Nibir SS:The taste buds of love !!(CHAP 4 UPDATED ON PAGE 13)

Hey guys ...my name is Prerna ...and I m new to this forum ...it's just been a month since I have been active ,..
I have always been a silent reader here ...and so this I my first attempt to write something...I have planned to write a short story ...first of all I m a big fan of nibir ..so obvio this story is based on them ...

Its gonna be a very light hearted story ...it's just how I wanna see nibir in the show ...
It is on the current track basically .. after kabir got bunty back to the gf and it's all about kabir getting jealous and nisha supporting kabir and vice versa and with also kabir handling issues regarding viraj and lastly NIBIR ROMANCE (coz love is all about it :p )...so yaa I m gonna continue from here ...so should I ???


PS: I love critics soo they are welcome here ...
😉 😊



Index:
Chap 1- page 2
Chap 2-page 5
Chap 3-page 9
NOTE-page 11

hii prerna

Hai prerna..

Yes please

Sounds really very nice
Do continue dear 😊

Thank u soo much for ur comments .
Guys soo here is the first part of my ss...it's not a long one coz my exams are on ...I hope u guys like it ...I m pretty nervous ..
Anyways enough if talking here it goes...

Chap 1

So after the bunty getting back to the the family ...the gangwals are very very impressed by kabir ...and especially RN they are very touched by this act of kabir...but the person who is very disturbed but as well as proud because of all this is NISHA ...she is guilty , scared and disturbed ...
She is guilty because she called kabir selfish ..scared cause she is afraid of losing kabir and disturbed cause she is unable to understand her inner turmoil going on ...she was sooo concerned when kabir got hurt physically and emotionally in all this ..she was confused what's happening to her ...
When she saw kabir all hurt physically she felt as if she is hurt and she is feeling the pain ...at the same time she was very proud of kabir and very much grateful to him .

On the other hand kabir was very much thoughtful about all this ...
He was wondering why he felt good when nisha was holding his hand and caring for him when ...he was also wondering why did he not like when nisha was crying when he was hurt ...why can't he see her in tension or when she is sad ...
But little did kabir know that he can't hurt nisha or her family ...he was disturbed cause of wanting to be a bad damad but not hurting them emotionally ...he wants to go to London after three months but by not hurting them ...he was touched and guilty of the love and care showered by gangwals especially RN ...he was wondering what to do...

Soo many thoughts were going on in these two great minds while going back to their place ...

(Ni - nisha k: kabir)

Ni: you go to the room ,change your clothes and rest I'll get water and medicines for you ...
K nods and leaves ..(still in thoughts)
Ni to herself: I should say sorry to kabir ...I think I said too much that time ...he has always done soo much for me ...god ..sometimes I m just too rude ..

(Viraj is present but he is sleeping currently )

Nisha gets water and medicines for kabir but when she enters she sees kabir having difficulties removing his tee so she keeps the tray aside and goes to him ...

Ni: need help ??
K:no I m fine
Ni:shut up kabir ...lemme help u ...
Kabir doesn't budge about it and let's her help him ..
Nisha tries to removes the tee of kabir and while going to make him wear his other tee,to make the atmosphere light kabir says
K:wifey I know I m too hot to handle but control urself ...:p
and as usual nisha snaps at him and smiles ...
Looking her smile kabir felt warm and content within ...
While making him wear the tee ..
Ni: I m sorry kabir ...!!
K:why sorry !?
Ni: I didn't mean to say that ur selfish...it was just I was soo worried
tha..kabir interrupts and says
K:I know nisha that u were just worried for bunty ..yaa for that very moment I didn't like it but it's okay nisha I understand
Nisha was touched by kabir's words and randomly she just hugged kabir ...he was taken aback coz he didn't see this coming but he loved it and hugged her back ...


Damn !! That's it for now ...I know it went thoda sa long ...I m sorry if I have bored u guys ...I'll keep on trying my best ...
Sorry for any grammatical or spelling mistake ...do like an comment ...that would really encourage me :))
Ready to take shoes and tomatoes if anyone wants to throw on me :p

Nice part 😊
I really want something like this to happen in the show too

nice update prerna😊

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Nice part 😊
I really want something like this to happen in the show too

I m glad u liked it :)

Lovely start to ur story