Nibir SS:The taste buds of love !!(CHAP 4 UPDATED ON PAGE 13) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
awwwh this one is nicey dicey!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Stella324

first of all , ur update isawesomeand coolio 😉😳

second of all this is not at all a boring update 😉

pls continue soon with a long update😳

ur doing a great job 👍🏼

thanku soo much :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chahanya

Nice right from the inner thought of NiBir to the very end where she helps him and their conversation

Good want this to happen in the show


BTW why was VSR asleep??? Next time please unhe nini nahi karwa dena He should be awake😈

hahaha thanku ...anyways he was sleeping because he was exhausted mourning and crying ...anyways in the next update there will be a Chotu sa part of his ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: amfi123

added u in the writers club !!

thanku sooo much amfi ...I am really overwhelmed :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .MysticalWaters

Lovely story.
I liked it alot.
Continue soon.

thanku soo much ...yes I will continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanku sooo much guys ...I m really very happy that u guys liked my ss ...I truly appreciate it ...
Thanks once again :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys I m so thrilled and overwhelmed by ur comments ..seriously !! Thank u soo much for ur love ...I'll try updating everyday ...
Anyways coming back to my ss

Here it is ...

Chap 2

Nisha and kabir were soo content while hugging ,they felt complete.

Well they already had their dinner at gh ...while nisha was keeping the pillows in the centre..kabir enters,sneaks and goes besides her, side hug's and starts speaking in nisha's ears ...(sensuously but teasingly says)
k:when u have already started acting like a wife ,started taking care of me soo much ..I think u should fulfill other duties of a wife too ..u know like to satisfy my other needs (winks and smiles naughtily)

As soon as kabir says all that nisha faces kabir and they have an eye lock and the distance between their faces is disappearing slowly..they are so close they can feel each other's breath ... And suddenly he is HIT hard by a pillow ...and that's done by none other than our ladaakuviman nisha ...she starts hitting him madly with pillows ...and starts scolding and running behind kabir.
As usual our tom i.e nisha is chasing our jerry all around the house with her chappal in her hand ...kabir was just running as if trying to save his life ...he looked really scared as if nisha would just eat him up :p
Ni: kabir ke bachhe tujhe toh aaj mein chodungi nahi
K:aree nisha mein Mazak kar raha tha yaar ...
Ni:Mazak?? Teri Mazak ki toh mein ...and throws that chapal on his face but it doesn't hit kabir ,Infact it hits the jug of water and the water is spilled on the floor all over and kabir is just laughing like crazy ...and the second round of chasing just starts and then kabir slips (coz of the water) ...now it was nisha's time to laugh and she was laughing like crazy ...kabir was mesmerised seeing her laugh so heartedly ..an then comes out of his trance ..
K:ab Mujhe help toh kar ..
Ni:kyun karu help ??
U deserve it!!
K:aree Mujhe lagi hai yaar nisha pehle se
Ni:acha Theek hai ..
Gives her hand to get him up but instead kabir just pulls her and she falls on him ...they laugh like crazy and then have a very intense eye lock ..

This whole scene was witnessed by viraj ...he woke up coz of the noise made by our tom and jerry
Looking at nisha over kabir he was just boiling with anger and jealousy...
(V:viraj)
V: (talks to himself )nahi miss nisha hum haar nahi maanenge chahe Kuch bhi hojaye ..himari kismat ne humse Sabkuch le liya even daadji par hum aapko humse dur nahi hone denge ..ye hamaara Vaada hai apse bhi aur hum se bhi ..

He purposely makes some noise ,nibir comes out of the trance and gets up ..realisation strikes upon them about the position they were in ..nisha goes back to the room and kabir follows her in .

Nisha goes to the bathroom
Stands under the shower ...and thinks ..
Ni: ye Mujhe kya hogaya tha ...jab mein kabir ke Itne karib thi toh Mujhe dur jaane ka mann kyun nahi hua ...nahi nisha kabir sirf aur sirf 3months ke liye saath hai ..tujhe usse dur Rehna hoga ...

There outside the bathroom in their room ...kabir was just walking from one corner to another in tension and was just saying ..
K: dude dude dude! Tu yeh kya kar raha hai ...dur reh usse ..par kaise dur rahu...I just feel soo attracted to her ...kya Mujhe uske liye Kuch feel...nahi nahi ...bas kal se no touching her no eye lock just remember ur dream kabir that is London ...haan bas ..

He hears the bathroom's knob opening and jumps on the bed and acts as if he is sleeping ...
Here nisha looking at kabir ...and says in low voice
Ni:he slept already ?! How come ??anyways ..it's good ..even I should sleep ..
Both are lying down on the bed facing the other way and thinking about what all happened today and to stay away from each other ...
But what did they know what's going to happen the very next day everything will change ..both will go through new tastes of love after all the destiny wants them together and so it will play it's trick to get them close day by day 😃

Please bear with me :p tried my best ...I love going into each and every detail ..sorry if I have bored ull..suggestions and critics are very most welcome ...would love to know and improve upon ...😃
Chapals and tomatoes and even eggs, ull can start to throw ;)
Edited by P_shah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
the emotions you up shown through them is just awesome very realistic.👏
i wish i had the power to make you the cv of nauc yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

This is coolio yaar !!! so realistic !

Bravo 👏👏
Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Welcome to the forum prerna..
Wow..I wish this happens between Nibir next week..!!!
I am eagerly waiting for ur next part..!!!!
😛

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