NiBiR TS: Beacuse you touched my soul....UPDATED LAST PART ON PAGE 4

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Hi there everyone! I am Nikhad!...I have written many stories on the Airlines forum...I am a huge NiBiR Fan and a die hard Mishkat fan...could not resist than writing one on them...
Pls forgive my mistakes in the story if i do any...apologies! And whoever wants a pm for the next part...pls send me a buddy request ^_^ ...Here it comes...

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It has been one month since Nisha and Kabir are married! They were falling for each other...but was not been able to realise that properly or you can say did not want to realise it! That was a breezy summer night...Nisha and Kabir were coming from a relative's wedding where they were sent forcefully by dadaji...in the car they were sitting together...after the tiring long day...Nisha was really very tired...she was trying to lean on the seat of the car but actually deep inside she wanted to lean on Kabir and was actually showing off to him that she was not comfortable leaning on the seat...on the other hand Kabir was getting all of it but was not saying anything because he was literally enjoying how his wifey was acting to be with him, and he also wanted so badly Nisha to rest her head on his shoulder...Their relation was blooming...love was getting deeper everyday...

After sometime Kabir said
Kabir: Oho wifey! I feel like you are not feeling comfortable, you can rest on my shoulder if you want...
A big smile appeared on Nisha's face as her plan was successful...she tried to hide it...but Kabir noticed it
Nisha: Oh thanks a lot Kabir! Actually i do not want to...but really tired i am...what to do...
She put her head on his shoulder...and Kabir smiled and thought, good acting wifey haha...But I am just loving this moment...

Nisha suddenly start speaking...
Nisha: Kabir how much time it will take to reach home?
Kabir: The longer it takes, the better it gets Nisha...
Nisha: What?!!! * but feeling happy from inside*
Kabir: Haha, i was joking damn...it wil take somewhat 45 mins more...
Nisha: Always joking...huh! Be serious also sometimes, na?
Kabir: You want me to be serious wifey?...okay i am feeling so amazing right now in this moment...*intense voice*
Nisha blushed and thanked God that Kabir could not see her face because of their position..and to hide her blushing from her voice, She tried changing the topic, but Kabira is Kabira he caught it*

Nisha: Can you please open the window, Kabir? Feeling suffocated yaar!
Kabir: yeah sure wifey!
As he opened the window...cool and blissful winds started to come inside...they were feeling too heavenly that when Nisha grabbed Kabir's arm with her arm tightly and Kabir hold her hand with his...they did not even realise...They wanted this moment to never end...just to feel the soul of each other silently...after sometine Nisha put her head a little high and asked Kabir

Nisha: Kabir?
Kabir looked at her as someone has hipnotized him,they had a romantic eye lock...
Kabir: Hmm?
Nisha: You are not getting shoulderache, na? I am leaning on you for a long time...
Kabir nodded a no with a soft romantic smile on his face...
Nisha was getting totally lost in the smile...she said
Nisha: You sure?
Kabir: Yes, Nisha...you can rest your head on the shoulder forever...it won't hurt...
Nisha just could not take anymore and to hide her the happiest and blushing face she just put her head on Kabir's shoulder again as soon as possible...

They finally reached the Gangwal House...and got off from the car...
Nisha: Finally we are home!
Kabir: Yeah, we are finally back to the Gangwal's! *Getting a bit sad*
Nisha: Why Kabira having a sad sad face? *nisha was a bit tensed*
Kabir: Its just that Nisha whenever I remember that I will be leaving the house after this week to the new flat...it makes me sad!
Nisha: Not you, WE!
Kabir: hehe, yes wifey...then no one will be there to save you from the tortures of this Kabira...
Nisha: Oh yeah yeah so funny that i even forgot to laugh! *makes a face*
Kabir: Hahahahaha...arreh let this things to be...may i ask you for something?
Nisha: yes?
Kabir: *Gives his hand to her* Shall we have a little night walk on the road before entering home?

Nisha hold his hand and they start walking on the road...it was quite late at night, so the road was really calm... beautiful large trees, winds, a street, silence and two lovers holding hands and walking yet trying to hide their feelings were actually getting more romantic with every passing second! Suddenly Kabir stopped...

Nisha: What happened Kabir?
Kabir: Wifey...*He came closer to her* Thanks yaar!
Nisha: *surprised* for what??
Kabir: for giving me the best experiences in my life!
Nisha and Kabir was so lost in each other that they came too much closer and at a point their lips met with each other...after kissing for a while they both realised what they were doing and they broke the kiss...Nisha was so dumbstruck because of this sudden action...she was so scared and nervous at the same time and started moving backwards with her steps...and then ran away from there keeping Kabir puzzled ...

To Be Continued...

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ItsMeAarushi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its amazing nik.🤗 how romantic..😳 oh god I can't wait for the rest.. update it as soon as possible
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Wowww... Freakin romantic... :D :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowie gal u actually made me thnk of the scene complete with their costumes, cool breeze, trees n all! It was like a episode running in my mind! I dunno i imagined her in a peach colorsari since i thot dadu had sent thm to a function nah, may be sari n him in a dashing black suit! ❤️
n thn d kiss! OMM! ☺️

next update!next update! See u hv created a monster, now suffer! 😆

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res
will comment tomo😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start to ur story
Plz could you pm me wn u update
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Originally posted by: ItsMeAarushi

Its amazing nik.🤗how romantic..😳 oh god I can't wait for the rest.. update it as soon as possible




Awwwh...thank you sooo much!! This meant a lot really...:* and will update tomorrow :3
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Originally posted by: shruti113

Wowww... Freakin romantic... :D :*



Awwwh thanks for all the love :* ummaah!
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Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

wowie gal u actually made me thnk of the scene complete with their costumes, cool breeze, trees n all! It was like a episode running in my mind! I dunno i imagined her in a peach colorsari since i thot dadu had sent thm to a function nah, may be sari n him in a dashing black suit!❤️

n thn d kiss! OMM!☺️

next update!next update! See u hv created a monster, now suffer!😆



Awwwh niksy...you just gave the best feedback to my TS till now...this means too much to me...feeling so happyyy! Love you...and yes yes monster tomorrow you will get your update :3
Edited by yudigirl - 10 years ago

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