤣🤣 Den Meri Dimaag ki batti jali & tab mujhe samaj aaya this celebration is 4 NiBir😉

TARA❤️ - NiBir Ka BachaaaAwiieee🤗

Kabir and Nisha walked down the stairs with their little daughter. It was Tara's first birthday which the entire family were celebrating together. The family had made it a point to celebrate all the festivals and important occasions together.

I loved it👏👏👏👏

Shwetss I m happy dat Finally Viren Understud That Ramy's decision was rt👏 & I m double happy dat Ramy is getting his RESPECT & Love dat he yearned for years👏 & His DECISION was PERFECT👏👏👏👏👏👏

Tara cut the cake, with everyone singing "Happy Birthday". Ramesh made little Tara walk with his support to her great grandparents to feed them cake. Dadi made Tara sit on her lap, talking to her in the little one's language, while everyone looked admiringly at them.

Such a cutee Scene😳 Tara walked Awiee😳

Last Para was Superbbb👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

"I have understood...Certain things change for the best..." Viren said looking at the happy family along with his brothers. "Our next generation!"

There was a noise of breaking of glass. Rupan stood slapping her pink saree which had a huge red stain. "This is all because of Ramesh!" she shouted.

"And certain things never change..." grinned Ramesh with the three brothers laughing together shoulder to shoulder.

@Violet Nazar na lageee☯️(Kaala Teeka 4 their BOND❤️)

EXCELLENT SS 👍🏼👏👏👏👏with a MINDLOWING EPILOGUE👍🏼👏👏👏👏

Shwetss It was a Pleasure to read MORESH SS & The Journey was Awesome🤗

Thanks 4 Making extra effort In PM ng ME 🤗 q ki tum sirf mujhe hi PM karthi ho I knw😉😆

Spl Thank U 4 WAITING soo Much PATIENTLY to read My comments 🤗& Thank U 4 the Replies to my each comments🤗

Do Write More🤗

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Shwetsss🤗 Saru with her SUPERLATE comments 4 Chapter 13 to 15 😆 Socha sabka comment ek jagah par kar du..😉 I hope IF mere iss comment ko OVERLIMIT na bol de🤣

Sabse Pehle Sorry frm My side😳 for this late comment😛 I just read all these parts in a row😊
Thank U 4 waiting patiently 4 my comments🤗 spl hug 4 dat😛

Chap 13:😳

Excellent Shwettss👏 I loved this chap 4 two reasons😉

1. Viren ke khilaaf Dadiji ke muh se niakle huye GOLDEN WORDS🥳
2. Ramesh's outburst & he stood 4 his dignity🥳

Quoting my fav parts in @BOLD😛

"Here is one son who is reaching heights, achieving his dreams and my other son, my eldest son, has pulled down my business which I had built all these years..." lamented Dadaji sadly, with anger and contempt evident for his first son.

I was Whistling at these GOLDEN WORDS🥳

He knew he let his father down, but he expected support and few motivating words to carry on his fight against the loss, to pull up the business back to its equilibrium.

Oh really VIREN???😡🤢 U want support frm family😡 where were u when Ramy needed his bro's supports???😡😡 Bade aaye support maangne🤢

"Actually...I have my investors meeting in a few minutes...and it's very important...So I have to leave now..." Ramesh completed the sentence highly punctuated.

I was ROFL ng at this dialogue...🤣🤣🤣 Viren ne KYA socha tha & KYA kaha Ramy ne...🥳🤣 Ramy Rocked 🤣& Viren Shacked🤣

Waise mera guess partial hi sahi par sach tha..😉 Viren ke mann mein Ramy ke investors ko apne aur laane ki icha thi...😡 Selfish kahikaa😡 I m gald dat Ramy ne iss baar apne baare mein socha👏

Viren & Rupan 😡🤢

Now, I am being taunted and insulted because I am financially stronger than others in the family. What am I supposed to do then??

Ramy thoughts were excellently penned down👏👏👏 @BOLD This one was my fav😛

Extreme sadness filled the air, a sadness mixed with their failure as parents.

Felt bad 4 Dadu & Dadi...🤔

Chap 14:😳

Another superb update👏👏👏 filled with confused thoughts of the brothers😊

Jwala-Kirti convo was nice😊 @BOLD The taunt dat killed Mohan👏

"Do elder siblings turn from being selfish, to be caring and concerned for the younger ones? Especially when in need?"

Still Mohan is not willing to react or listening to the essence of wat Jwalu said to him.. 🤢 pathetic Mohan.. really pathetic...🤢

He was yet to find an easy escape route from the current problem. "Is it my problem? The fight is between Bhaiya and Ramesh. Ramesh is leaving the house," Mohan told himself. "Why am I worried? Let's see what happens and then decide."

Dolly & Ramy convo was emotional & its the root cause where Ramesh had decided to think abt his decision...👏👏👏

"One cannot be forced to live in a place where he or she feels suffocated. We have to let them leave to live."

@Blue Very well said👏👏👏

RL talks.. 👍🏼The fight b/w ramy's heart & mind regarding wat his family thinks of him excellently written Shwets👏

@Bold Perfect👏👏👏

Viren continued fighting his thoughts through the entire night, anger, guilt, regret and frustration filling his dreams.
Ramesh sat in his room contemplating if his family really loved him or not, if he was really needed in the house or not.

Mohan sat in his room, worrying what his brothers would decide the next day.

Chap 15:😳

Shwetss👏👏👏 Beautifully written👏👏👏

At start how u presented the scenario in three brothers' rooms loved it 👏👏👏

They both had always resolved the conflict so easily apologizing to each other, without realizing that they were just suffixing their conflict with a comma and never a full stop

It PERFECT ly explained the conflicts b/w Viren & Ramy👏

I think we should stop acting as if nothing is wrong among us."

"I know you all love me a lot. But...I want to be equally respected too. Also, I don't want my children to face any disrespect because their father was an incapable man who couldn't keep his words, every time he said he would leave the house."

I loved the decision of Ramy👏👏👏 I m happy dat Dadu agreed to it😃

Ramy's decision is Sensible Decision I must say👍🏼

No! I have to at least for once prove to my kids that I do care for my family and not selfish at all times."

OMG😲 Mohan Spoke???😆 Spl Clap toh banthi hai iss baath par👏

Finally A Happy settlement is shown...👏👏👏

Abhi ke liye itna hi..😆 Wl read & Comment 4 EPILOGUE tomorrow...😃

Last unres ed on pg 52🤣

@Saru Thank you so much for your comment on the epilogue..😊 Glad you liked it. I wanted to show all the cousins settling in their lives and still being a part of the family...Still maintaining the bond with everyone.

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

@Saru Thank you so much for your comment on the epilogue..😊 Glad you liked it. I wanted to show all the cousins settling in their lives and still being a part of the family...Still maintaining the bond with everyone.

Thanks a lot for being a part of this Moresh journey..😊

My pleasure Shwetsss🤗

Unresed on page 49... Really late and short so sorry but I am surely missing the story... :-)

Originally posted by: Fanfictious_KJ

Res
Unres...
First of all sort for late comment...
Now...
The Epilogue was superb... I loved it... You were amazing with this... From beginning to the end I enjoyed reading it... A new topic to write on but you were perfect... You depicted something out of the box with such awesomeness... No more words...
I really hope you write something else too... I am really missing reading this story though I read all the parts again 😭 Love you and the story loads...

So I'm finally getting around to review this. LOL I'm so so SO sorry for the late review! Things have been kinda busy and I didn't want to half-ass my last (so crazy to think it's ending!) review! Anyways, onto the chapter!