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Chapter 10 - Party At Gangwal House

Gangwal House never looked more beautiful. Lights gleamed everywhere; the courtyard was decorated in the most elegant way. Every part of the house reflected the happiness of its members, the happiness which found them after a long time. The 50 year celebration of the shop was going to take place and guests were arriving

Nisha stood in front of the mirror in her room. She stared at her own reflection. She refused to believe that it was her reflection staring back at her. Dolly dii and Kirti finally had their way and she was all right about it. She had to say she looked good in the blue knee length dress and light make up. She heard Kirti calling her and stood up to go downstairs when someone yanked her by the hand and pinned her to the wall.

"Kabir ..What the..When did you come ? where is maa?" Nisha asked surprised

"I am trying to romance you wifey and you are asking me about maa...are you dressed to kill me? Is that your plan?" Kabir asked as he moved towards Nisha. Nisha smirked at him.

"Why the smirk wifey? Do you know what am I thinking?" He smiled standing dangerously close to Nisha. "Do you really wanna go down to the party wifey? Lets party here, just you and me' Kabir came even closer if possible.

"Nishu...come down yaar...even your husband and mother in law have come- Kirti came barging into the room. Kabir moved away swiftly from Nisha cursing himself for not closing the door. One glance at the couple and Kirti understood what just happened. "Kabir, what are you doing here? You are in charge of the party too. Don't you have work?" Kirti asked as if ignorant of the situation.

"Mm..Me...Work...Oh yeah...I wanted the number of the catering service...food you know ...and Nisha had saved it on her phone... I came to ask her" Kabir said fumbling with words. "Then what were you doing near Nishu?" Kirti asked controlling her laughter. Kabir blushed and fumbled with words "Nisha...me...Dust ...yeah dust went into Nisha's eyes and I was helping her with it ...right Nisha?" Nisha didn't know whether to be embarrassed or laugh at the situation, she just nodded.

"Oh all right then...Come on Umesh bhaiyya is waiting for us ...he needs help" Kirti said finally laughing unable to control herself. Nisha and Kabir followed Kirti with bright red faces. They found Umesh closely followed by Sukku and Jwala in the hallway

"Guys...where were you...there is so much work pending ..." Umesh said dragging an excited Sukku and smiling Jwala with him as he moved towards Kirti.

"Oh some dust went into Nishu's eyes and Kabir was trying to remove it ...so we got late" Kirti said casually. Umesh stifled his laugh and Sukku coughed uncontrollably. Kabir and Nisha turned even redder than they already were.

"Is it all right now Nishu bro?...did you wash your eyes?" Jwala asked concerned. Sukku began coughing even more.

"It's all right Jwalu...jeeju took care of everything at the right moment...go and look for bunty yaar ...guests are arriving" Kirti said and winked at Kabir. Jwala ran off to find Bunty

"Yeah guests are arriving lets go downstairs." Kabir said pointedly scowling at Kirti and began walking dragging Nisha with him. The cousins laughed and followed them downstairs. They stopped on their tracks as they heard Leela's voice.

"Dolly beta...Sumit is your husband and father of your child...will you live in your house your whole life?...wont you come to your sasural?" Leela was at the height of her dramatic self. Dolly was angered beyond reason. Ramesh Lakshmi and Mohan stood angered as they listened to Leela's lies. Viren and Vimala stood behind Dolly as Leela continued with her melodrama. "Viren Bhai saab, do you want your grandchild's father and your daughter's husband to be in jail? Please make Dolly understand."

" Leela ji...I understand what you are saying...even I don't want my daughter's husband to be in jail-"

"But Bhaiya- Ramesh began but Viren held up a hand to stop him.

"Let me talk to Leelaji chote...as I was saying I don't want my daughter's husband to be in jail either...so " He gave an envelope to Leela

"What is this bhai saab? Papers to bring out Sumit? " Leela asked in glee.

"No Leelaji...Divorce papers" Every one stared at Viren unable to believe what he said..."as I said I don't want my daughter's husband to be in jail...so...Now if you would be kind to leave, we have a function to host...it's our shop's 50th year celebration...Kids." Viren gestured to the cousins standing at the corner."Please show Leelaji to the door."

"Our pleasure tauji" Sukku said smirking at Leela. Nisha and Kirti came forward and held Leela's hands.

"But bhai saab- Leela tried to talk as the cousins dragged her towards the door.

"Aunty ji I hope we never meet again...Have a good night" Nisha said as they left Leela on the road. They moved to the house. Dolly was still staring at her dad unable to believe everything that has happened.

"Papa... She said. Viren hugged her. "I am sorry beta...it took me long to realize what you wanted and what is best for you...Go live your dream of being independent...your mother and father would always be with you and your child...always" Viren said as he broke the hug

"And we will always be there with you" said Kabir gesturing at himself and the cousins. Dolly moved towards them and they shared a group hug.

Ramesh placed a hand on Viren's shoulder. "Bhaiya..." He didn't have anything to say. " Chote ...see this is all your fault... I ended up being a father like you. "He said and laughed through tears. Viren hugged Ramesh. "I am sorry chote...for all the things I have done, we have done...for everything...we love you...but we took you for granted...sometimes the elders too are wrong...forgive us yaar..."

"Haan...Chote forgive us" Mohan added as he placed a hand on Viren's shoulder

"Bhaiya...please don't ask for forgiveness... I have done my share of mistakes too" Ramesh said earnestly. Viren shook his head in wonder and placed a hand on the shoulder. " Never change chote...never change."

"If you guys have finished being sentimental...lets go and party" Nisha's excited voice sounded. Everyone laughed and moved towards the courtyard where the party was going to take place. Guests were arriving and the party went on in full swing. But someone was watching the Gangwals and their happiness unable to join in but wanting to. Vasundhara stood at the corner gazing at the happiness shining on the face of her son. He was talking with his wife and her cousins. It seemed like they were making fun of each other. Finally Nisha noticed the gaze of her mother in law. She went to her and brought her to the cousins smiling.

"Nisha ...what are you- Vasundhara began but was cut off by Sukku.

"Here comes aunty, I am going to ask her...Aunty please please please tell us Kabir's pet name...Nishu is on her hubby's side...she is not telling us anything...please tell -" Sukku's mouth was clamped shut by Kabir. "Mom ...No ...I am your son...you won't say anything..aaah" Kabir screamed as Sukku bit him. "Doggy.." Sukku ignored him "Aunty please tell us " Jwala Kirti and Bunty also joined him in pleading.

Vasundhara laughed at their gestures. "You guys are so cute,...i guess I will tell you"

"What ...Mom ...NO DON'T... Kabir tried to stop her but he was held down by umesh and Saurav. Dolly and Aman were laughing." His pet name is ...Jojo. "MOM!!" Kabir shouted. The cousins were having the time of their lives. They were laughing uncontrollably and Vasundhara joined them. "Why the angry face ..JOJO?" sukku asked Kabir innocently. Kabir scowled at him and Sukku ran. Kabir ran after him. Sukku was shouting jojo on top of his voice. Everyone laughed as they watched the duo. Sukku ran towards Nisha and stood behind her. Kabir fell on top of Nisha. Everyone laughed as the couple blushed.

"Guys it's a party...and where is the music and dance...come on guys." Saurav said to the cousins as the laughter died down. He took the mic and began"Ladies and Gentleman, Today we are going to have those three words." Everyone looked at him questioningly. "Entertainment, Entertainment and Entertainment." He said shrugging his shoulders. " Saurav..." Jwalu hit him in the head and everyone laughed. " I meant today we are going to have so much fun and to entertain you guys here we have the coolest gang in Jaipur, no in the country, no in the world." he pointed at Nisha and shouted and the cousins joined him. "NISHA AUR USKE COUSINS". Everyone clapped.

"Oye ...aur uska Husband" Kabir shouted pointing at himself. Everyone laughed. " Oh yeah ladies and gentleman and JOJO" Saurav said and hid behind a laughing Nisha. Kabir gave him the I-will-kill-you-later look as people began laughing at him.

"Ok first of all we have Sukku and Umesh on stage. Our own desi boyz" Saurav announced. Everyone enjoyed as sukku and umesh gave a hilarious performance on desi boys. Jwala and Kirti too performed on a beautiful song. Everyone was enjoying the party. Vasundhara stood gazing at his son and Nisha. She was happy that he was happy. She felt great full to Nisha, it was because of her that her son had forgiven her. It was because of Ramesh, the man she hated. How was she foolish enough to hate him and this family. The gangwals had been kind to her after all that she did. She gazed at Lakshmi and all other women of the gangwal family. They had been kind to her. Vasundhara's thoughts drifted to Viraj. She wanted to meet him badly, to tell him everything, to hear him calling maa. She thought about revealing everything to Kabir and the Gangwals. All in good time she told herself. But she needed to meet Viraj. Lakshmi saw Vasundhara standing in the corner.

"Vasundhara ji.." she called as she approached her. "Come on join us " Vasundhara hesitated but Lakshmi took her hand and led her towards the ladies. "Vasundhara beta come on sit down" Dadi told her kindly. She found herself enjoying with the ladies as time passed. They watched bunty and Sukku trying to match their steps with Kirti on the dance floor and failing badly leading to laughter. Everyone clapped loudly as they finished their performance.

"Ladies and Gentleman, it's time for a romantic performance by none other than the most romantic couple of the night. Kabir and his hus- I mean wife Nisha" Saurav announced and everyone clapped loudly as Kabir and Nisha came forward.

Hmmm...hmm

"Wifey are you ready? You are dancing with one of the best dancers in the country probably...are you nervous" Kabir asked Nisha as he held her by the waist. " No...jojo" Nisha replied laughing."Ha ha very funny " Kabir replied and they began dancing.

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

They danced gracefully; moving in sync and everyone were left with a smile as they watched the young couple.

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Kabir twirled Nisha and brought her closer to him. Both of them were in a world of their own. They forgot about the eyes of the guests on them.
Hmmm.. hmmm..

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...
Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum

Kabir ran his hand through Nisha's arm holding her and made her turn. Kabir moved away from Nisha, she ran towards him. The audience watched in awe as he lifted her.

O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Kabir spun her as he himself spun. The audience clapped loudly. He brought her down slowly looking into her eyes, but held onto her carrying her in his arms. And he danced with her on his arms

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm... hmmm..

Kabir and Nisha ended their performance but were lost in each other's eyes. Saurav cleared his throat loudly bringing the couple out of their reverie. Everyone laughed yet again as they blushed. Ramesh clapped along with everyone as he saw his Kids' perform. He was happy today, but he felt that something was missing. He looked around for his father but he saw that he was not at the party. He felt the need to talk to his bauji. Where would he be? He excused himself from his brothers and began searching for his father.

Nisha excused herself from Kabir. She wanted to talk to her father. After everything that has happened she never had time to talk to him. She began looking for him and got a glimpse of him moving upstairs. She followed him.

Edited by -Lachu- - 10 years ago
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Chapter 11 Ramesh Nisha talk in the terrace

Ramesh was standing in the balcony of Nisha's room watching the stars and thinking. Nisha entered the room with 2 cups of hot coffee in her hand. She saw Ramesh in the balcony and went to him. Ramesh was watching the sky and suddenly a coffee cup appeared before him. Ramesh smiled and turned to see Nisha holding 2 cups of coffee in her hand. He took the cup from her and took a sip. Ramesh then looked at the sky again. Nisha tried to find what he was looking at and asked him "what are u seeing papa??" Ramesh smiled and said "the stars". Nisha was confused again "why papa"she asked. Ramesh then turned to face Nisha and continued "do u remember nishu during dolly's marriage i told u that i was trying to find my star in the sky and was not able to do so??? today i found it." Nisha again looked at the sky and shook her head in negative and shrugged her shoulders and asked "what are you trying to say papa? pls tell me". Ramesh shook his head in negative and said "nothing beta u go enjoy the party" Nisha crossed her arms and looked at Ramesh and said "papa are u going to tell or not?? I will not leave this place till u tell me." Ramesh then smiled at her and said "u know Nishu i always used to think the only phase of life where i wasn't rehne de Ramesh was in being a dad. i was so proud of that thing. but when i found out that u hid so many things from me i felt i was rehne de Ramesh as father too. i know you did that coz u thought it will hurt me but beta the fact u used to hide things from me hurt me more than the truth.i wanted to be ur support Nishu not just a mere spectator in ur life." Ramesh choked while saying that. nisha too had tears in her eyes and kept her hand on Ramesh's shoulder. Ramesh quickly wiped away his tears. Nisha then said "papa u were are and will always be my biggest support. You always solve my problem even without knowing it. i mean i dont even tell u my problems but u always solve them even without knowing it. how do u do that papa?" Ramesh smiled and looked at Nisha "do u remember what i said when u agreed to marry Ritesh?""that u can read my eyes". "you got the answer Nisha. u stopped telling me your problems but i can read them in your eyes. how can i not know when my happywala gana is sad?" Nisha then hugged him suddenly and said "i love you papa. you are the best father." Ramesh broke the hug and said jokingly "tell me something i dont know" both laughed.

Ramesh looked at her and said "this is my happy wala gana. u were asking how i found the star right? the answer is in your's and your brothers' happiness. if my kids are happy then
i am the happiest person in the world"Nisha smiled. she looked at Ramesh and said "i am
sorry papa for all the pain i gave you. i wish i could reverse everything. " Ramesh then said "you can do it. just follow your dreams. I know beta u are working in the shop but try to find that dream to achieve which u can do anything. i know ur childhood dream was broken but don't restrict yourself from dreaming beta. your dadi always says 'dreams are not made
of glasses but of clay'. u can always see another dream or recreate the same one even if it gets destroyed. the day u achieve your dream will be the best day of my life. and one more thing promise me not to hide anything from now on." Nisha kept her hand over the coffee
cup and said "coffee ki kasam papa. i will follow my dreams and i promise not to hide
anything form u." Ramesh then kept a serious face and said "u wont break ur promise na??
otherwise how will i live without coffee??" "papa" they both laugh and Ramesh then side
hugs Nisha. then Bunty came into the room and said "Nishu di you are here?? everyone is
asking for u" Ramesh then patted Nisha cheeks and said "you go. u talked to your father and now i have to talk to mine. Have to go into singham's den" and left. Nisha too left the room with Bunty.

the star which Ramesh talked about was twinkling in the sky brightly.

Edited by Teogapi - 10 years ago
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Chapter 12 - Dadaji apologies to Ramesh

Dadi smiled looking at all her kids enjoying the party. It had been days or probably months her family had been happy and had a good time together. Yet, she couldn't enjoy. Deep down, her heart is with her husband who had refused to join the party. She wanted to go and be with him, but he had ordered her not to let anyone inside and he wanted to be alone. She realised she was actually scared for her husband, if he would be able to handle himself all alone. She turned away and began to walk towards her room slowly. She noticed Ramesh coming down the stairs, walking towards his father's room with determination. Relief passed through her body. Everything would be fine now.

***

Dadaji stood in front of the wall which hanged a number of pictures of his family. He was still unable to get over what had happened few hours back. Things had changed completely. Taking off his spectacles, and wiping off the tears assembled on his face, Dadaji started to look back at the pictures and the years gone by. He heard the door of his room opening. He had already asked his wife not to allow anyone to disturb him.

"Didn't I ask not to trouble me?" shouted Dadaji without looking at his intruder.

Ramesh lowered his head sadly. "I have always troubled you, haven't I?" Hurt and sadness was evident in his voice. Dadaji turned immediately to see his youngest son standing at the door. Shame and embarrasement seeped in. Unable to say a word, Dadaji walked to his chair weakly and sat down. "What will I even tell him?" he thought.

Ramesh stood rooted to his spot, pondering if he should leave his father alone, or go and have a talk with him. He turned to leave momentarily, but locked the door instead and walked to his father. He knew whatever had happened, would have shocked his father, hurt his father a lot. He never wanted his father to know any of those truth. He stood in front of his father for a few seconds which seemed like eternity. He wasn't sure what he should do. His relationship with his father had been so distant that, starting a conversation seemed so difficult for him. After giving a train of thought, he decided to kneel down beside his chair. He couldn't make up his mind to look at his father in the eye. "What can I tell him?" he thought.

"I am sorry Babuji!" Ramesh collected all his strength to say those words finally. "I know I have always given you only sorrows, and today is no different". With only silence as response from the other side, Ramesh slowly raised his head to face his father. He saw his father looking at him directly with tears in his eyes. Tears welled up in his own eyes. He had no clue what his father was sad and hurt about. Was it because of his lies or...Ramesh wanted run away from the room immediately. He felt the awkward silence unbearable.

Breaking the silence,

"I am Sorry, Ramesh!" told Dadaji. Ramesh felt a chilling. His father's voice had never before sounded so broken.

"Babuji! It's not your fault...it's..." Ramesh instinctively tried to defend his father.

Dadaji raised his hand stopping his son from continuing. Ramesh instantly stopped his sentence. Clear, firm yet shaking with regret, Dadaji knew he had to talk to his son this time.

"I failed to look beyond your failure...Failed to understand what you were going through...Failed to understand what forced you to leave the house..."

"Babuji..."

"I never realised...You failed..because I failed". Deep sadness filled the air of silence that prevailed for a complete one minute.
"It's not like that Babuji...I know you were worried for me...You..."

"Didn't you wish I supported you in a lot of situations? Didn't you miss your father's support?"

Ramesh responded in silence because he had indeed longed for his father's support a lot of times.

"Now when I see how your kids, actually all the kids approach you, talk to you...I understand what I should have been..."

"No Babuji! It's equally important to be strict too. Kids should also have fear..."

"Because of fear, Mohan and Viren framed you for all their mistakes. Because of fear, you didn't tell about the problems you had been facing all these years. Because of fear..." broke Dadaji in anger.

"Babuji! Please...Please don't blame yourself for everything. The situation was such that..."

Ramesh stopped. He could see no reason could satisfy his father now.

"Babuji! Listen to me please.." Ramesh held Dadaji's hand tightly. "The truth is we both have failed to live up to each other's expectations. We both have failed to understand each other's perspective. But let us put the past behind Babuji...and..."

Dadaji got up from his chair suddenly interrupting Ramesh. Ramesh got up too wondering if he had told something wrong. Dadaji had already decided what he had to do to rectify whatever he had done in the past.

"You are right! And this time...I wouldn't make the same mistake like I did before- Live in the past." Dadaji turned to face Ramesh. "Ramesh! I know I should have realised this long back...But...I have been completely wrong about you..."

Dadaji walked to Ramesh and held his shouders and smiled, a smile filled with happiness.

"You are a great father, a great brother and a great son. It has been you, who had saved the business when it was about to go down but I always demotivated and insulted you..." Ramesh tried to interrupt but Dadaji continued, "I know I am very late to say this...But...I am really very proud of you. Not everyone could have done, whatever you have done for the family. And...I want to be a father like you..." Dadaji meant every word he uttered.

Ramesh looked at his father stunned. He had never imagined even in his best dreams that his father would voice such words for him. Overwhelmed with emotions, Ramesh wasn't able to control himself anymore. He hugged his father tightly. Tears rolling down, he had heard what he had yearned to hear from his father for years. He had lost hope that his father would understand him one day.

Dadaji tried to break the hug, but Ramesh didn't leave him. Dadaji could feel the so many things which Ramesh wanted to say through the hug. Dadaji let his son take his time...after all it's because of him that his son had to go through so many hardships in his life.

Ramesh broke the hug, panting slowly, wiping off his tears.

"Sorry" told Ramesh embarrassed.

"Tu Rehne De Ramesh!" told Dadaji instantaneously. A moment passed without any emotion with the father-son looking at each other. Dadaji shook his head at his habit and gave a proud smile which turned into laughter. Ramesh too joined the laughter.

"Shall we join the party?" asked Ramesh.

"You go...I'll join in a few minutes."

Ramesh gave an understanding nod and left the room closing the door behind. Dadaji felt a huge burden off his shoulder. His heart felt light.
Edited by Shwets1502 - 10 years ago
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Chap 13-Vasundhara apologises to the Gangwals


The whole Gangwal house was decorated fabulously for the party...Ramesh entered the courtyard and looked around..All he could see was happy faces...it seemed as if everyone forgot about the past and was living the moment...enjoying the party to the fullest...right from the kids to the elders...the cousins were tired after the dancing session and they cuddled together in one corner,enjoying their time together...Vimla,Rupan,Lakshmi and dadi were talking to the guests ...Mohan and Viren were busy arranging something...there was so much of happiness and excitement in the air...Ramesh himself was very happy...happy that all is well between Kabir and Nisha...happy that all the misunderstandings between him and bauji was cleared...happy that all the family members were celebrating ...celebrating for a real cause...the 50th year of the Gangwal Jewellers.But still,there was someone missing and the party felt incomplete..."Bauji.."Ramesh suddenly realised...he was about to go to dadaji's room when dadaji entered the courtyard,waving his hand to the cheering crowd.His eyes glistened coz of the tears that were yet to drain,and that mixed with his smile gave his eyes an unusual but pleasant warmth...Ramesh looked at dadaji,tears accumulating in his own eyes...he felt proud to be his son...son of a man who has suffered it all,who has given all his sweat and soul for flourishing the business...who has hidden a soft ,kind ,loving and forgiving father within this tough exterior...a father whom Ramesh always wished for...a father whom he thought that he lost forever...Ramesh glanced away to hide the tears which were threatening to fall.

"Maaji ,did you see Ramesh?What about Bauji?I searched the whole house but didn't find him...and I don't know where I kept Nisha's necklace...I had it with me 5 minutes ago but I don't know where I kept it!Maaji,u saw that?it is..."Lakshmi kept on saying,tension filled in her voice

"Arey Lachmi...relax me.."dadi said and laughed."Don't be tensed...look around and see...Ramesh and his bauji are standing right here...why are you tensed...?just take a deep breath and listen what I have to say.."Dadi said,smiling.

"Kya maaji?did I do something wrong?"Lakshmi asked,feeling tensed.

"Lachmi...thank you beta..."dadi said...Lakshmi was shocked...she kept staring at dadi as she thought she heard it wrong.She didn't understand why maaji was thanking her.."Thank you for being with Ramesh,for supporting him when no one else was there,for being there for him...always...you know Lachmi,he is my youngest son...but also the one who suffered the most...he always accepted everyone's mistakes as his own...and look what that gave him...disrespect...and loneliness.I always used to feel bad for him...but I knew that you will support him even in his toughest times...thank you beta..."dadi said,almost crying.

"Maaji,don't say thanks...he is my husband...I have taken vow that I will support him till my death...You needn't say thanks for that...it is my duty...and i will fulfill it with happiness"Lakshmi said and beamed and then hugged dadi..

"Ladies and gentleman..."Saurav's voice interrupted their conversation."Now that the party is about to be over,shall we conclude it with something fabulous?"

"Yeah!!!"cousins shouted in unison

"Ok ...let me make it clear..."said Saurav with a mischievous smile..."We the cousins gang have planned to give Kabir a dare...and the dare is...he should propose nisha...RIGHT NOW!!!As simple as that..."Saurav said,his voice barely audible over the thunderous clapping that filled the room.

Kabir and Nisha stared at Saurav ,then at each other,and then back at Saurav,not wanting to believe what Saurav said right now...Suku took Nisha's hand and lead her to the centre of the crowd and then he returned back to the crowd.Nisha was all embarrassed standing in the middle of the crowd waiting for Kabir to come.Kabir slowly walked towards her,his gaze filled with nervousness and anxiety."Come on Kabir...you can do it...just tell her that you love her...it is as simple as that"Kabir assured himself.But one look at Nisha's face and his thoughts momentarily faltered,her beauty was intoxicating him...and he forgot all that he wanted to say...the words got struck in his throat.Kabir looked at Ramesh who was already giving him "thumbs up";Kabir gave him a pleading look.Ramesh understood his dilemma and took Lakshmi to the far side of the room...so that Kabir can see them clearly but no one else would notice.Ramesh then kneeled down before Lakshmi and took her hands and signalled Kabir to do the same.Lakshmi was shocked and was about to speak but Ramesh silenced her.


Kabir followed whatever Ramesh showed ...he kneeled down before Nisha and took her slender arms in his strong and protective ones.He then looked at Ramesh through the corner of 1 eye,who signalled him to speak his heart out...Kabir took a deep breath and looked at Nisha and began"Nisha,the first time we met,you ran into my arms and hugged me tightly,never wanting to leave me,feeling safe in my arms.From that moment,I remember every single moment I spent with you,saving Chandu,our accidental marriage,meeting your family,our 2nd marriage,the contract we made,the fights,the cute conversations,everything...we have gone through a lot, Nisha...a lot of ups and downs...people around us never believed us...but what made us going was our trust in each other.We never ceased to trust each other,not even in the toughest situations...you always supported me and cared for me,even when no one else was there for me...you trusted me...but..I...I was foolish enough to not trust you and think that you love someone else...I am sorry for that Nisha...inspite of all the love and support you have given me,I failed you at the last moment...and so I want to rectify my mistake...I want to support you,care for you,...i just wanna be there for u...always...coz I..."Kabir paused for a moment and took a deep breath...he closed his eyes and said "coz...I love you"he finished his sentence,feeling every word he just said to Nisha...he opened his eyes and saw Nisha beaming and blushing at the same time.She replied"I love you too..Kabir..."she was so delighted and excited that she managed to say only that much.Kabir hugged her tightly ,standing amidst the cheering crowd.Kabir looked at Ramesh and thanked him...Ramesh was all happy and proud to witness this beautiful moment .Ramesh and Lakshmi looked at the new couple with a feeling of content and pride.Far ,at another corner,Vasundhara looked at these two happy couples, and a feeling of guilt washed over her.

The party was over and dadaji was busy waving bye to all the guests.In a few minutes,all the guests left and the Gangwal House became calm...once again.Dadaji was about to return to his room when Vasundhara called him.

"Nemi Uncle..."Vasundhara called dadaji...and a hush fell over the room..."Nemi Uncle...I ...am sorry for everything...everything that I did during my teenage and for what I tried to do to Nisha...I am sorry Uncle...I didn't even realise that love had blinded me so much that I became obsessive and turned evil...i was a bad daughter...a bad wife...a bad mother...and now...a bad mother-in-law.I failed miserably ...I failed in life...I kept hurting my loved ones...my family...thinking that by doing so ,I will win my love back...but I was wrong...my intentions,my beliefs, my ways...everything was wrong...I am sorry Uncle... "Vasundara finished...her eyes filled with tears.

Dadaji didn't utter a word and stood staring at something invisible...He stood like a stone statue,pretending that he heard nothing.Vasundhara broke from within seeing dadaji like that.She moved towards dadi,Mohan and Viren


"Saroj aunty, I have brought only sadness to this family...Please forgive me and accept me as your own child...like before."she pleaded."Mohan bhaiyya,Viren bhaiyya,I am still your little sister,please forgive me...Please think that all this was done cause of my ignorance...Don't hate me bhaiyya...I won't be able to bear that..."Vasundhara said,weeping.Dadi hugged Vasundhara and consoled her.She assured her that she is still the daughter of the house,and still owns a special place in her heart.


Vasundhara now went towards Ramesh.Her gaze lowered automatically,the shame and guilt she felt at that moment was eating her away."Ramesh...I don't know what to say...I know that any number of apologies won't be able to wipe away what I have done..."she said,her cheeks drenched with tears,her head lowered with shame..."I ...I am sorry Ramesh...Pls forgive me...if you really can forgive...I know that you don't even want to see my face...I ...am sorry..."Vasundhara folded her hands as if she was begging him to forgive and cried uncontrollably.


"Vasundhara...its okay"Ramesh said in a calm and soothing voice."You apologised for your misdeeds...that is more than enough.I just want my good old childhood friend back,my bestie with whom I used to share my joys and sorrows...that's all I want"Ramesh said,trying to make her feel better.


"Yes Vasundhara,mistakes happen to everyone...even to me...but you apologised for all your misdeeds...that is what matters...that proves that you are still good at heart"dadaji finished the sentence by saying what Ramesh intended to say.

Vasundhara felt happy...really happy that she was forgiven by all and was accepted by all...But she had other things to do...She looked at Kabir and Nisha,who were still smiling at her.


Vasundhara thanked everyone for the kind behaviour and walked towards Kabir and Nisha.She hugged them both tightly and gave them blessings..She patted on Nisha's cheeks and said"I am so sorry for what I did to you..Nisha,you are the one who made me realise my mistakes.You are a good girl Nisha...perfect for my Jojo...please take care of him...this idiot doesn't even know how to propose his own wife.."she looked at Kabir and laughed.Kabir returned a sheepish grin."Nisha I am giving you the duty of taking care of this crazy son of mine...Only you can handle him."Vasundhara finished on a light note.

Nisha beamed and replied"Its ok ma...and dont worry maa...I will take care of him...atleast he "tried" to copy my dad and propose me...I am grateful to him for that...He would never have proposed me in public if my dad didn't support him"

Kabir was about to oppose but Nisha interrupted him and said"Don't say anything Kabir...I am not blind.I saw everything"Kabir's face reddened .Everyone in the courtyard had a good laugh.

"I am leaving India today..."VJ announced,a little while after the conversation ended ..."I have some urgent work in Dubai...will come back soon after its finished"she said with a pleasant smile.She didn't say that she was leaving to meet Viraj...she didn't say that she was longing to meet her elder son,the one whom she had abandoned when he was still a child...she didn't say that each time she saw Kabir happy,a pang of guilt struck her heart because she was not able to provide the same happiness to her elder son...she didn't say say about Viraj to the gangwals...not even to Kabir,as she knew that the truth would upset them...she didn't say anything...she decided to wait until everything became calm...

After farewells and goodbyes,she looked at her Jojo for one last time,her eyes telling him all that she wanted to say to him.She turned and left,not turning once to look back at the house that gave her fond memories,cause she felt afraid that she will lose her confidence...

Kabir stood transfixed at that spot,looking at the door which was still open...everyone had returned to their respective rooms...and he was standing all alone in the courtyard ,not moving a muscle. Suddenly,he felt that he became an orphan...That whoever was left in the world for him,his mom...left him...A familiar fear began to conquer his heart...the fear of losing his loved ones...his mom...For 1 second,he forgot all about the Gangwals...all he could see was the endless images of his mom taking care of him reeling in his mind.He was about to break from within when a familiar hand locked arms with his...he looked up to see Nisha standing and giving him a reassuring smile.She then squeezed his hand gently,just the way her mom did when her dad was upset...she knew that this would ease Kabir's pain...Kabir couldn't take it anymore...tears sprang out of his eyes...and traced their path down his cheeks...tears that reminded him that he has a lovely wife,six crazy cousins, loving in-laws who cared for him like his parents and one big crazy family...He was no longer alone...and that feeling of relief brought more tears to his eyes...he wept silently...his heart feeling contented that he had found one precious thing that he could never afford to lose-the Gangwal family!

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Chapter 14 - All's Well That Ends Well

It was another morning just as many in the Gangwal house. All the elders have woken up and were about with their business. The previous day's party had exhausted them but not enough to forget their chores. But unfortunately that was not the case of the younger lot of the house. They had the most fun in the party but they also were the most exhausted.

"Arrey who's there yaar? Let me sleep ..."

Nisha opened her eyes hearing the loud knock on her door. She turned only to find herself on top of someone wrapped in his arms. She came to her senses at the realization. It was Kabir and he was sleeping like a baby oblivious to the racket at the door. The events of past night rushed into her mind. They had the time of their lives at the party. And later the night Kabir had brought her into her room and they had talked about everything. Everything which was unsaid between them, every feeling, every emotion, they shared with each other everything. They had fallen asleep unknowingly, Nisha tried to remember when but nothing came to her mind.. They were still in their party clothes. Nisha's thought was broken by Lakshmi's sound

"Nishu...Kabir...wake up ...your dadaji has called everyone downstairs...get ready fast and come down" Lakshmi shouted urgently.

"Laxmi...relax me...we will be there soon...please go and wake everyone else" Nisha said shaking her head at her mom's anxiety. Lakshmi went towards the other cousins' rooms to wake them up, whispering to herself urgently.

"Kabir...wake up yaar..." Nisha tried to wake up Kabir but he got hold of her hand and hugged it not allowing her to get up "Kabir yaar...leave my hand...and wake up...look at the time yaar" Nisha tried reasoning with him. "Please yaar Nisha ...lets sleep some more please...come on yaar..." Kabir said eyes still closed. Nisha smiled at his antics, suddenly she had a mischievous thought. "Kabir ...wake up...Singham" Nisha shouted urgently. Kabir sprang up from the bed as fast as possible." Singham ...where?" Nisha laughed as answer and Kabir scowled at her.

"Singham has called everyone downstairs...we need to get ready fast and go" She said as she pushed Kabir off the bed."But wifey-" Kabir began but Nisha gave him the look and he silently went to freshen up.

When the cousins and Kabir finally came downstairs still half asleep and staggering they were surprised to be led to the common dining area for breakfast. They were seated at the dining table and the elder women served them their breakfast as Dadaji and dadi joined them. The cousins looked at each other questioningly but found each other to be ignorant of everything. Dadaji smiled a rare smile seeing the confused faces of the children.

"Patience is a virtue children, we will talk later" He said to them signaling them to have their breakfast. The cousins ate silently still puzzled. After they had their breakfast , they gathered at the courtyard. They were surprised to find the couches laid and the elders sitting on them clearly waiting for them. They sat on the couches silently puzzled. The elders looked clueless themselves. They all got up as dadaji and dadi entered. Both of them looked at each other and then at their children. They were at peace today, seeing their kids together. Dadaji sat down on the sofa with Dadi. He looked at all of them before he broke the silence.

"Arrey...why are you people so serious?" He asked trying to break the ice. The cousins broke into a smile at his question. "I called you people here today because I have made some decisions and I wanted you people to know it." His voice turned serious. "Its been 50 yrs I have been in this business. I have done a lot of work to keep this going. I have faced a lot of hard ships. A lot of sweat has gone into the process. Today Nemichand Gangwal is a lot of things, One of the most respected businessmen in jaipur, one of the most successful businessmen in Jaipur yet...yet I made a lot of mistakes when I come to my own family." He looked at them gravely as they began to protest.

"No children it's the truth... I made a lot of mistakes... " Dadaji continued

"No Bauji...it's us who made mistakes ..." Viren began. But dadaji held up his hand.

"No son..the mistakes you made were my fault too...if only I was a bit more understanding... Children, I always wanted the best for all of you...yet I was a bit selfish myself...the shop was my dream...it was my dream to become a successful businessman...and now I realize in the business of giving what is best for you ,I imposed my dream on all of you... I wanted you to live my dream... I never found it important to ask you what your dreams were..." He looked at Ramesh sadly. "And when you did tell me what you wanted... I never gave a chance to full fill it "

"Bauji... " Ramesh began. " Let me Son... I never realized everyone had the right to live their dream...or maybe I never saw above your betterment and hence missed out on your happiness."

"It's of past now ..." Saroj said

"You are right Saroj and you say something about mistakes...what was it ?" Dadaji asked her.

"Mistakes are forgiven as long as they are rectified by the doer and if he is truly sorry for it" Dadi said smiling and shaking her head.

Dadaji looked at the cousins." I am going to rectify my mistakes with my grandchildren. Umesh..."

"Dadaji" Umesh looked up surprised.

"Do you wish to get out of the job in the shop?" asked Dadaji kindly.

Umesh looked towards his parents and then Aman. Aman gave him a reassuring nod indicating that she would be with him for anything.

"D-Dadaji...as you know I am very fond of cooking... I want to start a restaurant of my own with Aman...so I do want to leave the shop." Umesh finished confidently looking up at dadaji.

Dadaji smiled. "You can start your restaurant beta along with Aman... I am sure your work in the shop all these years have fetched you enough money for this... I know you wouldn't want to ask for financial help but we would surely be with you beta...for any kind of help you want" Umesh's eyes welled up hearing dadaji's words

"Thank you ...dadaji..." He said with difficulty. Dadaji nodded his head."Dolly..." He looked up at her. Dolly too looked at dadaji. "ji Dadaji.." dolly said with apprehension.

"Beta...you are getting legally separated from Sumit...you are also pregnant...We know that you want to be independent...And the business you are doing with Saurav, I know you want to continue it...I hope you are doing well with the business beta...and I wanted to say that we are proud of you beta...I am proud of you." He placed a hand on her head. " We are with you ...the whole Gangwal pariwaar...be what you want to be ...be independent." Dolly smiled through her tears.

"Kirti..." Dadaji looked at her turning a bit serious.

"Haan Dadaji" Kirti looked up at dadaji

"Kirti... I have an idea of your dream...but tell about it anyway so that everyone can hear."

"Dadaji... I want to pursue a career in fashion...I want to go to Mumbai for my course in fashion designing" She looked at the elders who seemed a bit unhappy at her statement." I know that it is unconventional...but I believe I have talent in designing... I promise that I will be responsible...I will give up all my childish behavior... I promise that I will be focused in career and never ever deviate...I promise I will be responsible truly" Kirti pleaded.

"And I believe you." Dadaji said shocking everyone. "But Bauji.." Mohan began. " No Mohan...look at your daughter. Is she the same Kirti she was before her engagement? Mohan our Kirti has grown up...she has begun to understand responsibilities. Kirti,...Beta... I still don't have faith in your career choice" Dadaji said. Kirti's face dropped. " But ...I have faith in you...You are the granddaughter of Nemichand Gangwal...your determination is sure to bring you to the top..."Dadaji held up a letter he was holding and gave it to Kirti. "So ...I give you the letter of acceptance from the college you have applied for secretly." Dadaji smiled at a shocked Kirti."Follow your dream and Make us proud."

"Sukku..." He moved to Sukku who seemed embarrassed for some reason.

"Ji..D-Dadaji " Sukku stuttered.

"You want to be a movie star?" Dadaji Smiled. Sukku's ears reddened at the blunt question. He was unable to meet dadaji's eyes. Finally he nodded."You know you are talented, But beta...you need to look at reality more closely. You are only one of the thousands of people who carry around the same dream which in reality can be full filled only by a small number of people. I am not telling you to stop dreaming. Rather... I am telling you to dream but make it happen. But before that you will have to promise me something, two things actually. I want you to continue your education. And if you can do a job as well somewhere else if not in the shop, it would be great... Beta I am not ordering you to do anything but think about it. I have seen you taking responsibilities in the shop...I am sure you can take responsibilities now."

Sukku looked at Dadaji. Then he made the decision. "Dadaji I will continue my education and I want to continue working in the shop." Dadaji patted him on his shoulder and moved towards Jwala and Bunty.

"What will I have to say to you two?" Dadaji wondered out loud. "Study well? I know I don't have to say that to Jwala. But beta Bunty... I am not telling you to be as good as Jwala but do work hard." Dadaji smiled."When the time comes..."He whispered as he moved from Jwala and Bunty.

"Nisha..." Dadaji stopped in front of her. Nisha looked up at him silently.

"In this house, in all these years there was only one person I dare say who had the guts to oppose Singham." Dadaji smiled at the nick name cousins had for him as everyone looked up at him astonished. "You...You had your reasons and problems for everything. You never agreed upon anything easily with me. You always had plans to go around my plans. You always had to live in your own terms. Even your marriage." Dadaji looked at Kabir for a moment.

"You Nisha always surprised me. Yet I know you Nisha, deeper than you imagine. Nisha I want to say that I am proud of you. You have turned out to be a wonderful young woman. Surprise to many but definitely not to me. Beta I know you want to continue your job in the Shop. But I would like to ask you to do something just like I asked your brother here. I want you to practice shooting. I know it was your dream but you gave up on it. But beta your talent shouldn't be wasted. Promise me that you will get back to training."

Nisha moved forward and hugged Dadaji. Dadaji was taken aback for a moment but he reciprocated. "I will Dadaji...I will." Nisha said through her tears. Dadaji placed his hand on her head for a moment and then moved to Kabir.

"Kabir ..." Kabir looked stunned for a moment as he heard dadaji utter his name. He never expected him to.

"Arrey bhai...why so surprised? You are my grandchild as much as any of these people here. Besides you blend well with this lot. Just as mad, maybe more." Dadaji said shaking his head. "First of all I should say that you are one of the good idiots I have come across in my life. A smart idiot, an idiot with a good heart but an idiot all the same. Yet you are the perfect match for Nisha. Ramesh told me something about a London school of Dance." He looked at Ramesh and he nodded. "You want to be a choreographer?" Kabir nodded. Dadaji shook his head. "I suppose you don't want the job at the shop? Dadaji asked." No Dadu...it's not a job for me" Kabir said slowly. "And how do you plan to make a living?" Dadaji asked. Kabir looked at Nisha, they had taken a decision the last day, Nisha nodded assuringly. "I am planning to open a dance school. I am also going to look up job as graphic designer. I think Nisha and I can manage with this." Dadaji nodded approvingly. "I want to make a suggestion...If you want to open a dance school why don't you join hands with Ramesh. Ramesh can teach music and you can teach dance. " dadaji looked expectantly at Ramesh and Kabir while they looked at each other. They both had the same line of thought that this might just work. They nodded at each other.

"That's a great idea Bauji" Ramesh said and Kabir agreed.

"But you will try for London School Of Dance next year? Dadaji asked Kabir."I would like to.." Kabir said doubtful of Dadaji's reaction. "Oh do try...and take Nisha if you go to London. I doubt you both would survive without the other" Dadaji said casually to general astonishment while Kabir and Nisha blushed.

Dadaji looked at his children and grandchildren sitting in the courtyard. He felt a sense of satisfaction. The heaviness he felt ever since he found out the truth seemed to be disappearing." Viren, Mohan... I hope you have understood the depth of your doings. I hope you are truly sorry for everything. Viren... I am glad about what you and Vimala have decided for Dolly...and Rupan" Rupan seemed startled at hearing her name. Dadaji smirked

"Ji Bauji..." Rupan said nervously.

"Bahu...Second chances to correct your mistakes are rare so people should make maximum use of it don't you think?" Dadaji asked Rupan with warning tone. Rupan flushed in embarrassement.

"Ji Bauji" she said.

"...and Ramesh...Beta I am sorry."

"Bauji..." Ramesh intervened.

"Arrey bhai... cant you let me apologize to my son. And Lakshmi beta...I should say thank you for staying with Ramesh. You are indeed the best thing that has happened to him" Everyone laughed at this.

"Saroj, that's my mistakes rectified. Isn't it ?" Dadaji asked. Dadi smiled nodding her head. " With this can we have a selfie for the moment?" Dadaji asked and everyone laughed. Kabir came up with the selfie stick as everyone lined up for the selfie. "Ok guys 3, 2,1...WHOA" the selfie was clicked at the moment the cousins fell down tripping. Laughter echoed throughout the Gangwal House.

The End

Edited by -Lachu- - 10 years ago
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👏👏First of all...👏...*bow down*...it's mind-blowing...n for the ifrst time i'm reading it continuously instead of bits and parts😆 like I did when we were all writing.
Chp 1: Amazing Anu!Luved the way you described what Nisha meant in Kabir's life ad also his entire truth process.

Chp 2: It was the perfect amount of drama. Not too much but not a phuss either.

Chp 3: Wow shwets! never read anything you have written before and this is awesome!! and awesomeending to the chapter

Chp 4: Wow!...finally truth is out!

Chp 5: Read it before...love it and read it again now

Chp 6: I hope you all like it😳...pardon the typo errors😆

Chp 7: love the line "He was happy that his happywala gana found her tune in Kabir." 👏
and u didnt forget to make a shayari nice😊

Chp 8: beautifully written puneet, especially the first part and a wonderful last line.

Chp 9: I hope you liked it.😳...again pardon me for typos😆...oh n then nibir getting the house thing...never imagined that'll actually happen on the show😆

Chp 10: Kirti the Kabab mein Haddi..loved that😆...ad the cousins...that part is lovely
Viren!!finally!
Nisha aur usek cousins...aur uska husband😆😆
OMG!!! Jeena Jeena... love you for this Lacchu🤗

Chp 11: RN!!! is so touching. I think some us wanted to mention happy wala gana at some time right?😆...rema,shwets, me...

Chp 12: When Dadu said he's proud of Ramy ...😭+😊...why did they not show this on the serial.

Chp 13: RLKN was awesome!!!! Love that foursome...and Kabira in the end😭...now that nibir support. love it.

Chp 14:Cousins and theri dreams ..Epic Ending!!!!

👏

I really enjoyed writing this SS with you all. I feel like satisfied...i don't know if its the stor...all your beautiful writing or the team work we did but I love it.

I really hope we can do this again

Love you all🤗

Edited by Echo.of.Hope - 10 years ago
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Omg great work dear👏
Loved it a lot
I liked each n every part but my most fav is the RAKA one
Loved their understanding
Ramesh a perfect father as well as a father-in-law😃

Beautifully written everybody😃
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Mindblowing idea and efforts by everyone..
The idea is so awesome..

One word for all of you and that is ...WOOOW
All of you did an amazing job..
It was a treat to read all of your story at one place..
One of the best writers of NISHA AUR USKE COUSIN gathered at one place..
It was something that i always wanted to see ..
It was an awesome idea..
Hats off to all of you and for the person who thought of the idea.,,
So refreshing to read how all of you put the story in your own way..
Never thought NAUC could end like this too...
I wish we could get something like that...
Just loved it
And a big round of applause for all the writers... 👏
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Super awesome guys
This is so brilliant so many days of hardwork has become so successful
Discussion which revived ramy at and helped motd cross 100
Every part is so unique
Every writer has added his flavor to this story

In was in BB mode about ur discussion but never thought outcome will be so good

Hats off to all of you
Its just perfect this is how serial should have ended

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