NiBiR SS-Only You Can Heal Me.....AUTHOR'S NOTE-PAGE 16 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

off topic...
but loved ur edit on nibir...😳
r u on instagram??? Is it ur edit??? There is a contest between nibirians n nirajians... If on insta do participate plzzz if not then can i post on ur behalf giving u credit??? Plzzz do reply or pm me about this... I request

Hey...
I'm not in Instagram dear u can definitely post this edit by ur own no need to ask...any thing for nibir
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awwwh! I just can not believe...I am getting such reponses...and I can not stop doing awww awwwh...

I WILL UPDATE TONIGHT THE LAST PART...as I wanted to end it before Nibir marriage happens...Will come up with a OS after Nibir marriage...and then in future many more stories hopefully ^_^
Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago
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Okkkay guys! Here comes the 5th part and yes THE LAST PART of this SS...I just want to say it was an amazing journey with this story...and the love which I got from you people is just incredible...Let me know today as it is the last part, how was your journey with this SS...memories <3...

PART 5...(Last One)...

After 15 Days!
Kabir was much better now...His poxes had dried up and the dried skin were coming off getting replaced by the new one...Kabir was so happy to get his life back as normal again...But than him maybe someone was there who was more happy...Who that is? Nisha, Kabir's wifey, who else!

It was the afternoon time...Nisha was taking out Kabiraa's clothes from the cupboard because Kabir was going for a bath...Suddenly Laxmi came with a bowl of Neem Leaf's paste...and said
Laxmi: Nisha, apply it on the whole body of Kabir, where he had poxes...As it works as a antiseptic...every person who comes out of pox, just then needs to apply it on the body and after that should take a shower...
Nisha: *surprised and in a hesitated way* Maa, Kabir can apply it on himself...give him that...
Kabir: Noh, maa come on...how can I do it all? What about back? Nisha at least should help me...right maa?
Nisha: *disgusted but somewhere deep inside blushing* Will you keep quiet Kabir?
Laxmi: What keep quiet Nishu? You are his wife...If you won't do it so who will? And yeah help him in taking shower also...so that this paste gets clean totally otherwise he will face problems!
Laxmi gave the bowl to Nisha and left...now Nisha wanted Kabir to be all right also but she was hesitating...
Kabir: Oh madam? Where are you lost?? *poking her nose*
Nisha: Sit there you idiot...and show me your back...
Kabir: Hoooaaw! Naughty naughty hmm wifey?? *Naughty sarcastic looks*
Nisha: Uff! Okay...I am going just do it yourself *irritated*
Kabir: Arey No No, Do it...*romantic look*
Nisha blushed looking his romantic eyes...Kabir took off his tee shirt...and Nisha applied the paste on the back...and gave the bowl to Kabir and said go to the washroom and apply it everywhere else...I will come back with a towel...saying this, she almost ran away from there...Kabir smiled seeing her blushing and running away!
When Nisha came back with a towel he found Kabir only wearing his shorts...Nisha's breathe almost got stopped..

Nisha: What is it Kabir? Why are you roaming around in the room like this?
Kabir: Come on, wifey I was waiting for you...I had to take off my clothes in the bathroom so I thought why not now...
Nisha looked away trying to hide the shyness...
Nisha: What would I do with you in shower?
Kabir: What maa said you hear, na?
Nisha: Over acting will be bad, for both of us...
Kabir: It is for my good...think once Nisha...
Nisha and Kabir had an arguement for sometime that really did Kabir need her in shower? Nisha tried a lot...but Kabir was always the game winner as usal...Nisha had no way than going with him in the washroom...

Kabir got into the shower zone and let the water came in and just then Nisha was heavily blushing seeing him so hot underneath the shower...that too with her...Kabir turned the other side...and told Nisha to clean out the paste from his back...They both were getting wet...Nisha just looked away and started cleaning his back...Nisha was feeling thousand butterflies in her stomach...Suddenly after cleaning his back Kabir turned around and took Nisha in his arms tightly...They were looking at each other without blinking eyes...They saw it in there eyes what they meant to each other...Nisha blushed and looked down...They both were totally wet...Kabir felt like Nisha was the only beautiful girl he has ever seen in his life...He lifted Nisha's chin a bit and smiled with very much love and romance in it...Nisha could not take it anymore...and she freed herself and tried to ran away but Kabir caught her from back and again took her in his arms...
Nisha: Leave me Kabir...*blushing heavily*
Kabir: Why? Am I doing something wrong? *whispering in her ear*
Nisha just felt like she might fall down from the 30th floor of a building...she looked down and smiled getting all red...Kabir seeing this...slowly placed a kiss on her neck from back...This was enough for Nisha not being able to get a grip on herself...She just turned around and hugged Kabir tightly breathing really fast...Kabir hugged her with the same passion...After sometime they broke the hug and kept staring at each other...They both did not need to speak...they knew their sign language of eyes very well...Kabir and Nisha were coming closer with every passing second...Their lips were just about to met...When Kirti came in the room and called out for Nisha!

Kirti: Nishu?? Where are you? *Realising where Nibir were* Oho! Oopps taking shower together and all haan? Slow down guys, do not worry, I am going..just give the coconut water to Kabir, Nishu! Laxmi chachi said he needs it!...
Kirti left

After Kirti left, Nisha just somehow freed herself and came out of the bathroom and locked Kabir inside...
Kabir: Aeeay! What are you doing Wifey?? *surprised*
Nisha: Let me change my clothes...and you change your there...
Kabir: Oh that...we could do it together also..
Nisha: Change clothes kabir *tries to end the topic, blushing*

After some moments when Nisha changed her dress completely, she opened the door of the washroom and Kabir came out! Nisha just did not know how to face him...so she said
Nisha: The coconut water is there on the side table...drink it! *she almost ran away to the other side of the bed and started folding Kabir's messed up clothes on bed!
Kabir: *sitting on the bed and taking the glass on his hand from the side table* The room is getting more pink and red with every single minute..I guess someone is blushing too much...But if someone loves someone here, she will take at least one sip from his glass...easy way to confess I guess!
Nisha smiled hearing this and continued her work...
Kabir: Okay the last sip is left...*sad face* No one loves me then!
After a while when still Nisha did not come to take a sip..with heavy heart and nervousness Kabir said
Kabir: Okay let me finish it then...
He was just about to take the last sip when Nisha finally came running to him took the glass from him, sat on bed and took the sip! Kabir hugged her so tightly!

Kabir: Was it that difficult to say wifey?
Nisha: *Hugging him tightly too* Yeah for a girl it is!
Kabir: So you are girl?
Nisha: Shut up...
Kabir: I love you Nisha, I love you a lot!
Nisha: I love you a lot too hubby!
Kabir: aww my wifey...*Kabir broke the hug* By the way what is it? I felt something on you arm...let me check
Nisha: Where?
Kabir took the arm of Nisha and what they both saw made them scream together just one word!

"CHICKEN POX??!!!"

...
This Journey Ends here!
Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Wow👏👏👏
loved it. with the last word, we will just need to reverse the roles.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Haayyye... What a sweet romantic update!!😊
I could imagine every close moment of theirs ☺️... And the new way of confession was so sweet!!!
Loved it...❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
awww...that was just sooo cant believe it has to end...but den m waiting to read more of your nibir stories.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Whole story is so lovely. Very well written,Thanks a lot for writing in English. I just loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Loved the whole SS..It's really amazing!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely
It was a unique confession
Must say Nibir did make good use of water

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