NIBIR FF - LIGHT OF HOPE chapter 9 pg 26 - Page 17

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SONAL30 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for the late comment n thank god finally u updated
Loved it
saurav is a genius finally kabir accepted that je love nisha😃
N also loved viraj's understanding side😃
Thanks 4 the pm n continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally am with my detail comment 😛
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 big hug 4 u lachu 4 updating
vo bhi ithna acha update😳botyh dhakkans apne feeling tho samaj paayi😉😉

Viraj calling Mrs. Nisha🤣 actully Viraj se muh se Ms. Nisha sun ne ka aadath jo pad gayi hai isliye thoda ajeeb laga pehle 😆😆 n i loved Viraj n Nisha'a part...nishu tho koi aur duniya main kho kar baida tha puri Viraj nisha part main😆😆 Kabiraa's effect😆😆 application main Kabiraa ka nam likh diya🤣
saurav👏👏 saurv ka ye idea alwys works😉😉 well done saurv👍🏼
ab yeh kaun hai Nisha ko kidnap kiya😆 both r wiatng to confeess n plan flop...kidnapper ko bhi abhi aana tha🤣 n nw Kabiraa on Mission Find Nishu😉😆😆
waitng 4 the nxt part lachuu...
update soon 😉
illenkil njagal veendum shalya peduthi kondirikkum 😆so pettannu update cheytho atha nallathu🤣
Edited by ammu4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update... Why do I feel ki the man who banged with nisha took her phone??? Nice update..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Teogapi

Nice update... Why do I feel ki the man who banged with nisha took her phone??? Nice update..


you are the cvs ka baap...you shud knw na...but thats not much of a surprise😆


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Sorry for the late comment n thank god finally u updated

Loved it
saurav is a genius finally kabir accepted that je love nisha😃
N also loved viraj's understanding side😃
Thanks 4 the pm n continue soon


thank u sonal...i am updating soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu4u

Finally am with my detail comment 😛

🤗 big hug 4 u lachu 4 updating
vo bhi ithna acha update😳botyh dhakkans apne feeling tho samaj paayi😉😉

Viraj calling Mrs. Nisha🤣 actully Viraj se muh se Ms. Nisha sun ne ka aadath jo pad gayi hai isliye thoda ajeeb laga pehle 😆😆 n i loved Viraj n Nisha'a part...nishu tho koi aur duniya main kho kar baida tha puri Viraj nisha part main😆😆 Kabiraa's effect😆😆 application main Kabiraa ka nam likh diya🤣
saurav👏👏 saurv ka ye idea alwys works😉😉 well done saurv👍🏼
ab yeh kaun hai Nisha ko kidnap kiya😆 both r wiatng to confeess n plan flop...kidnapper ko bhi abhi aana tha🤣 n nw Kabiraa on Mission Find Nishu😉😆😆
waitng 4 the nxt part lachuu...
update soon 😉
illenkil njagal veendum shalya peduthi kondirikkum 😆so pettannu update cheytho atha nallathu🤣


glad u ;liked it yaar ammu...
i am updating earlier than my usual habit😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
i thought u updated😆
seein this in front in t main forrum😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arshiss

i thought u updated😆

seein this in front in t main forrum😆


i was just chcking this out...i will update tonight😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter-9


Nisha stood in front of dadaji in apprehension. She had just delivered the news of her joining Lakshya Academy. Everyone was gathered in the courtyard. Dadaji was sitting on his chair lost in thought and dadi was sitting beside him. Others stood around with their standard reactions. Nisha peered at their faces. Cousins were happy for Nisha. Ramesh and Lakshmi stood in the corner torn between happiness that she was going to follow her dream and worry that she is joining Lakshya Academy. Viren looked disinterested and for some reason annoyed while Vimla taiji had the expression of her parents. Mohan tauji looked worried and Rupan taaiji was being her usual self angry and annoyed, muttering something under her breath. For a moment Nisha had the urge to laugh at her expression but she suppressed the urge and shifted her focus to Dadaji.

"So you want to go back to shooting? Dadaji asked and Nisha shook her head "Ji."

"You want to join Lakshya Academy again? He asked

"Yes Dadaji" Nisha said nervously.

"And you say that this...this Viraj Singh Rathore redeemed? Apologized? So he won't be a trouble to you? Dadaji asked still serious. Nisha nodded. "And he said he will publically apologize to the family too if necessary."

"Will you come to the shop then?" He asked. "Shooting practices are in the evening so I can work in the shop too" Nisha said.

"And Kabir has no problem with this? "

"Why will he have problem?" Nisha began but looked at dadaji's face and changed her answer." I mean he is the one who wanted me to join Lakshya Academy. He doesn't have a problem at all Dadaji." Nisha saw her parents' face brighten at this and she sighed but her heart weighed with guilt of cheating them in the marriage.

Dadaji was silent for a moment thinking about everything and Nisha crossed her fingers in apprehension. Finally he said.

"If Viraj Singh Rathore has accepted his mistakes and Kabir is ok with this, I don't see why I should object." Nisha gave a wide smile.

"But Bauji.." Viren began but was cut off by dadaji. "No viren , I think Nisha should be given a chance at this." He was thinking along the lines of the sports meet and decided his granddaughter deserved this chance. Nisha came up and hugged him and dadi and they blessed her. Their celebration was cut off by the door bell. Dolly went and opened the door to find a Lady at the door.

"Namaste, Can I meet Mr Gangwal?"Dolly greeted her and showed her to the living room where everyone was sitting. Everyone looked on confused as she greeted them with folded hands.

"Namaste, I am Vasundhara. Kabir's mother. I am here to meet him" Nisha felt her feet giving away at the words. Everyone else was pleasantly surprised at the news and welcomed her gladly. She was immediately seated and everyone started talking at once. Nisha stood in the corner positively terrified by the turn of the events.

"We are so glad to finally meet you Vasundhara ji" Dadaji said.

"Th pleasure is mine Mr Gangwal. And thank you Mr Gangwal for accepting my son into your house hold." Nisha was puzzled by her answer. How did she know that Kabir was here?

"It was very sad that you could not make it to the wedding Vasundhara ji." Ramesh said joyously. "Wedding- " Vasundhara began confused but was cut off by Lakshmi.

"When did you come back from Badrinath yathra Vasundhara ji?" Nisha just closed her eyes as Lakshmi asked the question. "Badrinath yathra?" Vasundhara asked puzzled.

"It was very sad you could not make it to the wedding. But at least Kabir's mamaji and mamiji came." Dadaji said. "Arrey Nisha why are you standing there come and take Vasundhara ji's aashirvaad." Said dadi. Nisha felt like running away, everything was going to end very badly. Kabir where are you idiot? Please come, she thought. She went and took Vasundhara's aashirwaad. Vasundhara was confused very much, she gave ashirvad to Nisha but she looked up at the Gangwals and began.

I was not on a Badrinath yathra. And Kabir doesn't have a mamaji or mamiji. Kabir told this, didn't he? He must have been pulling a joke with you. I am sorry Mr Gangwal Kabir can go overboard with his childishness sometimes. He came to India without informing me. I have been worried sick. Wait till this boy shows his face, I am going to teach him a good lesson" Vasundhara said profusely apologizing for her son's mistakes. The Gangwals looked at each other confused. "Which wedding? This sweet girl's I suppose. You are Kabir's friend here aren't you? She asked. Nisha closed her eyes she felt that the entire world is crashing down on her. She ahd two choices lie again or come clean. She didn't know what to choose, Kabir where are you? Nisha thought.

"What do you mean Vasundhara ji? Kabir and Nisha's wedding. Nisha is Kabir's wife." Dadaji said astonished by Vasundhara's question.

"What do you mean Mr Gangwal? My son is not married. This is not possible." Vasundhara said getting up agitated. Nisha decided what was best, she couldn't take this anymore. Dadaji also stood up " Vasundharaji- he began but was cut off by Nisha.

"Please. Don't fight. I will explain everything. Auntyji I am Nisha and I am... I am Kabir's wife. Nisha closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Vasundhara stood rooted to the spot shocked. " But I am K- kabir's wife only f- for th- three months. Now it was time for the Gangwals to be shocked. Dadaji clutched his arm chair for support.

"NISHA...what are you saying?" Ramesh shouted.

Nisha cringed at this. She couldn't face her father. She didn't have the courage to look up at the face of her family members' faces but she continued with tears streaming down her face."The truth papa. Kabir and I have a con- contract marriage of th- three months. We...We didn't want to get married so we thought we could act like husband and wife for three months...and Kabir could try to act bad ...so that...so that when he leaves at the end of three months...no one ...no one will be sad but relieved that I got rid of him...B-but he was so good ...so good that he couldn't act bad..."

Nisha continued crying. "We didn't want to refuse you dadaji...didnt want to go against you...but we didn't want this marriage either." She looked at Vasundhara ji. "Auntyji ...Please don't be angry on Kabir...he was just...just trying to help me...our wedding accidently took place in a samuhik vivah samaroh while we were trying to save a child from some goons...he stayed because he didn't want me and my family to suffer...the whole community knew about our wedding." Nisha wiped her tears and tried looking up at her family. Everyone had the look of anger and hurt on their faces. Nisha was unable to hold their gazes. "Our marriage was a contract but - Lakshmi came up to hit Nisha but Vasundhara held her back. Nisha cried looking at her angry mother

"Why did you do this?" Lakshmi asked." What was the need? We told you a 100 times that marriage was no child's play. You did this for the family, didn't you? Look at your father. Look at your dadaji Nisha...look at your cousins who were with you in anything and everything. You betrayed all of us. You betrayed your family and you ruined your life." Nisha cried and looked at everyone.

Dadaji sat on the arm chair completely broken. Tears were on dadi's face and the cousins, they looked at her angrily, their eyes held hurt. Both of her tauji's were disappointed and Rupan taaiji's eyes held contempt. But she couldn't bear to look at her father's face, she just couldn't. Ramesh had tears in his eyes, but his tears didn't do justice to explain the hurt and betrayal he felt. Nisha had to explain that this marriage was never fake even though they thought of it so; she wanted to tell them that this marriage was anything but fake, for she couldn't bear the look they gave her. Nisha wiped her tears and began to tell the truth but she was interrupted by a voice.

"NISHA..." The next thing Nisha knew was that she was tackled by a hug. The person broke the hug and Nisha looked up to find Saurav.

"Are you ok?...oh god thank god...you are fine...what happened? Where is Kabir?" Saurav was oblivious to the surroundings as the delight of seeing his best friend alive took over everything. He continued with his questioning as everyone looked at him shocked. " Nisha ...did they hurt you ? where is Kabir? ...Why are you Silent? Say something. Nisha stood shocked and confused.

"Saurav..." Dadaji's voice sounded. Saurav suddenly became aware of the surroundings and he blushed as everyone looked at him strangely. "What are you saying?" Dadaji asked as calmly as possible.

Saurav looked at everyone, they all seemed unhappy for some reason and there was someone else with them too. "Nisha was kidnapped na? and Kabir saved her, but where is he ? Is he hurt?" Saurav asked. "What rubbish are you talking Saurav? Nisha asked angrily. Everything was already in such a mess and now Saurav is here with his craziness she thought. " Wait a minute, you were not kidnapped?" Saurav asked.

"No I was not... I came here from viraj sir's pent house." Vasundhara looked up at this but she brushed it off. Saurav looked at her bewildered as he realized the truth. "Oh no no no...everyone Kabir is in trouble."

"WHAT?" Nisha and Vasundara shouted together. Saurav recounted the story about the phone call. "I only heard the last words. I think they said they wanted Kabir to come to some place, otherwise they would kill you. Kabir just left to the place. They called from your phone I think" Nisha quickly took her bag and searched for the phone. Her hands shook and tears were falling from her eyes, she emptied the contents into the floor. Her phone was missing. She covered her face with her hands. Everyone was shocked by the turn of events. Vasundhara was crying, her son was in danger. The silence was broken by the ringing of the landline. Viren came forward and took the call,

"Gangwal house"

"Mr Gangwal...give the call to Mrs Nisha Kabir Kumar..." A man answered

"Who are you? "Viren asked

"Just give it to Mrs Kumar ...Mr gangwal otherwise the consequences..." the man said in a threatening tone." Its about her husband."

"What is it Viren?" Dadaji asked as he watched Viren's expression change.

"Someone wants to talk to Nisha" Nisha looked up. "It's about Kabir." Nisha literally ran towards the phone. Viren put it on speaker.

"Hello this is Nisha. Who are you? Where is Kabir?" Nisha asked her voice cracking.

"Mrs Kumar. How wonderful to hear from you. Your husband is indeed with us -" He was cut off by another voice.

"NISHAA..."

"Kabir ...KABIR..." Nisha was screaming.

"Do not listen to this dog. I am- AArgh "whatever he was going to say were drowned in his scream. Vasundhara gasped at her son's screams, she was crying uncontrollably now. Lakshmi caught her as she fell unconscious.

"NOOO...dont hurt him " Nisha screamed into the phone ..."Please... I'll do anything please don't hurt him."

"Now we are in agreement. There is nothing much to do. You just have to come to the market and follow some specific instructions we give you. You will find your phone outside. If you do that your husband will have a chance at life..and if you don't well...you can guess what will happen." The man said in a pleasant voice.

"No please don't hurt him...I will do anything " Nisha cried.

"NISHA...please don't do what they say...Please...you don't understand...these people ...Remember last night...please ...be safe...nothing will happen to me ... I promise- Aaargh" his words were cut off by his scream. Nisha was now crying badly. Every blow to him felt as if it were on her.

"The choice is yours Mrs Kumar...either do what we say and see your husband alive...or listen to your husband and see his dead body." The man said

" NOO...please" Nisha screamed

"To the Gangwals listening to the conversation, I hope you are not foolish enough to risk calling the police. Your daughter's and her husband's life is now in our hands. Mrs Kumar I hope you make a wise decision" The line went dead.




yay i updated earlier than usual...hope you guys enjoyed this...it took birth in the spurr of the moment...criticism welcomed gladly...i do take chappals and tamatar😆..

ps- hope you guys didnt find this melodramatic😆

pps- if you were reminded of the dialogue "inn kuthon ke saamne mat naachna basanthi..." while reading Kabir's dialogue, i assure you mine was original but i felt the same connection🤣



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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update👏. Continue soon and thanks for the pm
Edited by aarini - 10 years ago

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