Ramesh/Vivek AT #2 |*Detective Ramesh-Our Hercule Poirot*| Edits Pg 99 - Page 96

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shwets1502


At least I can check the style of writing yar...But you got me..KN story, like exclusivee on them is difficult for me to read..😆

it is exclusive😆😆😆
i edited the other post -link is included😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gagp

Hey if we including every track than we have to include the vasu past too.

5-6 people can be enough if not for the past.


You mean...you want to have a flashback of sorts?

We can include your SS but that wouldn't fit the current storyline don't you think?

You want to write another past story? Keeping the current storyline we are planning?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anulovessarun

it is exclusive😆😆😆
i edited the other post -link is included😆


I checked the style...that's the one which usually everyone writes in...past tense...You checked my work? I write in present tense..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shwets1502


I checked the style...that's the one which usually everyone writes in...past tense...You checked my work? I write in present tense..😆

nope...let me check😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
yaar that is hard to write na😆
i am used to writing in past tense😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anulovessarun

yaar that is hard to write na😆

i am used to writing in past tense😆


And past tense confuses me...😆 But that's Ok...We can go with the common one.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shwets1502


You mean...you want to have a flashback of sorts?

We can include your SS but that wouldn't fit the current storyline don't you think?

You want to write another past story? Keeping the current storyline we are planning?

No i will find it difficult to complete this ss only leave another one. We can make it a simple OS or pick things from my story if you like.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Most of the time...I run the scene in my mnd and write it...More like the scene is happening in front of me...
The story link I sent...I tried past tense...and got messed up s much and hence went back to present..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gagp

No i will find it difficult to complete this ss only leave another one. We can make it a simple OS or pick things from my story if you like.


It would basically be a narration type...we already know most of the past...just the reason why Ramesh left lke that is remaining. Your SS hasn't reached that part yet..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

Most of the time...I run the scene in my mnd and write it...More like the scene is happening in front of me...

The story link I sent...I tried past tense...and got messed up s much and hence went back to present..😆

wait...i have a soln for that...we can make everything as FB and ur scene alone will be in present tense...the last scene...wat say?

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