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Posted: 10 years ago
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I dont want this to be the ending. But yes some scene of such sort should be shown before the show ends.
Btw here, VJ is shown as a sweet saas who now has no qualms against Nisha, Ramy or any of the Gangwals.

Location: KNH bedroom
Dolly - Are Nishu! You knows main shopping queen hoon, but pata nahi kyu aaj apne baby ke clothes select karte waqt mujhe bahut confusion ho raha hai yaar.
(Yes, Dolly has a son now. And it is his naming ceremony) 😆

Nisha - Tabhi toh maine aapko yaha bula liya Dolly di! Hum baby ko yahi se kapde pehna ke le jaenge. Toh mujhe aisa lagta hai ki baby ko white kapde pehnane chahiye. Kitna classy lagega!!
(Kabir enters..)

Kabir - Chhee! White!! Kya Nisha, use bhi apni tarah rukha sukha banana hai. Dolly, tu iski baat bilkul mat sun. Ek kaam kar, Baby ko blue pehna.

Nisha - Tu pagal hai kya!! White kitna achha hai. Pure, calm, classic...

Kabir - Aur boring!! Baby ko blue pehenna chahiye taki mere tarah cool, handsome aur dashing lage.

Nisha - Par white...

Dolly - Nishu...tere first birthday pe bhi lakshmi chachi ne tujhe white pehnaya tha na..!

Kabir - Mujhe to laga isko black pehnaya hoga. Gundi kahiki!!
(Dolly gigggles. Nisha angry. She takes a pillow and throws at Kabir. They both start fighting. Nisha says white, Kabir says Blue. Dolly tries to stop them. And then VJ enters...)

VJ - Ye kya ho raha hai, kitna shor macha rahe ho.

Nisha - White achha rahega na..

Kabir - Mom, blue better hai!..

Nisha - Nahi...white!

VJ - Offoh!! Dolly, tum batao ye kya chal raha hai.
(Dolly tells her everything.)

VJ - Kya tum bhi! Kabir, pehnane do na Nisha ko. Tumhare choice ke kapde baby kabhi aur pehen lega.

Kabir - Kya Mom, aap hamesha Nisha ki side kyu lete ho?

Nisha - Kyuki ma teri tarah bewakoof nahi hai.

Kabir - Tu kitni K.. hai be!!

Nisha - Aur tu kitna J..!!

VJ - Bas karo tum dono. Is problem ka bhi solution hai hamare paas. Yaha aao Dolly.
(She whispers something into Dolly's ears. Nibir confused)

Dolly - OK. Toh ab baby ko kapde main pehnaungi.

Nisha - But Doly di...
(Dolly goes away with the baby and returns back in some time. Nisha, Kabir, and VJ look at the baby and they all have a smile on their face.)

Dolly - Lo, Baby taiyyar ho gaya! Nishu ke pasand ka white T-shirt aur mittens. Kabir ke pasand ke blue shorts, cap aur shoes..!! Hows he looking??!!

Nibir - So cute!!
(Nibir hug the baby and VJ smiles.)

VJ - Aur tum log itni se baat ke lie jhagad rahe the. Waise ek baat batao. Jab tumhara baby hoga tab bhi tum uske kapdo ko lekar aise hi ladoge.?
(Nisha blushes slightly and looks down. Kabir spontaneously speaks up.)

Kabir - Are mom, Hum log do-do babies paida karenge. Ek iske pasand ke kapde pehnega aur doosra meri...

Nisha - Kabir..!!

(Both VJ and Dolly look at them..first surprised and then burst into laughter. Kabir realises and starts smiling. Nisha blushes more.)

VJ(smiling) - Pagal ho tum dono!

Nibir stare at each other lovingly and smile. ☺️

Edited by 7931 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: 7931

I dont want this to be the ending. But yes some scene of such sort should be shown before the show ends.

Btw here, VJ is shown as a sweet saas who now has no qualms against Nisha, Ramy or any of the Gangwals.

Location: KNH bedroom
Dolly - Are Nishu! You knows main shopping queen hoon, but pata nahi kyu aaj apne baby ke clothes select karte waqt mujhe bahut confusion ho raha hai yaar.
(Yes, Dolly has a son now. And it is his naming ceremony) 😆

Nisha - Tabhi toh maine aapko yaha bula liya Dolly di! Hum baby ko yahi se kapde pehna ke le jaenge. Toh mujhe aisa lagta hai ki baby ko white kapde pehnane chahiye. Kitna classy lagega!!
(Kabir enters..)

Kabir - Chhee! White!! Kya Nisha, use bhi apni tarah rukha sukha banana hai. Dolly, tu iski baat bilkul mat sun. Ek kaam kar, Baby ko blue pehna.

Nisha - Tu pagal hai kya!! White kitna achha hai. Pure, calm, classic...

Kabir - Aur boring!! Baby ko blue pehenna chahiye taki mere tarah cool, handsome aur dashing lage.

Nisha - Par white...

Dolly - Nishu...tere first birthday pe bhi lakshmi chachi ne tujhe white pehnaya tha!

Kabir - Mujhe to laga isko black pehnaya hoga. Gundi kahiki!!
(Dolly gigggles. Nisha angry. She takes a pillow and throws at Kabir. They both start fighting. Nisha says white, Kabir says Blue. Dolly tries to stop them. And then VJ enters...)

VJ - Ye kya ho raha hai, kitna shor macha rahe ho.

Nisha - White achha rahega na..

Kabir - Mom, blue better hai!..

Nisha - Nahi...white!

VJ - Offoh!! Dolly, tum batao ye kya chal raha hai.
(Dolly tells her everything.)

VJ - Kya tum bhi! Kabir, pehnane do na Nisha ko. Tumhare choice ke kapde baby kabhi aur pehen lega.

Kabir - Kya Mom, aap hamesha Nisha ki side kyu lete ho?

Nisha - Kyuki ma teri tarah bewakoof nahi hai.

Kabir - Tu kitni K.. hai be!!

Nisha - Aur tu kitna J..!!

VJ - Bas karo tum dono. Is problem ka bhi solution hai hamare paas. Yaha aao Dolly.
(She whispers something into Dolly's ears. Nibir confused)

Dolly - OK. Toh ab baby ko kapde main pehnaungi.

Nisha - But Doly di...
(Dolly goes away with the baby and returns back in some time. Nisha, Kabir, and VJ look at the baby and they all have a smile on their face.)

Dolly - Lo, Baby taiyyar ho gaya! Nishu ke pasand ka white T-shirt aur mittens. Kabir ke pasand ke blue shorts, cap aur shoes..!! Hows he looking??!!

Nibir - So cute!!
(Nibir hug the baby and VJ smiles.)

VJ - Aur tum log itni se baat ke lie jhagad rahe the. Waise ek baat batao. Jab tumhara baby hoga tab bhi tum uske kapdo ko lekar aise hi ladoge.?
(Nisha blushes slightly and looks down. Kabir spontaneously speaks up.)

Kabir - Are mom, Hum log do-do babies paida karenge. Ek iske pasand ke kapde pehnega aur doosra meri...

Nisha - Kabir..!!

(Both VJ and Dolly look at them..first surprised and then burst into laughter. Kabir realises and starts smiling. Nisha blushes more.)

VJ(smiling) - Pagal ho tum dono!

Nibir stare at each other lovingly and smile. ☺️


Awww...😳 this is so very awesome👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...


Awww...😳 this is so very awesome👏


Thanks!!! 😳
Wriiten something for the first time. Glad you liked it. 😊
Edited by 7931 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: braich_gal

This is not an OS or anything...but I want to see a scene like this or something similar. Note: am not sure how the legal stuff on divorce works so am just making it up.

Location: Gangwal House
A lawyer comes to the house and rings the doorbell. Jwala answers the door and the lawyer tells that he is there to meet Dolly Gangwal. Jwala lets him in and calls Dolly. Dolly greets the lawyer and asks him if the papers are ready. He says yes and gives some papers to Dolly who reads it, then signs the papers. This is witness by the family & Leela who came to the drawing room when they heard a lawyer came to see Dolly. Viren asks Dolly what is going on. She introduces her lawyer and explains that she is getting a divorce from Summit and have just signed the papers. The lawyer says that he will send the summons/papers to Summit /Summit's lawyer for his signature as well and then complete all whatever procedures required. V2 and Leela gets shock. Rupan tries to butt in with some nonsense...trying to poke fire...but Dolly stops her...and says she has made her decision and no one...not even V2 can change her decision. Viren starts talking about samajh again and Dolly says she doesn't give a damn about this samajh Viren is talking about as she is only thinking of her child...oh well...something along those lines...where she defends her decision and shows that it is the right thing to do.

Cousins & RL are proud of Dolly. Dada ji and dadi supports Dolly's decision. Mohan is Mohan. Leela starts to do her drama nonsense and Dolly tells her to pack her things...the door is there and leave this instant. Leela protest but in the meantime, cousins run to Leela's room and chucks her things into a bag and brings bag out and gives it to her. Dadaji tells her...his granddaughter has made a decision which he fully support..tells Leela to leave...and never darken their door again...he then tells the lawyer to make sure Summit signs the divorce papers and warns that these ma-beta are very chalakis...Dolly also asks the lawyer to prepare custody papers for her baby as she does not want any chance of Summit getting hold of the baby. Lawyer says don't worry...he will handle everything and leaves.


ranju yaar superb.. I want dolly to give divorce to that good for nothing sumit... Hope we get a scene like that...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nhk2001

Well tbh they are many loose ends with the cousins and the elders. But I wanted to give it a try.

Venue: The Royal Palace Hotel

The GF just finished celebrating their 50 years being in business celebration with their friends, family, clients and business partners. During the dinner, everybody asked Nemichand Gangwal to give a speech:
Firstly, I thank The Lord for showering his blessings upon me and my family. If it wasn't for my wife supporting and encouraging me in my dreams I would not be here. (Dadiji smiled sweetly.). It's important to have dreams (he was looking directly at ramesh) and more important to have people support you (there was a tear rolling down Ramesh's eyes, as he knew his dad had finally understood him) As for my kids, I love each and everyone of you. You have been the pillars upon which I stand (everyone was smiling.) My biggest supporters, however, are my grand kids. What would I be without them? (All the cousins routed loudly for Singham, as any young group of kids would.) He also thanked his clients and business partners for the many years of company and support. At the end of the celebration, dadaji and Dadiji and the elders were tired and decided to go home.

The cousins however decided to stay around a bit for some coffee while the crew cleaned up.
They were all discussing their futures. Umesh and Aman were exited about their own new restaurant called "Aroma". Infact, this was their first catered event, and Singham was proud that they had done such a fab job. They got many orders after this.
Kirti was also proud. She had dressed everybody for the event. She also received many compliments. But she was a little sad. Fashion world belonged in Dehli and she was going to move there. But all the cousins assured her Delhi isn't too far and they would come to her to raid her closets!!! She felt better after this.
Dolly was now in the third month of her pregnancy. She had officially divorced from Sumit who was still in jail. Definitely, Saurav had feelings for her and slowly dolly was developing feelings for him. Their company was doing well and Kirti was to market their products in the Delhi too.
Sukku decided to shift to Mumbai as he wanted to try being in Bollywood. Everybody was like you better become a star fast as we want to meet all the Bollywood stars!!! They hugged him hard. Plus, we won't pay to get to see your movies...you better send us free tickets.
Jwala decided she wanted to become a lawyer and Bunty wanted to become the next Tendulkar and everybody laughed.
Next, they asked Nisha what were her plans next...Nisha...Nisha everybody was calling. Yeh larkhi kaha gayi??? And when they turned their heads towards the dance floor, there they saw them, Kabir and Nisha. They were in each other's arms dazing into each other's eyes, dancing slowly and the music had stopped so long ago. All the cousins were smiling at them. Dolly said, "nisha ka sirf ekhi plan hai, to be Mrs. Nisha Gangwal Kabir Kumar." All the cousins stared to laugh. "Chalo guys, let's leave these two love birds alone" Umesh said shyly.
N-"I hate you, Kabir. How did it occur to you to leave me??? I hate you so much and why did you come back."
K-"bb told me how much you love me and he didn't want to get in the way. He realized that we both love each other and i love him for that. He explained that to mom too. After all (he swung nisha around and was behind her now) he is my big bro!"
N-"aacha, so now all the musunderstanding is cleared and now you want to be with me. Well, guess what I don't. (And she left his grip eventhough she didn't want to)."
K-(held unto her arm) "please don't leave me...I said I was sorry. What can I say I am a real duffer, idiot, dummy..."
N-"You forgot gadha."
K-"Jitna gaalis dehena hai dedo, but don't leave me...I love you..always and forever"
N-(now smiling because she couldn't keep her feelings from him). I never thought I would be in love with a gadha, but kya karu, dil ko kaise samjayun"
K-(now he pulled her close to him with their forheads touching) I will never ever leave you.
N-(blushing and moving closer to him) I know.
And they continued their silent, slow dance under the full moon.

Sorry, it got long. I would have written more. But got emotional...
😭 I'll miss this show so much!!!

I loved dadaji's speech yaar it was super awesome... And uman restaurant, kirti's designing dream, sukku's Bollywood dream, Dolly's business and jwala's layer dream is superb...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@7931 Very nicely written. Simple and a happy scene...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 7931

I dont want this to be the ending. But yes some scene of such sort should be shown before the show ends.

Btw here, VJ is shown as a sweet saas who now has no qualms against Nisha, Ramy or any of the Gangwals.

Location: KNH bedroom
Dolly - Are Nishu! You knows main shopping queen hoon, but pata nahi kyu aaj apne baby ke clothes select karte waqt mujhe bahut confusion ho raha hai yaar.
(Yes, Dolly has a son now. And it is his naming ceremony) 😆

Nisha - Tabhi toh maine aapko yaha bula liya Dolly di! Hum baby ko yahi se kapde pehna ke le jaenge. Toh mujhe aisa lagta hai ki baby ko white kapde pehnane chahiye. Kitna classy lagega!!
(Kabir enters..)

Kabir - Chhee! White!! Kya Nisha, use bhi apni tarah rukha sukha banana hai. Dolly, tu iski baat bilkul mat sun. Ek kaam kar, Baby ko blue pehna.

Nisha - Tu pagal hai kya!! White kitna achha hai. Pure, calm, classic...

Kabir - Aur boring!! Baby ko blue pehenna chahiye taki mere tarah cool, handsome aur dashing lage.

Nisha - Par white...

Dolly - Nishu...tere first birthday pe bhi lakshmi chachi ne tujhe white pehnaya tha!

Kabir - Mujhe to laga isko black pehnaya hoga. Gundi kahiki!!
(Dolly gigggles. Nisha angry. She takes a pillow and throws at Kabir. They both start fighting. Nisha says white, Kabir says Blue. Dolly tries to stop them. And then VJ enters...)

VJ - Ye kya ho raha hai, kitna shor macha rahe ho.

Nisha - White achha rahega na..

Kabir - Mom, blue better hai!..

Nisha - Nahi...white!

VJ - Offoh!! Dolly, tum batao ye kya chal raha hai.
(Dolly tells her everything.)

VJ - Kya tum bhi! Kabir, pehnane do na Nisha ko. Tumhare choice ke kapde baby kabhi aur pehen lega.

Kabir - Kya Mom, aap hamesha Nisha ki side kyu lete ho?

Nisha - Kyuki ma teri tarah bewakoof nahi hai.

Kabir - Tu kitni K.. hai be!!

Nisha - Aur tu kitna J..!!

VJ - Bas karo tum dono. Is problem ka bhi solution hai hamare paas. Yaha aao Dolly.
(She whispers something into Dolly's ears. Nibir confused)

Dolly - OK. Toh ab baby ko kapde main pehnaungi.

Nisha - But Doly di...
(Dolly goes away with the baby and returns back in some time. Nisha, Kabir, and VJ look at the baby and they all have a smile on their face.)

Dolly - Lo, Baby taiyyar ho gaya! Nishu ke pasand ka white T-shirt aur mittens. Kabir ke pasand ke blue shorts, cap aur shoes..!! Hows he looking??!!

Nibir - So cute!!
(Nibir hug the baby and VJ smiles.)

VJ - Aur tum log itni se baat ke lie jhagad rahe the. Waise ek baat batao. Jab tumhara baby hoga tab bhi tum uske kapdo ko lekar aise hi ladoge.?
(Nisha blushes slightly and looks down. Kabir spontaneously speaks up.)

Kabir - Are mom, Hum log do-do babies paida karenge. Ek iske pasand ke kapde pehnega aur doosra meri...

Nisha - Kabir..!!

(Both VJ and Dolly look at them..first surprised and then burst into laughter. Kabir realises and starts smiling. Nisha blushes more.)

VJ(smiling) - Pagal ho tum dono!

Nibir stare at each other lovingly and smile. ☺️

I can so see that happening... Superb... Sweet vj is nice to see... Superb..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks. 😊
Yes. I wish she wasnt shown as a villain. Maybe we cud have seen a new special saas-bahu bond between VaNi.
Edited by 7931 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks so much...will miss everybody on the forum...I joined recently but all your posts gave me such a hard laugh...thanks guys 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Teogapi

I loved dadaji's speech yaar it was super awesome... And uman restaurant, kirti's designing dream, sukku's Bollywood dream, Dolly's business and jwala's layer dream is superb...



Thx yaar...wanted to say some of your motd posts were so funny, tears were coming out of my eyes..lol...

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