SS: Kaash Aisa Hota (A Joint Venture on the ending of NAUC)

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Kaash Aisa Hota is a our take on the ending of our show "Nisha aur Uske Cousins". Somewhere down the lane, we have all felt the ending of the show could have been better. There have been way too many loose ends, and many tracks weren't given a closure. Lot of questions were left unanswered. Hence, few of us with many inputs from others, thought why not write our own ending? And hence we are here.

The plot remains the same. The story up to a certain point remains the same. This story begins from Kabir wanting to leave Nisha, after seeing her with Viraj at Silver Moon Cafe. He believes Nisha loves Viraj and decides to leave. We take the story from there, in our own way.

Also, the story we have come up with, still follows the deadline our show had to end the tracks.

Hope you all enjoy reading it. We have updated all chapters together, so that it would be a complete read for you all.

The member who has written that particular chapter would have updated the same.

Thanks to all the writers for the cooperation. We did have a blast while discussing the story.
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Chapter 1-Kabir pays no heed to Ramesh



He peered out of the large open french window,his eyes eager to take in the huge splash of vibrant hues in the morning sky...The scent of the rain still hung in the air ...there was a much needed chillness in the weather ...he stood staring at the the red,orange and yellow streaks of sunlight that beautified the sky...a perplexed,hurt expression filling his hazel brown eyes...the colours soon disappeared from the sky and a bright, monotonous yet perfect blue ascended the sky,slowly taking the vast expanse of the sky under its control...he compared his own life to sky...he was standing puzzled in the darkest hour of his life,not knowing what to do next... in a new city, filled with total strangers ,when she entered his life like the first streak of sunlight at dawn...brilliant,radiant,colourful and breathtakingly beautiful... she brought fun, mirth, love,.. everything in his life...she filled the void that he had been experiencing for years...she gifted him a family that took care of him with incomparable love...he slowly started falling for her, even after knowing the truth-that this joy was temporary...He held on to false hopes that she was there to stay with him...all life...but time ticked...the hues she brought in slowly began to fade...and finally disappeared...and now a monotonous blue entered his life...it was perfect...it was his dance...but even the brilliant blue,his life-his dance ...was incomplete without her...


He closed his eyes and let the cool breeze caress his face...his mind reeled back in time...flashing before his eyes myriad priceless moments he shared with Nisha...each one pricking his heart deeply.He snapped open his eyes and looked around the room,his eyes frantically searching for her in every nook and corner of the room...He forced his mind to accept the harsh reality...the undeniable truth that lay right in front of his eyes...that he was an intruder...a mere intruder in her life...She loves Viraj ...he felt like a fool, who tried to neglect the obvious ...but now that he had seen it,he should no longer be a burden for Nisha...His still remembered what he saw in the silver spoon' restaurant ...he died a thousand deaths seeing just that single sight .He was wrong...Nisha loved Viraj...not him...he took his bag and other luggage,and looked around the room for one last time, reminiscing the moments he had with Nisha.Yes...he knew... This morning was the perfect beginning to an end!


"Kabir..."Ramesh's voice echoed through the hall.Kabir came out of his trance and walked into the drawing room,his eyes sunken...his face expressionless.He saw a worried Ramesh who was waiting there for him,his face clearly conveying his eagerness to talk to Kabir.


Ramesh noticed the luggage in Kabir's hand and immediately understood his intentions.Kabir was planning to leave India and go to London...Ramesh couldn't even think of telling Nisha about this...she won't be able to bear it...so it was his responsibility to make Kabir understand the consequences of his decision...he should stop him somehow...he didn't know what happened between Nisha and Kabir... but he had vague doubts that the fight between them might be due to his past with Vasundhara ,Kabir's mom.He couldn't even think of the fact that his daughter's married life was at risk because of him...and hence he decided that he should stop Kabir...at any cost...


"Kabir ...why are you leaving?"Ramesh asked with a puzzled look on his face."You love Nisha...You yourself told me that you love her...and that you will always stay with her and will never leave her.."Ramesh said...trying to know the truth about the actual reason behind his decision.


"Nothing ...pappa"Kabir said with a cold stare.He said "pappa" as if he didn't wish to call him so.


Ramesh felt uneasy...he now felt certain that he was the reason for all this.Kabir started walking and Ramesh walked with him,trying to make him understand ...


"See Kabir,if you have any problem,please tell me...Tell me the matter...I will sort it out for you...Pappa will help you find a way out."Ramesh said rapidly...hoping that Kabir agree to this


Kabir left the house and was walking down the road as if nothing happened,as if he was deaf towards Ramesh's words.He quickened his pace ,making it difficult for Ramesh to cope up with him.


"Kabir...why aren't you talking ,beta?You are like my own son...You can share all worries and sorrows with me.I will always be there to help you out..."Ramesh said,his voice filling with an earnest concern.

Kabir's heart melted hearing those words from him and thought of telling him the entire matter...but Ramesh's past still affected him..he was angry with Ramesh for cheating his mom at the last moment..for depriving her of happiness...for making her life miserable...he was the sole cause for all this...and that stung him hard every single time he saw Ramesh.He kept walking...his eyes focused on the road,not even caring to look at Ramesh even once.


Ramesh was perplexed to see Kabir like that...he expected him to be angry...but silence was one thing that he never expected.After all, Kabir being silent was something rare,if not impossible...Ramesh knew that something was troubling him deep inside and that he won't say the matter.But Ramesh came to save his daughter's married life...her happiness matters to him the most.And he would do whatever it takes for that...however hard it is.Ramesh stopped Kabir and said in a calm voice"Kabir...I don't know what happened between you and Nisha.But I am sure that whatever it is ,it is just a misunderstanding...nothing else...I know you both...You guys love each other...Then why are you leaving?I know that you are angry right now.Kabir ,think ...just think...what will happen after you leave?Both of you won't be happy...you know that right?Please reconsider your decision...Please think "


Kabir was getting restless with every passing moment.He wanted to end this conversation as soon as possible."There are no misunderstandings between us.I believe what I saw...Eyes won't deceive us...pappa."Kabir gave a curt reply,trying hard to maintain his cool.


"No beta..."Ramesh said in a fatherly manner..." Eyes can't deceive you...but brain can...you might not interpret the what you saw in the right way...you may misunderstand the situation.."Ramesh said calmly,hoping that his words made sense.


Kabir seemed to consider this for a moment...he tried to remember what he saw at the restaurant...but his mind told him over and over that what he thought was right...his mind kept telling him not to believe Ramesh...who deceived his own mother...his conscience even questioned him for talking with Ramesh...who was the sole reason for his mother's sadness.He kept hearing his mom's voice ...about her telling him how Ramesh ditched her...about the false promises he made to her...about his real intentions...her sobs were still ringing in his ears...And at that moment,anger overpowered calmness, hate overpowered love.Kabir decided that he wouldn't tolerate this man even for one second...He started walking briskly to avoid Ramesh but Ramesh didn't give up.


"Kabir beta,please listen to what I have to say...just...just think of it beta...then if you still find this as the only way,you can leave...but please think ...you going at the last minute...without even saying her a proper goodbye...it is..."Ramesh paused...searching for the right word"it is like cheating her..."Ramesh's voice trailed off ...he just hoped that his words had the right impact...so that Kabir would agree to think about it.He knew that what he said right now was something bad...but that was the only possible way to make Kabir think.


Kabir stopped short after hearing Ramesh's words and turned to face him with an amused look...He stared at Ramesh for what felt like eternity and then began in a cold,angry yet low voice..."Really?!you said that?...Wow!!!Look who is saying...the famous Ramesh Gangwal who ditched my mom in the last moment...who is solely responsible for my mom's sadness...You, out of all people said that I am going to ditch Nisha?!"Kabir hissed..."Listen ,I am not shouting at you ...just because you are Nisha's father...but please...I beg u... PLEASE. STOP. FOLLOWING. ME!"he paused after each word so that he was loud and clear."It is not going to change my mind...what is decided is decided!...and about me ditching Nisha-well,I am not!...because I still love her...but I am leaving for her own good!...So bye!"


Ramesh was shocked at the way Kabir spoke to him ...He stood transfixed at that spot ...not knowing how to react...he just couldn't accept that Kabir had spoken to him like that...This was not the Kabir he knew...This was not the Kabir whom Nisha married...this Kabir was an entirely different person...not the sweet and humble Kabir whom Nisha loved...Ramesh suspected Vasundhara's hands behind all this...He gazed for a long time at the retreating figure of Kabir...he didn't follow...he didn't talk anymore...he knew it was useless.His daughter's marriage ended right in front of him...and he couldn't do anything.He headed for the Gangwal House, broken,trying to make up his mind to tell Nisha that Kabir left her...forever.


Vasundhara was standing near the door of her house,watching the entire drama unfold right in front of her eyes...She felt a strange pleasure seeing Ramesh sad .Her body felt stiff as she had craned her neck for a very long time,so that she could get a better view of what was going on between Kabir and Ramesh... she wanted to take revenge...revenge for every single thing that Ramesh did to her...rejecting her love...abandoning her just a day before their engagement...cheating her at the last moment...she wanted to take revenge for every single thing...and she was ready to experience pain and hardships to achieve her goal.She had an evil smirk on her face...finally!...finally everything was happening as she had planned.She lifted her hand and waved a goodbye to her Jojo and whispered "bye Jojo..."The pleasure she was experiencing ,was very evident on her face.

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Chapter 2-Ramesh reveals his past to the family members


Ramesh walked into the Gangwal House,his head hung,tired and exhausted.He has failed as a father.Nisha's marriage just broke in front of his eyes...and he couldn't do anything...not that he didn't try...he tried...he tried till the last moment to stop Kabir from going; but still,he was unsuccesful. Walking.Walking into the courtyard of his own house,he felt an eerie calmness around him as his house was unusually quiet...he walked,his eyes focussed at the floor,never bothering to look up,the shame and guilt of failing as a father blinded him momentarily.A thousand questions ran through his mind...questions that were unanswerable,questions that snatched the peace of mind away from him...he walked like a defeated man,trying to figure out how to tell Nisha the truth.The father in him has failed miserably,and he was finding it hard to face Nisha...he had no idea how to console her...he blamed himself for everything...everything from nisha's unsuccessful married life to her not telling anything to him...he failed miserably ,first as a son...and now as a father...He felt guilty.Engrossed in his own thoughts ,Ramesh failed to notice the whole family waiting for him in the courtyard...


"Look who is here...I told u babuji,Kabir is a fraud!...But Ramesh was adamant that he is the perfect choice for Nisha...what happened now?He went, right?Leaving ur daughter alone?"Viren's taunting voice echoed ...Ramesh looked up , surprised to find the whole family ,except the cousins there,demanding an explanation from him about his meeting with kabir...Ramesh stood there silently...he was not in a mood to quarrel or explain anyone anything.His primary concern was Nisha,and he longed to meet her.


"Bhaiya I will go speak to Nisha and come back"he said eyeing Viren.

"Rehne de Ramesh"ordered dadaji,his voice expressionless.

Ramesh looked at his babuji ,his eyes pleading."Babuji ,Nisha needs my support right now...please let me meet her...I will explain everything to you after I meet her."


"Nisha doesn't need your support ,Ramesh.She is old enough to handle herself.And cousins are also with her...They will be there for her.And do you understand that you are the sole reason for all these problems?Kabir fought with you for his mom.it is because of Vasundara's and your past that your child is suffering now...It is all because of you ramesh...like always...YOU are the trouble maker.If you for once believed in me and agreed to my decision in the past,all this would never have happened.But what did you do?You were selfish...You cared for no one Ramesh...you wanted to practice music so you left...you ran away to Mumbai,severed all contacts with us and ruined yourself...and now ...the past is haunting you...the past will never leave you Ramesh...you will get the punishment for your wrong deeds...in some way or the other...and look ,now,Nisha is paying for your deeds."


Ramesh looked at dadaji in disbelief..."What is he even saying?he is scolding him for what he did during his teenage?!Why is he still living in the past?Why does he always blame me?!"Ramesh thought...He wanted to shout out "Move on,let go of the past" to dadaji but he didn't.He knew that bauji was anyway not going to listen to him.


Sensing something bad, Nisha and the cousin gang came down from upstairs.Nisha was teary eyed...she could still not come in terms with the fact that Kabir was going to leave for London...and from her father's expression she knew that there was some bad news in store for her...and now on top of that dadaji was making a scene ...


"Dadaji..."Nisha began but Lakshmi's glare silenced her.

"Bauji,what I did cannot be changed..."Ramesh said in a low voice.."Past is past...Please don't talk abt it"

"Why can't I talk about it...what will u do if I talk about it?You will leave the house?As you always do ?You can't do anything on your own ,Ramesh!...You always run away from situation.Always!"Dadaji said,anger rising in his voice.


"No Bauji,you are misunderstanding him "Lakshmi said...her voice determined..."You don't know the truth, Bauji.Ramesh did nothing wrong when he left the house.In fact,he was trying to save you and the Gangwal Family."Ramesh looked at Lakshmi and signalled her to stop talking but Lakshmi went on.


"No Ramesh...not today.You are not responsible for anything...everyone is blaming you...you have been suffering all these years for no fault of yours.You didn't do anything wrong...tell them the truth,Ramesh.Tell them why you went to Mumbai.They should know the truth.Everyone should understand that you were right.Tell them everything about Vasundhara.All these years you have been doing good for the family and no one values you.Tell them everything Ramesh."Lakshmi said ,her voice unwavering.

Kabir was standing at the door of Gangwal House.He was glad that he came back from airport.Ramesh's words were still running in his mind.He thought for a long time and finally decided to come back and talk to her once."Maybe Pappa was right...maybe it is all a misunderstanding...I should talk to Nisha..."he said to himself as he was about to enter the house but then something stopped him short.Kabir understood that some serious discussion was going on in the house since everyone was there in the courtyard and was looking dead serious.The mere mention of Vasundara's name by Lakshmi made him feel that something bad was going to happen.He decided to wait and listen to what Ramesh had to say.


Ramesh looked at his wife in disbelief.Even though she gets tensed for the slightest matter,the courage in her eyes a she spoke to dadaji surprised Ramesh.Never before had she been this confident.Ramesh knew that he should tell everything to dadaji,atleast for Lakshmi.He looked at Dadaji...the old man was standing there,still surprised by the what Lakshmi had just said.


"Bauji..."Ramesh said...not knowing where to start...he was feeling way too insecure to say this in front of the entire family,in front of the children."Bauji...Vasundara and I were good friends since childhood...I always treated her as a friend...but she took my friendship as love...She thought that I love her ...I told her calmly her that I don't love her and consider her just as a friend but she didn't listen... she didn't want to accept that fact.She was so madly in love that...that she asked her papa,Viraj Uncle to fix our engagement."Ramesh stopped momentarily...and then continued looking at dadu"At that time you also had a plan to fix our engagement. From Vasundhara's talks and gestures,you assumed that Vasundara and I were in love and fixed the time and date for the engagement without even asking me whether I was ready for marriage or whether I was happy with this relation.Bauji ,you just assumed that I would agree to that relation because it was your decision ...you decided that Vasundhara is the perfect choice for me."Ramesh said,his voice at the verge of breaking.He looked at dadu,but dadaji's expressions never changed...his eyes were still stern,demanding a proper explanation from Ramesh.His expressions gave a clear idea that he was least interested in what Ramesh was saying ...


"I came to you bauji...I came to you and said that I am not interested in marriage and wanted to pursue my career in music...Music was not the real reason ,bauji...I was afraid that you will never believe me if I told you the real reason...I was just a teenager and I didn't have the courage to speak to you about the real reason...so I said about music...but you never listened to me.The actual reason was ...Vasundhara"


Dadaji looked at Ramesh with surprise,the expressions on his face reflecting the confusion in his mind."Bauji ,Vasundhara was so blind in love that she started behaving like an obsessive lover.I went and told Viraj Uncle that I don't love her and that she is just my friend...Uncle told me that he tried telling that to Vasundhara but she was adamant that she will marry me...Bauji...Vasundhara even threatened that she will commit suicide if I rejected her...Uncle didn't know how to handle the situation and asked me if I could find a solution...I suggested that I will go to Mumbai and told him that I will tell my family that I am going to Mumbai to concentrate in music...Uncle felt that would be fine because Vasundhara will be able to forget the past and move on...but he told me not to tell this to anyone,not even to you as Vasundhara might get to know" Ramesh paused...he still couldn't believe that Vasundhara,his childhood bestie turned out to be his worst enemy..He continued..."I didn't talk to Vasundhara because I knew she would not let me go... So I left a letter for her and went to Mumbai the day before the engagement.When I came back from Mumbai I got to know that she went with some guy and got married shortly after I left and Viraj Uncle died because of heart attack..."his voice trailed off.


Ramesh looked at Dadaji...the power,the pride that always reflected on Dadaji's face was gone ...He was shattered,his eyes bore an expression that was a mixture of confusion,anger,sadness,guilt and remorse...Ramesh didn't know what to make out of it..."Will he believe me?Maybe he will think that all this is just a made up story...after all,according to him I am the trouble-maker ..."Ramesh thought ...The day turned out to be a very bad one for him...Kabir didn't listen to him and went leaving Nisha alone...and now...his past was out in the open but he didn't know whether anyone would believe him or not.He looked at each member of the family...everyone was shocked to hear this news...Ramesh stood there,unsure whether he did the right thing by telling the past.But then a familiar hand grasped him and he looked sideways and saw Lakshmi giving him a reassuring nod..."Atleast,someone is there to support me"he thought and managed a weak smile.


Kabir was feeling uneasy with each passing moment.He felt like the whole world just crashed upon him.He didn't know what he heard was right or not...He was feeling angry ...really angry at Ramesh..."How can he even tell something like that about my mom...Mom can never do such a thing...I am damn sure about that...he is lying...Mom told me what exactly happened...HE IS LYING"Kabir assured himself...but some part of him was telling him that Ramesh wouldn't lie..."Why should he lie to the whole family?What will he benefit from this?"a thousand questions were running in his mind and he couldn't concentrate...he stood there,transfixed...hoping that everything Ramesh said was just a lie...


"Finished saying all that you wanted to say?"Viren scowled at Ramesh...he was really angry and upset because Ramesh told the truth to the family.


Ramesh looked at Viren with a sad smile..."Bhaiya,I said the truth...I said what I wanted to say...whether you people want to believe me or not is completely your choice...I am not expecting anything from anyone.I was not even planning to tell this until Lakshmi forced me.After all,no one has believed in me till today...and today is no different"Ramesh said,his voice cracking..."Bauji,I am too tired...I am leaving..."Ramesh said and left the courtyard...Dadaji looked at his retreating figure,a pang of guilt numbing his heart momentarily...he turned back to look at Dadi,who was crying...her eyes accusing him silently for all that had happened.




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Chapter 3 - Lakshmi and Mohan stand up

Lakshmi watched as her husband climbed up the stairs alone, walking towards his room. She felt very overwhelmed. She had always talked about how important it was to stay in the family, but today...but in all the past years...?

Dadaji and Dadi turned to go to their room.

"Because of Chote, there is always something that destroys the peace of the house" commented Viren with a scorn as he moved.

"Why is that, whenever something happens in the house, it's because of Ramesh?" All the family members turned towards Lakshmi confused at the sudden question from her.

"What are you saying, Lakshmi?" asked Dadaji curiously. Lakshmi had been someone who never talked unless really necessary.

"Babuji! You, Maa ji, Bhaiya...has always talked about the peace of the house and how Ramesh always spoils it," began Lakshmi calmly but firmly. "But why hasn't anyone thought about his own peace of mind?" No body had an answer, primarily because no one understood what Lakshmi was trying to say.

"Look at him? Is anyone with him in this hour of crisis? NO! He is all alone. In addition, he is being blamed for ruining his own daughter's life? Why does that happen only to him? Whenever someone else faces any problem, Ramesh is the first one to stand and support...why isn't anyone in his support when he needs it?" Lakshmi could feel the rage inside her. Though she had always stopped Ramesh from getting into an argument, she had always felt frustrated with the treatment her husband received in the house.

"Because he is wrong and has always been." taunted Viren in his usual style. "You don't know how much trouble Vasundra had created years back. The moment she came in, I knew there would be problems arising. And whatever is happening in Nisha's life now, is because of what Ramesh did long back."

"Bhaiya! Who is responsible for what is happening in Dolly's life now? You?" asked Lakshmi with contempt. "We all know what Leela ji did to our family, to Nisha...Why is she still allowed in the house? Why Babuji? Why is the lady, who plotted with her son to loot our business and nearly kill my daughter, still in the house? Because Ramesh doesn't say anything?" questioned Lakshmi angrily.

"Where are you taking the conversation, Lakshmi?" asked Viren frustrated.

Lakshmi closed her eyes to regain composure.

"Every time Ramesh wanted to stand up for himself, he was told Rehne de Ramesh and silenced. In a way, even I have played a part in turning Ramesh to Rehne de Ramesh in his life, resulting...he has stopped talking about his life. He never let anyone know the battle he has been fighting within himself, not to let his emotions out. He has been vocal only when it comes to his kids, and always have to fight for their rights, a lone battle again." Lakshmi looked at Nisha who had got emotional. Nisha knew how much her father had fought for her, for her wishes to be fulfilled. Lakshmi continued. "Just because he leaves silently, doesn't mean he is weak. He might be a really emotional person, but he is the most emotionally strong person too...He is definitely alone even today, but he will never back down from fighting for his kids...doesn't matter who stands in front of him..." Lakshmi eyed Viren and Dadaji for a moment.

"Lakshmi! Defend your husband, how much ever you want...But the truth is, Ramesh has been the most irresponsible guy in the house...Who on earth will lose the engagement ring on the engagement day? Am I not right, Bhaiya?" asked Rupan to Viren. Viren looked nervous but nodded his head.

"Of course...He has never cared for anyone in the house...Not for his parents or brothers or for the name of the family...He has..."

"Bhaiya..Please! Please don't put down Chote for your own personal reasons," told Mohan talking for the first time. No one had noticed Mohan leaving the courtyard and coming back.

"What..What..What are you trying to say Mohan?" asked Viren with fear.

"Ramesh has always cared for the family- he supported me during Jwala's tuition teacher case, helped me during Kirti-Ritiesh time, supported Umesh and guided him from not going in the wrong path during Aman..."

"Mohan...all that..."

"Bhaiya! One minute...Leave all that. I think it's better we clear out the root problem."

"Meaning..."

"Babuji! All the problem started when Ramesh ran away to Mumbai...For you all...It was a selfish reason. He didn't care for anyone and went to follow his dreams. But the whole story is completely different."

"Tell clearly Mohan..." told Dadaji confused. He was getting really irritated by the arguments.

"Babuji! You remember...when Ramesh and Vasundra's engagement was being discussed and Ramesh said he isn't interested..."

"Yes..." told Dadaji impatiently.

"Nisha...Read this letter aloud!"

Mohan gave a worn out letter to Nisha. Nisha took the letter confused, and began to read.

"Dear Ramesh,

I have no idea how to thank you for what you have done for my daughter. You have fulfilled the duty of a friend perfectly. Not only did you stop my daughter's life from getting ruined by refusing your father's proposal, but in the process you have also risked your relationship with your family for this. I got to know Nemi is very angry with you for running away without notice. I am really very sorry for all that you are going through for my daugter's welfare. I know how much Vasundra troubled you after you had rejected her love...Anyway, I really hope you are doing well in Mumbai...Wishing you all the success for your career. If you need any help, please don't hesitate to contact me. I owe you.

Vasundra is getting better and seems to be coming to terms.

As you had requested, I have extended the lease of the land for the next 20 years. Don't consider this as a deal of some sort. I am very happy to do something in return for what you are doing for Vasundra. I promise, the land will always be with your family.

Take Care.

Yours,
Viraj Uncle "

Nisha folded the letter looking at her mother and Dadaji. They both looked shocked and confused, looking at Mohan.

"What is all this Mohan?" enquired Dadi with fear. She could deduce what must have happened long back.

"As Ramesh said, Vasundra loved him...but when he rejected her, she was never able to accept it. She kept talking about their future which scared Ramesh, especially the suicide threat. He told Viraj Uncle who realised why Vasundra was forcing him to talk to you Babuji," told Mohan looking at his father. "Ramesh tried talking to you...but..." Mohan paused not wanting to accuse Dadaji that he never listened to Ramesh. "He knew accepting your proposal would ruin both their lives, especially Vasundra's as he never loved her. And as you know, he always wanted to go to Mumbai for his music career too. Hence, he informed Viraj Uncle about the idea of him leaving and when uncle told him to ask anything in return, he asked him to extend the lease of the land. Remember Babuji, you were under so much stress then? Because the business was in loss and uncle wanted the land back and there were lot of issues because of that...So Ramesh..." Mohan paused again. "Uncle gave me this letter to give it to Ramesh, before he left the city. Ramesh, when he returned from Mumbai, read it and took promise from me never to tell all this to anyone. He asked me to destroy the letter but..." Mohan took a deep breath. He had never talked so much before, but he had to, for his brother today.

"Truth is, whatever misunderstandings that happened between Nisha and Kabir were created by Vasundra, to get back at Ramesh. She still believes Ramesh is responsible for ruining her life. She wants revenge, and wanted to hurt Nisha, as that's what will hurt Ramesh the most" told Lakshmi ending the conversation.

Nisha gave the letter to Dadaji, who simply stared at it, seeing the signature of his friend Viraj at the end of the letter. He felt the entire world spinning around him. He wanted to be alone. He could sense all the eyes in the courtyard at him, like acussing him. He could feel the heaviness of his failure on his shoulder. He took one step towards his room and staggered. Nisha and her cousins rushed towards him, but he raised his hands signalling he needed no help. Numb, he handled himself to his room, dropping the letter on the way. His youngest son had always been right. He had failed to understand him, and had ruined his life. "Rehne de Ramesh!" rang in his head.
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Chapter 4 - Viren-Mohan Khaands Exposed

"What's the need to do all this drama?" murmured Viren. Dadi looked at him in anger. Mohan understood the situation, and ushered his elder brother to the common living room. Lakshmi took the seat in the courtyard covering her face, recovering from whatever happened. Nisha and her cousins stood beside her. The rest of the ladies left the courtyard.

Kabir stood still behind the pillar. He couldn't believe what he had just witnessed. He felt like the entire world coming down. His mother had been behind every misunderstandings that had happened. His mother had lied to him about everything. His mother wanted to ruin everyone's life, including his. The letter which Dadaji had dropped, had destined its way to him. He took it up and read it once again. The truth was in front of him, and he couldn't turn his back against it now. He had to face it. He looked upstairs to Ramesh's room.

***

Viren walked up and down in anger. "What was the need to tell all that in front of everyone, Mohan? Look at the house...It's drowned in sadness. Sometimes, someone has to take all the brunt for the happiness of the house. It is Ramesh this time..what's the problem?"

"Sometimes Bhaiya...Not always.." told Mohan in reply. "Ramesh has been used by everyone for their personal reasons always. Don't forget how you used him to cover up all your mistakes..."

"You are threatening me?" asked Viren sarcastically. "Don't forget you had also supported me whenever we framed Ramesh for the mistakes in the shop. If you are taking me down, you are also coming down with me..."

"Bhaiya! I didn't mean that...What I am telling is...Past is past...It's time we do something for Chote too and not let him fight his problems alone...He has always supported us in our crisis, yet we used him for our advantage, framed him in business losses and yet he..."

"Mohan!!!!"

Mohan and Viren turned frantically to find Dadi, Vimla and Rupan standing by the door. Nervousness and fear cropped in. Dadi walked to her elder sons in disbelief.

"Framed him in business losses? What are you telling?" asked Dadi to Mohan, anger slowly building up. She could see from her son's faces that they have done huge goof ups in business. She could understand that they had used Ramesh to cover up their mistakes.

Mohan looked at Viren helplessly. He didn't want to carry the burden anymore. It was time they both come clean of their mistakes.

"Bhaiya!" Mohan signaled Viren that it's time he tells everything.

***

"Babuji! Most of the problems in our shop...for which Ramesh was held responsible ..." began Viren in a low voice. Dadi after having heard what her sons had done, wanted them to confess everything to their father. She felt pained to know what more her youngest son had gone through, all alone. "It was actually I who messed up. I made all the goof ups...and Mohan and I used Ramesh to cover up..."

Dadaji sat in his chair with a blank expression. He wasn't looking at anyone.

"Babuji! It wasn't like I hated Ramesh or wanted to do him bad," continued Viren trying to justify himself. "I was just...scared Babuji. I feared you will scold me and blast me...I was always scared of you and didn't want to get on the wrong side of yours...You were always against Ramesh...and I am the eldest son Babuji...and you always had so much trust on me and I didn't want that to break...So I thought...these things wouldn't make any difference to Ramesh...And Babuji I never started it...It was Chote...He offered to take the blame when I lost Mohan's engagement ring...And...I just..."

Viren saw Dadaji slowly looking at him with shock and disbelief. Dadaji then saw his wife, who nodded in agreement that whatever was being disclosed is the truth. Losing the engagement ring was one thing that Dadaji had always blamed and taunted Ramesh for many a times.

"Babuji! Please forgive me...I didn't mean to cheat you...I..." stammered Viren.

"Babuji! Whatever we both did was wrong, and we accept it. We are really sorry Babuji. We..." Mohan tried to handle the situation.

"You think a sorry can change everything, Mohan?" asked Dadi. "You both have ruined Ramesh's life. Your father always believed Ramesh was irresponsible, is fit for nothing because you both had framed him for the mistakes he never committed. Do you even realise how much he had to struggle because of this...How much he had to struggle financially because the loss was always cut from his salary? How could you both have been so selfish? If you both had loved your brother, you would have never done this..." told Dadi ashamed of her sons' acts. Viren and Mohan lowered their heads in shame.

"Go" told Dadaji. Everyone looked at Dadaji amazed. Viren and Mohan were expecting him to blast them and punish them. "Don't apologise to me...Apologise to Ramesh... Go!" Viren and Mohan looked at their mother confused. Dadi understood her husband's need to be alone. She signalled everyone to leave. Viren and Mohan slowly left the room followed by Vimla. Lakshmi looked at Rupan, who lowered her head. She had always taunted Ramesh for a mistake he never did. Lakshmi left followed by Rupan. Dadi looked at her husband. He would need time to recover.
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Chapter 5 - Kabir Meets Ramesh

"Papa..."

Ramesh stood rooted to the spot as he heard the voice. Kabir, he thought and turned in apprehension. Kabir stood behind him. He didn't leave. He was standing before Ramesh. He looked at him in utter disbelief at first and then his expression transformed into one of delight. Ramesh stepped forward and hugged Kabir. His hug contained all the emotions he felt, the delight of having Kabir back was only inferior to the relief he felt at getting back his daughter's happiness. He was relieved beyond anything. However Kabir was not responding to his hug. He stood still as a statue. Ramesh broke the hug and looked up at Kabir

"Kabir.." Ramesh began suddenly worried at Kabir's expression. Kabir's eyes held hurt. His expression was one of guilt and his look was of a defeated person. Ramesh found a completely broken man in front of him.

"Papa...What I heard just now... was it all true?" Tears threatened to fall from his eyes as Kabir asked the question with difficulty. Realization dawned upon Ramesh. Kabir was standing at the door. Did he hear all that has happened inside? Of course he might have heard everything including his Mother's plans. Ramesh couldn't help but pity the child. He must be broken. He reached out and held Kabir's shoulder.

"Papa...please tell me that this is only a lie..." Tears were already running down Kabir's cheeks. He couldn't believe. He didn't want to believe. His mother can't be the vile woman of whom papa was talking of. His mom cannot be that kind of woman. His mom cannot plot against his love for her personal gain. She loved him, she knew of his love, how could she?...

"Son... I know it's hard for you...and I wish I could tell you otherwise...but it's the truth...everything you heard about your mother just now is the truth...We were very good friends in childhood... I don't know when Vasundhara began mistaking my friendship towards her as love...She ended up convincing my family and fought with her father for our marriage...but when she told me of her love I knew I had to reject her as I didn't love her...I was going to Mumbai ... Leaving a letter for Vasundhara telling that I didn't love her..." Ramesh looked up at Kabir and continued.

"I know it was hard for her ...being rejected through a mere letter...but Vasundhara's father- your grandfather was doubtful that if she met me she would force me into accepting this loveless marriage...Viraj uncle knew me so well, he knew that I was not in love with her, he knew that I had a dream of becoming a musician, more than that he knew that if this marriage happened his daughter's happiness will be in jeopardy...i never loved her nor did I wanted to marry her and if I was forced for this marriage it would have destroyed two lives...so I left with his permission...Viraj uncle gave the lease for the plot of the shop which was his as a gift for our family...but Vasundhara thought we took it as dowry and cheated by not doing the marriage... she ended up hating me and my family for the rejection and for cheating her father...she did many things in anger..." Ramesh stopped unsure of telling everything to Kabir. Vasundhara after all is his mother. He decided it was best not to tell everything and besides he might have heard everything why hurt him more."it's all of past now...I don't even know if I should blame her for the things she did in anger...but hatred, that's something that can bring out the worst in people..." Ramesh sighed and looked at Kabir. He was sad at his state.

"I - I am sorry Papa..." Kabir said folding his hands in front of Ramesh. His head hung in the guilt of his actions." Please forgive for the things I said...please... I acted without knowing the whole truth... i - " Ramesh cut off Kabir with a hug. Kabir hugged him back crying. " I am sorry papa" He said again.

Sshh- I know you ...I know why you said the things you said...and I am happy you sood up for your mother Kabir...but she was trying to manipulate you with lies...She loves you ...do not think otherwise ...It is just that she was blinded by hatred..." Ramesh could see that Kabir's eyes were now filled with contempt towards his mom and it saddened him. It saddened him to think of what Kabir felt."Son, You love Nisha then why did you think of leaving?" Ramesh asked Kabir.

Kabir closed his eyes suppressing the pain he felt. "Because Nisha doesn't love me. She loves Viraj Sir. Her happiness lies with Viraj sir. It's the truth and my mother just used this fact to separate us. Papa, she never had to try, I would have left Nisha with Viraj sir myself the day I come to know about this. Nothing matters to me more than Nisha's happiness even if it meant that I had to give up my life. But my mom..." Kabir was ranting and tears ran down his cheeks

Ramesh's first instinct was to laugh but he suppressed the feeling as he thought of Kabir's state. " Kabir please stop crying and listen to me...do you actually believe that ? Tell me the truth...why did you come back if you knew that Nisha loved Viraj?"

"I - I came back because of what you said papa... I couldn't get the things you said out of my head. My heart told me that Nisha loves me but my brain was telling me to believe what I saw...i don't want to believe papa...I really don't want to...but I saw Nisha with Viraj sir, I knew I was the only hurdle before Nisha for being with viraj sir...she didn't tell me because she did not wish to be rude...She won't ever try to hurt me. I don't know what to believe" Kabir said in a desperate tone.

"Kabir don't you think that you are not seeing the bigger picture here. Maybe your mother was not trying to make use of an existing fact but trying to make a fact out of a lie. Kabir your eyes can deceive you...often what we think we saw are not exactly the real deal. Did Nisha tell you that she loves Viraj ? Forget that did you even ask her if she loves Viraj?"

Kabir's face reddened in embarrassment, he hadn't asked her nor did she say anything. Now that he thought of the whole situation, he hadn't heard Nisha saying she loves Viraj, he had seen her being sad and angry when he said he was leaving.

Ramesh smiled. "If you still want proof, Ask her, who would know the answer better than her."Ramesh gestured him to turn. Kabir turned to find Nisha standing before him. They held each other's eyes, whirlwind of emotions residing in each pair. Ramesh slowly turned around and left as Kabir moved towards Nisha. It was their moment and he has done his part. First he has to inform family of Kabir's return and then...It was time to visit another person. Vasundhara you will have to answer for your deeds Ramesh thought as he moved towards the house.

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Chapter 6: The Confession

Nisha couldn't hear everything that went on between Kabir and her father but she figured out that everything is cleared out. Ramesh left the room. Nisha entered the room, her eyes not leaving Kabir and he returned the stare.

"So you are back?", she asked.

"I never left", he said.

She nodded.

"Papa told me to ask you-", he started.

"I heard that", she interrupted.

"What did you hear?"

"I heard enough to know that you tried to be an amazing friend but letting me be with the person you thought I love."

"Ohh..."

"So she doesn't know I love her...yet", Kabir thought.

"And what do you say about that. You love Viraj right?", the 22 yrs old asked.

Nisha took a deep breath and Kabir expected the worst.

"About four months ago I was waiting for Viraj Sir to meet me. I even wore a dress for him", she started," That night I prayed to God. I asked God to show me a miracle and I saw one too."

Nisha paused and looked at Kabir. The guy's eyes had tears.

"He came to meet you. That's the miracle right?", he asked.

"I saw Viraj sir coming and I didn't think.", Nisha ignored Kabir's comment and continued, "I just ran straight into the safest arms. Deep in my heart I felt complete and safe. I felt as if everything was perfect. I broke the hug and saw you smiling at me. 'You' are the miracle that God showed me."

Kabir's heart skipped a beat.

"I never realized it then", the raven head continued," You made me smile when no one else could. You made me laugh in my darkest times. You were there for me through tough times and you sacrificed everything for me. I didn't realize how important you became in my life and later I couldn't imagine life without you. You are my miracle. You are my Karishma and I love you Kabir."

Kabir looked at the beauty in front of him. Her eyes filled with love and her smile...it showed that she's truly happy with him. Kabir looked away from her and walked away a few steps. He ran his hand through his hair as he recollected how blind he had been that he couldn't see her love.

"Kabir?", Nisha said, cautiously. She felt that she had said too much. She felt that Kabir never did love her.

"Remember I told you I'm not made for love", he said.

Nisha nodded.

"I came only to find the boy in the photograph", he continued," I was just supposed to have a normal life and you came in. That followed by a series of drama. Chandu and bhabhiji, the wedding...twice and your family."

"Kabir I'm so sor-"

"And for the first time in my life I wasn't alone."

Nisha didn't say anything.

"For the first time I had someone who loves me and is not my mother...actually loves me way more than my mother. Someone who never gave up on me and believed in me even when the rest of the world didn't. Someone that made me feel like I have a purpose in my life besides dancing."

Kabir finally turned towards Nisha

"Someone who taught me that there are people who'll make me smile like I make them smile. People who are worth sacrificing for. People who make me believe that I 'am' made for love because I love you."

A tears escaped Nisha's eyes. It was a tear of happiness.

"Because I love you", he repeated.

Nisha closed the distance between them with a tight hug. They never wanted to let go of each other and they never will. Kabir broke the hug.

"You asked God for a miracle and I got one too", he said and bent down to capture her lips with his.

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Chapter 7: Vasundra Kabir confrontation

Vasundra was happy today. She got what she wanted the most in her life. Revenge. Revenge form Ramesh Gangwal. Revenge for rejecting her. Revenge for hurting her. Today he will see how rejection hurts. He will burn in the same fire in which she was burning for years if not more and that will give her relief. She has taken revenge as now her son has rejected his daughter the same way. Vasundra was sitting in the sofa of Kabir's home and felling victorious. She then heard the door bell ringing and went to open it.

On the other side of the door was Ramesh. he was there with lakshmi. He was content now as kabir has returned and his daughter was happy. He was happy that his happywala gana found her tune in Kabir. His kids are happy and thats enough for him. He now just wanted to clear out all the misunderstandings with vasundra so that she too will accept nisha. he was ready to forget the past for his kids. So he was there in front of nisha's house to clear out everything. Ramesh looked at lakshmi and she blinked at him in assurance. he clasped lakshmi's palms in his and rang the bell.

Vasundra opened the door and saw Ramesh with lakshmi. She smirked inwardly thinking ramesh was there to ask her to reunite kabir and nisha. Vasundra put up a fake smile on her face" Ramesh Lakshmi, What a surprise??? I thought you guys will not have the courage to face the world after nisha's marriage is broken. Guess I was wrong again" she taunted. Ramesh smiled and said "Vasundra I wanted to talk to you about nisha and kabir. I just wanted to say let bygones be bygones. Out past should not affect our kids's lives" vasundra smirked ans said

"humne mangi thi tumse pyaar ki dua par vo na mila
par kahaan jante the hum ki layegi hame samne nafrat ki hawa"

"Ramesh gangwal now u will now how rejection hurts. How I was hurt when u rejected me. Now your daughterwill face the same fate as mine and my revenge will be fulfilled." Ramesh got angry. He cant keep quiet if someone talks bad about his daughter." Look Vasundra..."he started but was cut off by lakshmi. "Ramesh we are here to sort out the problems not to create new ones"lakshmi said. Vasundra smirked at this ans said "Ramesh your wife is right. You cannot argue with me, I can co a lot more to destroy your daughter's life even now. Your wife is quiet intelligent. I must say. But I am intelligent too and am even more beautiful than her. What did you see in her that is not in me??? you rejected me and accepted her??"vasundra mocked at ramesh.

Ramesh was enraged now. He was digging his nails in his palms untill now to prevent himself from lashing out at vasundra but she crossed her limits now."how dare you drag my daughter and my wife into your dirty politics?? Till now I was quiet coz you were my childhood friend and my daughter's M-I-L but now you have lost the respect i had for uou. You are happy after separating your son from his wife??Just because I rejected you??? I did not love you??? OK leave my daughter what about your son?? Dont you love him??You have proved that I was right in rejecting you. you would have made my life hell otherwise"he blasted her. "Ramesh pls calm down"laskhmi said. "how can i be calm lakshmi???This woman is set out to destroy my Daughter's life just for some stupid revenge and you want me to calm down??? She did not care about her son too??? Vasundra you do not even deserve the love and respect of your son.. You were alone are alone and will be alone your whole life"Ramesh said.


"Papa??" came kabir's voice from the doorway. Vasundra saw this as an opportunity and went to kabir with tears in her eyes. "jojo"she said placing her hands on kabir's cheeks. "jojo you are here??? Beta I know you are angry with ramesh but dont let that affect your life with nisha. Ramesh hurted me. rejected me and for that you cannot hurt nisha for that as a revenge" Vasundra tried to manipulate kabir.

"Bas mom."Kabir shouted. "enough of you acting. I know the truth. I know that you crated misunderstandung between nisha and me. you made me believe that nisha still loved her boss when in reality she loved me. I know you lied to me to take revenge from papa. i know everything mom."kabir shouted. "How can you do this mom?? how canyou do this to me??? didn't you think about me when you were doing this??? don't you love me??" "jojo"vasundra tried to interrupt when kabir cut her off "No mom pls no more lies. I know the truth. I know papa rejected you coz he did not love you. he did not want you to be trapped in a loveless marriage.but you took revenge from him for that??? and u used me?? how could you do this.. I believed you so much mom. I misbehaved with papa talked rudely with him. I disrespected the only man who treated me like a son, who was there with me in every crisis, who loved me like a son, who gave me the love of a father i never had and you tried to make me against him??? I hate you for this mom.."Kabir then turned to Ramesh who had tears in his eyes. "papa I am sorry. I am sorry that i blamed you for this mess. I am sorry for everything"said kabir and hugged ramesh. Ramesh stroked his hair and broke the hug. he kept a hand on kabir's shoulders and said "Kabir dont be sorry beta. you trusted your mother and there is nothing wrong in it. But I wnat to tell you one thing beta. forgive your mother. let it go kabir." Kabir then turned to Vasundra and said "did you hear mom what he said??? he is asking me to forgive you mom..""Kabir beta dont believe them. you dont know anything. You dont know how the gangwals ticked my father to give them his land. he died coz of them they killed your nanu"Vasundra cried. Kabir then smiled sadly and said "even now you did not understand mom. nanu was not tricked he gave the land to dadaji on his own will" "jojo I did this for you beta I did not want the gangwals to hurt youI tried to protect you beta"vasundra said desperately. Kabir looked at vasundra and said "/you know what mom you did all these to protect me from getting hurt but you were the one who hurt me the most mom. you were never there for me and i did not blame you for that because i know you were busy trying to make a living. but mom the only time I desperately wanted you by my side you failed me mom. you ditched me and for that I cannot forgive you. Sometime I fell it would have been better if you would have abandoned me in childhood. I would have been happier" kabir said.
Vasundra was devastated hearing this. she already abandoned her elder child viraj and her jojo also wished she should have abandoned him?? she was shattered at this.

"Kabir what are you saying she is your mom kabir. she loves you... how can you do this to her??"nisha argued. Kabir smiled a little at nisha and said "you know what nisha I loved my mom but more than love I trusted her very much. I trusted her the most but she broke my trust.She did not even think about me. I feel used now. my trust is broken now and one broken it svery difficult to reestablish it" He turned towards vasundra and said "mom I am sorry if i hurted you. but i wanted to pour out my feeling to you. mom I will forgive you for sure in the future but I dont think I will be able to trust you the same"kabir said wiping his tears. he handed his nanu's letter to his mother and said "read this hope all your misunderstandings will be cleared" and went out of the house. Nisha tried to follow him but ramesh stopped her and said "nishu he needs a mother right now. I think lakshmi should talk with him."he signaled lakshmi to go to kabir and lakshmi followed him.
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Chapter 8 - Dadaji's Thoughts

Dadaji, sitting on his rocking chair, walking going to and fro around his bed, lying idly on it and again repeating the same. All he wanted was some peace of mind, which he lost due to his sons, his ego, his chauvinism towards his shop, his false pride, his autocratic parenting, his dream to crush dreams, his false sense of differentiating between broken glass and diamond, And above all his false sense of superiority, all had took his peace of mind. He wanted it back, however selfish he may have been having took away peace from his son's life forever he still wanted it back. In the dim light taking off his spectacles and placing them on the side table, he sat, sat before the mirror, trying to find himself trying to find Nemichand Gangwal, who called the best johri in Jaipur, the best judge of jewellery and people, he was lost somewhere his pride had veiled him, hidden him in some cover. His eyes were witness, witness to flood of tears which flew out of them, the redness of his sore eyes gave the testimonial, testimonial of the anger, the regret he had not on any one else but himself, yes Nemichand was accusing himself for the pain of his son, the pain of his grand daughter, the pain of every of his child who's dream he had crushed. He looked in the mirror, he was dead, dead of his regret, his thoughts, his mistakes. Now he wasn't crying, his tears had dried up, like river Saraswati, leaving no clue of their existence, but they were there, but had now left him, left him on his own to regret, to think and to apologize.

Out of the pin drop silence, Rehne De Ramesh, he could hear it echo in his room.

"Seems my ears are also deceiving me, fooling me. But this is so true, I deserve to be deceived, to be fooled, i am fool meant to be fooled. After all I have been fooling himself, not believing ramesh ever. All I came up with was Rehne De Ramesh, singing it day in and day out, right throughout the day, the week, the month, the year, in front of anyone and everyone, in front of elder or younger, whether relative or stranger, whether in happy or hard days, and each and every time I didn't give a damn to what he says."

Out of pure anger and grief dadaji started yelling out, "Rehne De Ramesh, RDR, RDR"

What he said day in and day out he wasn't able to speak today. Exhausted, out of breath, Dadaji started crying, crying of the pain not his own but the one he gave others.

"Each time he had to say something I came up with rdr, each time he wanted to do something I could do only rdr, each time he did good I was good enough only for rdr. He wanted to have a say in his daughters engagement I stopped him, he was right as always Nisha wasn't ready, not ready for marriage but just said rdr. He saved Kabir, who saved him and Nisha, he wanted Kabir to stay with us, but I could only pounce on him making decisions. He wanted Nisha to go to a trip, to let things go, to let her to stand again but I could only come up with Batwara and RDR. He wanted to stop Nisha's marriage but only talked about breaking my relation with him. He was always the most responsible of the brothers but always I could only insult him. His brothers, his SILs everyone took advantage of his innocence and I just watched. On every mistake of theirs I pounced on him, pounced badly. I have let him to be the scapegoat, each time moren do something I will put it on him and give them an way out. He had to struggle, struggle to survive and still I let others take his flesh. Always and every time he came across as a better father, a better son than I could ever be. He was more a friend than a father to the children, but me I could hardly be a father leave alone friend of his. Everyone comes to him to share their problems but he, he never had anyone to go to, I always increased his problems rather than decreasing them."

Engrossed deep in the thoughts of his failure, his regret, the sleep, the rest, the peace that eluded him since the truth came out, got hold of him.

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Chapter 9: Realization

Nisha didn't know how to calm Kabir down. She felt betrayed and hurt too but she knew that Kabir felt worse. Vasundara left the living room to be alone. Nisha knew she should leave the woman alone for a while. She didn't know where to look for Kabir so she decided to wait. This has happened before and she knew he'd be back and when he is, he'd have calmed down. As she sat of the sofa she noticed a letter on the table.

Nisha picked up the letter, opened it and immediately recognized Viraj's handwriting. She folded it. The raven head didn't want anything to do with Viraj anymore but then again she knew that she had to read the letter. He needs a clear reply, he needs to know that she and Kabir are together now. Nisha cautiously opened the letter and started reading.

Miss Nisha,

I would like to apologize for my behavior the past few months. I understand that I was so blind in your love to see that your happiness is not with me. It's with Kabir. After our almost dinner date the other night I saw how much you miss him. I realized that you speak about him the way I speak about you. I thought you love me and maybe you did but not anymore. I'm sorry for the melodrama I caused on your wedding day. You deserve better. I should have trusted you and believed in you but I didn't. Kabir is good for you and you both will be happy with each other. Do not worry about me. I have learnt a lot from you Nisha. I've learnt to believe in the people we love and not believe in everyone. I'm leaving India for good. I hope you and Kabir live happily. The house that you are staying in is now yours and Kabir's. Please accept it. It's the least I can do after all the trouble I have caused.

One more thing Nisha. You are an amazing shooter and you can reach great heights. I hope that you don't let go of that. Lakshya Academy will always welcome you. Wish Kabir luck on accomplishing his dreams. May you both be happy and I'll be happy knowing that the girl I love is happy.

You Mentor/Friend,

Viraj Singh Rathore

Nisha was in tears when she finished the letter. They were tears of happiness. She was so happy that Viraj finally understood her and Kabir.

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Kabir couldn't keep in anger in anymore. He kept walking till he reached an isolated road and then let out a scream of frustration. He turned around to find Laxmi's worried face. He let the tears of anger, frustration and sadness flow out. Laxmi came to him and gently stroked his hair. They found a stone bench nearby to sit.

"Kabir I understand that you are hurt but she's your mother", Laxmi said.

"How can a mother do this to her own son", Kabir said.

"She only thought of what's good for you."

"How's is unnecessarily breaking my heart and trying to keep me away from Nisha good for me", Kabir questioned with a tinch of anger in his voice.

"Kabir", Laxmi said calmly, "She had misunderstanding with our family and she didn't want you to get hurt because of us. She doesn't know us right. I was grudge and prejudice. She's human too Kabir. She can make mistakes."

"But this one crossed limits."

"Kabir, she's your mother. You are the only one for her. If you won't forgive her mistakes then no one in the world can and she'll be all alone."

Kabir paused to think about what the loving mother in front of him told.

"If you don't give her a second chance then who will?"

Kabir nodded hesitently.

"Now let's go back and you'll apologize for being rude"

Kabir opened his mouth to retort but Laxmi interrupted.

"You'll apologize to her", Laxmi repeated," and you'll invite her to the party."

Kabir nodded in agreement. He knew that he can't fight this because he knew that she was right.

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Nisha could here Vasundara'a muffled cries and went up to her.

"Mom", she said.

The woman quickly tried to wipe her tears but more came flowing down her cheeks. Kabir's words had hurt her way too much. Nisha sat next to her.

"I know that first love is hard to let go", she said, "You know about the owner of this house right? My previous boss."

Vasu nodded.

"Forgetting him was so hard.", Nisha admitted.

"And still is", Vasu suggested

"No", Nisha answered instantly," When I found the right guy I did let go. I don't know when but Kabir changed everything in my life. He made me forget about my heartbreak."

Vasu just nodded to assure Nisha that she's listening.

"He insulted me and my family in public more than once but I'm never going to look back to have any kind of revenge", Nisha said.

"Why not?", Vasu asked.

" 'Cause if it hadn't been for that heartbreak I would have never met Kabir",she replied with a smile," I know things didn't work out for you mom but see where that as landed you. You have a son like Kabir."

Vasu gave a faint smile to the raven head.

"I just received a letter from my ex-boss and he has realized that Kabir and I are happy with each other."

"That's great beta", Vasu said trying to keep her smile from faltering.

"And now I need to tell this to Kabir and my parents about this"

She hugged Vasu and left. In the excitement she left the letter half opened on the table and left.

For some time Vasu dwelled in what Nisha said but wasn't ready to accept it. She was still devastated by the way Kabir had spoken to her. She was shocked that her son would talk like this to her. Just then Kabir entered with Laxmiright behind him.

"Mom", Kabir said, controlling his anger.

"Yes beta", she said immediately. She looked at Kabir with plead in her eyes.

Kabir looked at Laxmi and back at his mother.

"You are my mother",he said and paused.

"Yes I am and I never meant to hurt you-"

"I shouldn't have spoken like that to you", Kabir interrupted in his monotonous tone.

"It's okay beta", Vasundara said. She wanted to calm down Kabir at any cost even if it meant that she'll have to forgive him very easily. After all she had no one else left.

Kabir was about to leave when Laxmi nudged him.

"Mom", Kabir said and Vasundara looked at him again, "I would like to invite you to the party at the Gangwal House. Please do come."

"Of course I will beta", she said and tried to smile but this time her acting skill weren't good enough.

Kabir and Laxmi left the house to let the woman think.

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Ramesh was near his car a few feet away from Nisha's house. He didn't know how to patch up Vasu and her son but he knew that Laxmi must have figured out something.

"Papa", nisha said and entered with excitement.

Ramesh's mood lightened seeing his daughter's smile. She explained the letter to Ramesh.

"He's no more a problem papa", she said with a huge smile, "No more false hope for him. He understood me finally. If not as my love as my friend. I'm so happy that he won't be the reason for me and Kabi to ever be apart.I love Kabir papa and today Viraj sir did the best thing ever ."

With that she hugged her father who hugged her back. A smile played on her lips. She had made him happy again. After all she's his happy wala gana.

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Vasundara sat on the sofa in the living room and absentmindedly picked up the letter. Viraj's name caught her eye and she read the whole letter. Once she was done she dropped it in shock.

"What did I do", she said and burst into tears.

"I used my own sons for revenge", she said to herself," I pitted them against each other just so that I can hurt Ramesh. Ramesh, who has always been there for me and now I'm punishing him for not ever having feeling for me."

It dawned to her that her whole revenge was based on a school girl crush and in the process she's ruining both her sons life. That's when she recollected Leela's story about Nisha and Viraj. She realized that she had been such blind fool to not see how much she's hurting others for her petty satisfaction.

"If my son can be happy for his love then I shouldn't carry around this grudge.", she decided," What kind of person will I be if I don't have a bigger heart than my son."

With that tears streamed down her face yet again and she sat there all alone in the room preparing herself to apologize to all those she has hurt unnecessarily.

Edited by Echo.of.Hope - 10 years ago

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