NiBiR SS-Only You Can Heal Me.....AUTHOR'S NOTE-PAGE 16 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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i do not want my kabira's face to be scarred by marks of chicken pox
shoo chicken pox go away 😭

nice continue please 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWWWH! I AM JUMPING...such lovely commentsss :') yeiii :D thanks a tooon for this boost up...i will continue this story tonight...love you all...ALL HAIL NIBIR...!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks yaar...it was a lovely 1st chapter...do continue soon
aww nisha is so cute when she worries for her hubby
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a tooon guys for being sooo supportive and lovely :D
PART 2...

Nisha reached home by the evening...she ran to her bedroom as if she was at a gun point...when she reached her room, she saw laxmi and dadi was taking care of her hubby...and Kabir was lying on the bed helplessly...so many red coloured balls were on his face...Nisha felt like crying seeing him like this...at the same time she felt, 'Was not she acting as if she was his actual loving wife?'...Ewww! Nisha...stop thinking rubbish...he is your best friend damn! you can't feel it this way...Nisha thought to herself...without wasting one more second she rushed inside the room...

Laxmi: Nishuuu?!!...you are back? and what are you doing here? Go out of the room...You can see him from the door...
Nishu: No, maa! I will be here...
Dadi: Nishu, baccha...you can not stay here...you will get chicken pox too...go outside...we are here na?? Please don't take tension...
Kabir: Nisha, go out of the room now and now...at least i can not cause more trouble to these beautiful ladies because of my horrible wifey! *Tried to hide the concern for nisha but dadi caught it* Nisha was fed up by now...she said in anger
Nisha: Shut up Kabir! And maa, dadi...I am his wife na? What should a wife do in this situation? Dadi could you stay away from dadaji or mom you from papa in such situation? Tell me...You all are so concerned about wife's duties na? So let your children to do that also...afterall learnt all of it from you...
Kabir felt really good from inside hearing all these...he felt all his pains of this rubbish poxes are gone ...he wished to have the pox forever...but then he thought, 'No bad idea...too much senti you are getting Kabir for nisha...and why you doing so? She is just a best friend'...Kabir thought to himself...just then dadaji entered the room

Dadaji: Nisha is right, as a wife it is her duty...and if she want to do it, she should...
Laxmi: But Bau...*dadi holds her hand and stops from talking*
Dadaji: Nisha I am glad you are back, take care of him...Kabir how are you doing now?
Kabir: Dadaji just okay okay...paining and itching!
Dadaji: take care of yourself...*Dadaji left*

Dadi and Laxmi also came out...Laxmi asked dadi
Laxmi: Maa, why did you stop me? You know na, why I stopped Nisha?
Dadi: Yes yes, but I also know why Nisha refused us...
Laxmi: *surprised* Why?!
Dadi: Beta, they are falling in love with each other...I saw it in both their eyes, while Nisha refusing us and Kabir refusing Nisha...let them be...they will realise their love soon...Nisha was right..we would not have been able to stay away from our husbands in such situation...so how come she?
Laxmi smiled hearing all these...and dadi smiled, took Laxmi's hands in hers as to assure that everything will be okay...then they smiled together and left...

NIBIR'S BEDROOM
Kabir was continiously telling Nisha to leave the room...and Nisha was refusing to it...at a point Nisha got fed up totally and she burst out on Kabir...
Nisha: Shut up, will you moron? *Screaming* I am not going anywhere...Can't you get it?
Kabir made a face and said
Kabir: Okay then i am not going to talk with you...*he closed his eyes and tried to ignore Nisha*
After a while Nisha felt like what she did was wrong...after all Kabir was sick...so she bent down a bit...touched his forhead and started moving her hands through his hair...

Nisha: Kabir, you okay? Is it paining a lot?
Kabir opened his one eye and looked at Nisha then he again closed it and continued ignoring Nisha...Nisha then said to Kabir...
Nisha: Okay wait here a bit, it is dinner time almost...I will come back with our dinner...best friends will do dinner together okay?
Nisha left!

After some time she came back with their dinner on a tray...she found Kabir in the exact same position and closing eyes...She tried to make Kabir eat a lot but he was so adamant...Kabir said, If Nisha is not going out of the room he won't eat...Nisha got angry too...
Nisha: Okay, do whatever you want...I am not going anywhere..and not having my food also...I came here just for you rushing, tried to persaude you too..but this is what you are doing to me..keep lying on bed like this idiot...
It was almost 10.30 pm...Kabir understood Nisha won't leave..and Nisha had not eaten anything the whole day he knew...so he took one spoonful of food and took it infront of Nisha's mouth...Nisha looked at the food then looked at Kabir...Kabir was making all the best ever puppy faces he could make...Nisha as usal could not resist it and finally smiled...Seeing her smile Kabir also smiled heartily...Nisha took the spoon from him and fed him the food first...Then Kabir fed her...Nibir fed themselves in this way the whole food while giving each other a very romantic, caring look!
After finishing the food Nisha wiped Kabir's lips with a napkin, and went to keep the plates...When she came back, she found Kabir sitting on bed with a restless expression...

Nisha: What happened Kabir? You are okay na? *Tensed*
Kabir: Yaar, I am not getting comfortable with this bed anymore, and these shits on my body...uff so painful and itching...
Nisha: Don't scratch them ever Kabir, it will get worst...
Kabir: Yeah maa and dadi told me...that is why i am getting more frustated now..
Nisha: Tomorrow i will get you a very useful medicine, now try to sleep yaar!
Kabir: Can't yaar...umm can I say something? Don't kill me please?
Nisha: Tell me * Nisha gave a 'oh how typical Kabir'-look*
Kabir: Nisha, I am saying the truth...I am not feeling good at all..and I can't do with this bed anymore...missing mom..can I rest my head on your lap? Only if you don't have any problem *Serious sad tone*
Nisha could clearly understand that Kabir was having so much pain...so she did not say anything rather just made him rest his head on her lap directly...Kabir was so happy

Kabir: Thank you so much wifey...*romantic face*
Nisha: Wow you will thank your best friend now? Amazing...you will be always a idiot...now go to sleep otherwise I will kick you out of the bed...
Kabir: Okay okay, I am going to sleep, but put me on the bed after I sleep...*Kabir closed his eyes*
Nisha kept moving her hands through his hair...and very soon Kabir was in deep sleep...Nisha looked at him...touched his face slowly...'How cute he looks while sleeping?* she thought to herself...she smiled and did not feel like putting him on the bed...so she kept her head on the wall and fall asleep having Kabir on her lap...

to be continued...


Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
have you ever fallen in love?
how do you describe emotions so simply yet
they hit a cord or two?
its amazing 👏

i like this kind of unspoken romance
where there is no need of anything but silence..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg just awesome no other words
Nisha: Shut up Kabir! And maa, dadi...I am his wife na?
This words are fabulous
And awww kabir sleeping on nisha's lap I'm just imagining how cute he would look
Can't wait for the next update pls do it soon
And thanks for ur pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
I simply loved it
It is so beautiful
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Wow nikhad... M speechlesd it was so romantic... I love u for this one. :D :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww nibir r soo cute together
Superb update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: I...

have you ever fallen in love?
how do you describe emotions so simply yet
they hit a cord or two?
its amazing 👏

i like this kind of unspoken romance
where there is no need of anything but silence..



Lets just say you caught my secret maybe ;) and awwwh thanks aaa looot darling <3 it meant aaa looot!

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