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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter-5

The same night

Ramesh-lakshmi

Ramesh: lakshmi aren't we doing wrong to nisha...??? We very well know how she has been waiting for kabir..!!for 3 years lakshmi...3 years..!! And now when there's a chance that kabir can be back, we are backing out..!!!why are we doing this to her..???and him..???

Lakshmi: even I am confused ramesh..!! Ye hum Jo bhi kar rahe hain...mujhe bilkul samajh nahi aaraha ki hum kyun kar rahe hain ye..!!even I started behaving rude to her, she is my own daughter ramesh. We even didn't knew karan before these 3 years, it was just like karan landed here with the wind. That was so weird for me to understand. Yu kabir ka jaana...uske jaate hi karan ka aana...Sab ke heart mein kabir ki jagah lelena..was not at all understandable... That's the reason I said okay for karan to marry nisha..!! I always believed kabir, I knew that he would never do this to nisha, he cared for nisha. He loved nisha..!!

Ramesh: mujhe kabhi nahi laga tha ki vasundhara apne saare limits ko cross kardegi apne badle keliye..!! Mujhe laga ki WO sudhar chuki hain.lekin...!!aise log kabhi nahi sudhar sakte...!!ab hum kya kare lakshmi...?

Lakshmi: nisha ko Sab kuch bataade...??

Ramesh: haan..mujhe lagta hain ki tum sahi bol rahi ho lekin agar humne use batadiya aur kabir phir nahi Aa paya to..???kabir ki yaaddaash waapas nahi aayi to..???

Lakshmi: lekin...sachch to Hume use batana hi padega na...hum aur nahi chhupa sakte usse ye sach..!!

Ramesh: hmm...Hume usse bataadenaa chahiyee...kabir to zaroor aayega waapas apni nisha keliye..!!

Lakshmi: hmm...aur hume ekk aur baat ka dhyaan dena hoga..!!

Ramesh:kiska..??

Lakshmi:tumhe yaad hain viraj ne kya kaha tha...??usne kaha that ki humaare aas paas hi koyi aisa hain jisse nisha ko khatraa hain...WO naam nahi bata saka kyunki WO khud nahi jaanta..!!

Ramesh:haan mujhe yaad hain achche se..!!issliye main soch raha hun ki cousins ko Sab kuch bata du...!!

Just then dolly along with sukku, kirti and saurav enters the room. Dolly interrupts them .

Dolly: ramesh chachu agar hum ye bole ki Hume Sab kuch pata hain to..??

Ramesh: areey tum Sab yahan..??? Tum kis baare mein bol rahe ho..??

Saurav: uncle Hume Sab kuch pata chal chuka hain...kabir ke baare mein..!!

Ramesh: k..kk.kabir ke baare mein tumlogon ko kaose pata chala aur kya..??

Sukku: kabir kahan hain ...???ab tak kyun nahi aaya Sab kuch...!!!! Aapne Hume kyun nahi bataya papa..!!

Lakshmi: bachchon tumhe ye Sab kisne bataya..???aur nisha ko bhi..??

Kirti: chachi humne abhi tak nisha ko kuch bhi nai bataya hain kabir ke baare mein...!!!aur Hume kabir ke baare mein viraj sir ne bataya..!!

Ramesh: achcha hua beta tum logon ko Sab kuch pata chal gaya ...!!main bas abhi tumhe Sab kuch bataane hi waala tha..!!!ab tum log hi batao ki Hume iska kya Karna chahiye..!!
Mujhe to kuch bhi samajh mein nahi aaraha..!!!

Just then umesh entered the room.

Umesh: mere paas ekk plan hain..!!

Ramesh: umesh beta tu abhi tak kahan tha..??

Umesh: main dukaan gaya tha...!!!pehle mera idea to suno koyi..!!!

Ramesh: haan..haan sunaa..!!

Umesh: haaann...to mera idea ye hain ki agar hum kabir ki memory waapas le aaye to..??

Kyaa..??? Said all the members present there with a weird look on their faces.

Really umesh..???ye tha tera idea..??? Said saurav

H..haan to is me kya buraayi hain..?? Said umesh

Kya buraayi hain nahi kya burayi nahi hain ye puch tu..!!said saurav

Aeee...aisa kyun bola tu..?? Asked umesh angrily

Haann..to tune idea hi aisa diya hain..!! Replied saurav

Achcha ..chchaa bachchon ab ladna bandh karoo..!!said ramy

Lekin chachu ye...saurav humesha aise hi karta hain..!!said umesh irritatedly

Ramesh: are bas bas..!! Ab bataao bhi ...achchaa rehne doo...sunoo..!!

Umesh: kyaa chachu,...???

Ramesh: hum agar maa se iss baare mei baat karee to..??WO shaayad iske baare mein kuch bataa sake..!!

Lakshmi: haan ramesh...bht achcha idea hain...humee maa se hi baat karne chahiye..!!

Umesh: haan yaar...cousins ke group leader ko to hum bhul hi gayeee...!!!dadiii..!!!

Just then umesh gets a call on his mobile. He turns over the phone flap to see the caller. It was viraj. He showed it to everyone. Ramesh signalled him to put the call on loudspeaker. Sukku closed the room door.

Ramesh: _hello...viraj beta..!!

Viraj: umeshh..!!??

Umesh: sir hum sab yaha hain...boliye..!!!

Viraj: uncle... Aunty...cousins. ...??

Saurav: haan...sir boliyee...him Sab hain yahaan..!!

Viraj: uncle...woo k..kabir..!! Viraj stammered while talking.

Ramesh: viraj...kya hua hain kabir ko...????WO thk to hain na...?? Ramesh panicked.

Viraj: uncle...WO. Kabir...ICU...WO abhi serious hain...doctor bhi kuch nahi bata rahe hain..!!!! ...cried viraj

Lakshmi: betaa...tum shaant ho jaao...!!! Sab theek ho jaayega..???kabir ko kya hua hain viraj..??

Viraj: uskoo...Sab ..k..k..kuch pata chal gaya...!!!Sab kuch...!!! Him jab umesh se baat kar rahe the to unhone Sab kuch sun liya...aur WO achanak behosh ho gayee...une haath mein WO diary bhi this jismein WO likha karte the..!!

Ramesh: betaa...abhi woo kaisa hain..??

Viraj: uncle ...mujhe kuch samajh nahi Aa raha..!!doctor bhi kuch nahi bataa rahe abhi...!!!Jo bhi hoga kal subah hi pata chalega...abhi bht khatree mein hain kabir...!!I hope Sab kuch jaldi se theek hojaaye..!!kabir theek ho jaaye bas..!! And tears started escaping his eyes.

Ramesh: viraj beta bas shaant ho jaao.. Sab theek ho jaayega...bht jald and kabir will be back to normal soon..!!
Achcha tum baaki sabse baat karoo...main abhi maa se baat karke aata hun. Dekhna Sab theek ho jaayega..!!

Viraj: hmmm...!!!

And saying that ramesh leaves the room . and lakshmi follows him too.

Umesh: viraj sir aap fikar mat kijiye ...hum Sab aapke saath hain...kabir ekk dum fit n fine ho jaayega aap dekhte rehna..!!

Viraj: agar kabir nisha ki shaadi se pehle theek nahi hue to..??

Umesh: sir hum ye shaadi hone hi nahi denge..!!!aap iss shaadi ki fikar mat kijiye..!!

Viraj: kya him karan se at karee..??? WO shayad kabir ke baare mein sunkar isss shaadi ko ROK de...!!!??

Umesh: viraj sir...humne kahan na aap uksii fikar mat kijiye...!!wo Sab hum sambhal lenge..!! USS karan ka ego saatve aasmaan tak phnch chuka hain...usko ab baaton se neeche nahi laaya jaa sakta..!!Hume pata hain ki Hume uske saath kya Karna hain..!!

Vasundhara who was overhearing them, stumbled at the mention of karan's name. She was shocked that he was successful in making a place in everyone's heart. What a player he is..!! Thought vasundhara.

Vasundhara:(to herself) I have to stop this karan now..!! I can't let this marriage happen...!!Maine pehle hi apnee be to ke saath itna bura kiya hain...ab main aur nahi kar sakti ye sab..mujhe Sab theek karna hoga..!!aur agar karan ki shaadi nisha se hogayi towo uski life barbaad kardega...!!!Maine nisha ke saath bhi bht galat kiya hain...ab mujhe Sab kuch sudharna hoga..!!


Nisha wasn't an enemy of vasundhara...
infact she liked her, she felt guilty while doing all that to her but she was blinded by revenge, so she did it. All the things that life showed her was no less. Such reaction of her is expected, but this was so bad...!!
When she got to know that nisha was kabir's wife, she was really happy, she always wanted a daughter in law like her who could be her daughter too, and nisha was such a match.
But the day she got to know about ramesh being her father, her life was shattered, she didn't knew what to do..!! In such a situation she took the wrong path and here she stands with no one with her, a son on the hospital bed, another son blaming her for everything, a daughter in law who loved her son more than anything became a depressed soul, waiting for her love to return, a family whom she could call hers was no more with her, she just destroyed everything...EVERYTHING...!!!!

Reality struck her mind ...she immediately picked her phone up from her bag...and dialled KARAN's number..!!

A musical played on karan's phone..!!continuously..!! It was ringing..!!

Karan: hello...whoz dis..??

Vasundhara: hum bol rahe hain..!!!vasundhara..!!

Karan: vasundhara...??kaun..?? I am sorry maine aapko pehchaana nahi..!?

Vasundhara: tum Hume nahi pehchaante..???

Karan: NAHEE..!!

Vasundhara: hume pata hain ki tum Hume pehchaan chuke ho to please tum ye drama na hi karoo to achcha hain .

Karan: main faltu logon ko yaad nahi rakhta..!!!

Vasundhara: what do you mean...???!??

Karan: wahi Jo apne waadon ko poora nahi karte..!!

Vasundhara: Maine to tumhaare saare paise dediye the...!!

Karan: maana Maine ki aapke pass thode zyaada hI paise hain lekin iska MATLAB ye to nahi na ki aap har cheez ko paiso se hi jodengi..??!!


Vasundhara: MATLAB..!???!?

Karan: Maine aapko jitna akalmand samjha tha utni hain nahi aaap..!!main kabir ki baat kar raha hun..!!Maine suna hain ki with hospital mein hain aur abhi WO critical hain..??kya pata isi beech uski death bhi ho jaaye..!!??? He said with an evil smirk on his face.

Vasundhara: Maine tumhe tumhaare pause to de diye...ab kya chahiye tumhe..???!??

Karan: kabir kabhi nisha ke pass waapas nahi aayega...

Vasundhara : ye nahi ho sakta...!!!ab main kabir aur nisha ko aur door nahi rakh Sam...main pehle hi BHt galtiyan kar chuki hun..ab main aur galtiyan nahi karna chahti..!!

Karan: theek hain phir taiyaar rahiye..!! Kal subah ke newspaper keliye..!!headlines zarroor padhna..!! Maa ke wajah se bete aur bahu ki hui maut..!! USS bechaari daughter in law ke Marne se pehle uske saath but galat hua..!!WO tadpi...koyi usko use bachaane nahi aaya..!!

Vasundhara: karan..??!!??? Tumne agar nisha aur kabir ke saath kuch kiya. To main tumhe zinda ni chodungi..!main tyjhe arrest karwa dungi..!!

Karan laughed out loud at such statement of hers..!!

Karan: aap mujhe arrest karwaaoge...??? Vj ji agar aap bhul gayi ho to mainaapko bataa dun..ki aap ke pair bhi utne hi keechad mein dhasee hue hain jitne tmere hain.!!!in fact Maine to ye Sab aapke kehne pe hi kiya..! Aap complaint karengi...police mujhe arrest kardenge ..phir main seedhe seedhe aap ka hi naam le lunga..!! Simple..??!! Isn't it..??!!?

Vasundhara: karan tum aisa kuch nahin kar sakte..!! Kyunki ab mujhe koyi farak nahi padta ki mera sach kisiko pata chalta hain ya nahi...I don't mindbgoing to the jail too...kyunkinmaine galti ki hain...aur main iski sazaa bhugatnae ko bhi taiyyar hun...tumhaara kya..???

Karan: waah...vasundhara ji...aap to kamaal niklee..!!maan na to padhega aapko..!! Aur aapne pucha that na mera kya..???!!?? Haannto suniyee iska jawaab ye hain ko main oski sazaa nahi bhugtunga..!!iskinsazaa koyi aur bhugtegaa..!!
Kal subah jab kabir ko hosh aayega...to usko pata chalegaa ki uski pyaari si nisha ke saath aaj kya kya hua hain to WO to uski saanse to wahi ruk jaayengi naa na..!!???waha wo khatam ...yahan ye khatam...aur last mein meri sazaa kisko mill..?aapko..!!samjhe..??

Vasu: kya karne waale ho tum nisha ke saath..!!dekho ..?? Please nisha ke saath kuch mat karna ..!!tymhe jitne pause chahiye utne leooo..please...usko chod do..!!uski issme koyi galti nahi hain please..!!

Karan: ab Maine to decide karliyaa hain...aur mujhe paison se itna pyaar nahi hain jitna logon ke izzat ke saath khelne se hain..!!

Vasu: karan ..nahii..pleased..karan..!!

Karan: byeee..!!!ab aap kal keliye wait karogee...usse pehle aap kuch nahi karne sakte..!!

Vasu: karan ..nahi karoge tym kuch..!

Karan: ab to karna hi padhegaa.!!!

And he hanged the call. Now Vasu had no choice...she could not do anything in such a situation..there was only one person who could save nisha...and that was VIRAJ..!!

She wasted no more time...she ran through the lobby to reach the ICU section..!! And there she saw him...viraj..talking to someone on the phone..!! Bass...!!!


Said she and walked furiously towards him..aaj Sab theek kardenge hum..!!
Thought vasundhara as she walked towards viraj..!!

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I don't know what I wanted yo write actually...I was so confused..!! And the result is this..!!hope u like it..do like n comment...!! Next update achcha waala dungi...pakka waala promise..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
res b4 PM😆

Annzzz🤗 Missed U yaar..😳

Unres😆
Sorry 4 late comments😳

Wat an Update Anzzz...👏👏👏 Superb Long Update👏👏👏

So.. AB NiBir ko saath laane ke liye Uske COusins + RL+ Dadi (The captain) bhi hai🥳

Karan...😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 Tu dekh Beta Yeh Sab Dera KYA KYA KYA karthe hai..😡😡

VJ's realisation dat She was alone was nicely written.. I liked that para very much So i m quoating it here..😃 Annzz U wrote it Perfectly👏👏👏👏👏 @RED My fav..👍🏼 Gud use of words dat reflected VJ's lonliness👏👏👏👏👏

Nisha wasn't an enemy of vasundhara...
infact she liked her, she felt guilty while doing all that to her but she was blinded by revenge, so she did it. All the things that life showed her was no less. Such reaction of her is expected, but this was so bad...!!
When she got to know that nisha was kabir's wife, she was really happy, she always wanted a daughter in law like her who could be her daughter too, and nisha was such a match.
But the day she got to know about ramesh being her father, her life was shattered, she didn't knew what to do..!! In such a situation she took the wrong path and here she stands with no one with her, a son on the hospital bed, another son blaming her for everything, a daughter in law who loved her son more than anything became a depressed soul, waiting for her love to return, a family whom she could call hers was no more with her, she just destroyed everything...EVERYTHING...!!!!

Plss Annzz Uss KARAN Bandar😡😡😡 ki baand baajaa baarath nikalke rakh dena🤣🤣🤣 I m waiting 4 Dat DAY When I wl be in Front row to hit Dat Bandar😆🤣🤣🤣

Fingers Crossed😳 NiBir ke Milan ke liye

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆
🤣

Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Annie...🤗
Baccha yeh ka tha..😲
Iss Karan pe toh pehle se hi doubt tha.. but itna ghatiya hoga..yeh nahi socha tha😲
Vasu isse better hai 😆
Now Dadi and RL will make a plan and Cousins and Viraj will execute it 😎
waiting for the next update baccha 😳
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wl read & UNRES tomorrow.. 😆Ninni aa rahi hai...🥱

Tab tak tu mere pichala comment ko padh & reply de.. its on pg 24🤣🤣🤣

🤗 hugs 4 u Annzz & thanzz 4 updating🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I was waiting for the update ... thanks for posting ...
And the update was very nice 👏👏.. loved it ... this Karan 😡 ...just hate him ...
Plz continue soon this time ... n thanks for the pm 😊
Edited by Amina... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesm update annie😊
loved RL convo...u portrayed der feelings beautifully...
loved RL cousins saurav and viraj convo...
karan was 😡
bas kabir k thk hone ki der h fir wo karan ka band bja dega...
finally...vasu ko akal aa gyi...
m scared for nisha...i know viraj n cousins usko kuch nhi hone denge fir b dar lag re
update nxt part soon dear...
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update and very interesting one
this karan i feel like killing him
waiting for the nxt epi
plz kya mujhe pm mil sakta hai
ritika
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Posted: 9 years ago
annie... khatarnaak update yaar... dra hi dia... ab dusri bhi jaldi chahie
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...
hate karan😡...hope viraj saves nisha and teach karan a lesson he will never forget..
update soon and plz pm me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update Annie
this karan 😡 😡 😡 hate him
finally vj sudhar gayi
loved RL and cousins convo 👍🏼
update soon n thank you for the pm

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