Nibir SS - Living for you - Chapter 3 page 7

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So I thought of starting a short story hope Nibirians like it, here is the prologue

Prologue

Nisha sat in her room extremely upset, and what was causing her the most frustration she did not know the reason, she ought to be happy after all she was getting married to Viraj in a few days, but even the thought made her cry. All this felt so wrong but why? She wanted an answer but who, who could she talk to, who would understand her, the first and only name that came up in her mind was Kabir, he had always been therefore her, the family had forced them into a relation, yet he never tried to show any rights on her, he cared for her no matter how many times she had pushed him away. She didn't realize when her lips curved at his memories, how she completely forgot her pain as his smiling face, had seemed to light up her whole world.

Viraj, was sitting in his cabin at the academy, something was bothering, something was just not right, something was missing, but he couldn't get what. He was getting married to the girl who he loved, all because of his new found best friend, Kabir, who had always been like the brother he never had. Kabir had made him aware of the child inside him, he was the one who made him realize that it was was okay for a human to the make mistakes, but it was wrong to run away from them. He had been the one to show Viraj, Kaira and Buaji's true face. But God knows where had that boy disappeared, he hadn't called since two whole days and neither did pick up any call.

Kabir sat in the room of his hotel, smiling at the memories of the girl he loved, the girl who was his life, who was the fresh air he couldn't will without, who had been his wife, but who was in the love with someone else, someone else who was his brother. Yes Kabir very well knew that Viraj was indeed his elder brother, sadly this had become the reason for him to hide his feeling from Nisha, the day he got to know the truth, he started bridging the gaps between them because he was under the impression that they both loved each other.

Will Nisha realize her love for Kabir?
How will Viraj react when comes to know about his brother?
Will Viraj and Nisha get to know bout Kabir's love?

Please give your reviews

Index
Chapter 1 - page 2
Chapter 2 - page 3
Chapter 3 - page 7
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue is good
waiting for the story to be told
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue
continue soon
and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Super prologue..
Waiting for you to continue..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow
Nice prologue. Please do continue :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Wow wish the show goes this way too! 🤗 Continue soon!
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do update soon...very interested to read your ss
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omggg such a beautiful start!! awesome prologue! 👏
Nibir! waiting for the next update :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one...
Update it soon...want to read more of this...
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very nice 👏
update soon

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