The Broken Bond - Moresh SS (Epilogue, Page 49) 9/9 - Page 27

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Posted: 10 years ago
u werent satisfied with this part??/ this is so good... u showe the contrast between ramy and others so easily... rupan and viren jealous of ramesh nisha sukku and bunty's success... when i read about the achievements of ramy's i was like on ur face rupan... i always wanted a scene like that in the show... loved it... I can khulke say now that I hate viren... he is so selfish... he always blames ramesh... and dadaji gives moren the credit for gks??? he lives in a bubble really... is happy duniyaa where his kids happily stay together...
loved the part.. super part...
Edited by Teogapi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
shwetha if could see you now,i would give u a big hug for such a wonderful update..
i was not feeling like reading a ss,it was lik a epi fr me with breaks(which i took )lol😆

umesh sukku scene was nice..but i want to ask u one question why umesh has to wait?both sukku n umesh can go na?
if they want someone to wrk,they can also hire frm outside na?

ramy as usual he was at his best😛
bunty doctor?😲😆but actually that is true..people who are careless,finally excel !!😆
RL scene

i am goin to kill rupan 😡 what would ramy do if jwala didn't get admission?


fav dialog in this update:"As if I had been receiving a regular income when I was in the business Bhaiya,"
Edited by arshiss - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read Chapter 11 😆 Sorry as usual My comments r late🤣

Awesome part Shwetss..👏👏👏

Very Very happy to read this part bcz It was giving me the details abt NiBir😳 plus Ramesh's Success...🥳 I was missing this frm last 10 chapters.. har chapter main Ramy ke Disappointment ki jhalak milthi thi..🤔 But In this part I m damm Happy Ramy & His Kids r getting Successful in their own way🤣 rather than following the OLD paths just like the "PERFECT"😆 VIREN🤢🤣🤣🤣

Dadiji U Rackked 😆with ur PREDICTION...👏👏👏👏🤣🤣🤣 Dadaji Dnt UNDERESTIMATE the POWER of PREDICTON of OUR ROCKSTAR DADIJI...!!!!!!🤣🤣🤣

I was little surprised at Viren's Rethinking abt Why he is always making fun of Ramesh & Taunting him..😲Acha Viren ji aapko achanak se yeh So called "REALISATION" kaise hua?? TABIYATH toh teekh hai nah aapki..🤣🤣🤣🤣 Seriously I als want to knw the anser.. Agar aapko mile toh Kripaya mujhe bhi bata dijiye gaa V..I..R..E..N..Ji...😆🤣

Yeah Finally NiBir ki baath ho hi gayi.. Kabir LSD👏👏👏 & Nisha Child Psycology main TOPPER👏👏👏

Sukku Ko NSD main Admission🥳👏👏👏 Bunty ko Medical Entrance mil gayee..😲👏

@RED this made me ROFL ng🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"Nisha will become a successful counselor, Sukku will become a popular actor and Bunty will become a doctor...What about our daughters? What will happen to their future...This Ramesh is hell bent on spoiling our kids' future..."

Mohan looked clueless. "What are you even talking...What has Ramesh got to do with this?"

"Don't you see? Slowly people will recognise us using Ramesh's name...Where will our respect go then? Only way is to distance ourselves from Ramesh, and have our own name Mohan...Else our daughters will never get married..."

Seriously RUPAN???😲 Kuch Bhi...!!!!!🤣🤣🤣 Hadd hai yeh toh...🤣🤣🤣

Umesh-Sukku Convo... Awww...

Mr. VIREN ji kidher hai aap???🤣 Just See the Irony.. 🤢 Here U simply destroy ur chote's dreams & Self confidence by always taunting &making fun of him 😡🤢 & See Ur Son Who sacrificed his dream so dat his Younger Bro (cousin) cud fullfill his dreams...👏

See...😃 I m very happy Shwetss 😃U wrote this scene..👍🏼 Excellent way of conveying the IRONY👏👏👏👏

Present scne.. Dadaji ko aakhir samaj aaya ki his WIFEY is more Intelligent than Him🤣🤣🤣

Do Write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

Going to read Part 12...🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Teogapi

u werent satisfied with this part??/ this is so good... u showe the contrast between ramy and others so easily... rupan and viren jealous of ramesh nisha sukku and bunty's success... when i read about the achievements of ramy's i was like on ur face rupan... i always wanted a scene like that in the show... loved it... I can khulke say now that I hate viren... he is so selfish... he always blames ramesh... and dadaji gives moren the credit for gks??? he lives in a bubble really... is happy duniyaa where his kids happily stay together...

loved the part.. super part...


Thanks Rema..😊

Dadaji is slowly having his reality check too...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome👏
Rammy👏
Viren Dadu sughar rahe hai kya?😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read it in one go...Shweta you are one helluva of a terrific writer and this is the first time I actually realized why story and the love story focus disappointed u to such a great extent :) ...Loved the way u etched out the characters and weaved it :D
The way u have described Ramesh, RL, Stance they took for themselves and their children and how he has now gone beyond the family squabbles maintaining the respect for elders but going beyond petty politics to go from being lowest to places where his detractors are going green.

Mohan and Vimla are just viewers with almost no say in things and where in they get dominated at every singular aspects to the point of they I guess must mumbling and stifling every view that even occurs.

Viren's conscious does awaken quite a few times and his irrationality is something even he doesn't understand but his attitude is almost adat se majbur kinda...I guess Umesh and Dolly would only be able to show him the light by rebelling out aloud

Rupan is a literal vamp, who cannot count her blessings but her only job is to demean others and get pettily insecure. She has a simple agenda... Throw around everything that occurs on ramesh and his family...Kitna kitkit ..intolerable bimbo :p

Dadaji , well he has a blindfolded layers over his eyes and senses, each layer peel off is gonna be very painful. And Dadi..ughh...she is the culprit. ..her modern facade does nothing to hide her submissive typical Indian wife persona. Everything is the cause and effect of Dada and Dadi 's blindfold and gandhari behavior.

Well I love how Ramesh's kids have been grown up to be successful by choosing their passions and how every cousin is slowly paving their own way out..

I guess the LONG comment compensates for no comments till now..;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's awesome how RL are allowing their kids to pursue their dreams. As usual, Viren wants all of his dad's attention. He seems to lack confidence in himself as compared to Ramesh who dared to dream and pursue it. Perhaps, Viren is slightly envious of his brother and needs the approval of his dad for his happiness, unlike ramesh whose happiness lies with his music. Again, I just feel like pushing Rupan in some mud! Lol, what a character. Blaming others for her own downfall. That's real cowardice. The main difference is RL's children's success lies in the freedom they received to be happy with their choices. And Bunty's surprise was the best! Also, so happy to see that Ramesh's music academy has taken off due to his hard work, determination and love for his music. It's a lesson for young and old to learn. Again, lovely writing and really enjoyed reading.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👏
Rammy👏
Viren Dadu sughar rahe hai kya?😆


Aisa ho saktha hai? 😆

Thanks..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aditi

Read it in one go...Shweta you are one helluva of a terrific writer and this is the first time I actually realized why story and the love story focus disappointed u to such a great extent :) ...Loved the way u etched out the characters and weaved it :D

The way u have described Ramesh, RL, Stance they took for themselves and their children and how he has now gone beyond the family squabbles maintaining the respect for elders but going beyond petty politics to go from being lowest to places where his detractors are going green.

Mohan and Vimla are just viewers with almost no say in things and where in they get dominated at every singular aspects to the point of they I guess must mumbling and stifling every view that even occurs.

Viren's conscious does awaken quite a few times and his irrationality is something even he doesn't understand but his attitude is almost adat se majbur kinda...I guess Umesh and Dolly would only be able to show him the light by rebelling out aloud

Rupan is a literal vamp, who cannot count her blessings but her only job is to demean others and get pettily insecure. She has a simple agenda... Throw around everything that occurs on ramesh and his family...Kitna kitkit ..intolerable bimbo :p

Dadaji , well he has a blindfolded layers over his eyes and senses, each layer peel off is gonna be very painful. And Dadi..ughh...she is the culprit. ..her modern facade does nothing to hide her submissive typical Indian wife persona. Everything is the cause and effect of Dada and Dadi 's blindfold and gandhari behavior.

Well I love how Ramesh's kids have been grown up to be successful by choosing their passions and how every cousin is slowly paving their own way out..

I guess the LONG comment compensates for no comments till now..;)


ADITI!!!Where have you been? Missed you a lot yar...We keep talking about you...😊

Thanks for reading...Surprised to see your comment...😆 Happy to see a long one...😆

I always felt RL, how much ever they were ridiculed, they found strength in each other and made a decision together to fight for their kids' future, come what may...if that means going against the family.

Rest of them..their worry was their position in the house and then society. Also..Viren, always wanted to be like Dadaji and completely spoiled his life because of that.

Rupan...she might be or might not be evil..but she is cunning and selfish.

Dadi...She knew everything but let it all happen.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nhk2001

It's awesome how RL are allowing their kids to pursue their dreams. As usual, Viren wants all of his dad's attention. He seems to lack confidence in himself as compared to Ramesh who dared to dream and pursue it. Perhaps, Viren is slightly envious of his brother and needs the approval of his dad for his happiness, unlike ramesh whose happiness lies with his music. Again, I just feel like pushing Rupan in some mud! Lol, what a character. Blaming others for her own downfall. That's real cowardice. The main difference is RL's children's success lies in the freedom they received to be happy with their choices. And Bunty's surprise was the best! Also, so happy to see that Ramesh's music academy has taken off due to his hard work, determination and love for his music. It's a lesson for young and old to learn. Again, lovely writing and really enjoyed reading.


Viren is definitely envious of his brother. No matter how much he tries to push him down...Ramesh never budged and fought back...and now is reaching heights. Viren can't take that...and the fact that Ramesh's kids are doing so much well in life. All Ramesh needed was time to prove which he didn't get back then...but now he snatched time from his family and moreover he had his own family to support him.

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