Nibir SS:The taste buds of love !!(CHAP 4 UPDATED ON PAGE 13) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Nikhad003

Plsss Updateee Sooon! totally rockinggg!

thank u soo much :)
Yes I will update as soon as possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ..krystal

nyc yaar.. its was not at all boring..

continue..👏

thank u so much ...i m glad u didn't feel my piece boring ;)
I will continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jojo1986

loved it update soon


thanku ...sure I will :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Heyyyooo ...
So no more bak bak now I'll directly start with my chap 3
Chap 3

The sun rise of the next morning was a new rise for kabir and nisha ...cause from today different tastes of love would be experienced by them ...care,possessiveness , jealousy and so ..
9 am
Nisha woke up to see her hubby sleeping peacefully ...looking at him a beautiful smile appeared on her face ...
9 30 am
Ni:kabir uth !! Tujhe dukaan jaana hai ..Uthna yaar ...it's already 9 :30 ...
Wake up yaar !!
K:(in sleep with eyes closed ?abbey yaar ..problem kya hai Teri ..sone de Mujhe ...
Ni: oyee duffer kitna soyega yaar
K:meine kaha tha na 11 baje se pehle mat uthana...aur sunn jaate jaate fan ka speed bada ke jaa..bahut garmi hai
Now nisha was really annoyed ...
She was frustrated at him ...
Now a mischievous idea clicked in her mind ...
She went out and came back in the room after 2 mins...kabir was sleeping on his stomach so she picked up kabir's tee from up and dumped all the ice she got from the freezer ...
Kabir screamed his lungs out ...and he was jumping as if springs were attached to his legs ...
Looking at his reaction nisha just couldn't stop laughing ...garmi lag rahi thi na tujhe ...ab tujhe bas thand hi lagegi hahaha
K:nish..a..ohh god..nish..a..
Ni:Hahahahahahahahahhaha
Finally wen all the ice cubes dropped ..
K:nisha ki Bachi ...tu kitni k hai yaar ..
Ni: aur tu mere k se kitna j haina...Hahahahahahahahahhaha
K:nishaaa (angry face )
Ni:awww ghussa aa raha hai ...awww ...hahahahhaa..
And she ran outside the room ...with kabir chasing her behind..
Ni:(running and looking behind) kabir himat hai toh Pakad ke Dikha..hahaha
While laughing she dashed into viraj ...and viraj held and prevented her from falling..
Viraj was looking at nisha and nisha's eyes were closed ...slowly she opened her eyes ...and as soon as she saw viraj ..she got away from his touch ...
This whole scene made kabir very uncomfy and somewhere down in him he was angry ..
V: isse zyaada meri morning achi nahi ho sakti thi miss nisha ...aap subah subah bahut achi lag rahi hai.
Ni:mr..
Kabir was now very angry and interrupted her..
K:good morning mr rathore...how r u .??btw mr rathore mera paas aapke liye ek question..aap meri dearest wife ko miss nisha kyun bulate hai...anyways it's MRS NISHA KABIR KUMAR ...okay ??
Without replying viraj left from there in anger ...
To avoid awkwardness...
Nisha went to the kitchen without speaking a word ...and kabir went to their room to get fresh ...

Ni:ek Kaam karti hu...pehle coffee or breakfast bana deti hu...kabir kaha reh Gaya ...saara Kaam thodi mein akele karungi ...
She starts walking towards her room but stops in between...
Ni:ek min ..kabir ko Waise bhi kal bahut lag Gaya tha...uske haath bhi jal Gaya hai ...Rehne de nisha ...aaj tu khud kar le ...
And she goes back to the kitchen..
While preparing coffee...she starts thinking about yest night's fall with kabir then today wen kabir said mrs nisha kabir kumar ..thinking about all this a small but a beautiful smile crept on nisha's face ..
Kabir came and saw that nisha was about the burn her finger..
K: wifey what are u doing ...(removing her hand) ...abhi lag jata tumhe ...
And they had an eye lock ...
Suddenly the bell rings ...
Ting - tong
Nisha and kabir comes out of the trance
Kabir opens the door and ...

To be continued ...

NOTE:
Guys I know show mein there is no new entry but in my ss I m planning to get a small character only to make one of them to feel strongly for the other (now who will get jealous and whose feelings with get strong for that u all have to wait :p )
So lemme noe ...should I do that or no ??!
Please lemme noe ...it's imp for me to know to update further..

Do like and comments ...sorry if u guys got bored ..
And critics are most welcome :))
Edited by P_shah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Yes you should totaaallly! and and and I LOVED THE LAST LINE WHEN KABIRA SAID 'TUMHE' to Nishu...yaaay! Tu se tum pe aa gayeee! :D lalalalala! Aur ek update bhi aaj hi do na? ye bohot chota tha :( loved it!
Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Yes ofcourse new entry ko aane de 😉

let me come to ur SS . I really wish u were the Cvs
Par koyi nehi . 😉
Ur update was awesome 👏👏👏
Continue sooon 😊
Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Nikhad003

Yes you should totaaallly! and and and I LOVED THE LAST LINE WHEN KABIRA SAID 'TUMHE' to Nishu...yaaay! Tu se tum pe aa gayeee! :D lalalalala! Aur ek update bhi aaj hi do na? ye bohot chota tha :( loved it!

nikhaddd thank u sooo much I loved ur comment ...and sorry I'll be able to give updates Chotu Chotu only and today not possible ...my exams are on that's why ...:((
But anyways thanks for ur comments ;) :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Stella324

Yes ofcourse new entry ko aane de 😉


</div>let me come to ur SS .
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I really wish u were the Cvs
Par koyi nehi . 😉

Ur update was awesome 👏👏👏

Continue sooon 😊

hahaha thanku sooo much ...tum sab buddies ke comments really inspires and encourages me to write mre ..thank u for liking it abii and yes I will continue soon ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update
Thnku for the pm

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