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Hey guys...so name is Lakshmi (recently chaged UN so😆)...i am back with an OS and this time its not for NiBir but for another "couple" i ship - RaKa😆...This one is dedicated to a few ppl -Rema dii ,Deeksha ,Shweta dii, Shivani dii, , Anu (😆), Isha dii, Mehrana, Kate, Noor etc...this is especially for u guys and i have tried to include evrything u guys wanted😃...This is also for the other RaKa shippers too😆...I really hope u guys like it😃


Ek Anokha Rishta


Kabir sat in the car in apprehension. He was going to see his Nisha finally. After spending more than a day in jail Kabir didn't feel anything much other than love for Nisha. Funny how people become crazy in love. Only one day , it was only one day since he found out that he was in love and he felt that his every breath was longing to be with her. He has been beaten up badly, called a liar, thief and murderer by almost all the people he knew here and was on the verge of destroying his future but funnily enough he didn't care about it at all. Every bit of his concern went to Nisha's condition; he was longing to see her. He looked at Ramesh who was driving the car. He had been showering him with questions ever since he brought him out of the station. But he was silent throughout. Finally Kabir gave up and sat quietly in the car. But silence and Kabir are like water and fire, they do not mix well at all so it didn't take long for Kabir to break the silence again.

"Papa...I am sorry...for everything...I know ki meine bahut badi galati ki hai iss shadi ko lekar...par sach mei mein Nisha ko nuksan pahuchana nahi chahta tha...mei chaahkar bhi use hurt nahi kar sakta...sach...aap Nisha ki papa hai issiliye aapko pura haq hai mujhe koi bhi saza dene ki...par iss mei Nisha ki koi galati nahi hai...sab plan mera tha...aap iss baat ko lekar Nisha se naraz mat hona please...mei koi bhi saza sweekar kar lunga ..."

Ramesh stopped the car suddenly."Gadi se nikal" He said."Par papa..." Kabir began. "Meine kaha na nikal, nikal gadi se". Ramesh cut him off. Kabir was very scared now . Was papa thinking of leaving him? Was this punishment? He got out of the car. Ramesh too got down with him.

"punishment chahiye tha na tujhe, chal teek hai dhethi hun tujhe punishment..." Saying this he walked towards Kabir folding his sleeves. Kabir was not expecting this and instinctively he closed his eyes and waited for the blow. Instead of slap he felt a hand lightly tapping his cheek and he opened his eyes to see a smiling Ramesh .

"Papa..."

"Kya tujhe dhappad chahiye tha?...tujhe chahiye toh mein dhe sakta hun." Kabir vigorously shook his head. Ramesh laughed lightly and placed a hand on Kabir's shoulder.

"Beta...jo bhi tum dono ne kiya, who galat tha...shaddi mazak nahi hai...agar tum log shaddi nahi karna chahthe dhe toh hume inform kar sakthe dhe...yeh contract marriage, acting yeh sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi thi..."Kabir hung his head in shame."Mein naraz issliye tha kyunki tum log apne zindagi ke sath khel rahe the...apne beti ke zindagi ek baap keliye mazak nahi hai...aur ek baap ka sabse bada darr apni beti ka life barbat hona...dekho beta jaisa tum log samachte ho naa duniya aisa nahi hai...tumhari 3 mahine ke baat jane se bahut badi prblms nisha ki zindagi mei hogi...issi baat ko lekar mein pareshan tha."

"par papa..."Kabir began but was cut off by Ramesh

"Mein tum se naraz tha kyunki tum shayad meri beti ki zindagi barbat kar sakte the...par ab...beta tumne jo nisha ki jaan bachane keliya kiya, apne aap ko mujhrim banakar bewakoofi hi sahi, par tum ne jo kiya uske baad mei kaise tujhse naraz reh sakthe ho...shayad tumhari vaja se aaj meri nishu humari beech mei hai...ek thank you bahuth chota shabd hoga lekin thank you beta...meri happy wala gane ko sahi salamat rekhne keliye...aur sorry beta mujhe tumhare saath hue naa insafi ko sahi waqt par rok nahi paaya aur tum par shak kiya" Ramesh hugged Kabir.

"papa please ...aap thank you aur sorry bolkar mujhe paraya bana rahe ho...haan meine yeh shaddi seriously nahi liya tha...meine aap logon ko tang karne keliye kya kuch nahi kiya, apne aap ko ghatiya damad prove karne ke chakkar mei sab ko pareshan kiya...par iss shaddi se jhude har rishta jaane anjaane mei mere liye bahuth important ban chuki hai...papa mei aapko aur maa ko apna samachtha hun...sukku aur bunty aur saare cousins un logon ke bina ab ek din bhi boring lagne raha hai...Dadaji ka daat khaye bina neend nahi aata aur dadi ki pampering ki maza toh kuch aur hai...samosewaale tauji aur chote tauji ko tang karaye bina ab reh bhi nahi sakta...vimla taaiji ki haath se bane ghaana aur rupan taaiji ki taunts sab mereliye aadat ban chuki hai...aur-

"Aur Nisha?"

"Nisha ...who meri pyaa-" Kabir stopped talking as he realized what he was about to say

"Tum meri beti se pyaar karta hai." It was a statement not a question. Kabir was a bit embarrassed He looked up at Ramesh, saw that he was smiling and he relaxed.

"Haan papa...mein aapki beti se pyaar karta hun...mein jaanta hun ki aapko mujh par bharosa rekhne mei takleef hogi lekin mujhe bas ek aur chance digiye...mein vaada karta hun mei Nisha ki saath Kabhi nahi chodunga...humesha uske saath hi rehunga...bas ek aur chance digiye please.."

Ramesh smiled and placed his hand on Kabir's cheek." Mujhe pata hai...aur mujhe koi takleef nahi hai tujhe viswas karne mei...mujhe viswas hai tum par...meri happy waala gane ko humesha happy rekhna...bas yeh yaad rekhna ki koi bhi decision lene se pehle hume consequences ke bare mei sochna chahiye...ab dekho tum dono ki ek bad decision ki vajah se tumhe kahan tak jaana pada...haan sumit ka bhi haath tha lekin iss contract marriage ki sachayi ka asar - mei bhi tumhe viswas nahi kiya or tujhe bacha nahi paya...ab se koi bhi problem ho toh tum mujhse bata sakthe ho... mei hun tumhare saath." Ramesh patted him in the shoulder and hugged him. Kabir stood transfixed at the spot for a moment looking at ramesh and then hugged him back

"Thank you...papa" he said trying to pour every bit of the affection he felt into the single word.

"ab chal jaldi nikalthe hai varna teri saas aur patni hume kaccha chaba dhenga." Ramesh said breaking the hug. Kabir was about to get into the car but he was reminded of something and stopped." Kya hua ,Kabir?" Ramesh asked. "Papa patni se yaad aya...Nisha mujhe pakka kaccha chaba denge...mujhe dar lag raha hai." Ramesh laughed."Beta hum biwiyon se darna chahiye.. lekin ab tum gaadi mei baito aur socho iss situation se kaise bahar nikalenge" Saying this he pushed Kabir into the car.



PS- Excuse my ghatiya Hindi...its not my mother tongue but i like it when both Kabir and Ramesh talk in hindi😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome OS!!!👏
biwiyon se darna chahiye!!!😆
but i thought ye RaKa OS hai🤣
lekin iss mein toh nibir hai🤣
next time don't include nisha ok?🤣
jokes apart-awesome dear!!!
my RaKa😆
Edited by anulovessarun - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow!! creative thinking ha!!😉😆
their bond is indeed soo diffrnt !!
osm os dr!!👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written Lakshmi..😊 You have captured RaKa so well. The conversation had that comfort that they share. I hope we aren't made to wait for RaKa more.!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lachu awesome os yaar
RAKA r the best FIL n SIL😃
Loved their bonding
N plzz write one more part yaar i really want to see nishu's kaccha chaba jane wala expression and then again RAKA bonding kabira's puppy n helpless face and plzz help me na papa wale expressions🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anulovessarun

awesome OS!!!👏

biwiyon se darna chahiye!!!😆
but i thought ye RaKa OS hai🤣
lekin iss mein toh nibir hai🤣
next time don't include nisha ok?🤣
jokes apart-awesome dear!!!
my RaKa😆

@bold sach hai...dad always says so🤣

kya kare yaar NiBir shipper hun mein 🤣

but this really was an OS abt their Nisha conversation so😉...but nxt time pakka sirf raka

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haha..awesome yaar..this was so cute..meri biwi aur Teri patni kacha chaba jayegi N kabir nervous initially lol..loovvveedd it.nicely captured their banter..<3 n so many hugs ..haayyee
This is awesome sauce..loved d surprise .thank u :D
U have made me more restless now :p #wewantraka hope we get this in d show soon.
Keep writing :D

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Posted: 10 years ago
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[QUOTE=Shwets1502]Beautifully written Lakshmi..😊 You have captured RaKa so well. The conversation had that comfort that they share. I hope we aren't made to wait for RaKa more.![/QUOTE
thank u dii...i really hope so too😊]
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful OS Lakshmi 😊
The Raka bond couldn't have been described better.
Loved it sooo much 🤗
Thank u for writing this. Hum Raka shippers ko serial mein toh raka ka scene nahin mila par tumne humari murad puri kar di 😃
I really hope something like this happens in d serial ya ko cv tumhari story padhkar usse serial Mein ghusa de 😆
Keep writing like this 😳 😊 😉 😃 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONAL30

Lachu awesome os yaar

RAKA r the best FIL n SIL😃
Loved their bonding
N plzz write one more part yaar i really want to see nishu's kaccha chaba jane wala expression and then again RAKA bonding kabira's puppy n helpless face and plzz help me na papa wale expressions🤣


yup they r the best...and thank u sonal for liking it

i plan to continue so i resed😆

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