Nibir SS -Your Guardian Angel-chap 2 ,page 13

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picadally

@picadally

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Wow it was kickass 🤣 biased towards kabir this time huh 😆

Ok nw u said u dont like romantic stuff i dont believe u at all after this.

Nw my fav part was hw nisha transforms frm a tomboy to a lady in love.

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RaindropsNRoses

@RaindropsNRoses

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Congo for the new story...
superb start...
interesting story...
loved each n every bit of it...👏
u penned it beautifully...
do continue soon...n pm me 😃

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shinelove

@shinelove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Sonuds intresting. .lovely start ..The last part is quit scary ..what is gone happen...continue soon. ..

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Ashliana

@wayback

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Ashley ...papa 😡
But papa apne itna acha ss likha that I forgot my gussa...🤣
I just loved it Anu..
This was so deep ,so beautiful..
This is what I wanted...this is it...
You described Nisha 's childhood incident so well..
The reason of her becoming a tom boy...is commendable 👏
This inner talk is what I wanted to see in the show also..
I just loved the way you wrote each and every word of it was muahh..
Situation so well described..
And ha don't comment back " thanks for liking it "🤣
Ok..??
Because I loved it...🤣 😆
And pls pls do write soon...it's a request 😃

Edited by wayback - 10 years ago

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Wow...nice start Anu...
I am very curious to know what will happen next...
Eagerly waiting for the next part...
Plz continue soon dear...

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deek_210

@deek_210

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Nice update Anu..beautifully written and described.

Continue soon :)

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achuAR

@achuAR

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Loved the start 😊

The way you wrote Nishu's POV was just mindblowing 👏👏

But precap was

Thanks a lot for the pm

And ya do continue soon 😉

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blah-blah

@blah-blah

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: arshiss
bestie it was super awesm😊
kabir woke up the woman inside nisha i loved that line
nisha's pov was beautifully portrayed..
waiting fr t nxt part

ps:i am happy that finally u wrote😊

thanks yaar!😊

yup i finally wrote😆😆😆

coz u guys were telling me to update continuously😆😆😆-thanks for that😆😆😆

love u🤗