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CHAPTER-6

apni to zindagi hain ye firdosiyaana



Ramesh immediately reached dadi's room..there she sat on the bed..closing her eyes...counting the beads of her rosary and reciting some prayers...ramesh slowly went near her and sat beside her feet..he held her feet...dadi slowly opened her eyes .

dadi: ramesh...tu aitte kya kar raha hain...koyi baat hain kya...???

ramesh: maa...ekk bahut achchi aur ekk bht buri baat pata chali hain...pehle kaunsa batau..??

dadi: betaa...tere bachpan ki aadat abhi gayi nahi na...!! main jo bhi boluu...tu to achchi baat hi pehle bataayega na...she said with a bright smile on her face.

ramesh: aapko abhi tak yaad hain wo baatein maa...??

dadi: mujhe kaise nahi yaad hota...??tu mhaaraa sabse laadla jo thehraa..!!

ramesh smiled at her as he did when he was a child.

dadi: chal abhi ye to bata...tu batane kya aaya tha..??

ramesh: pehle achchi baat...!! maa...woo...maa..

dadi: kya bol raha hain..seedhe seedhe bolna betaa..!!

ramesh: maa...woo..kk..kk..kabir ka pata chal gaya...!!

dadi was shocked at first but later she jumped in joy...she in her excitement hugged ramesh..finally her most lovable grandson-in-law will be back...who was really very close to her.

dadi: ab mhaara kabir beta waapas aajayega...nishu ne bataya..?? wo kitni khush ho jaawegi...!!main abhi usko bataake aati hun..!!

as she started walking away...ramesh said

maa...kabir hospital mein hain...uska condition bht critical hain...wo theek hoga ya nahi koyi nahi keh paa raha hain maa..!!

she turned to him.

ye tu kya keh raha hain ramesh...?? kabir..?? hospital..?? wo waha kaise phncha..?? wo..woo theek to haine naa..??' said dadi

maa...viraj abhi usi ke saath hain...wo sab kuch dekh legaa...!!

and ramesh explained her the whole situation...kabir...nisha...manali...vasundhara...another person...but not knowing who the person is..

dadi went and sat on her armchair..she was crying...

dadi: maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki jis ladki ko maine apni hi bachchi ki tarah rakhkha wo mhaare saath aisa karegi...!!vasundhara ne ye sab bala lene keliye kiya..??iss hadd takk..???

ramesh: sochaa to maine bhi kabhi nahi tha...ussnne apne hi bete ke saath ye sab kuch kiya..!!maa aap bataao naa hume kya karna chahiyee abhii...baauji ko kaise bataana hain ye sab..??

dadi: betaa...tere bauji aur viren to do din keliye delhi gayye hain...ab jab wo waapas aayenge tabhi kuch ho sakta hain..!!

ramesh: lekin maa...teen din baad to shaadi hain..!!agar hum ye shaadi nahi rokk paaye to...??

dadi: shaadi to rokk denge hum beta kisis tarah lekin kabir ko kaise waapas laana hain..???

ramesh: viraj hain na wahaa...kuch nahi hone dega wo kabir ko..!!

dadi: theek hain beta...main tere bauji se baat karne ki koshish karti hun usse pehle..!!

ramesh: theek hain maa...main abhi jaata hun...!

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on the other hand, nisha lying on her bed was watching some photos...of her and kabir...their moments...she went to the contact list and saw kabir as a contact...she selected it...and dialled the number...but even after three years it showed the same message " switched off ".

where are you kabir..?? said she

and she kept thinking about kabir...!!

then someone knocks on her door and she leaves with him...unwantedly...but she had to because he said that it was dadaji's orders. it was karan. she said that she would inform everyone and then come but he said that he already did that..

she sat in the car with him...hoping that something bad is not going to happen.

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THE LONDON CREZON HOSPITAL,
LONDON

viraj was talking to someone over the phone...when he felt a hand on his shoulder...he turned back to see who it was...and obviously it was vasundhara.

viraj: aap yahan...??? maine aapko mana kiya tha na..!!ki aap yahan nahi aayengi...aapko samajh mein nahi aata ya aap samajhna hi nahi chahti..??

vasu: viraj beta...aap ekk baar humari baat to suniyee..!!bht zaroori hain beta..!!

viraj: main ab aapki koyi baat nahi sunna chahtaa...!! aap pehle hi bht zyaada bol chuki hain...to abb bas...kijiye aap...!! aap abhi ke abhi ghar jaaiyee..!!

vasu: viraaj...tumhe sunna hi padega...bht zaroori hain..!!

viraj: agar main nahi sunna chahun to..???

vasu: to bhi tumhe sunna padega..!!

viraj: mrs. vasundhara kumar...aap ab mere patience ko test kar rahi hain..!!

vasu: agar maine ye baat tumhe nahi bataaya to bht galat ho jaayega viraj..please sunoo..!!

viraj: main nahi..

he was cut off in between by vasu..

vasu: viraj...kabir aur nisha ki jaan khatree me hain...tumhe unhe bachaana hoga...!!

viraj: kyaa...bol rahi hain aap..??? kahin aapne phirse kuch to nahi kiya..?? why do you do all this..?? kya milta hain aapko..??? his anger was at heights now

vasu: viraj...shaant ho jaaiyee iss baar humne kuch bhi nahi kiya hain...koyi aur hain jo unki jaan ke peeche pada hua hain...aur wo karan hain...humne abhi usse baat ki thi usnee bola ki wo aaj raat ko nisha ke saath kuch buraa karne waala hain...!!aur usne bola ki wo kabir ko bhi maardega..!!!humee kuch karna hogaa viraj..!!

viraj: ab aap kuch nahi karengi aur naahi main aapko kuch karne dunga...main sab kuch theek kardunga...aap abhi ke abhi ghar jaaiyee...hume karan ko rokna hoga..!!

vasu: hum nahi jaayengee viraj...hum yahin rahenge jab tak sab kuch theek nahi ho jaata..
viraj: whatever...!! do as you want..!!

he took out his phone from his pocket and dialled umesh's number...there was some network disturbance...he wasn't able to call him..he turned to see the tv which flashed some news regarding india...which said that...the networks has been stopped for sometime in india due to some security problems.

he was irritated now...ye sab bhi abhi hona tha...??he dialled his number again...and the same happened..!!

he now went near the icu...and watched kabir who was sleeping peacefully...suddenly viraj noticed something...kabir was moving his hand..he started loosing his breath...he was unable to breath...viraj ran towards him...and saw that the pulse is dropping down...he shouted for doctor...then a doctor with two wardboys came running inside the icu...!!

viraj: doc...doc..doc...kabir ko kya ho raha haianb...jaldi kuch kijiyee...!!

doc: ohhh my god...you go outside...pleasee...his pulse is dropping down ...we have to do something..!!

viraj went outside the icu..!!

kabir's pulse was completely going downstream...the doc tried to get him back to normal...the doc finally brought him back to normal..!!

the doc came out...viraj and vasu came running towards him...

vasu: doc...my son...???

viraj: doc abhi wo theek to hain naa..??

doc: aap fikar mat kijiyee ...wo bilkul theek hain...aur ekk do din mein unhe hosh bhi aajayegaa..!!

viraj: thank you so much doc...!!

doc: take caree...!!

viraj was releived now...he sat down on the chair...suddenly he remebered about nisha..he called umesh once again and this time...the call was forwarded this time...

viraj: um..umeeshhh...nisha kaha hain...??

umesh: wo apne room mein hi hogi...kya huaa sir...??

viraj: hume uss teesre ka pata lag gaya hain...wo aur koyi nahi balki karan hain...usne warning di hain ki wo aaj raat ko nisha ke saath kuch karne waaka hain...aap please bachaaiyeee unhe...!!

umesh: ji..ji...sirr aap fikar mat kijiye...main abhi sabko ye baat bata deta hun aur nisha ko dekhke aata hun..!!

viraj: jii...aap jaaiyee..!!

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umesh ran towards nisha's room and saw that the door was open and nisha wasn't there..he searched fo her in the whole house...but she was nowhere...!!!

he called ramesh and cousins out of the room...and told them everything...they started to search for nisha everywhere...when they saw nisha coming inside the house from the main door..!!
ramesh and cousins ran towards her...ramesh hugged her tight.

ramesh: betaa tu theek to hain naa...??tujhe kuch hua to nahi..??

nisha: nahi papa...mujhe kya hoga..??? main to bas yu hin karan ke saath kisi zaroori kaam se baahar gayi thi...karan ne bola tha ki uski mom immediately mujhse milna chahti hain...so main chali gayi...ussne bola tha ki ussne aap sab se permission le li thi..??? nahi li kya..??

ramesh: na...haan...le li thi na betaa...he didn't wanted to scare nisha. and he never wanted to nisha go through those things again which she faced when those things happened to her...the pilani incident..!!

umesh: achcha nishaa...tu jaa abhi...aaram karle...bht thak gayi hogi na...!!

nisha: haan...bhaii...main jaati hun...!!

and she walked towards her room..!!

everyone present there was in confusion now.

sukku: mujhe pehle se hi pata thya ki wo karan kameena hain...lekin wo kameeno ka bhi dada niklegaa...ye nahi socha tha..!! uski to main jaan lelunga..!!

ramesh: usse maarne ka mann to mujhe bhi karr raha hain...lekin abhi hume thoda shaanti se kaam karna hoga..!! hume plan karna hoga kuch...aur hume ye sab bauji ko batana hoga pehle...wo parso aayenge...aur usse pehle hume nisha ka dhyaan rakhna hoga...jab tak bauji waapas nahi aajata tab tak sab aise rahenge jaise kisi ko kuch nahi pata...hume uss karan pe dhyaan dena hoga. aur uske khilaf proofs collect karne honge...!!

to bachcho ready ho tum sab...??

cousins: yess...hum nisha aur kabir ko phirse ekk karke rahenge..!!

ramesh: tum sab kahaan milgayye yaar iss family ko...itna pyaar...ekk doosre keliye...!!sab gharon mein agar bachche tumhaari tarah ho na...to ye duniya sudhar jaaye...!!

and they laughed together.

bunty: papa ekk doubt tha..!!


sukku: tujhe aur doubt...?? really...??

ramesh: oyye sukku...chupp kar...tu bol beta..!!

bunty: agar karan nishu di ke saath kuch buraa karne hi waala tha to waapas kyun le aaya..!!??
ramesh: aerre haan..iss baat pe to humaara dhyaan gaya hi nahi...!! kyun laaya hoga wo waapas..??

just then saurav entered the gangwal house.

main batata hun !! ' said saurav

sauro tu yahaan ..?? iss waqt..?? ghar nhi gaya..?? asked ramy

uncle ghar hi jaa raha tha...nishu ki scooty ke key dene aaya tha...jab maine dekha ki karan aur nishu kahin jaa rahe hain...karan kuch zyaada hi muskuraa raha tha...mujhe uspe doubt hua...aur maine uske car ko follow kiya...tho maine dekha ki wo jaipur outskirts mein jo jungle hain...uski taraf jaa raha tha...maine continuously follow kiya...taaki wo nishu ke saath kuch galat na karee...tabhi usnee shaayad mujhe dekhliyaa...aur usne gaadi waapas ghar ki taraf mod li..!! said saurav

achcha hua beta ki tune unka peecha kiya...nahi yo pata nahi aaj kya ho jata...!! said ramy
aisa kya hone waala tha uncle..??asked saurav

sukku explained him everything.

uss karan kameene ki toh...i will kill him..!! said sauro in anger

arre ab koyi iske volcano pe bhi paani daalo...warna phat jaayega...said umesh

and everyone laughed as well as explained him their plan..!!

bas do din aur...and sab kuch theek ho jaayega..!!

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A/N:-


ajeeb dastan hain yee...kahan shuru ...kahan khatam...ye manzilein hain kaunsi...na tum samajh sake na hum...😆😆

i am not at all understanding what i am writing, i am just continuously writing it...sorry if it turns into a crap at the end..!!😳😳and the pic has not at all relation with the chapter.😆

will update the next part soon..!!😃

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Edited by sam_premc - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
res
unres...

Me first to res first to unres first to like n first to comment🤣

awsm upate annie...
loved dadi ramy convo...
vasu ne viraj ko sab sach bta dia
karan nishu ko le k chala gya kamina
viraj ne sab ko karan k bare me bta dia
kabir bs jaldi thk ho jaye...
thankGod nishu thik thak h
saurav was smart usne apne presence of mind se nishu ko bacha lia
bunty ka doubt was brilliant
nishu ko kisine kuch nhi btaya
ab sab mil k kabir ka band baja baarat nikalenge
loved d dialog koi ab iska volcano shant kro
loved yr shayari
update nxt part soon
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update anniee
karan ke baare main sab ko patha chal gaya👍🏼

vasu ne ek tho acha kam kiyaa

yaar kihne din se kabir ICU main hai...jaldi usko teek kardo yaar

acha hua saurav ne dekh liya varna woh karan ne tho bechari nishu ke sath kya kay kartha😡

ab jaldi nxt part u[pdate karooo
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Originally posted by: ammu4u

nice update anniee

karan ke baare main sab ko patha chal gaya👍🏼

vasu ne ek tho acha kam kiyaa

yaar kihne din se kabir ICU main hai...jaldi usko teek kardo yaar

acha hua saurav ne dekh liya varna woh karan ne tho bechari nishu ke sath kya kay kartha😡

ab jaldi nxt part u[pdate karooo


ty...😆😆😆

kb next chap mein uth jaayega...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sam_premc


ty...😆😆😆

kb next chap mein uth jaayega...😆

thnk god
karan ka pitayi bhi karna 😆😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: itznimi003

res
unres...

Me first to res first to unres first to like n first to comment🤣

awsm upate annie...
loved dadi ramy convo...
vasu ne viraj ko sab sach bta dia
karan nishu ko le k chala gya kamina
viraj ne sab ko karan k bare me bta dia
kabir bs jaldi thk ho jaye...
thankGod nishu thik thak h
saurav was smart usne apne presence of mind se nishu ko bacha lia
bunty ka doubt was brilliant
nishu ko kisine kuch nhi btaya
ab sab mil k kabir ka band baja baarat nikalenge
loved d dialog koi ab iska volcano shant kro
loved yr shayari
update nxt part soon


thanxx nimi...😆😆

@bold why...???😕🤣
n kabir jaldi theek ho jaayega...fikar not..!😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu4u

thnk god

karan ka pitayi bhi karna 😆😆😆


zaroor...wo to must hain...!! dishumm...dhdammm...again..!🤣🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sam_premc



thanxx nimi...😆😆

@bold why...???😕🤣
n kabir jaldi theek ho jaayega...fikar not..!😆😆

arey sorry its karan typing mistake dear...😆

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