NiBir TS- together forever(part8 updated pg18) -Note on Pg 21

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Nikhad003

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

WowowowowoowoooW...tweeetyyy *_* abhi hoga NiBir jalwa hahaha :P

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Sorry guys editing mein error hogaya 😭
I will correct it tomorrow as I'm very sleepy now 😉

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Amina...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

This is not done , you updated the part after sooo many days and such a small one...this is really not done 😭 ...But anyways, this part was really nice ...especially the way Nisha replied Viraj was awesome...that made me very very happy, i really want Nisha to reply Viraj like this in serial as well...hope my wish comes true...and sorry for my rudness,as i like your story very much and i wait for the updates...plz plz plz update the next part sooon...and it should be a long one...plz 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: amfi123
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Amfi yaar u have opened awesome ki dukhan and I'm blushing here ☺️

Thank u 😳

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-abz-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A
This is not done , you updated the part after sooo many days and such a small one...this is really not done 😭 ...But anyways, this part was really nice ...especially the way Nisha replied Viraj was awesome...that made me very very happy, i really want Nisha to reply Viraj like this in serial as well...hope my wish comes true...and sorry for my rudness,as i like your story very much and i wait for the updates...plz plz plz update the next part sooon...and it should be a long one...plz 😊

ohhh sorry my angel

I make a longer one next and will update it soon 😳

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-abz-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

part 6

Kabir was just looking at Nisha's care and serenity towards him . If someone else would have noticed him ,that person would definitely tell that this man was totally in love with Nisha . It was now impossible for him to say no to this feeling . Her radiance has dazzled him forever and her purity has made him rise in love . He was first beguiled towards her innocent yet manly behavior and then love had to happen .

He didn't know how , where and when this thing happened to him .When he broke down it was her warmth that made him feel comfortable and protected from the cold nature of others , When he was happy it was her ever radiant alluring smile which made him complete in the celebration . When he was angry , her magnetizing eye cooled down the lava that erupted in him . When he tried to get naughty it was her beautiful blush which made him tantalize more towards her . He was so full of her . Nisha was the only one who understood the even more beautiful Kabir inside this fun loving one . Nisha accepted Kabir the way he was .She stood up for him against the whole world just to bring a smile on his face .

The same did go for Nisha . Kabir always stood for Nisha , accepted her , supported her and what not . Nisha's world was revolving around Kabir and it will . A small smile in Nisha's face brought thousands of happiness to him .Nisha was enamoured by the way Kabir cared for her . Small tear from her eye would give him much more pain than a cut wound could give . Their endearment towards each other is not too much compassionate but it is pure, complete and heavenly . Their rubbish fights where needed for them to survive . Their craziness are the rhythm of their veins . It is like salt in food ,very much needed for them . Nisha came out of her trance and noticed Kabir still thinking of something . "What are you thinking about ?" Nisha asked him . "Hmmm Nothing " Kabir said trying to divert the topic . "Well I'll finish with preparing the dinner ." Nisha said moving towards the kitchen .

Kabir nodded his head in a positive sign and moved towards the balcony of their bedroom . Kabir and Nisha had shifted to new apartment just a month ago . He somehow collected the money from sessions of his partial academy course which he withdrew and then earnings from the jewellery shop and some sessions of photography . Nisha also joined for a part time job and somehow they managed to save money and buy the new apartment . Afterwards Kabir got selected for a dance competition and won it . With that money they brought new households and other stuffs . Then Kabir had to face more troubles due to his brother and mother which he didn't want to think of .

Kabir went towards the balcony which had two seated swing , a small coffee table along with some potted plants . It was simple yet elegant which both of them loved .

They were living at the fourth floor , the view from the balcony was delightful making the city visible with lights and stars shining bright at the sky . Kabir got reminded of setting up this memory filled balcony .

Flash back

"Nisha not that one yaar it looks awful " "Then what should I do ? should I set up a bed here ? " "nice idea yaar ...we can watch the stars and sleep !" "Are u kidding me kabir ?" "No I'm not ,I'm serious for the first time ! " "Then it's a bad idea I'm telling u ! what if our neighbour see us ? " "so what ...they'll think we are making love ! " Kabir said leaning towards her . Nisha's eyes popped . "NO! now it's a very bad idea " she said . "If not bed then what ? " he asked .

"Hmm a small coffee table where we can sit and talk ? " Nisha said with excitement . "impressive " he said ."You are smarter than what I thought of "he said teasingly . "I have more potential " Nisha said with a smirk . "really? let me see" he said coming closer to her and she came closer and Nisha started tickling him "stop it Nisha ..." he said trying to stop laughing . after a session of fun and excitement , an idea stroke their mind .

"A swing " they both said together which made both of them smile . Then Nisha hanged money plant on the arch of the balcony and potted some rose and daisies and other plants which NiBir loved . They kept a vase in which they would fix the blossomed flowers .

"Kabir " Nisha called which pulled Kabir out of his trance and the flash back got over . Kabir was sitting on the swing and Nisha accompanied him with two plates of noodles as it was simple and can be made easily . "So wanting some time with me ? " Kabir questioned her with an evil smile seeing the noodles . "Hmmm " Nisha said with a shy smile .

"How was ur day ? u didn't tell me ? " Nisha asked him . "may be u didn't hear me properly " Kabir said . "What ??" Nisha asked with a confused tone . "well I already told u !" kabir said with a smrik . "common Kabir" Nisha said giving it up . Then Kabir explained about his job and the offers he had signed . Nisha happily smiled and hugged him . "Well Mrs K tomrrow is Sunday do u remember ? " Kabir said with desperation . "hmmm" Nisha said . "what hmmm?" Kabir asked coming close to her .

"Woh dekho shooting star !" Nisha exclaimed with happiness . "lets make a wish ! " Nisha said , Both closed their eyes making a wish of staying together forever . Nisha and Kabir were talking for a lot of time and then slowly Nisha dosed off in his arms . Kabir gently lifted her and placed her on the bed

Part 7 is up 😉

Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago

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Prerna

@P_shah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Woohoo that's amazing
I loved it
And thanx for the pm abi

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Amina...

@Amina...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

this was ssooo beautiful 👏...just loved it...update the next part soon...

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sonal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

abi m angry with u😡

u dint pm me na last update ke liye😭

read both the parts

awesome parts

nibir and their sweet romantic life

nibir the perfect couple❤️

thanks 4 the pm continue soon

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-abz-

@-abz-

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: SONAL30
abi m angry with u😡
u dint pm me na last update ke liye😭
read both the parts
awesome parts
nibir and their sweet romantic life
nibir the perfect couple❤️
thanks 4 the pm continue soon

Sorry Sonu 😭
Muaff karde !
I'll surely pm u next tym

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