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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: lgr007

Yaar loved it...superb... going to be fun now that kabir is in the house...thanks for the pm 😃


Thanks and welcome
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: zainabawoon

Everyone's excitement on getting to know kabir was coming Aww!🤗It was so warm! And that NiBir scene☺️Lovely update yaar!😊😊😊


Glad you liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Chit15

Good update

Nisha conversation with herself was really amazing
Please write some Nibir moments


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: piya05

JUST FREAKING AWESOME janvi i just loved it and especially this dialogue

"Nisha (in mind): stupid, idiot, over here am madly in love with you and your interested in making me your bhabhi."

just so nice na absolutely good👏


Thank you btw should I call you piya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
I want kabir and nisha together
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
pls continue this janvuuu :(
Edited by yudigirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 3

Nisha got up from Kabir and they both stood straight.
Kabir: (not looking at her): Sorry
Nisha: Hmm, its okay.
Both of them don't know one thing that Viraj saw all whatever happened and he is smiling remembering his mom's words and his phone conversation with anamika (anamika is daaji, younger brother's daughter, who is helping daaji take care of the house, she is a nice sweet simple girl and has become very close it Viraj in few months). Kabir turns to see Viraj.
Kabir: Bhai you here, do you want something?
Viraj: (hugs him) you're a wonderful brother.
Kabir: Bhai at least tell me what did I do?
Viraj (thinks for a while): You gave my mother to me Kabir (pause, as wanting him to understand something) now I don't want anything else.
Kabir: bhai you also, oh god, okay I am going to the shop to meet dadaji.

Gangwal Shop
Kabir: Hello everyone
Dadaji: Come in Kabir.
Viren: I was wondering why you didn't come up till now.
Kabir: Tauji, how can I not come to have somosas
Viren (pulling Kabir's hears): Badmaash
Dadaji: What are you doing Viren, (coming towards Viren Kabir) look how red his ears have become.
Kabir (hugging dadaji): dadu, you know how much I missed you in three days.
Dadaji: I also missed my favoirite grandson.
Nisha (entering the shop): And who am I
Dadaji: my favoirite granddaughter.

Flashback
After the truth of Kabir's past got revealed to everyone, all felt bad and guilty too, no it wasn't just sympathy, they all loved Kabir in these 4 months, but sometimes extra loud nature, his extra care free attitude used to get in the way, but that day everyone realized all that was just a mask. He didn't have a perfect life, for God sake he had the most imperfect life.
he had faced situations, which the Gangwal family had not come across. Dadaji understood that the maybe the boy was not come more experienced than him, but he knew alot more about the world than he showed.
The conditions of his life must have forced him to grow up maybe that's why know he was trying to be a child. That is why he always wanted to make her smile, Nisha realized, it wasn't because of sympathy, it wasn't because of humanity, it was because he knew how it felt, it was because he gone through worst, it was because his love made him realize that living in the past or bothering too much about the future is going to make you loose the present. He never wanted her to waste her life and she had been so rude to him, she felt guilty

Dadaji thought he must talk to Kabir, so he called him in the room.
Kabir:(cheery) did you callmfor me dadu
Dadaji: (silent)
Kabir (thinking): Why isn't dadu saying anything, please don't tell me he wants to discuss about my past, God you know I hate that topic right. Whenever anyone hears about it they show that sympathy or give me those looks as if am not touch worthy and I hate both of them. Please please please God anything but that conversation.
Dadaji: Whatever happened at the dining table.
Kabir (thinking): and here we go again
Dadaji: I am really sorry beta
Kabir (thinking): so its the sympathy lecture this time.
Dadaji: Beta why are you so silent.
Kabir: You don't need to apologise dadu, whatever happened in my past it wasn't your fault, it was destined to happen so it did. There are many things in life that happen to is and we have no reason for it but we should not forget, God knows what's best for each one of is, if it wasn't for my past, I don't think so I would have valued my present as I do today.

Dadaji looked at the boy who was standing right infront of him, he had mistakend him to be childish and immature, but today he could see he had misjudged badly.

Dadaji: No Kabir I must and am just not talking about today, I am talking about everytime that I hurt you even if it was unintentionally.
Kabir: but you never hurt me, what you said was because you wanted me to be more responsible. You care for your grand daughter's future that is why and I know you care for me that is why, you got angry when I ate ice cream after just recovering from my fever. That is why you stood out my room the three days I was in bed.
Dadaji (thoughts): Usually people answer to me in a yes or no till date no one well except Nisha had really understood me, one my reason why they are a perfect match.
Dadaji hugs Kabir and does not say anything yet many things are exchanged between them, in the moment, Kabir's equations changed with everyone they all loved him, no actually they already loved him, they were able to show it now.

Flashback ends

Dadaji: Kabir beta I would like to talk to you alone, Nisha please
Nisha leaves
Kabir: dadu anything serious.
Dadaji: Kabir I have forgiven Viraj and also accepted his proposal of marriage because of you, but still I would like you to reconsider, I still prefer you get married to Nisha.
Kabir: (trying to hide his tears) They both love each other where do I come in between.
Dadaji: Kabir I want to know if you love her.
Kabir dumbstruck recovers after some time
Kabir: (with no emotions): no
Dadaji (thinking): even in your no I can see a yes, I know what is truth behind your words now
Dadaji: okay beta, just asked because I was doubtful.

Nisha was curious, so stood outside the shop, she felt extremely bad when Kabir said he didn't love her, but she also noticed his expressionless face, her heart told her he was trying to mask his pain, a pain that was so much that his smile couldn't reach his face, while her mind told her she was just over imagining things. She was walking thinking about these things when she dashed into Viraj
Nisha: Sorry I didn't see you Viraj
Viraj (thinking): course you wouldn't
Viraj: Nisha you know, you should be careful while walking, (looking at a distance) you belong to someone.
Nisha: Hmm, sorry I will be careful. (Walking away)
Viraj: I met mom after many years yesterday, we talked for hours all night.
Nisha: Hmmm
Viraj: you want ask what we were talking about
Nisha: You can share if you want to.
Viraj: Kabir
Nisha: What about him.
Viraj: She was saying Kabir is always like this, how he is today
Nisha: meaning
Viraj: selfless

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Evening time Viraj, Kabir, Vasundra, daaji, Anamika were all present at Gangwal house for the sangeet ceremony.
Nisha's dress
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Viraj's outfit
http://trendseve.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/09/4-blue-Wedding-Sherwani-collection-for-pakistani-groom1.jpg
Kabir's outfit
http://images.cbazaar.com/images/prd_img_b/black-jacquard-breeches-style-sherwani-shmdc6086-b.jpg

Kabir was standing in a corner, seeing the love of your life get married to someone else wasn't as easy as he expected.
Viraj: Should we start.
Sukku: You are getting impatient.
Viraj: before starting the ceremony I would like to say something.
Dadaji: go ahead
Viraj: dadaji a girls would be husband's brother, is her brother as well, so shouldn't she tie a rakhi to him.
Kabir felt like crying, it would be better to die he thought. Anamika brings aarti thaali and gives it to Nisha. Nisha moved closer to Kabir, than at a point turned and walked towards Viraj standing infront of him, then does his arti and ties rakhi, Kabir is shocked and what is more shocking is that everyone is smiling
Kabir: would anyone tell me what's going on.
Nisha goes to Kabir and starts punching him.
Nisha: I hate you Hate you so much Kabir Singh Rathod, you can talk bakwass the whole day but can't say an I love you.
Kabir: What are you... I don't
Nisha: Don't lie to me Mr.Am the most selfless person on earth (hitting him) stupid stupid couldn't you tell me that you loved me, (crying) you know I had to here that from Viraj.

Flashback from her and Viraj conversation
Viraj: Kabir can give his life to the people who he loves
Nisha: who does he love?
Viraj: Us
Nisha confused.
Viraj: Nisha don't you see Kabir loves us he thinks we want to be close together. He wants our happiness and he thinks we get that if we are with each other, but he doesn't know that he is the biggest idiot for thinking that.
Nisha: Matlab
Viraj: Matlab get ready to become my devrani cum bhen
Nisha: Sure would be jeth ji cum bade bhaiya.
Flashback ends.

Kabir catches Nisha's hands and looks into her eyes, they are both lost into each others eyes for some time but get back to Earth when everyone starts coughing
The sangeet ceremony continues with cute moments between Nisha and Kabir.

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Nisha's room
Nisha sitting on the bed dreaming about Kabir and her future. She hears a voice.
Kabir: Thinking about me
Nisha: as always
Kabir : awww
Nisha: You are so bad you didn't even propose me (Nisha moves away with fake anger but Kabir makes Nisha crash into his chest)
Kabir: You know what I love you, I want you, I need you, am getting married to you, We are going to become parents, grand parents, great grand parents and die together. Mrs soon to be Nisha Kabir Singh Rathod am not asking you a question am odering...
Kabir cannot complete what he wants to say as Nisha starts kissing him
Nisha:(stops kissing)God how much do you talk, I wouldn't oppose even if you ask
Kabir: (still in shock) (after a while) Why
Nisha: Because now am only living for you, the way you had always been living for me.
Kabir: Who said I was living for you, I was just living for myself.
Nisha (pointing towards his heart): I live within you.
Kabir (intensely): Do I live within you
Nisha: (lost in him) always had

The End


Hope you all enjoyed the journey, sorry if anyone didn't.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb dear. y did u end it.it was very interesting.plz continue it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
so beautiful 😭😭 amazing outstanding fabulous excellent 👏👏
am speechless..and you did implement that rakhi 😉🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: arathys

superb dear. y did u end it.it was very interesting.plz continue it.


I'm glad to hear that you liked it but the ending was meant to be like this.

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