Nibir ff- Fulfilling Our Dreams Together With Love (part15 on page 48) - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Update was very nice ... loved it ... thanks for the pm ..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amina...

Update was very nice ... loved it ... thanks for the pm ..😊

thnxx...for such a sweet comment...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesm update sarthak 😉
kabir ne to apni band bajwane ki puri taiyaari krli
sukku played song bhaiya mere rakhi k bandhan ko nibhana was mindblowing
shanaya kiss kabir in cheeks haha
nishu was fuming wid anger
but kabira ne prank kr k use mna hi lia
dey kissed infront of every one
A grade wala dialog was superb yr...
saurav ne mast bola nibir ko
tum dono khi bhi shuru ho jate ho 😆
but last part tumne suspense me chhod dia
kahin singham ne to nhi dekh lia sabko?????
update nxt part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nibir ka confffession hot tha .buntu ki ua film ha hs . Achha updye aur ab bjpot. Ab jab nibir saath main hai to no worries.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

I am also proud to be a ASR fan...but yaar unrest soon I am waiting for ur chotu sa analysis make it extra small this time...



@Bold I was ROfl ng🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres ed on pg 21😆🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

res😆
Thanks for 2 PMs Sarthak🤣🤣🤣
UNRES😆

Sarthak👍🏼 I must say Best Update of this Story till date..👏

Loved it...!!!!!!!😆🤣 U knw I was ROFL ng & ROFL ng & ROFL ng🤣

Bahut se chote chote dialogues se Tumne itna hasaya hai ki main kya batavu????🤣

Lemme Quote one by one...🤣

Sukku(in his mind)- yaar iss kabir ne toh teen mai se ek bhi mere liye nahi chodi...aaj toh nishu iski pitayi karegi tabhi sudherga...

@Bold Yeh Dekho... Sukku ko apni jiju ki nahi apni fikar hai...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Passing the Parcel Game was a gud move Sarthak 👏👏👏

Bechara Kabira... 😆Kitni Umeed se Nishu ke saath dance karna chahtha tha😉
🤣🤣🤣 par Nishu ne uski iss umeed par Cutting Chai(Bcz Saru & ASR loves Cutting Chai☺️)pherr dia...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Nishu Kitni J hai yaar...😲😲😲
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Khud toh agyi nahi Kabir ke saath dance karne Kirti ko bhi rokh dia...😆🤣🤣🤣

@Blue Her dialogue to Kirti reflects Her J ness...!!!!!😆😆😆
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Nisha- kabir ko toh chod de kirti..

Aur Yeh Dekho Shanaya ne Chance maar li...😆😆😆🤣🤣🤣🤣 & The song played by Sukku... "Bhaiyya mere"😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 PERFECT👏👏👏

Shanaya ne Kabir ko Kiss Kiyaaa😡 Uski Itni Himmath??😡
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Well...😉 Kabir's Monologue aftr The Kiss Just Cracked Me...😆
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@Blue Most Hilariouss Dialogue👏
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Kabir ( monologue - kyon itna risk liya kabire..tune socha tha nisha ko toda sa jalayega...
Par yeh shanya toh pura Lanka dahan Kar ke chali gayi...)

Lanka Dahan...
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@Blue Again Kabir's this Dialogue...😆 was also Funny😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
K - kya yaar guys I swear yeh kiss waali baat mai meri koi galti nahi thi...

Koi galathi nahi hai...😆
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Acha Shanaya ko bulaya kisne?? Tumne... Shanaya ko Apni wifey ko Jalane ko Kisne Bola??? Tumne... Aur ab jab Yeh sab hua toh teri koi galati hi nahi.. Wah Betaa Wahhh...😆😆😆 K kahika 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

@Blue Yahan kabir itna tensed hai Lekin Sukku hai usse bas apni hi fikar hai.. Dekho🤣🤣🤣
Sukku- abbey kabir 3 mai se ek toh meri liye chod deta...
Kya Saalesahab Mila hai Kabir ko..😆
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Kabir & Cousins Plan to make Nishu back was gud.. par itna bada jhoot..😡😆
🤣🤣 Bechari Nishu ki toh jaan hi niakl gayi thi...😳🤣🤣🤣

Saap ne kaattaaa😲😲😲
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@Pink Loved Kabira's Dialoguee... Awww... Best Dialogue of this update👏👏👏

Kabir itna K hai ki usne Time bhi bol dia apne Romantic Dialogue main... 😆😆😆 Saasom ke bina 2 min nahi reh saktha aur tu pur 9 minute se door hai...😆😆😆 Superb Sarthak👏👏👏This was the hightlight of Kabir's Dialogue.. Romantic.. yet K..😆
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Kabir - ssh and placed a finger on her lips...
Itna aasan nahi hai mujse picha chudana ...
I know nisha Maine galti ki hai...ek chota sa joke tha par mai...limits cross Kar gaya...par tuh mujhse naraz hokar aise dur mat jaya Kar kyon ki..tuh meri sanse hai nisha tuh hi meri zindagi hai...koi bhi insaan apne sansoon ke bina do minute bhi nahi reh sakta...aur tujhe mujhse dur gaye toh pure 9 minute ho gaye the...I love u..
I love u so much...u r my life nisha...


Yeh NiBir bhi nahh...!! Kina K hai...😆
🤣🤣🤣 Sabke saamne Kissy kar dia..😲 Kam se kam Bunty aur Jwalu ka toh soch lethe...😲 Shukhar hai Sukku ka...😆🤣🤣🤣 jisne unka eyes close kar dia..😆🤣🤣🤣

@Blue Sukku's Dialogue
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Sukku - taaki tum U/A category wale log yeh A certificate waali movie nahi dekh sako...
Kabir kitna caring hai.. Awww.. Apne haathom se Apni wifey ke liye Pulao banaya

@BlueNiBir Nok-Jhoks..😆
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Nisha - jiju ki chamchi kahi ki..
Kabir tuh sure hai naa mujhe hospital jaane ki jarurat nahi padegi isse khane ke baad..
All laughed..
Kabir - don't worry tere halwe se toh way better hoga...
Everybody laughed harder..

Phir se EYELOCK...!!!!!
Saurav was right "Yeh Donom kahi pe bhi shuru ho jaathe hai.." K kahikaaa...🤣🤣🤣🤣

Last part... Bhoot??😲😆 Suspense aa??😉😆
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Waiting...
Superb Superb Superb Update...👏
Thanks again for 2 PMs...😳
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Do write More👍🏼

PS:
Sarthak I hope Yeh Kuch Zyada Extra Short Comment ho gaya nah...😉😆
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thanks for extra short comment...😛😃..next part mai ASR ke elements honge⭐️ ...n ya I also love cutting chai
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Part 11
Everybody turned to saw the most frightening sight one can imagine... Some lady in the dark was coming towards them with her hair blowing in the air...they could not see her clearly...
Kabir-aaj toh mar gaye...yaar...
Nisha - arrey duffer bhoot voot kuch nahi hota...mai abhi dekh Kar aati hun kaun hai...
Kabir - nisha tujhe kuch ho gaya toh...
Jwala- nishu bro hame bhagna chahiye...
Nisha - relax...mai abhi aati hun..
Kabir - ruk mai abhi chalta hun...
They went near the lady...as all others watched in fear...
Kabir turned on the torch light..of his phone and the sight of that lady mad him half dead...
Kabir- ni ...nis...nisha bhaag...
Lady's face was pale yellow with blood dripping from her mouth she had sharp nails...and green eyes...
Nisha took kabirs hand and turned to run with all her might...but the lady laughed and used her sharp nails to attack...and made a deep cut on kabirs hand..
Kabir- aah...
Dolly- guys vaha kya ho raha hai..
Nisha- bhaago sab yaha se...hamari chinta mat karo ham theek hai..Aur aa rahe hai..
Saurabh - guys vo dono bhagte hue aa rahe hai...sab jaan bachao aur chalo yaha se...
They all rushed taking their hand bags...
Jwala was almost blank she didn't react just stood with her hand trembling with fear...kabir stretched his wounded hand and pulled her and ran...
Kabir- jwala kya calculate Kar rahi hai bhaag...
They all ran for about 200 metres and then his behind a large wall nibir and jwalu..also reached there...
Umesh- nishu tu theek hai naa...
Aman- ladoo kabir ke haat se tuh khoon nikal raha hai...
Nisha- Bunty mere hand bag se first aid box do ..
Nisha did kabirs dressing...
Kabir- guys ab yeh socho ham yaha se jaenge Kaise...
Kirti- par tum logo ne vaha andhere mai kya dekha aur kabir ko chot kaise lagi...
Nibir told them about the scene...everybody got scared..
Sukku- lag gayi bhai raat Kali ho gayi..
Kirti- how blah sukku..RAAt toh Kali hi hoti hai...
Umesh- tum dono chup karo aur yeh socho ham kya Kare...
Nisha - pata nahi kyon par mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki kuch to choot raha hai...
Kabir - waah yaha hamari jaan jaa rahi hai aur tujhe tere samaan ki padi hai...
Nisha- idiot mera MATLAB hai I still don't believe in bhoot..I think koi hamare sath jaan bhooj Kar Natak Kar raha hai...
Kabir- apne aankhon se bhoot dekhne ke baad bhi...waah jai ho devi maiya aapki...
Saurabh- guys I think hame police ko call karna chahiye...
Mai kuch madad karo...a voice said they turned to see the same lady and all shouted in fear ...
She came forward and stabbed kabirs leg with a knife...
Nisha -...kabir...but then a white smoke appeared and she couldn't see anything...
N- (crying) kabir tuh kaha hai mai tujhe much nahi hone dungi...
Smoke got disappeared.. After couple of minutes everybody had gone in random direction they saw kabir was lying...near the same wall deeply wounded... All rushed to him ...
Saurabh tried to call ambulance but shit mobile network problem..
Nisha shook kabir and hugged kabir...
Kabir- mai theek hun par..ham sab saath toh hena...
Nisha nodded..
Bunty- nishu di ab kya hoga...
Jwala was crying...
J- nishu bro network bhi nahi aur ab ham kya Kare..
Aman- nisha who sab chod aur kabir ke wound par davai laga de...
They saw a letter with something written in red...
Kirti read it.."Sab marenge..."
They all were terrified...
Sukku- guys galti meri hai yaha aana hi nahi chahiye tha ...mere friends me bola tha yaha ajeeb ajeeb awaaze aati hai...
Par mujhe laga aise bol rahe honge...
Umesh - jaane se par ab iss... sab se kya hoga...
Kabir- nisha vo dekh vaha thodi so light JAL rahi hai hame chalna chahiye..
Dolly- arrey yaar tum pagal toh nahi ho gaye...vo light toh fort se aa rahi...hai...
Saurabh- guys hamare pass option nahi hai...yaha khule mai ..kabir par do baar attack ho chuka hai...
All agreed and went inside the fort...
Nisha heard somebody talking and tried listening...to it...
She peeped through a small hole in wall and saw that same lady was talking..with a man...
Man- kamla un sabko dara Kar bhaga toh diya hai...naa...
Kamla- arrey ha ramu...ek chore ko chaku bhi maar diya taaki...koi risk na rahe...
Ramu-bewakoof Marne ki kya jarurat thi dara Kar bhaga deti par kahi unhone police ke samne muh khol diya toh...police chan been Karne aa sakti hai
Kamla- chinta mat karo police unhe pagal samjhegi aur agar ek baar check Karne bhi aaye toh bhi hum hamara drugs business chupa lenge...aur kisi ko kuch nahi pata chalega
Ramu- bawli ho gayi hai kya nahi hum risk nahi ke sakte..go yahi kahi chupe lenge unhe dhund ke marwa do.. Nisha was damn terrified she went to the group who were sitting in the corridor took them upstairs and told them everything..
Kabir- shit...an voh hamare piche pade hai...
Jwala hugged nisha out of fear...
Nisha- don't worry jwalu kuch nahi hoga..
Dolly- par tuh hame upar kyon layi hai nisha unhone dhund liya toh...
Saurabh- nahi who log sab jagah dhunde ge par fort ke andar nahi..
Sukku- exactly..
Kirti..- par ab kya Kare..
Umesh- inhone shayad mobile network bhi jam Kar rakha hai..
Kabir- par guys kuch toh plan sochna padega...
Nisha - mere pass ek plan hai...
To be cont'd...
Edited by Sarthak0302 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sarthak.. Yeh kya twist laye ho stroy main 😲
Superb yaar.. I got so scared.. Kabir ko chaku lag gaya 😭
Jwalu 😭
But yeh sab unka plan tha 😡
Abh unko bhugat na padega 😡
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Sarthak.. Yeh kya twist laye ho stroy main 😲

Superb yaar.. I got so scared.. Kabir ko chaku lag gaya 😭
Jwalu 😭
But yeh sab unka plan tha 😡
Abh unko bhugat na padega 😡

accha nahi laga kyaa

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