NIBIR FF...AASMANON PAY LIKHA(Epilogue 2 is updated on page no 87) - Page 54

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Posted: 10 years ago

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its really hard to believe sonal that u can write such serious matured story 😆
good job really you are surprising me 😆

what do u mean mohtarma
Aapne tarif ki ya😕😆🤣
Thanks niyu😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss_Deewani

Finally, truth was revealed... Bt the real reality is yet 2 come...
It was jhakkas update...👏
Luvd agai my jaan n sautan 😆

N Anu is always trouble. Agar woh bimar na hoti toh ye seb hota hi nahi😆

thanks choti behna😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sona yaar sometimes they r together sometimes nt confused yaar 😆 anu ke liye toh no comments. Jaldi update kar wanna kn aage kya hota hai
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: picadally

Sona yaar sometimes they r together sometimes nt confused yaar 😆 anu ke liye toh no comments. Jaldi update kar wanna kn aage kya hota hai

thanks natasha😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

...AASMANON PAY LIKHA...

Part 11

(at nibir's room)

Nisha entered-kabir plzz listen to me...just once kabir plzz

Kabir-nisha plzz m not interested...leave me alone n just go from my life

Nisha-kabir anu is my daughter...u r my husband and this is my family and u r saying just leave...u know its not possible how could u kabir...only one chance kabir...siff ek maukka

Kabir-only one chance...sirf ek mauka haan...mauke hi toh diye hain maine tumhe aur tumne unka faayda bhi uthaya hai but in a negative way and just by the way stop behaving like a broken soul...i know karan is dead thats why u r still with me otherwise tumne toh kabhi mujhse pyar kiya hi nhi u never loved me u only loved that karan

(servant knocked their door)

Servant-kabir sir saurav sir n unke gharwale aye hain

Kabir-hmm m coming(servant left)m going u also come downstairs(he left from there)

Nisha-(still sobbing)i know kabir u hate me u thought i only loved that karan but the truth is i only loved u hamesha se aur shayad isiliye wo karan...maine tumhare siva kisi aur ko chaha hi nhi hai majboori thi wo meri tumhein main shayad kabhi ye na keh bhi na pao but nisha ke dil mein kabir ke siva kabhi koi aur aya hi nhi nisha ke dil mein hamesha kabir tha kabir hai aur kabir hi rahega

(downstairs)

Saurav-hii kabir

Kabir-hii saurav...namaste uncle n aunty...hardik where is lekha

Hardik-she is in finu's room

Anu-yeah finu bua is looking very prtty...she wore an anarkal suit(clapping n dancing)my finu bua is very pretty

Mr jain-yeah anu beta ur bua is very pretty what say saurav

Saurav-kya dad aap bhi(everybody smiled at his shyness)

(nishu entered with the servants and told them to serve the coffee n other items)

Saurav-bhabhi u know what i love ur cooking skills yaar...i mean the food is amazing

Nisha-dont worry saurav finu knows everything

Mrs rathore-hmm mujhse toh usne kuch sikha nhi nisha ne hi sikhaya hai

Anu-but m gonna miss finu bua's special dish...my fav home made jelly

Kabir-jelly ohh u can purchase readymade na princess

Mrs rathore-arey nishu will make na

(nibir n hardik lokked at each other)

Nisha-maa i just go n chk finu

Mrs rathore-go beta

(nisha went to finu's room,she saw lekha was there but she is still upset)

Nisha-lekha wow yaar...she is looking very pretty...no doubt make up karne mein tumhara jawaab nhi

Lekha-excuse me mujhe ek call karni hai(and she went from there,nishu understans that she is ignoring her)

Nisha-finu u r looking very pretty

Finu-bhabhi m scared

Nishu-scared but why...arey don't worry they came here just to fix the engagement date...u r not getting married...tere bhaiya tujhe itni jaldi nhi bhejne waale

Finu-bhabhi thats not the reason

Nishu-then what

Finu-karan...

Nishu-stop it okk...dont think about him...he was a jerk...n saurav knew the truth na so whats the problem

Finu-i know bhabhi saurav knows everything...but what about bhai unhe toh kuch bhi nhi pta...i guess humein unhein bta dena chahiye

Nishu-kuch nhi batana hai kabir ko...ur in-laws are here...so just calm down okk and don't be scared m with u n even saurav also

Finu-bhabhi but still...bhai has a right to know everything and we didn't do anything wrong toh hum kyun darein

(anu came)

Anu-finu bua u r looking very pretty...wait not more than me but still looking pretty

Nisha-now what was that...i mean not more than u seriously

Anu-yeah i m the prettiest after all m angel na...correction

Finu n nisha together-dad's angel

Anu-exactly...but how do u know

Nisha-arey we both r very intelligent nah i know not more than u n ur dad but still

(in finu's ear how do u know...papa ki chamchi aur kuch bolti bhi hai yeh...finu smiled)

Anu-lekhu maasi

Lekha-hii my jaan...shall we go

Anu-yeah chall be

Nishu-yeah n finu don't get scared n nervous too

Finu-hmm...ok bhabhi lets go

(finu went with lekha n anu)

Nisha-why god why...yeh ho kya rha hai...first kabir's outburst now this finu...i don't know what is going to happen

(finally saurav n finu's engagement got fixed and saurav n his family left)

(in nibir's room)

Kabir-listen after 5 days finu is getting engaged so plzz i don'twant any scene so hum apne divorce ke bare mein uske baad bataenge

Nisha-okk

(kabir went to anu's room n slept there)

(in lekha's room)

Hardik-hii

Lekha-what r u doing here n that too on this time

Hardik-i knew my princess is in a very bad mood thats why i came here to meet u

Lekha-stop it hardik

Hardik-i knew that...i have something for u

Lekha-hardik m not in a mood yaar

Hardik-choco lava cake that too of dominos

Lekha-omg this is my fav(she snatched the cake and starts eating it)

Hardik-ohh hello atleast share it yaar

Lekha-no ways

Hardik-(sad face)okk so this stupid cake is more important than me

Lekha-okk (and she feed him)

(they both were sitting in the balcony and lekha's head is on hardik's chest)

Lekha-i don't know hardik...m very upset...this time nishu has done a huge mistake

Hardik-hmm pta nhi yaar m confused

Lekha-confused...but why

Hardik-i don't know but i think she loves kabir a lot...i saw in her eyes yaar she actually loves him, geneuinly...mera mann ye nhi maan rha ki nisha ne kabir ko dhokha dia hai

Lekha-actually na u r right but nisha told herself that she went to meet that karan

Hardik-yeah but she dint tell the reason...there is something yaar

Lekha-kyaa

Hardik-nhi pta...but m sure there is something...accha m feeling sleepy

Lekha-good night...n i liked ur idea...mooh meetha karo aadhi raat mein

Hardik-mera kahaan hua

Lekha-haww i gave u the cake

Hardik-cake...(he gave a small peck on her lips and ran away)now this is called muh meetha karna

Lekha-(in a shocking state)really(n starts smiling)

(In nibir room)

(nisha was seeing her n kabir's pictures)

Nisha-kabir i know u hate me but i love u...u r my whole world...i know u will leave me but mere liye tumhare yaadein hi kaafi hai because i think we were never meant to be and thats why we r not together hamara rishta shayad aasmanon par likha hi nhi tha

Hum tujhe ek pal bhool na jaaye

Sootey hue bhi khayal tera

Humene kabhi jo aankhein kholi

Tujhe hi ko dekha pehle dafa

Ek pyaas h ek dard h bin Tere na Tere bina

Tere saath hi mera Naam bhi asmanon par hai likha

Asmanon par hai likha

(she hugged her kabir n anu's pic n slept on the floor while crying)

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Posted: 10 years ago
i res it so that i could cmnt first
it was fantabulous
mooh meeta karo😉😆
anu papa ki chamchi😆
feelin sad fr nisha😭
so sauro finu nisha ko secret pata hai
karan k bache😡aisa kya kiya hoga😔


Edited by arshiss - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh yes I knew it I so knew it...
Nisha can't cheat kabir...she love him BR]I so very knew it..
So Finu was the reason ha..
Was finu dating Karan ???
Ong papa Ki princess...anu love her so much..
And Hardik smart ha... 😆
Update soon..
Edited by wayback - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update👍🏼... continue soon 😊nd please sort out NiBir's misunderstanding... pretty plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arshiss

i res it so that i could cmnt first
it was fantabulous
mooh meeta karo😉😆
anu papa ki chamchi😆
feelin sad fr nisha😭
so sauro finu nisha ko secret pata hai
karan k bache😡aisa kya kiya hoga😔


thanks khushi😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome update👍🏼... continue soon 😊nd please sort out NiBir's misunderstanding... pretty plzzz

thanks dear😃

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