NiBir and Cousins -SS(part 10updated pg 14) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nice one... :) Update soon.. ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start Abi. Liked it...
Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is epiiic...totalllyyy! madly in love with this!! pls cont soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

As Kabir and Sukku leaves , something makes Kabir turn back and look at Nisha . Nisha also waits for him to turn back .They share a cute eyelock .Kabir nods his head giving her a positive sign and Nisha smiles and moves inside . Sukku peeps into Jiya's house and Jiya notices him and smiles Kabir notices that !
In the car
Kabir : Tu tho bada hero nikle yaar itni jaldi yeh sab bhi ...
Sukku : Nehi wo sirf meri friend hai , jaldi kya hai issme (he makes a hiding face)
Kabir : yeh kya bol raha hai tu ? mein tera driving ke baat kar raha tha (smirks)
Sukku(gets embarrassed ): oh haan sheekli meine driving (smiles)
Kabir : waise dil garden garden hogaya hoga na tujhe aaj raat ko thumse milne keh liye kaha hai na unhon ne
Sukku : aisa kuch nehi hai (gives a blank look)
Kabir : are bill pay kiye bina kaise chodo ge usse ? (smiles)
Sukku : bill ? kya bill ? mein aisa nehi hoon
Kabir : Tumpe Father India ka bhoot aaya hai kya ? gold set ke liye bill pay kiye bina chod do ge ? aisa ho ga to Rajasthan ka whole population tumhare dhukan se hi jewellery kharedenge dekh lena (smiles again)
Sukku : Haan ? whom r u talking about ?
Kabir : Customer aur kon ? Umesh ne bataya
Sukku : kya ? Umesh ne sab batadiya ?... To himself : umesh apna moo band nehi kar saktha hai kya ?
Kabir : relax ... sirf bill lena hai pay nehi karna hai
Sukku : le aagaya tera I mean aapka office aagya
Kabir : thanx saale
Sukku : isska matlab hai umesh ne kuch bataya nehi
Kabir reaches his cabin , he is working as a photographer in a news channel . . He is a very talented and professional photographer . The news channel demanded for a photographer like him . After many tries he got this job in here. It is his part time job .
After working with a project for few hours he gets a call from Umesh
Kabir : Hello... Bade saale sahib
Umesh : Hello gaya bhaad mein
Kabir : kyun ? Aman bhabi ne aapko phir se frying pan se maara kya ? (smiles)
Umesh : Aise hi chalta rahe ga tho wahi hona wala hai
Kabir : Kya good news mili hai
Umesha : please mere madat kar yaar
Kabir : kya hua ?
Umesh : wo customer jise Sukku milne wala hai who Jiya ke papa hai
Kabir : Kya ? wo Sukku ka sasur tha ? Kya baat hai issiliye wo unhe bina paise khi gehna beejna chahta hai
Umesh : Abbe ...poori kahani sunn tho le ? unho ne Sukku ke bhare mein poocha tha , usse pehle wo bhag gaya ! (keeping an irritated expression)
Kabir : Unke beti ke saath ?
Umesh : Nehi ! Unn se bachne ke liye ! Because he sent some letters to Jiya and her father read it !
Kabir : aur wo bol raha tha ki wo sirf uske dost hai ! Goochu !
Umesh : phir pata hai kya hua ? wo uncle jagda karne ke liye aagaya , I had no options but to give one small kangan ! phir bhi chup nehi ho raha tha
to bunty ne uske pair philsal wadiya and Aman saw that !
Kabir : Yeh sab tumhare saath hi kyun hota hai ?
Umesh : meine Sukku ko bacchayaa ! wo bada aadmi lag raha tha hope koyi problem na ho ! itna gusse mein chala gaya tha papa dekhe the usse !
Kabir : mein iss wakt kuch nehi keh sakta hoon dekh the hai
Umesh : Tum pls mere madat karna ! mein uss Sukku ko subhe se dhoond raha hoon kayi dikhai nehi deh raha hai paagal kahi ka !
Kabir : tho yeh tha drama issiliye mujhepe itna pyaar aaya usse !
Umesh |: Kya ?
Kabir : ussne mujhe drop karne ke liye aaya tha !
Umesh : Kya ? wo phir jiya ko ... aane do usse mein na usska haddi thod doonga
Kabir : Jo nehi kar saktha hai usske bhare mein mat bolna !
Aman : Umesh ab dhukan nehi jaana hai kya ? ab tumhe mein khud waha tak chood aaoon ?
Kabir : Good luck
Umesh cuts the phone
AT Gangwal house
Aman : yeh lo kirti tumhari green tea
Kirti : Thanx bhabhi , ireally need this mere sar bohat dukh raha hai
Jwala : Dard aapko nehi mujhe ho raha hai pichle ek ghante se whai bolke mera dimag ko kharab kar rahi ho !
Kirti: How blah ! tujhe apni behen ka khaddar karna nehi aata hai na
Aman : Khadar ke bhare mein mat pooch Umesh aaj kal mujhe bhool gaya hai humesha mujhe uske aage peche jaana padtha hai !
Kirti : Oh bhabhi , har mard aise hi hote hai , pehle pata the hai phir hume bhool jaate hai
Aman : Kya ? Mera laddo aisa nehi karega mujhe pata hai !
Kirti : Bhabhi wo bhas humse attention chaate hai ,! issilye hume unke aage peeche gumate hai !
Jwala : Bhabhi aap isski mat suniye , Umesh bhaiyya aisa nehi karenge mujhe pata hai
Kirti : tujhe kaise pata tujhe kisi se crush hua hai ? Nehi na ! to mujhe yeh sab mein experience hai
Aman : tu theek keh rahi hai kirti aisa hi kuch hai
Sorry guys no Nibir in this part
But surely in next part😉
I'll update part 3 soon
Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
very nice. loved the bonding between cousins and kabir.do continue very soon.eagerly waiting 4 part3.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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too funny and cute update dear ...i have read both the parts atleast 3 times 😆..they are too good really 😳👏⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update! I really luv SuKa scenes thy r hilarious together! N here our sirf sukethu has love life locha, eh? Hehe interesting!
PS: plz pm me wen u update dear n yeah do ad pg number of the latest update in the title too. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice part!!
Kabir umesh convo was funny
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well done! 👍🏼

Specially I'd love a love track of Sukku and that ladki next door. Specially if Nisha suspects Kabir to have the affair with that girl. Pitai to jaroor hogi-------with that love too.😆

Later Suku and the girl may get together or not. Doesn't matter. But if all the married cosuins start suspecting an affair with that girl and their hubbys-----it'll be an awesome idea. 🤣

Your story sounds more interesting than a desperate brother vs brother fight for a tomboy girl-----------kaun paya kaun khoya ------🥺 .Saas ka naam Gaya. 🤪
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
nice SS..loved the first part..cute NiBir scene!!

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