||NIRAJ SS : i'm moving on!|| updated *16-4-15* pg 17 ~completed~ - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

I will update evening tak 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 3

'Ma'.., his voice were trembling as he said 'MA' in front of his mom after ages! he felt the whole body getting goosebumps.. beta aap muje ma.. viraj interrupted her.. hum "viraj singh rathod' hai ma aapka raja beta. he said with weak smile having tears in his eyes..

vasundhara was surprised and shattered hearing this , her heart was aching , she was filled with guilt.. i couldn't recognise my child..her inner voice was killing her with questions. she was broken..
Mera raja beta she had tears in her eyes..
she came a step forward and surprising viraj moved a step back..
everybody in GH were surprised they were confused by the happening there.. they all were silent for some time..


M.. he was suppose to say Ma again but he corrected himself mrs. vasundhara ji hmmm with a smile he said, aap tho apke bete kabir ke baat jaise humme bhul hi gayi.. vo raja beta tho ab apka beta hi na raha hai na ?? mentally n physically everything was aching him..
he turned towards the gangwal members n said..
ji ye dekhiye ye rahi humari.. he stopped n said aap sab ko pata hai..
he sat down on the couch with a pat hands on his head he was pulling his hairs he dint know where to show his frustration.. he cried.


everyone in GH were feeling pity for viraj.. nisha was totally broken she wanted to go him n say she was still in love with him..
ramesh and laxmi cud understand his state of mind they wanted to console him.. but none of them wanted to go at that particular time.
vasundhara started crying , kabir was trying to console her..
beta beta mujse baat karo mera raja me tume samjati hun ki kya hua.. she said crying..


viraj stood up and said , sorry mrs. vasundhara ji par ab se aapka ek hi beta hoga aur vo hai kabir waise bhi aap hume bhul chuki hai.
aap sab ko tho ab bhi hum hi villain lagte honge..
he opened his bag n took a bundle of those letters which he had been writing from the time his mom left him..
ye lijiye.. he handed over them to her and said , agar aapke paas thoda bhi waqt hoga tho zaroor isse padiyega aur agar nahi padna ho tho padkar phek dena..
hum pagal lag rahe hoge par me bata deta hun sabko ye hai vo kath jo hum bachpan se apni ma ke liye likte aarahe hai ye sochkar ki vo kabhi na kabhi humare paas aayegi.. par ofsos vo tho hume pehechan tak nahi paayi..
ek ma apne pass na hone ka dhuk sirf hum samajte hai. he dint cry now but he was now strong enough to face everything in his life that his fate bought for him!..


aap jab chodkar gayi thi ek bar hume bata deti itne saal tak hum aapka intazar nahi karte rahe honge. kabir tumne kaha na humre ander bhi ek bache wali muskurahat hogi aur usse hum bahar laye.. ahhaa with a deep breath he said vo muskurahat tho humri ma unni ke sath le gayi jab vo humme chodkar gayi..
jis insaan ne vo muskurahat wapiz layi.. he looked at nisha .. kismat ne wapiz unne humse chen li.. vo kya hai na hum kisse bhi pyaar kare vo humse dur zaroor jate hai.. he said with a smile leaving everybody teary in GH!
Edited by Gautamyagya04 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
yay.. first to comment
it's awesome and emotional
continue soon..😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Your Each n everyone word is penned from Heart
I am speechless
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
very touching bhagya 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
awsmmm yaar bhagya!!
could feel each n every emotion of viru😭😭
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
again an awesome no words to express wala os.its awsome everyones emotion is well written loved it.eagerly waiting what will happen next but felt for viraj.
and also thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
very heart touching...aap ne to muje rula diya😭😭😭...plzzz jaldi se viru ko happy kardo
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Emotional one yr😭😭, pls continue soon waiting for next part.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
lack of words...to praise it!!
you have written each and every sentence of his filled with so much emotions!!
seriously i am crying...

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