NIraj ##FF#pehala pehala pyaar hai...(part 43 updated on page59) - Page 38

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rinu08

Wow this is just amazing.

Eagerly waiting for next one.
Hope Nisha is ok.


Thank you Rinu 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cherrynicolem

Hush Viraj is safe but Nisha😒

Overall superb update


Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: achirasingh16

both the updates are just spell bounding!!

loved both of them...


Thank you dear 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow what a lovely update... Really loved it... And eagerly waiting for next one... 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you dear :)
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Originally posted by: Prachiii

Wow what a lovely update... Really loved it... And eagerly waiting for next one...👍🏼


Thank you prachi 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hear is the next and the last part
Part 43
As soon as viraj reach the hospital
Viraj :maa kaisi hai nisha
Lakshmi : beta doctor dekh rahe hai
Viraj: sab hamari vajah se sab hamari galti
Ramesh: beta isme tumhari galti nahi hai chup hojao
Viraj: paapa hum ne nisha ko phone karke batana chahiyeta par meri mobile battery katam hogayi thi or charge karne time nahi tha
Virendar: beta tum teek hona vahi hamreliye khushi ki baat hai nisha ko kuch nahi hoga don't worry
Doctor: dhekiye unki pet ko zosrse lagi hai shayad or vo bohot stressed hai aise main baby ko hume operation karke hi bahar nikalna padega or option nahi hai ..hum operations ki sari tayyariya karlete hai please aap cooperate kijiye..
Nurse: inmese koun hai patient ki husband
Viraj: main hun .
Nurse: dhekiye is main sign kijiye formality hai
Doctor: Mr. please jaldi kijiye unhe bohot dard horaha hai der kardiya tho baby or maa dono ko bhi khatara hosakta hai
Viraj: (signs on the paper )breaks down meri vajha se hua sab agar nisha or bacche ko kuch bhi hua na hum apne aapko maaf nahi karpayenge
Dadaji :aise mat kaho beta sab teek hojayega .. hamari nisha bohot bahaddur hain aisi kahi bahot saare khatronse ladai ki hai sab jeet ke aayi hai ab ek baar or ladi hi sahi vo jeet ke aayegi tum himmat rakho
Daadi : je baat tho teek hi kaha hai inhone beta himmt rakho
(After an hour doctor came out of the operation theater)
Maohan : doctor kya hua sab teek hai na nisha teek hai na
Doctor: congratulation ladki hui hai
Ramesh hugs viraj and all are happy (at that time vasundar ,dadaji and kabir enters)
Viraj :maa hume beti hui hai
Vikram: ghar main lakshmi aayi hai
Sukku : dadaji hamre ghar main tho pehli si hi ek lakshmi hai usse tho hum sab ne relax me bhi karna padta hai ab ye ek or lakshmi ..hey lakshmi u have to relax me (and all laughs)
Dadi: chora mene kaha tha na nishu ne ye ladi bhi jeet ke hi ayegi ab dhekho
Sukku : han daadi or jiju aapko pata hai humne na decide ki thi ki aaj aap avoge or hum aapke jeet ki khushi manayege or dhekiye aapki beti ko bhi aana tha apne paapaki jeet ki khushi manane
Kabir: are hello koi dhekha hai kya baby ko
Lakshmi : nahi beta doctor ne abhi tak andar nahi jaanediya
Vasundara: or nisha kaisi hai
Umesh: oh no hum ne baby ke aane ki khushi main nisha ke bare main pucha hi nahi ..
Lakshmi : vo teek tho hai na ramesh
Ramesh: doctor se puch te hai ..hai kaha doctor
Mohan: chote vo andar hai unhe aane do
After some times doctor come outside
Viraj: doctor aapne btaya nahi nisha kaisi hai or hum unhe dhek sakte hai kya
Doctor: vo bhi bilkul teek hai or hum unhe ward main shift karenge tab jake dhekiye
Dolly : thank god nishu or bacchi dono teek hai
Keerti: jiju ghar main jwalu hai usse call karke ye khush khabri dedijiye or arjun ko bhi
Kabir : nahi main jake arjun ko leke aati hun bhabhi ne pehle arjun ka naam hi lengi (and he left)
After some times all went to nisha)
Sukku : nishu ye ladki tho pakka tujh pe hi gayi hai
Dolly : nahi jiju pe dheko uski naak
Keerti : nahi ye tho mujhe pe hi gayi hai
Nisha: guys stop ..ye mere dadaji pe gayi hai
Sourav: iska matlap indirectly nishu hi kehrahi hai ye uss pe hi gayi hai
Sukku : aise kaise sourav
Sourav: khud dadaji hi kehte hai na nisha unki parchai hai (and all laughs)
Nisha: (looking all over ) viraj arjun kaha hai !!
Kabir: yaha hai bhabhi aapka ladla
Nisha: arjun beta yaha aao apni choti sister ko tho dheko
Dolly : are sab log bahar chalo inlogoko baat karne tho do (and all left from their except arjun and viraj)
Viraj: nisha humari family complete hogayi hai..hum dono hamara do !!
Arjun: mamma iska naam kya hai ..ye kitni cute hai na
Viraj :han beta bilkul tumhari tarah ..aap hi rakho koi naam
Arjun: mera naam arjun hai A se hi ek naam rakhungi (thinking...)
Viraj: are beta or kitna sochoge aap
Arjun: meri sister ka naam hai accha tho hona chahiye na
Nisha: accha beta tum socho
arjun : mamma mujhe koi naam nahi pata aap hi rakhona
viraj: Aditi kaisa hai naam
arjun and nisha: wow
nisha: nice name not bad
arjun : han paapa accha hai main abhi sabko batake aata hun (and he left)
viraj: nisha aap teek hai na
nisha: hmm teek hun ..aapko dhek ke saare dard bhuljaati hun main .. I love u viraj
viraj: I love u too ..but sorry hume laga tha ki aap hi humara pehla pyar hai or aap bhi humara akhri pyaar par hume ab kisi or se pyar hua hai
nsiha: (annoyed) koun hai vo
viraj: meri beti aditi
nisha: aap bhi na (he hugs her)

Finally Happy ending for this FF pehla pehla pyar hai "NIRAJ "for ever ..i hope u all enjoyed and thank u so much for all ur support and wonderful feedback am really happy ..and guys am starting another NIRAJ story named " Adoore tumhare bina" I hope u people give support for my new story also .
THANK YOU

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Posted: 10 years ago
i know it is going to be awesome...will comment later...by afternoon
busy right now...thanks for updating!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Perfect ending ...your ff is just mind blowing...no ! It's not mind blowing , if so they how could I speak sorry comment something if my mind is not in control ...lol...
Adhbhuthavagi yede nimma khate. ..thumba chenageyede. ...khandetha nimma mundena ff ge naavellaru nimmage bembhalavage nillutheve. ...ye khate namyelarigu rumba khushi kotedhe. ...nimma mundena ff Aadhashtu beega shuru maadi. ...nimma mundena khatege naavellaru kaayutheve. ...naanu yenaadharu thappu athava vyakharana yeruperu maadedhare shamesi. ...
Edited by heart_nishkala - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh waaooo!!
no words to praise...loved each part by you and this awesome journey through out this story!!!
i seriously loved how you ended the story by telling aditi as viraj's second love!!
hope you continue the next one soon and entertain us through your awesome work!!
you are really amazing writer dear!!
congrats for your success in this story and wishes for the new one!!

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