NIBIR FF- || Months of Happiness || UPDATED: EPILOGUE - PAGE 46 - Page 30

Created

Last reply

Replies

325

Views

32.2k

Users

75

Likes

480

Frequent Posters

Ashveena. thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Res😳
Itna jaldi end kyun kia nikhad😒
Nikhad003 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you so much everyone, I myself is very emotional at the moment...I don't know what will I do when I will be writing the epilogue...That will be coming soon and the end of this story officially...:(
Big thanks to Sujay my Chutke for sending messages to everyone on behalf of me...
Edited by Nikhad003 - 9 years ago
1060675 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
It was beautiful dibhai...

Destiny ko koi nahi badal sakta...jo hota hai ache k lie hi hota hai...😊

I'll miss this story like hell...😭

Waiting for the epilogue...update soon...😳
Nibirlove_amu thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Awwwit was just so cute 🤗
A perfect happy family
Waiting for the epilogue
poornima_15 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update .. i will truly miss this story ... as ths was the very first story i ever read on nibir 😊 beautiful journey as parents ...
luvmishri thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful ending to a beautiful story .
Gonna miss bakali house family .
Nd also toddu nd goddu 😳 😭
Waiting fr the epilogue
Thnks fr pm 😳
Sarthak0302 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry Nikkhad I couldn't comment on it since a long time due to studies so sorry for that .
But yesterday I was finally able to read all the parts from 6-12 and the only word I can say about the story is awesome.
You have described every emotion , every scene so beautifully that I am falling short of words to praise you.
You truly scared me when nisha got injured.The way you described the emotional state of kabir , nisha , nibir and kirti was simply awesome.
I could feel each and every emotion and could connect well with the story . It felt that I am watching a movie and not simply reading a story and this fact speaks of the high level of your writing skills.
I am gonna miss this story and will miss the way you portrayed each and every character especially Nibir.
In the end I would also confess something , usually I don't prefer such kind of cute and family oriented stories but your way of writing has made me fall for these stories and because you have managed to change my taste you are my favourite writer.
Waiting for the epilogue and once again sorry for being late in reading and commenting.
enthusiastic thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
very beautiful update dear
i really like it
thanks for the pm
shrutigaur37 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
it was lovely n beautiful.
an apt end to such a wonderful story.
now do compensate for dis story by starting a new one 😆
Nikhad003 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Here is the day, the day finally...Epilogue time...
I have one request today, please everyone share their memories, incidents which you had while reading the story...I will cherish them forever and I have a request to all the silent readers (If there are any) to left a feedback today as the story has come to an end...

EPILOGUE

12 YEARS LATER
64/3 Kuheli Apartments, Andheri East, Mumbai. On the well furnished drawing room of a beautiful duplex flat, a couple was having a good time watching old day's video clips on their TV...The gorgeous woman kept her head on the shoulder of the handsome man and he held her tightly in his arms, while both adoring their two children...A 3 year old boy was seen on the screen who was giving an adorable kiss on his 6 month old sister's cheeck while playing with her and after that the baby girl gave a cute smile looking at her brother and touched his cheeck with her little soft hand...
-Weren't they so adorable?
-*Kissing the woman's forhead* Yes, Nishu! Afterall they are our children...They still are so adorable...
Nisha: Hmm Kabir! Time flew so fast...I can't believe they have grown up so much...
Kabir: Yeah, they have but I did not...*Winks*
Kabir was about to kiss Nisha, just when Nibir came down from upstairs while continiously screaming out 'Mamma-Papa'...
Kabir: Ufff...Your son, Nisha...He hasn't changed a bit...Still always on wrong time...*Fed up face*
Nisha: Mr. Moron, don't say anything about my toddu...
Nibir: Papa said something about me? Must be something bad...
Kabir: Oh hello Mr. goon kid, why were you screaming tell that first?
Nibir: Oh, do you guys even remember what is the date today? It is chutkui Goddu's birthday today...We have to go to Bakali House...Everyone is waiting...I got calls from Tiya di, Tanu di and Rusha-Rifanya too...
Nisha: Rusha-Rifanya?! That means Kirti and Adhyan have also reached...We are getting late Kabir...
Kabir: What can I do? I am ready... *confused face*
Nisha: Where is your Queen Victoria?
Kabir: My goddu must be coming...
Nibir: *Shouting* Roo? Come down fast...
After a while Mishri came running downstairs...
Mishri: Boo! I am here, was busy taking calls from Arya-Arushan and also Namisha...
Kabir: Nisha, I think we should start fast, everyone is waiting...Morever Kirti-Adhyan have also reached...
Nisha: Yeah, yeah change the house more...I don't like it here till today though we are living here for last 6 years...*disgusted face*
Kabir: Nisha, I also miss Bakali House...You know that I had to change since I needed a personal dance studio at home...
Nibir: Yeah, yeah mamma papa now don't start again with the house thing...Bakali House will always be the best we all know...Now, lets go!
Mishri: Yeah, Its Moo's, birthday!
Nisha: You siblings and your, Boo, Roo, Moo!
Hearing this, Nibir and Mishri hugged each other by shoulders and then all of them laughed together...
Mishri: Now, shall we leave?
Nisha: We will Cupcake but before leaving tell me, you fixed the photo of mom-dad on your wall?
Mishri: Oh yeah, Mamma...I did last night! As you have always tought me, I talk to them every morning na? So If I hadn't done it, whom would I talk to?
Kabir: Perfect! So now, Nisha and Goddu check once if everything is locked properly in the house or not...Me and Champ are going to the garage...
Nibir: Lets go Papa...Join us soon ladies!
It was 31st december, the day when Nisha got to know that she was pregnant for the second time...Every year, at Bakali House they celebrated that day as the Goddu's birthday who left the world before even coming to it...They used to call her 'Chutkui Goddu'...Nisha and Kabir had told Mishri about the truth when she was 9 years old as they did not want their daughter to know about it from someone else, someday...Mishri loved her family and always felt blessed to have them...Nisha and Kabir had tought her to respect and love her own late parents in the same way...Mishri's Mom-Dad was none but Nirav and Rinia...At the Bakali House, everything was same just after marriage Kirti and Adhyan had started leaving in another apartment and Bakali House family had got some new members...Arya and Arushan were the daughter and son of Saurav-Dolly, Rusha and Rifanya were the twin daughters of Adhyan-Kirti and Namisha was the daughter of Suketu...

Kabir: Champ, call your Mamma...Where are they?
Mishri: We are here papa...
Nisha: Lets go, Lets go...
Nibir: Mamma, get inside the car...
Nibir opened the door of the back seat and Mishri opened the door of the front seat..Then as always, Mishri sat with her papa on the front seat and Nibir sat with his mamma on the back seat...It was a breezy winter day and with the flow of wind the laughters of their happy little family echoed on the passing roads...

Itti si hansi
Itti si khushi
Itta sa tukda chand ka
Khwabon ke tinkon se
Chal banayeinn aashiyaan...

Dabe dabe paaon se
Aaye haule haule zindagi
Hothon pe kundi chadha ke
Hum taale laga ke chal
Gumsum tarane chupke chupke gaayein
Aadhi aadhi baant le
Aaja dil ki ye zameen
Thoda sa tera sa hoga
Thoda mera bhi hoga apna ye aashiyan...

Bondings of blood are the ones we make, but bondings of heart are the ones which make us.
Edited by Nikhad003 - 9 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".