NIBIR FF...AASMANON PAY LIKHA(Epilogue 2 is updated on page no 87) - Page 63

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Awesome ending
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karan sounds like sumit😡
finu killed karan😲😲...didnt expect

nibir mu over😃


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Posted: 10 years ago

...AASMANON PAY LIKHA...

EPILOGUE 1

(after 4 years)

Lekha-hardik i hate u...u r the only person who is responsible for this weird state

Hardik-arey yaar maine kya kiya...maine kaha tha tumhe pregnant hone ke liye

Lekha-what do u mean..u don't love me...main moti ho gyi hoon na isliye ab tumhe main bilkul acchi nhi lagti

Hardik-no baby its not like that...u r the most beautiful girl i have ever see...meri koi bhi GF itni pretty nhi thi

Lekha-pakka na...wait GF...mr hardik Sharma what do u mean by gf

Hardik-arey i dint mean that

Lekha-but u said that

Hardik-baby m sorry na...plzz mujhe maaf kar do...okk tell me what do u want

Lekha-choco lava cake that too dominos wala

Hardik-what the...abhi pizza kon khayega...humein niya aur kshitij ki 1st wedding anniversary mein jana hai na

Lekha-sharma ji said choco lava cake not pizza

Hardik-but baby choco lava cake is a add on dish na and if we want that we have to order pizza na

Lekha-point hai...u know what just do one thing...tum na dominos ki franchise le lo...tension hi khatam

Hardik-what...r u mad...u know what right now i need a wall

Lekha-why wall baby

Hardik-mujhe apna sar uspar marna hai

Lekha-okk...but first my choco lava cake and plz wo side wali wall par maarna yeh front wali meri fav hai

Hardik-lekhaaa

Lekha-sorry na

(Hardik kissed her forehead)

Lekha-ye kya tha

Hardik-i love u yaar

Lekha-hey bhaggu...sharma ji(she go to hardik and captured his lips and kissed him passionately)i love u too shaadi ke do saal baad bhi tum mujhe forehead par hi kiss karoge kya

Hardik- i thought...mood swings hain...thappad na pad jaaye...lets go

(in nibir's room)

Kabir-nishu kitna time yaar plzz come na yaar

Nisha-kabir ab kya main 2 min shanti se taiyaar bhi na houn

Kabir-2 min...oye hllo tum 3 hrs se andar ho mujhe bhi taiyaar hona hai...nishu pl

Nisha-kya hua

Kabir-aaj tu killer lag rhi hai

Nisha-kyun roz nhi lagti

Kabir-lagti hai par aaj toh...chod na nitij ki anniversary...yahin enjoy karte hain(he hugged her from behind and kissed her neck)

Nisha-kabir chod na..yeh koi waqt hain romance ka

Kabir-oh hllo romance ka waqt nhi mood hota hai(and nisha turned)

Nisha-accha...and tell me something hum hardik aur niya ko kya kahenge

Kabir-hardik toh khud nhi ane wala...i mean lekhu is pregnant na so her mood swings toh

Nisha-shut up ok...aisa kuch nhi hota

Kabir-ohh plzz khud ka time yaad hai...tumhe raat ke 2 bje aloo tikki khani thi shops bhi band thi badi mushkil se 10 km door ek choti si shop mili thi

Nisha-arey yaar toh thoda demanding hona is not that bad yaar

Kabir-raat ke 2 bje

Nisha-woh...ok leave it kiss me

Kabir-accha ji topic change...waise not bad either

(and they both r about to kiss)

Anu-what r u doing

Kabir-(in a shocking tone)tum kab ayi

Anu-abhi...but aap kya kar rhe the

Kabir-woh aapki mamma ki aankh mein kuch chala gya tha bas wohi saaf kar rha tha

Nisha-yeah baby thats it

Anu-(she is still not satisfied)okk ho gya

Nibir-hmm

Anu-then lets go niya aunty ki wedding anniversary hai yayy

Nibir-yeah lets go

(at nitij's house)

Niya-hii bhaiyu...hii bhabhi...and my sweetu soham

Soham-hi bua...hi phuphaji

Kshitij-hii bhai...how r u

(sujen dolly n aniket and uman entered with their kids)

Niya-jenny...aman bhabhi dolly di...sukku...umesh bhaiya...ani jeeju...how r u all

Kshitij-hii Aryan...and mihikaa aur hamari krystal toh 1 hi saal ki hai but thanks sukku n jenny i thought krys is just one yr old toh shayad tum na aao

Jenny-aisa kaise ho sakta hai...haan saurav n finu r out of town so they wont come

Kshitij-soham see he is Aryan n she is mihikaa

Soham-hii frds

Mihikaa n Aryan-hii...wow new frd lets go

Niya-where is kabir bhai n nisha bhabhi

Nibir-we r here

Anu-yeah we r here but we r late hum aur jaldi a jaate agar mamma ki aankh mein kuch gira nhi hota toh...haina dad

(everybody stares at nibir with a naughty look-awww... and nibir felt so embaressed)

Kabir-anu go n play with ur cousins

Kshitij-come yaar kabir

Hardik-kabir nishu ki aankh main kya gya tha

Kabir-ho gya bas now stop pulling my legs

Soham-papa...m bored

Hardik-beta its okk

Kabir-wait...anu come here

Anu-coming

Kabir-he is soham aap dosti karoge isse
anu-okk..hii m anu

Soham-m soham

(they went from there)

Aniket-waise hardik who is soham

Hardik-actually meri mamma ki sister i mean meri maasi ka grandson hai uski family ki ek car accident mein death ho gyi...koi nhi hai toh main aur lekha usey legally adopt kar rahe hain...waise lekha ka to fav hai ab toh humin hi mom dad bolta hai

Kabir-arey its okk yaar...se anu aur uski kitni acchi frdship ho gyi hai

(niitj cut the cake and everybody danced together on London thumakda)

Anu-hey soham tum aise akele akele kyun baithe ho

Sohan-mera koi frd nhi hai na...m new here

Anu-ale waah no fear when anu is here m angel

Soham-yeah u r very beautiful

Anu-i know...u know lets be frds and i promise main tumhara saath kabhi nhi chodungi

Soham-promise

Anu-pakka promise

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome epilogue...
Loved it... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww... SO cute epilogue...👏
Luvd the endind wid Anu n Soham...😳

Tune Krys n Mihu ko bhi nahi chhoda...🤣
N Anu the Devil...🤣

Will miss ur Ff. Come back soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mera anniversary gift ? 😛😳
Sab problems solve
Mere Hardik Bhaiya ko bhabhi kitna kaam tang karti hai.. Lekhu tou should trouble him more 😉 }:)]
Anu ka koi chotu bhai ya behan nahi hua ? 🤣 🤣
Story khatam ho gai 💔
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago

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