NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
It was the fantastic update
Loved it from start to end
Loved j and drunk nisha 🤣🤣
But u didn't pm me na 😭
Continue soon 😊
Posted: 10 years ago
nightclub party...
nibir dance..
jealous nishu...
drunk nishu...
caring kabir...
cheek kissiii... :* :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update 👏 ... loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry 4 Late reply😆 have read n like ur stry earlier😉 (patha nahi aur kitne dinom tak mujhe apni comment SORRY se start karna padega????😡 😆🤣)

Suprb update Shibu👏 n pls PM me if u update..😳

Nishu ko kaise manthe hai Kabir achi tarah se jaantha hai dekho toh "Boring" kya bol diya Nisha toh seedha line pe aa gayi n club aane ke liye mann bhi gayi.. 😲
Wah Kabirey.. i m impressed again😳🤣

Kabir & Nisha Ka Dance Awieee

Drunk Nishu, J Nishu n Naughty Nishu (30 sec chup rahi bas😆🤣 finger on lips karke🤣)
N the CHEECK KISS☺️☺️☺️ K was Dumbstruck n We r Awestrucked..!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣
(All thanks to RIYA 😆🤣🤣 jiski wajah se humein J Nishu mili hai 🤣🤣)

Im waiting 4 the 6th day Hw Wl Nishu Wake Up😲 N Hw Wl Kabir will face Nishu 😳😆q ki Nisha ko nahi patha na Kiss ke baare mein😆 aur Kabir apne muh se toh nahi bolega nah 😉usse khud ki jaan jo pyaari hai 🤣🤣🤣)

Awesome update Do write more🤗q ki DMM ☺️🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shibu liked the drunk and j nishu
But kabir also has to get j nw 😉
Edited by picadally - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing Shibu. ... . .Just amazing loved it ...And thanks for pm . .
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey NiBirains, I am back with Day 6. Hope it is good.

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Day 6

Kabir woke up and saw that Nisha was still sleeping. He made coffee for himself and waited for Nisha to get up. He had taken the last sip when he heard a moan coming from the bed. Nisha opened her eyes. She felt as if someone had dropped 1000 bricks on her head. Her head felt very heavy. She just wanted to sleep, but she decided to wake up. Her eyes were half closed when she saw a figure infront of her eyes. She opened her eyes and saw that it was Kabir.

Nisha- (clutching her head) Kabir? Hum yahaan? Hum toh club mein the naa? Aah... My head... it's hurting...

Kabir- 5 vodka shots peene ke baad what do you expect?

Nisha-5 vodka shots? What nonsense? I don't drink.

Kabir- Par Kal Nisha Gangwal Sharaabi ban gayi thi...

Nisha- (shocked)Kya? (trying to remember)Mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi aa raha? Kabir, Maine tumhe kal kuch aisa-waisa toh nahi kaha naa?

Kabir- (now in a mood to tease her) (Full on serious mode) Tumne, kal (looking down) Woh tumne... I mean... You and me... humne... We...

Nisha was getting impatient and tensed. Nisha pulled him closer to her holding his collar and shouted

Nisha- KABIR, TELL ME THE TRUTH, WHAT THE HELL DID WE DO LAST NIGHT? ANSWER ME!!!

Kabir realized that if he started teasing her, then she'll surely kill him.

Kabir(nonstop)- Tumne Riya ko mere saath flirt karte dekha aur tumhe laga ki main uske saath flirt kar raha hoon... tum kehne lagi ki main uske saath itna close tha jitna ek magnet ke saath iron rod hota hai... Tum baar-baar mujhe flirt- flirt keh rahi thi... Maine tumse kahan ki woh mere saath flirt kar rahi thi... Aur...

Nisha- Aur?

Kabir- Tum jealous thi kyunki Riya mere bahut paas aayi thi... Jab maine tumse poocha kyun toh tumne kahan ki Because you like me (he went a little more closer to her) Kya tum mujhe like karti ho Nisha?

Nisha was shocked at his closeness. Both were lost in each other's eyes. Kabir's last question was replaying in Nisha's mind... "Kya tum mujhe like karti ho Nisha?" She came out of the trance and moved away from Kabir and said,

Nisha- What rubbish? Main kisiko like-wike nahi karti...

Kabir was disappointed listening to her answer.

Kabir- Toh, tumne mujhe kiss kyun kiya?

Nisha- KYA???

Kabir- yes, you kissed me...

Nisha- Kya? I mean how?

Kabir- Aise... (he pouted and leaned forward. But Nisha pushed him)

Nisha- Tum jhoot bol rahe ho...

Kabir- Manana hai toh maano, warna mat maano...Sweetheart... (he winked)

Nisha-(damn hesitant) l...i...ps... pe?

Kabir- Agar main haan kahunga toh...

Nisha- I'll curse myself to my death...

Kabir- Well no, you kissed me on my cheek...

Nisha sighed in relief...

Kabir- Main tumhare liye lemonade banata hoon, tab tak tum fresh ho jaao...

After sometime Nisha joined him at the breakfast table and Kabir gave her the lemonade. Both were feeling awkward about the last night and morning incident. He went to freshen up. Mrs. Saxena entered the house.

Mrs. Saxena- Good morning.

Nisha- Good morning...

Mrs. Saxena- Woh actually, main puchne aayi thi ki are you ok? I mean the hangover?

Nisha- I am good... Kabir ne lemon juice banaya tha... That helped...

Mrs. Saxena- Hmm.. bahut pyaar karta hai woh tumse...

Nisha was speechless. She couldn't believe what Mrs. Saxena said.

Mrs. Saxena- Aaj office jaaogi?

Nisha- Haan, bahut kaam hai... So I can't skip office... Waise thank you for caring Mrs. Saxena...

Mrs. Saxena smiled and went downstairs. Kabir entered the room.

Nisha- Kabir, yaar mujhe bahut guilty feel ho raha hai, main unhe dhokha de rahi hoon, jo meri itni care karti hai...

Kabir-(holding her shoulders) Nisha, I promised you naa, ki ek mahine baad main khud unhe sab kuch sach-sach bata dunga... please yaar, don't feel guilty... ok?

Nisha nodded. Both left for the studio.

*VSR Studios*

The shoots were just over. Nisha was going to the canteen, but stopped near the rehearsal hall. She saw Riya and Kabir. Kabir was choreographing a dance sequence and Riya was assisting him. But she was trying to flirt with him. Nisha's blood boiled. She angrily called out to Kabir. Kabir looked at her.

Nisha- Ek minute idhar aa, tujse baat karni hai..

Riya rolled her eyes as Kabir walked towards her.

Kabir- Kya hua?

Nisha- (searching for words) Woh actually... Main... woh... (she found an excuse) Thanks bolna chahti thi, kal ke liye...

Kabir- Drama mat kar Nisha... We are a couple, tera dhyaan rakhna mera farz hai... (he hugged her and whispered in her ear) I mean we are friends, so I took care of you... Riya thi naa... isiliye... (he broke the hug and smiled at her. She smiled back and left from there)

She was just remembering the last night's events as she walked in the corridor. Their dance, the drinks, him carrying her... It was all new for her. She never had experienced such a thing before. She reached the caf and ordered herself a cold coffee.

She was sipping the coffee but her mind was just lost in Kabir's memories. She heard someone call out her name and came out of the trance. It was Saurav.

Saurav- Kya hua? Kya soch rahi hai?

Nisha- Kuch nahi...

Saurav- Jhoot mat bol, bata kya hua?

Nisha- (hesitant)Woh main... umm...

Saurav- Accha chod, (Nisha sighed with relief. She opened the novel and started reading it) yeh bata, Laxmi chachi se baat ki?

Nisha- (absent mindedly) Haan. Nani ka fever kam hua hai

Saurav- Ramesh Uncle ke singing classes kab start ho rahe hai?

Nisha- After 2 days.

Saurav- Umesh ne Aman ke liye gift khareed liya?

Nisha- Nahi, aaj Umesh mall jaa raha hai...

Saurav-Jwala ke exam kaise the?

Nisha- Science chodke baaki sab papers acche the...

Saurav- Tu kya soch rahi thi?

Nisha- Kabir ke baare mein...

She looked up from the book with shocked expression. Saurav was smiling like anything.

Nisha-That's not fair... Tu humesha yeh trick use karta hai...

Saurav- Kabir ke baare mein kya soch rahi thi?

Nisha- Kuch nahi...

Saurav- accha thikh hai... Main Kabir ko bata kar aata hoon ki tu uske baare mein soch rahi thi... (he got up but Nisha held his hand and stopped him)

Nisha- Please usse mat bata... actually I was thinking ki... I...think I like him...

Saurav smiled.

Saurav- (teasingly) Like ya Love...

Nisha- (avoiding) Sirf like, that's it...

Saurav- Haan toh, usmein kaun si badi baat hai... Everyone likes him including Riya... (he smirked and left from there)

Nisha was annoyed at the mention of Riya. She got a call from Kabir.

Kabir- Hello Nisha?

Nisha- Haan Kabir, bol, kya hua?

Kabir- Main aaj ghar par nahi aa raha hoon... My best friend is come from Australia, isiliye... Tujhe koi problem hai kya?

Nisha- Nahi toh, koi problem nahi hai...

Kabir hanged the call and Nisha unknowingly said, "I'll miss you..." She then realized what she said and face palmed.

She went home at 10, had dinner and went to sleep. But sleep was far away. She stared at the bed's empty side. She remembered how they had argued about the bed. She firmly closed her eyes.

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That's the end of this day. Do like and comment.

Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sonal and you.. Both of you made this shareef bachi a stalker 🤣
I keep stalking your threads for update 🤣
That teasing scene reminded me of DDLJ ❤️
Kabir ne sach kaha magar 😆
Sweetheart ☺️
L..i..p..s.. Pe ☺️
Nisha is J of Riya 🤣
"Drama mat kar Nisha.. Hum dono couple hai tera dhyaan rakhna mera farz hai " 👏
Saurav is just awesome yaar 😆
Like ya Love 😉
"I'll miss you " .. Awww
Update soon Shibu ..
Btw why do I smell some mischief .. Like a J Kabira on its way ? 😉
See I gave such a long comment 🤣 😎
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres 😉
me second😆

My most fav part till nw👏☺️ U knw Y?? 😉
Bcz Atleast kisi ne toh realise kiya dat pyaar ho gaya hai dusare se..
Atleast Nisha ko hi sahi Realisation toh huaNw Its time 4 Kabir's Realisation😉
DAKKANS 🤣🤣🤣 kabhi nahi sudharenge...😡🤣🤣

Sorry Shibu I had Copy Pasted a Large Para frm ur Stry bcz I cant chose a single bit bcz Each line was Bang On yaar👍🏼👏👏👏 Loved it yaar.. ☺️Remind me of Srk-Kajol Scene frm DDLJ

Nisha- (clutching her head) Kabir? Hum yahaan? Hum toh club mein the naa? Aah... My head... it's hurting...

Kabir- 5 vodka shots peene ke baad what do you expect?

Nisha-5 vodka shots? What nonsense? I don't drink.

Kabir- Par Kal Nisha Gangwal Sharaabi ban gayi thi...

Nisha- (shocked)Kya? (trying to remember)Mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi aa raha? Kabir, Maine tumhe kal kuch aisa-waisa toh nahi kaha naa?

Kabir- (now in a mood to tease her) (Full on serious mode) Tumne, kal (looking down) Woh tumne... I mean... You and me... humne... We...

Nisha was getting impatient and tensed. Nisha pulled him closer to her holding his collar and shouted

Nisha- KABIR, TELL ME THE TRUTH, WHAT THE HELL DID WE DO LAST NIGHT? ANSWER ME!!!

Kabir realized that if he started teasing her, then she'll surely kill him.

Kabir(nonstop)- Tumne Riya ko mere saath flirt karte dekha aur tumhe laga ki main uske saath flirt kar raha hoon... tum kehne lagi ki main uske saath itna close tha jitna ek magnet ke saath iron rod hota hai... Tum baar-baar mujhe flirt- flirt keh rahi thi... Maine tumse kahan ki woh mere saath flirt kar rahi thi... Aur...

Nisha- Aur?

Kabir- Tum jealous thi kyunki Riya mere bahut paas aayi thi... Jab maine tumse poocha kyun toh tumne kahan ki Because you like me (he went a little more closer to her) Kya tum mujhe like karti ho Nisha?

Nisha was shocked at his closeness. Both were lost in each other's eyes. Kabir's last question was replaying in Nisha's mind... "Kya tum mujhe like karti ho Nisha?" She came out of the trance and moved away from Kabir and said,

Nisha- What rubbish? Main kisiko like-wike nahi karti...

Kabir was disappointed listening to her answer.

Kabir- Toh, tumne mujhe kiss kyun kiya?

Nisha- KYA???

Kabir- yes, you kissed me...

Nisha- Kya? I mean how?

Kabir- Aise... (he pouted and leaned forward. But Nisha pushed him)

Nisha- Tum jhoot bol rahe ho...

Kabir- Manana hai toh maano, warna mat maano...Sweetheart... (he winked)

Nisha-(damn hesitant) l...i...ps... pe?

Kabir- Agar main haan kahunga toh...

Nisha- I'll curse myself to my death...

Kabir- Well no, you kissed me on my cheek...

Nisha sighed in relief...


Loved the way Saurav made Nisha realise the truth...👏
I m Loving the J nishu😆🤣

But sleep was far away. She stared at the bed's empty side. She remembered how they had argued about the bed. She firmly closed her eyes.

Awieee A Day without Kabir is very much affecting Nishu..😭 Hw She wl survive without him after 1 Month?? 😲

Super Awesome Update..👏👏👏 Thnz 4 d PM dr😳
Do write more..🤗Q ki DMM☺️😆🤣



Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago



so cute update😳
j nisha is so awesome
mrs.saxena is so cute😆

i have always loved saurav and u made me love him more this trick always work 😃
Edited by maniwood - 10 years ago

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