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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update... 😆 😆 😆
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Awesome raat ko padhke horror feel aa gayi
But ok and nibir convo rofled me 🤣
Posted: 10 years ago

Hahahaha... 😃
Bathroom ko Hindi me kya bolte??? 😆
I burst out laughing 😆
Nisha meeting old Kabir was hilarious!!! 😆
and nibir kidnapped him...
And their convo...
Maggi noodles bana rahi Hu .. Khayega??? 😆 😆 😆
Killer yar!! Hats off to uh...
Waise yar ab to pichle janam hi Jake Maggi Khana padega!! Bcoz yahan to bann ho gayi hai!! 😉
Lol

And the bhootnath returns :p
Iss buri atma ka maqsab kiya h g?? And singham ne mast jawaab diye mr bhootnath ko 😆 and shaamya kon?? Kabir ki behan??? 😃 😃 behan ko propose??? Had hai yaar 😆
Nibir cutest :* :*

Read all three the parts together...
Superb yar👏👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

Hahahaha... 😃
Bathroom ko Hindi me kya bolte??? 😆
I burst out laughing 😆
Nisha meeting old Kabir was hilarious!!! 😆
and nibir kidnapped him...
And their convo...
Maggi noodles bana rahi Hu .. Khayega??? 😆 😆 😆
Killer yar!! Hats off to uh...
Waise yar ab to pichle janam hi Jake Maggi Khana padega!! Bcoz yahan to bann ho gayi hai!! 😉
Lol

And the bhootnath returns :p
Iss buri atma ka maqsab kiya h g?? And singham ne mast jawaab diye mr bhootnath ko 😆 and shaamya kon?? Kabir ki behan??? 😃 😃 behan ko propose??? Had hai yaar 😆
Nibir cutest :* :*

Read all three the parts together...
Superb yar👏

Hehehhe...thankyou yaar...!!!🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maniwood

Awesome raat ko padhke horror feel aa gayi

But ok and nibir convo rofled me 🤣

Hehe...ty baduu...!!!😃
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Yeh bhooth uncle fir aa gya!!??.😲... Jab Ramu Kaka kahin chala jaata h, tabhi aa jaata h... Kahin Ramu Kaka ne NiBir ko phasa to nahin diya!!😲
NiBir and OK convo ws really funny...😆
I understand OK itni jaldi maan kyu gaya...but I wished ki tum story k aur parts likh paati... Anyways,I really enjoyed your story...😊...And I hope last ch/epilogue mein NiBir moments k saath, OK and ON moments bhi milenge..It will be so funny to see them romance in shudh hindi and NiBir faiing ot understand...😆😆...Update soon...😊
Edited by do0dleR - 10 years ago
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I love NiBir here.. 🤣
Kya inn dono ko yaad hai ki Nisha is pregnant ?🤣
Fence pe chad rahe hai diwar pe chad rahe hai 🤣
Old kabir is too much.. And this Kabir is not less 🤣
Nisha ko dekh ke old Nisha ka kya hoga 🤣
Beta kabhi kabhi mujhe bhi PM bhej diya kar 😡 🤣
Phir bolti hai maine comment nahi kiya 🤣
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Originally posted by: Niya_789

I love NiBir here.. 🤣

Kya inn dono ko yaad hai ki Nisha is pregnant ?🤣
Fence pe chad rahe hai diwar pe chad rahe hai 🤣
Old kabir is too much.. And this Kabir is not less 🤣
Nisha ko dekh ke old Nisha ka kya hoga 🤣
Beta kabhi kabhi mujhe bhi PM bhej diya kar 😡 🤣
Phir bolti hai maine comment nahi kiya 🤣


hehehe...ty...niyu momyy...!!😃😃
next part pe zarror bhejungi PM...!!😆😆
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PART~13


KABIR: pakka naa...??tu...means aap izhaar karne ko taiyyar ho...??

OK:haann...hum taiyyar hain...hhume aap logon ko iss maushkil se nikaalna hi hoga...!!

NISHA: thankyou kabir bhaiyya...!!🤣🤣🤣

KABIR: eeeyyy...tune mujhe bhaiyya kyun bola...??🥺

NISHA:abee ooyee...maine tujhe nahi OK ko bhaiyya bola hain...!!😆

KABIR:phir bhi bhaiyya mat bol yaar...kabir bhaiyya...ajeeb nahi hain...please...mat bol yaar...wo bhi tere muh se bilkul achcha nahi lagta...!!🤣🤣

NISHA:oyyeee...main tujhe kyun bolungi...??? tu paagal hain kya...??😆

KABIR:nishaaa...!!

NISHA: nisha gave a soft smile towards him:main tujhe nahi bol rahi...chinta mat kar...aur na kabhi bolungi...theek hain ab...chimpu...!!😉

KABIR:😃😃😃

NISHA:ab kaam kare...??😆

KABIR:haaannn...chal...!!😆

they discussed the plan...as how to reach the palace and the princess...they somehow reached inside the palace...the three were hiding beside the princess's room...kabir and nisha were staring at her...

KABIR:abeyyy...!!

NISHA:abeyyy...!!

NIBIR:ye to same to same hain hain yaar...!!

KABIR:par ye to bht beautiful hain.. nishaaa...(he shouted)

NISHA:😡

ON thought that someone called her and she started searching for that person...nisha and kabir got scared and they throwed OK infront of ON...hehehawww...😈

ON:aa...aapp yahan pe...??

OK:wo...humm...matlabb hummm...

ON:aapne hume nisha bola...??

OK:wo yuvraani saa hume maaf kardijiye...wo humne nahi...matlab humne hi...galti see...

ON:humee achcha laga ki hume kisine nisha bola...!!

OK:aapko achcha lagaa...yuvraani saa...matlab nisha...matlab...hum...

KABIR:plan...!! he said silently so that only OK is able to hear it...!!

OK runs his mouth as if he was singing...and kabir starts singing...

Hmm.. hmm...

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum


kabir was looking at nisha while singing the song...while nisha was mesmerised by his singing...she just wanted to hug kabir tightly so that he would never leave her...OK was looking at ON ...he knelt down before ON...
Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum


ON was confused due to the song...as she never heard it before...OK was too confused...as he couldn't catch up the lyrics of the song...
nisha went near kabir...she sat beside him...holding his arm...she kissed kabir's cheek...they both smiled at each other...

Hmmm.. hmmm..

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...


ON holds OK'S hands...and looks at him emotionally...
kabir kisses nisha's forehead...they both get emotional...

Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum
O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum


nisha and kabir hug each other...kabir promises to nisha that he would never leave her...OK finally proposes ON...and she says yes...

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm... hmmm..


kabir and nisha got success in their plan...they had to go to the next step in their plan...OK hugged ON out of joy...ON was first shocked at his sudden gesture...but she too reciprocated to it...she hugged OK even more tightly...

ON:bht achcha gaana gaaya aapne...lekin ye kaunsa gaana tha...ye humne pehle kabhi nahi sunaa...!!

OK:wo...hum...hum...hum..

nisha to kabir:lo shuru ho gaya phirse ye humming bird...🤣

OK:aap humse vivah karengi...??

ON:aap hume nisha bula sakte hain...aur hum aapse vivah...

OK:kya aap humse vivah nahi karengi...??

ON:areyyy...aap dukhi na hoo...hum aapse vivaah karenge parantu hum kisi aur masle par sochne mein vivash ho gaye the...!!

KABIR:to nisha:waah...yaar kya awaaz hain princess ki...mast...!!aur yaar ye language to kamaal ki hain girls ko pataane keliye...agli baar try karunga...!!🤣🤣

NISHA:kabirr...!!😡

OK: hume maaf kardijiye...parantu aap kis masle ki baat kar rahi hain...??

ON:aaj shaam ko humari vivah hain raja karanvir singha ke saath...!!

OK:lekin kyun yuvraani...vah to humaari dushmann sena ke raja hain...!!

ON:wahi hum bhi nahi samajh paa rahe hain...kuch dino pehle wahan se khabar aayi thi ki...wah humse behad prem karte hain...aur humse se vivah karna chahte hain...pitaaji ne unko bht soch-vimarsh karne ke baad haan keh diya...aur hum pitaaji ki aagya ko asweekaar nahi kar paaye...

KABIR:nishaaa...bhoot uncle...yahan pe bhi...uski to main...chutney banaa dunga...!!😡

OK:koyi hain jo humaari madad kar sakta hain inn sabmein...!!

ON:kaun...??

OK:TO KABIR AND NISHA: baahar aajaiye...!!

kabir and nisha came and stood before ok and on ...on was hell shocked to see them before her...they explained her everything...she was not ready to believe it...but at the end of time she had to...so she did...suddenly...nisha's health worsened...she started feeling dizzy...her stomach ached...she fell on kabir's shoulder...

KABIR:nisha...kya hua tujhe...uth...!!

NISHA:wo...aaj ki dawaayi reh gayi kabir...!!

KABIR:nisha tu kitni irresponsible hain yaar...agar baby ko kuch ho...chal tu baith abhi ke abhi...main tujhe dawaayi de raha hun...

he gave nisha the medicines...nisha was again fit and fine within half an hour...they continued with their plan...

their plan was that...nisha would be here in the palace during the marriage rituals instead of the princess...kabir would go along with ok and on and get them married...and after that they would reach the palace before nisha gets married...🤣🤣🤣

they continued with their plan...nisha got ready as a bride...kabir was mesmerized on seeing her in this avatar...he was about to kiss her but stopped himself...!!but he couldn't stop himself from hugging her...!!

KABIR:main jaldi aajaunga...!!

NISHA:kab...meri shaadi key baad...??

KABIR:abeee ooo...!!

NISHA:kabir aaj agar tu time pe nahi aaya naa...to main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi...uske baad tu kuch bhi karle...main kabhi tujhe maaf nahi karungi...kabir agar meri shaadi usse ho gayi naa...to tu samajh jaaiyo ki tu meri aur baby ki shakkal kabhi nahi dekh paayega...we'll die without you...i'll die without you...!!❤️

KABIR:main tujhe kuch nahi hone dunga nisha...i promise...i love you...!!

NISHA:pleasee...kabir...mujhe chodke mat jaaiyo...!!

KABIR:neverr...!

kabir goes along with ok and on to the temple...OK and ON get married...they were about to head to the palace...when someone from the village sees them together...he informs the raja...princess's father...the king sent some soldiers to get them...the soldiers came there and took the three of them to the king...they first of all were shocked to see two two lookalikes...two nishas and two kabirs...they were confused hey couldn't understand who was real and who wasn't...both the kabirs were beaten up...kabir ear was bleeding...but he had to reach nisha somehow...he promised her...someone hits kabir witha n iron rod...he shouted ...NISHAAA...!!
on the other side nisha was getting married with the king karanvir singha...the rituals started...the pappa king couldn't understand what to do...kabir came to the palace running...he however escaped from there...he reached the palace...and shouted..
KABIR:rok dijiye ye shaadi...!!!

...

TBC...!!!!


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