NiBiR SS-Only You Can Heal Me.....AUTHOR'S NOTE-PAGE 16 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Awwwh i am going nutsss after reading all these comments...such love...awwwh! Can not thanks enough...:*

I WILL UPDATE TONIGHT FOR SURE :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
plz update soon . after watching today's episode n precap i am vry scared.feeling that nibir marriage will not happen. i am vry tensed. but iam sure ur update will make me relaxed. so plz update vry soon becoz after 10.30 my dad will not allow me 2 use laptop.plz plz plz update it before that its a reqest. plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arathys

plz update soon . after watching today's episode n precap i am vry scared.feeling that nibir marriage will not happen. i am vry tensed. but iam sure ur update will make me relaxed. so plz update vry soon becoz after 10.30 my dad will not allow me 2 use laptop.plz plz plz update it before that its a reqest. plz



Arathy I will be writing now...but you know na love it will take somewhat 1 hour...because i am on phone...and I had to think and write the story :( pls request Uncle to let you use today once...and don't worry Nibir will happen...and I will gift you Nibir moments here!
Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
its ok .i 'll read it tmrow early morng. thank u so much 4 replying. i also wish that nibir will get married.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So here comes the 4th part...Love you all for showering me with such loooveee <3

PART 4...

Kabir slowy opened his eyes...and what he saw infront of his eyes was enough to make him fall from the bed...He saw Nisha was fuming with anger, looking at him...Kabir was so surprised what she was doing there...and why she was so angry...'So does that mean, she got to know the truth? No damn, that can not be happening'...Kabir thought to himself...

Kabir: What are you doing here? Are you serious about killing me wifey? I thought it was all just a joke till today, sigh *Dramatically*
Nisha: *Raises hand to hit him* Shut up! Just shut up! Otherwise I will beat you badly even in this situation...
Kabir: Oh my goon wifey, first at least tell me what is your innocent, naive hubby's crime?
Nisha: Innocent?? Naive?? *screaming* Oh so this what you are? Kabir how could you? How how how? You made the doc lie to me so that, just I be alright? Kabir I hate you...You can't be that much good okay? You are getting me? *Pointing fingers at him and shouting*
Kabir: Damn, what a nice way to do insult and praise together! At last you learnt something from me...*laughing*
Nisha: hehehe yeah a lot, idiot *mocking face*
Kabir: Arey chill yaar...But tell me who told you all this? I only told maa!

Just then laxmi enters with NiBir's breakfast on a tray!
Laxmi: I did beta...
Kabir: What?!! Maa you did cheating with your son? At the end you went to your girl's side na? *baby dramatic sad face*
Laxmi: Aree Nooo...Just ask your wife what she did? Did she leave me any way for not telling her the truth?
Kabir looked at Nisha suspiciously and said
Kabir: What blunder you did again?
Nisha: SHUT UPPP!
Laxmi told Kabir the story of last night and told him that when she was coming to the room so that she could make Ramesh wake up...she found nisha sleeping on the window...Kabir then did not know how to react...he just looked at Nisha lovingly for some time and then lowered his head...Laxmi left the room then, telling the kids to finish their breakfast...

Kabir: Nisha?
Nisha: Yes, say? *irritated face*
Kabir: I would have hugged you very tightly now if I was alright...but sigh...i can not now...
Nisha: *smiles* okay okay now don't start an emotional drama...and finish your breakfast...
Kabir smiles and moves the plate over his breakfast plate...and yes he screams...

Kabir: BITTER GOURD?!! NOW EVEN IN MY BREAKFAST ALSO?
Nisha: Maa said she will give you simple less spiced Hotchpotch at lunch...so she gave it now at breakfast...you know na it is needed to eat when you have pox? Maa had told you right?
Kabir: *fed up face* I know...but Nisha not this time pls...only once okay?? You are my bestie na? Lets throw it outside...maa won't get to know...
Nisha: No means No...and you know I am a very PATI VRATA PATNI *sarcastically*
Kabir: Oh really? *He makes a pout face and comes very close to Nisha as if he is going to kiss her'
Nisha: *Pushes him away* What are you doing Kabir? *Irritated*
Kabir: See? You are not even interested of being a Patni of mine...So stop acting being a one...and be a DOST VRATA DOST and help me...*determind-look*
Nisha: Uff...whatever...no means no anyways heh...*what a joke look*
Kabir: Okay whatever na? So let me check what you are going to have...I will have it, no problem...go and get you breakfast from somewhere else...
Saying this he lifted up the plate over Nisha's plate also and what he saw made him dull, happy and feeling loved at the same time...
Kabir: Bitter gourd on your plate too?? *He knew very well why it was there*
Nisha: Yeah we are besties and partners in crime na? So it all happens...we share everything! *winks*
Kabir: Stop giving me sugar panics like these...from morning uff what are you even upto??...
Nisha: Oy you! *'whatever'-look* Don't get too much flattered...now just finish your breakfast *smiles*
Kabir: you too finish please *smiles*

6.15 PM..The day was almost coming to an end...sun was going down in the west horizon...Nisha was holding a handkerchief, wet in ice-water on Kabir's forehead as Kabir had a bit high fever again...Suddenly Kabir got up and sat on the bed...
Nisha: What happened Kabir? Anything wrong? *Tensed*
Kabir: Nisha stop doing it...I am okay now...but these poxes are just too much itching...
Nisha: *relieved* Oh yeah now you should be okay na duffer? I am doing it for last one hour! And take this 'Neem's leaf' branch na? Maa has given you yesterday and told you to rub very softly on your poxes na, whenever it itches?
Kabir: Oh yes! My bad, I forgot...*He tries to rub it very softly yet he screams out* NISHAAA! Noo this is hurting me today badly...I don't know why...yesterday was all fine! *sad face*
Nisha: Okay, let it be...wait I will be back!

Nisha's head actually hit on a plan...so she went to take a book called 'A Walk to Remember' and she thought she would read this romantic novel to Kabir which she just bought last week and loved it...she never liked romantic things before, then with Viraj she started to like them but after her heart break she used to hate them again...But she again started liking them nowadays but she did not know why...anyways her main plan was to read out the book to Kabir and by diverting his mind she would rub the 'Neem leaf' branch on his pox spots to make him feel better!

Nisha: Here Kabiraa, let me read you the book, your mind will be diverted and you won't remember this poxes...
She kept reading the book and doing what her basic plan was..Kabir understood what she was actually doing...he did not say a word...he kept looking at her mesmerisingly and kept lisenting to the story...when Nisha finished the book it started raining outside!

Kabir: Nisha, look rain...
Nisha: Wow, Yes!
Kabir: Umm, anyways wifey I had a question to ask...
Nisha: Yeah, tell me?
Kabir: As happened in the novel...what if I die someday by cancer? Will you miss me?
Nisha: *Shocked* wha-wh-what??!! Say it again and I myself will give you cancer...you moron! *Very angrily*
Kabir: Why are you over reacting? Wait wait, are you in love with me? *Starts laughing*
Nisha: Love, me and you? huh! My foot! 'BEST FRIEND' is a word there! Don't even dare to say this horrible death related stuffs again! * Kept on being angry*
Kabir: *laughs* okay okay chill!
Nisha: But tell me in the story the girl died by cancer..what, if that happens to me? Now say, will you miss me?
Kabir: NISHAAA *anger was bursting out on his face and voice*
Nisha: Why? Now why? So are you in love with me?
Kabir: Enough with your jokes...I am not in the mood to talk to you! *disgusted face*
Nisha: See how it feels? *meaningful look*
Kabir: Haha, very funny! *sarcastic look*
Nisha: okay now let it be yaar...

Nisha goes to her cupboard and takes out a cute teddy!
Nisha: Kabir, look this is sniffy, papa gifted me when I was 5 years old...I love him..keep him with you untill you get well!
Kabir: Awwwh, so sweet wifey!
Nisha: By the way the rain did not stop till now...
Kabir: Yeah, let me hug sniffy and watch the rain...me and sniffy will enjoy, right sniffy? *as if he was talking to the teddy bear*
Nisha: Eey, why only you guys? Nisha will too...
Kabir: Okay wifey *happy face*
Then they hugged sniffy together from sniffy's both sides and kept watching the rain together, chatting, laughing in their world with each other...

To be continued...THE NEXT PART WILL BE THE LAST PART OF THIS SS!
Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
awesome update 👏👏👏
why are you ending it 😭
its so amazing 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Awesome! Mind blowing chapter!please don't end the story,continue!!!😉😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Awww.. this is really a cute & Funny update Nikhad..
Really Adorable scenes...
waiting for last part... update soon :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Aww! This is just so so cute and sweet ❤️ Loved it!!! I cant believe its ending so soon 😭 but i guess good things have to come to an end
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Cute:)
Oh gosh this couple has cute chemistry

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