NiBir TS- together forever(part8 updated pg18) -Note on Pg 21 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am in loooveee with ittt :D amazing amazing amazing my lovely girrrl! :*
Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Pm me when u update plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2...
It was 15mins past six when these new found love couple broke their hug . "Kabir I know u are in trouble ryt now . But trust me Kabir this will soon vanish ." Nisha tried to give him energy by speaking up these ."I'm the most luckiest person Nisha , to have u . U are the only one who didn't leave me in this toughest time of my life ".
He said . "In that case I will never leave u for this whole life time " she said holding his hand and taking him back to the car . Nisha drove the car again .
Now Kabir was sure that he will win the battle as his support system was strong . He had Nisha with him . Nothing can break them now . But had a very strange feeling of guilt puddled in him . He was still confused about how will this turn . He had fear of being broken down again with more unknown secrets . It is such a disappointment for a positive person like him to turn into confusion . He was a human after all . He has to learn to face problems and its consequences .
The car stopped again but not at their house . He was again amused and excited to see the new surprise waiting for him . He came out and the sight made him dumbstruck . It was nahargarh fort. A very tall constructed castle kind fort . "Lets climb" Nisha said with excitement . "what ?" Kabir questioned with surprise . "Not another quiz game!" his adventurous wife exclaimed. "Trusted me it will be fun " she added and offered her hand .
Kabir without saying anything just hold her hand . They were climbing the Fort . It was for the first time they both did something adventurous after the Chandu fiasco . They were ready for facing hurdles as they were together now . They can fight anything .
They reached the wall side of the castle . They gave a high five and were panting . The entire city was visible . It was just seven fifteen and the day seemed to expect rain . The clouds gathered made the scenery look even more beautiful .
"Don't worry about any hurdles Kabir . Nothing can break us down as I have no more secrets with me . " she said and built the level of trust into a higher level. " I trust u more than my life Nisha " he said proudly . "But..." he said with confusion . "But u cant grip out the incident feom your head right" said Nisha completing his sentence .
"Scream Kabir " she advised . "What?" he asked again . "Yes Kabir scream ur heart , shout loudly whatever u want." she said . Kabir was silent .He was confused should he do or not . He kept on thinking for a while .
Then the thought of trusting his wife came . Just now he said he trusted her . Yes he had to do . " I DONT CARE ..." he shouted ."I AM NOT WRONG ...I WILL ALWAYS STAND UP FOR THE RIGHT . " he spoke out . "I DONT NEED TO CHANGE ... I AM MYSLEF " he blurted his heart out .
He was quite again . But he was relieved . That puddled pain just vanished . He felt the blocked dam of heart burst open quenching the thirst of the draught . He smiled at last he smiled deep from his heart .He felt nothing can go wrong at all . Ofcourse nothing was wrong it was all the situation .
He smiled looking at his Nisha . Just hugged her . "I Love You Nisha , I Love the every single moment spent with you . God I just Love u " said with tears of happiness flowing out . "I Love you Too " said the jungle billi biwi of Kabir . She knew how to handle Kabir as he was hers . Not anyone else's.
Kabir had a lots of thoughts in that fraction of seconds .That of kissing her , having kids with her , fighting with her , troubling her in making a decent cup of coffee . Dancing with her . Making her all his . He forgot about what haunted him .He just didn't want this moment to go off . He wanted them to be in love together and forever
guys if u want I can make it into three shots also - TS 😉
what say ??
Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Abi do continue dear. Make it a short story n gv us few mre chapters of nibir heaven! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice part abi
and of course dear yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai
continue it dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
sure sweety 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Yes! Yes! Please continue!! I want a proper closure of Kabir's life with Nisha! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice story yaar...
please continue ... 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Amazing part...loved it... Thanks for pm...do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
it was lovely dear..would love it to become a three shot or even better and SS 😊

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