Nibir poem-When sadness revisited my life!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys!!
i tried writing a poem on Nibir
Actually this poem is from nisha's POV ...😆
I dont even knw whether this can be categorized as a poem😆
Pls read it and do comment


When sadness revisited my life


In mid -February,when coldness crept into my life
Every wish I had,lay like a crumbled heap
I despised myself for what had happened to me..
I searched for joy in my soul
But all I found was endless sorrow...


And then he entered my life like a fresh breeze,
Bringing with him countless joy and bliss,
I let him alleviate my excruciating pain,
I let him soothe my restless mind,
Little did I realize that I was falling for him deeply...


He invaded my heart like a trespasser,
Breaking all barriers I built to protect myself..
I found solace in his arms and peace in words,
I treasured him...I fantasized about him
And I finally started thinking that he completed me...


I cherished every moment with him,
And slowly realized that I am addicted to him...
He had lured me into a trance like state from which
I would never awake;But even amidst these endless joys,
A gripping fear conquered my heart...


And one fine day he shattered my heart
Off to conquer his dreams ,leaving me behind;
I said nothing coz he and only he has
The permission to break my heart


And when he finally left,
Ripping my heart and tearing my soul,
I watched like a spectator,dying a thousand deaths,
I shut myself away,silence as my constant companion,
Far from the maddening crowd,far from the questioning voices...

Trying to mend my broken heart,though I know it's too late
And when I finally came out of my shell,thinking I moved on
The truth let me down again;coz now I am searching
For traces of him in everyone I see...


Hoping against hope that he returns someday,
Though I know the bitter truth;I realized,
Time has moved on...I have not
Coz my heart is still a stubborn child
It will never rest until it gets what it wants...




By Anagha aka anu😆😆😆
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That's it
Dont kill me
Do like if u like it 😆😆😆
and do leave ur comment!!!
they are precious!!!



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Amazing...👏👏...Very apt poem...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its beautiful👏
sad...but touching
the fresh breeze thing reminded me of what derek shepherd said about meridith grey
"you are like coming out for fresh air"...will miss them😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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anu its awsum 👍🏼loved it to the core...
well written👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg anu beautifully written yaar and specially the last para👏
god u r bhery bhery talented😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: do0dleR

Wow! Amazing...👏👏...Very apt poem...

thanks!!!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome poem...you are an excillent writter Anu... 👏
And thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Anu I must say..U R MULTI TALENTED yaar.👍🏼
Thanks to nibir...see your improving in ur skills😉
See where have nibir brought you??
Ss--poem's😉(joke k.)
Nice really nice anu ...Keep on writing...this is for you🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Anu the last two parts are just awesome.

My fav lines
The truth let me down again;coz now I am searching For traces of him in everyone I see..
Hoping against hope that he returns someday,

👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was so touching! 😭
But why a sad ending?
I'll never forget this poem
it was written beautifully truly 👏

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