Nibir ff- Fulfilling Our Dreams Together With Love (part15 on page 48)

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Hi guys well I am a new member of the forum and here is my 1st OS
Index
Part1-7 page 1
Part8 page 7
Part9 page 11
Part 10- page 19
Part 11- page 23
Part 12- page 27
Part 13- page 32
Part 14- page 40
Part 15 - page 48




acc to me confession happens in the following way . Plz do comment.. Story is continued from the day kabir saw nisha and viraj together at restaurant and read DAT stupid tissue paper...
Well kabir saw nisha and viraj together at cafe n DAT stupid tissue paper also played its part n kabir was emotionally disturbed and thought DAT nisha luvs viraj and wud it be happy wid him..He went home sobbing and said to vj K - mom u were right nisha doesn't loves me.. I was a fool to come between her love ...vj- oh my son don't worry ur mom is with u n will always be...I knew it n so I had already applied for ur readmission in LSD plzz go dere for ur moms sake.. K thought for a while n left to fulfill his moms wish and left a letter for nisha stating
Nisha,
Sorry yal mai tere aur tere pyaar ke beech mai aaya..mai London jaa raha hu hamesha ke liye.. Tu hamesha khush rahe mai bas yahi chahta hu..
Tera kabir
Nd he left..after some time nisha too reached home and felt bad DAT kabir didn't came at cafe to meet her she asked vj
N- mom kabir kaha hai go aaya nhi...mai wait karti rahi..
Vj smirked and said - tum ab wait hi karti reh jaongi kabir London chala gaya hai hamesha ke liye...n she told her that it was all her plan to take revenge from GF ..nisha cudnt believe her ears she went inside her room crying ...and read the letter..she immediately rushed to her home and told everyone..the entire story ..and how she dearly loves kabir..ramesh blamed himself for all this and burst into tears ..meanwhile Aman called umesh who angrily rushed to viraj..and..
To be cont'd..

Part 2
Our umesh Bhaiya reached viraj home and grabbed his collar and held him responsible for nisha grief ..viraj at first didn't believed him but seeing his anger he agreed to come with him..
They reached KNH there they saw vj and leela celebrating...they listened to their talks and were hell shocked with vjs reality..
Viraj cudnt control himself ...and shouted - aapki himmat kaisi hui ms nisha ke sath aisa karne ki ..and as vj turned back viraj was left in shock to see his mom..the photograph of whom he used to see from his child hood .leela smirked and said aa gaye r.viraj Singh rathore ..hearing did vj was left into a state of hock...umesh looked angrily at leela..viraj cudnt say anything he just uttered maa..to which vj replied viraj beta with tears in her eyes...leela and umesh stared at them with their mouths open in astonishment ...viraj said toh iska MATLAB kabir mera bhai hai ??? Maa apne aisa kyu kiya pehle saalo pehle mujhe akela chod diya aur ab kabir ke sath dhoka mujhe vishwaas nahi ho raha ki aap aisa kar sakti hai..he demanded an answer but vj was speechless and so were umesh and leela..
Leela mentally laughed at vj...before vj cud say anything viraj said mai apne bhai ko vapas laonga.. And he rushed to gangwal house to apologise with umesh following him..leaving behind vj who was crying and cursing herself ..leela escaped from there sensing the situation...
As soon as nisha saw viraj she shouted him to leave..ramesh and sukku were about to beat him but when umesh interfered and told dem the entire story.. They could not believe what has happened to them...suddenly saurav came and said to nisha.- tune mujhe bataya nhi vo toh bhala ho dolly ka jisne mujhe call kar diya..pagal ab tak yaha baithi hai..London jaane waali flight 3 hrs late hai..abhi bhi 1.5 hr bacha hua hai chal kabir ko ROK le jaane se ..nisha was blank for a minute or so ...and than she rushed along with saurav..on her scooter towards airport...
Part 3
After nisha left..ramesh went towards viraj who was standing still with tears rolling down his cheeks..he was cursing his destiny that his younger brother was in front of his eyes from 3months and he just could not identify him..ramesh consoled him..viraj said to himself .. I wud make everything fine..I wud make kabir and nisha together who love each other a lot..he hugged ramesh and apologised to him and promised to make everything fine.. Saying this he rushed towards his car ..he had to stop kabir..Ramesh had still not inform viren mohan and dadaji who were at shop about the whole matter...he picked up his phone and.. Called them and informed dem about what was going on.. He told bunty and jwala to be strong and take care of ladies in the house especially laxmi..who was completly tensed ..he along with umesh and sukku left for the airport...
On the other hand saurav and nisha were on there way to airport ..but to make the matters worse. . a traffic jam awaited them..nisha panicked but saurav told her to be calm...and soon after 15 min jam cleared and they moved ahead ...
At airport kabir was sitting in the waiting hall and was..crying looking at the photo of nisha ..suddenly an familiar voice called him and he turned back...
Well finally..nisha and saurav reached the airport and as soon as they rushed inside they heard an announcement that flight from London to Jaipur had departed .. Nisha stopped and started crying saurav tried to console her but today the only person who cud stop her from crying was kabir...suddenly it started raining as if nature was also crying along with nisha...
Part 4
Suddenly nisha heard a voice - wifey apni aankhon ke behte paani se baadlon ko company de rahi hai kya?? Nisha turned back it was kabir..she just ran towards him and hugged him tightly saying I love you kabir he replied by kissing her on her lips and said I luv too nisha. This was the magical moment ithey were hugging each other in drizzling rain ..N- tuh kaha jaa raha thaa mujhe chodkar mein there bina nhi jee sakti.. K- am sorry yal kahi nhi jaonga tujhe chodkar I luv u very much...
After 2 minutes nisha broke the hug and asked him tujhe kisne Roka jaane se I mean mai aur saurabh toh flight departure hone se pehle nhi aa PAYE..saurav who was happily looking their confession also had the same question in his mind ..than before kabir cud say anything they heard ..a voice ..Maine nishu..
It was kirti who had returned from Delhi..(flashback - kabir turning back and he saw kirti who told him DAT nisha loves him and stopped him)
But tujhe yeah sab kaise pata chala nisha asked kirti..
Kirti- actually mai aaj vapas as rahi this par yeh baat surf jwalu ko pata thi as I wanted to surprise u all and when my flight landed I had the voice msg of jwalu and I came to know everything and rest u know...
To be contd
Part 5
Well hearing this nisha hugged kirti and thanked her...kabir again hugged nisha and said K- tujhe bata nhi sakta ki mai aaj kitna khush hu itne dino se tujh we kehne ki koshish kar raha the par keh nahi paa raha tha ...hearing this nisha broke the hug ..rain had stopped and slowly a beautiful rainbow stood high in the sky as if it was welcoming kabir ..Nisha kicks him and says - stupid ..duffer kahin ka pehle nhi bata Sakta the...K - yaar itni baar try kiya par hamesha kuch na kuch ho jata that... Saurav - accha nishu toh bhi toh keh nhi paa rahi thi..kabir Luks her angrily but Dan laughs and says mera logo par asar hi kuch aisa ho ta hai to bhi bhool gayi hogi ki tujhe mujhe kya kehna..nisha laughs and hugs him again...Ramesh reaches there and says ghar bhi chalonge ya yahi par gale hi lagte rahonge..??? Kabir and nisha broke the hug and gave a shy smile Ramesh - beta tune toh aaj hamari Jaan hi nikal di thi chal jo hua ache ke liye hua kam se kam tune apne pyaar ka ijhar toh kar diya..Umesh and sukku hugged them...and saurav called dolly to tell that now everything is fine..Ramesh than recollected...himself and tried to tell kabir the biggest truth of his life..Ramesh - beta tere liye ek aur khushkhabri hain tumhare bhai ka pata lag gaya hai to..Kabir - kya MATLAB mera bhai jinda hai kaun hai vo papa kaha hai vo ???he said in excitement ...ramesh tried to tell the truth but kabir was getting impatient and said papa aap bata kyun nhi rage main hai mere bhai...Hum hai. hearing virajs voice kabir turned back in shock...
To be contd
Part 6
Kabir saw viraj..but he couldn't believe his ears ..he turned towards ramesh in shock..who nodded his neck in affirmation.. Kabir was blank..he couldn't believe that life had played such a cruel joke on him...he.remembered each and every incident that had taken place between him and viraj in the past 3 months...
He couldn't move for a second or so.. Viraj - hamare gale nahi lagoge ??? Kabir didn't said anything just ran and hugged him and started crying like a child... But viraj consoled him and apologised to him V - maaf kar do hame hum tumhare aur ms nisha me beech mai aaye ...humne tumhe naa Jane kya kya kaha..aur toh aur tum par hath bhi uthaya ..K - nhi bade Bhaiya galti na apki hai na meri yeah to kismat ka ganda khel tha jisne me hum dono bhaiyon ko pass ho kar bhi bahut dur kar diya ..par ab sab theek ho jayega..itne salon ki kasar puri kar dunga...Ramesh and nisha smiled seeing brothers re union ..
K- ab Sab theek ho gaya ab ghar chalkar dadaji aur baaki Sab se..maafi mangte hai...
V - ek kaam abhi bhi bacha hai..
K - kya Bhaiya???
V - vo darasal...
Suddenly kabir saw someone standing at some distance behind viraj and seeing her he was both angry and shocked it was vj...
To be cont'd..


Part 7
K- mom aap yaha kya kar rahi hu.. Itna Sab kuch karne ke baad bhi aapko shanti nahi mili...
V- JoJo hame plzz maaf kar do..humne nisha aur tumhare beech misunderstanding create ki...
K- maaf kar do ...mom maaf galti ke kiya jata hai gunah ke liye nahi...mere bhai ko mere liye Mara hua bana diya ... Nisha ko mujhse dur Karne ki koshish ki...mere man me itni saari galatfehmiya bhar di aur aap chahti ho ki mai aapko maaf kar doo ...
N - kabir vo Teri maa hai..kyu tu aise baat kar RHA ???
K- nisha maa apne beto ki zindagi ke saath khela nahi karti...
Vj is crying...
Kabir holds nishas hand and moves towards main entrance of airport ignoring vj..nisha also reluctantly goes wid him...
Viraj comes to vj folds his hands urges her to go from their lives and angrily leaves... Everyone leaves from there except vj and ramesh ...vj folds her hands and pleads ramesh to forgive her...
R - Maine tumhe kitni bar samjhaya vasundhara ki purani baato ke karan apna aaj mat barbaad karo par tum ne ek nahi suni mere air tumhare beech ki galatfehmiyaan ka badla lene ke chakkar me tumne khud ka kitna nuksaan kar liya ...maine tumhe maaf kar diya par usse kya hota hai ...tumhe maafi toh keval kabir viraj aur nisha hi de sakte hai...and he leaves from there...
At gangwaal house everybody is excited...knowing kabir has returned ..lakshmi hugs nisha and blesses her ...kabir and viraj apologise to dadaji and others ...and kabir promises never to leave nisha...
All are happy ..for nibir and of course due to return of kirti..then suddenly dolly remembers something...
D- arrey kabir tumne nisha she apne pyaar ka izhaar Kaise kiya batao naa??
Kirti- how blah dolly di love confession se bhi badkar bahut kuch ho raha tha waha par...
Nibir suddenly remembered their kiss..
D- kya MATLAB hai tera kirti kya hua that waha par
Kirti- guess what ki. Before she could speak further nisha punched her angrily .
N- kirti chup ho jaa varna
Kirti ran and said - nishu mai toh Sab ko bataungi ki tune aur kabir ne sabke samne kiss kiya tha ...
Nisha felt shy ran from there... All were shocked..
D- how romantics kabir..??
Kabir who was drinking water spilt it and coughed...
K- mai abhi aata hu...
Jwala- jiju nimbu paani peene jaa rahe ho.naa.all laughed and kabir ran towards nishas room
To be continued...
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Thnxx.. For comments .. This was the 1st time I have written something ..I wud be editing the same post ..and continuing it at same page so make sure u all check it..n ya plz comment and share ur opinions
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Part 2 and Part 3 are updated on page 1 itself plz read..
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