OS collections:-4- Arjun-Vasu OS: Just a little love (5th post)17/6

Syahi thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#1
Collection of OSs...
because "no copy" works on the firstpage only and I don't want to waste 8 posts.😆

Index
-1- RL OS : Nothing I Won't Understand ( next post)
-2- RL OS: Perfect(2nd reply)
-3- Nemi-Saroj OS: Impasse (3rd reply)
-4- Arjun-Vasu OS: Just a little love(th reply)

Edited by -Saraswati- - 10 years ago


DO NOT COPY THIS POST AS THIS IS EXCLUSIVE TO INDIA FORUMS


Created

Last reply

Replies

25

Views

3.3k

Users

7

Likes

50

Frequent Posters

Syahi thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#2

A/N: This is after Ramesh left when Nisha was on the trip. Please ignore typos.

OS: Nothing I won't Understand

Lakshmi sat clutching Ramesh's letter to her chest. He had gone... Without telling her. Why didn't you tell me?

***24 years back***
Lakshmi settled in her room. She had just returned from college. She struck another day off on her table calendar. "One year, Lakshmi. We can be together after that. I need to do this." He had told her determinedly. " One year." She said to herself. Another 6 months. She sighed. Yes. He needed to do this.

"Aaah!" She jumped as she felt a hand on her shoulder.

"Lakshmi, relax me." Ramesh said, with his famous lopsided grin. Lakshmi burst into a fit ofgiggles. "You're going to get us into trouble some day, Ramesh."

She shifted to her bed and patted the bed, signalling him to sit next to her. He obeyed.
" It's just been six months.You were supposed to be away for another 6..." Lakshmi remarked. Ramesh sighed. "Let it be, I can't explain. You won't understand." Immediately, he felt her hand on his ear, twisting it mercilessly. " Ow-Ow-Ow! Whaaat?!" Ramesh complained. She placed her hands on her hips and glared at him. " I won't understand?! Huh? Well, in that case Mr. Ramesh Gangwal, you're going to have a hard time- because I won't rest till I do understand. You better make me!"

Ramesh lowered his head and smiled, his eyes shut. He was grateful to have someone who wanted to understand. Slowly, he proceeded to explain how he had not made much progress and Babuji had forced him to come back, branding him a failure. "Your parents will never accept me, Lakshmi. You deserve better." Ramesh concluded sadly. " Lakshmi placed her hand on his. " My parents know that you belong from a good family. They know that I love you. They also know that you are the only person who can handle my anxiety and absent mindedness. Better? We can become that. Your Babuji will also come around, he's just paranoid about your safety."

Ramesh looked at her in admiration , wondering if this would be the right time. " Lakshmi I don't have a ring with me but... Will you-?"

Lakshmi clapped her hands to her face, unable to believe her ears. Nervously, she took his hands into her own and curled one finger over his. The ring. He reciprocated. He had doubts. Would he ever be the man that she deserved? She smiled sensing his unease. "As long as your dream is alive, I'll be fine." Ramesh smiled back as he felt warmth engulf his being. How could he think she wouldn't understand?

***Present***

" I would have understood, Ramesh... Why didn't you make me understand?" Lakshmi wiped her tears as she read the letter again. She would have to be strong- for her children, for Nisha when she came back.

She folded the letter and placed it in her drawer. I'm waiting Ramesh. I will understand.

Edited by -Saraswati- - 10 years ago
Syahi thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
-2-
-Perfect-

"Women from good families don't go out to work"

"Your case is different,Lakshmi..."

Virender's words echoed in Ramesh ears. They had managed to convince Babuji for Nisha's job, yet these words haunted Ramesh.
As a sort of stress buster, he decided to prepare tea for his wife and himself.
Lakshmi looked happy for Nisha. probably, those words had no impact on her.
Maybe I'm reading too much into this...


"Ramesh are you all right?"Lakshmi asked as took a sip.
"Yes, Lakshmi. Just tired." He replied.
"Liar" She accused.
"Why would you say that?!" He asked feigning offence.
"Because you put vinegar in the tea." She giggled.
Ramesh slapped his palm to his forehead.
"Sorry!" he offered, holding his ear.

"What is it, Ramesh?"Lakshmi insisted.
"Don't you wish I earned more... so you wouldn't have to work?" he asked hesitantly.
"So you agree with bhai saheb? Women from good families don't go out to work, huh?"She countered.
"Lakshmi, relax me. I think you're the definition of a good woman. I just asked what you feel... If my inadequacy is a burden for you..." He explained.

"I like teaching Ramesh. You can never be a burden. How can you...?" Lakshmi asked, saddened by his self deprecation.

"Babuji, thinks I'm a liability." Ramesh said simply.

"No, he thinks that you're an asset that has sooo much potential." She said, holding her arms wide.

"I wish." He replied.

"It's true." She asserted.

"We're talking of Shri Nemichand Gangwal, not Shrimati Lakshmi Gangwal..." Ramesh said with a laugh.

She narrowed her eyes. "He doesn't think you're inadequate Ramesh. He just expects a lot from you. He would not have expectations if he thought you're no good." She said.

"Expectations that I'll never fulfil..." He mused.

"It's ok, Ramesh. You don't need to prove yourself to him. Maybe if you both stopped trying to bring the other around to your own point of view..."

Ramesh stared at her. Not happening here. Each having his own point of view? In this house?

As if reading his mind, she burst out laughing.
"Okay, okay. Let it be. But Never call yourself inadequate. You're the most perfect husband ever. Even if you give me vinegar-tea."

Ramesh got up to bring her another cup.
As long as she was on his team, he'd survive.

Edited by -Saraswati- - 10 years ago
Syahi thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
-3-
Impasse

"Why can't he be a singer?" Saroj meekly asked her husband. Nemichand glared at her. "Are you here to defend your son?"

Saroj's expression hardened. "My son? Well, if that's what you think... Then Rames was right in his decision to run away."

Nemichand stood up in indignation. " You have spoiled him. I never thought you'll go as far as supporting such outlandish, stupid,disrespectful ideas! You should have stopped him! God knows how he is managing... " Nemichand plopped back down on the bed. His anger gave way to helplessness. "He's not even 18..." He said trying to suppress the lump in his throat.

"You could have stopped him too. In fact, only you could have stopped him. For all his rebelliousness, he only cares about your approval or disapproval..."

Nemichand looked away. " What will people say?"

"The truth. That your son rebelled against you." Saroj said calmly.

"They'll say that a jeweller's son had to become a mere singer..." Nemichand argued.

"A charioteer's son became a warrior in the Mahabharata, SriKrishna became the charioteer...what is wrong with trying a different profession? You rebelled against your father to try your hand, and I came with you!" Saroj countered.

"I know, I know Saroj. Just imagine how Ramesh will go through all this alone. I got success with so much difficulty so that I could give my children a safe, comfortable life. He is again stepping out of that comfort. Everything I wanted to save him from..." Nemichand trailed off.

Saroj offered him a glass of water. Like every night since Ramesh left, they reached an impasse. Like all those nights she found herself torn between being the understanding mother and the practical wife. She couldn't deny that she was worried sick for Ramesh,too.

***

That night Nemichand had a nightmare of Ramesh singing on the roads begging for his next meal. He awoke with a start.
"I'm bringing him back, Saroj. I'd rather argue with him all my life than worry if he's alive. I'm bringing him back.





Edited by -Saraswati- - 10 years ago
Syahi thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
-4- Just a Little Love

"Here you go." He held out his handkerchief to the young, obviously depressed maiden.

"Thank you." She sniffed.

He smiled at her. "Arjun. Arjun S-... What's your name?"

"Vasundhara." She replied, wiping her tears. Suddenly, she asked, "Do you think I'm pretty?"

Arjun's eyebrows shot up. "Of course. Why would you even ask?"

"Is my voice annoying?" She pushed.

"No.No." He replied indignantly.

"Then why doesn't Ramesh love me?" She wailed.

Arjun lowered his eyes. "Because... He's stupid. You deserve better."

She looked at him fully now. "It is irrelevant what I deserve. I want him. Papa has fallen ill after hearing that Ramesh won't marry me."

Arjun smiled sadly.

***

*A few days later*

"Vasundhara, I know that you don't love me... But... That day when i saw you weeping in my palace grounds...I lost myself to you. I wanted you to smile... To be the reason for your smile...Will you allow me to love you? Will you marry me?"

"You're... Arjun Singh Rathore." Vasundhara asked in shock.

Arjun nodded.

"What about our families?" She asked worriedly.

"Shhh... I'll set everything right. I'm here for you. I want to be here for you all my life. Just say yes."

"Yes." Papa will be so happy to hear that I got a Prince. Maybe Ramesh will realise what he lost.

She hugged him. "Thank you Arjun. That's all I ever needed. A little love."





Edited by -Saraswati- - 10 years ago
Syahi thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Wow... Not a single comment... That bad? It would be nice if you told me that too... I wouldn't be left wondering...
Shwets1502 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Achiever Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Very good start 😊 RL's relationship is something that has a huge scope, and can be explored a lot. Waiting for the rest of the parts.
Syahi thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Thanks guys!😊

@Shwets1502 this isn't really a series... I'm planning to write something on Nisha next... regarding the Pilani incident. Will try to explore RL there too though.😊
Shwets1502 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Achiever Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Very nicely written. Hated that comment from Viren. I so wish RL's relationship is also explored.
Echo.of.Hope thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#10
the 2nd OS
vinegar in tea🤣
good touch.
well written👍🏼

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".