NIraj ##FF#pehala pehala pyaar hai...(part 43 updated on page59)

1. Hello guys I want to write os ..This is my first try plz tell me whether I should continue or not ..

on my story there is no kaira but here viraj and Kabir are brothers and kabir and his mom lives in London with viraj s dadaji...here after the press conferenc aram and rejected by the viraj nisha go for trip without informing her dadaji ...after some days nisha returning to jaipur and the same time kabir and his mom also returning to jaipur to stay with viraj ..because of some vehicle problem kabir and his mom joins nisha in the bus. .at the time if travelling nisha and kabir and his mom share a beautiful bonding with each others and not knowing that they are viraj s family. ..here gangwal house dadaji was too angry and ordered ever one to not to talk with nisha that is her punishment. .but cousins and sourav and ramesh lakshmi refused follow dadaji order and also viraj develop his feelings for nisa ...tell me guys she'll I continue or not ...


in my next part nishas entry in gangwal house and nisha met with viraj and his family

sounds really interesting!!! pls continue...

nice start...but please add ss/ff to the title...

Is it NiRaj or NiBir or NiRajBir

Neki aur pooch pooch? Shubh kaam mein bhala koi der karta hain? Pls add ss or ff or whatever u are planning to make the story on the title. And also mention whether its NiRaj/NiBir/NiRajBir. Start ASAP!

Pls continue I am dying to read what will happen next pls do continue

Part 1
Nisha reaches her home and dadaji and dadi having chain in the hall and all the cousins along with sourav in the terrace and they saw nisha comming and rushes to the hall..
Nisha: Hello dadi I am back. .
Dadi: hay maari bacchi tu aagayi
Nisha: (hugs dadi and kissed her) looks at dadaji. .jai jitendra dadaji (dadaji left from their saying saroj mujhe tumse kuch kaam hai zara kamare mai aajana)
after hearing nishas voice ramesh and lakshmi and also cousins and sourav rushes to nisha
Lakshmi:(hugs and cries)nishu kaisi hai tu
Ramesh:kitni din lagadiya beta hum ne tujhe boot miss kiya
All the cousins with sourav:hum bhi bohot miss kiya
(Hearing voice of all the cousins .virendar, viral a, mohan, roopan all come outside their rooms)
Nisha:aap log kai ho ( no one replys and left from their)
Nisha was confused because of their behaviour and ask. .paapa ghar main kuch huava hai kya ..ye sab aisa kyun behave kaira ha hai jaise ki ye log mujhe jante hi nahi. .
Ramesh:kuch nahi hua hai bere sab reek hai tum itne dinoke baad aayi hai haake fresh hoja phir sab saat mai bait kar khana khalenge
Nisha: aap mujhe ab sab sacch batayenge ya main phir se ghara chodke Hain
dolly; nahi nishu ..aisa mat kahi. ..actuallys na tum yaha se Jane ke baad singham ko bahot gussa aaga or sab logoko kehdiya ki tumse koi baat na kare
Sourav:nishu tum chinte mat karo ye sab kuch dinoke baat hai sab teek hojayega
Sukku:han aur hum sab nw tho kelidya humse nahi hoga hum nishu Se baat kare bina rehnahi sakte
Kirti:how blah nishu..tum ye sab chod batana tumhara trip kaisi thi
Nisha: (cries) bhagwan nw sirf meri kismat mai hi aisi likha hai kya hamesha mere saat hi aisa hota hai. .ek hi pal mai ek saat sab ka dill toddiya maine.
Rl:consol her and Al the cousins gave her a group hug
Aman:enters with glass of water nishu tu bas dhikne raho sab kuch chutki main teek hojayega. .aur rho aur kal holi hai kal rangoke saat tum tumhara colourful zindagi shuru karo..
Umesh: han nishu ab sab rota dona katam ..cheer up guys kal holi jai sab ko kalsi kaha ke kaldu sojana chahiye aur nishu ko chodo vo pehlise safar karke aayi hai usse toda rest karne do..
and all are left from their
next morning. ..
all cousins are waiting for nisha. ..
Sukku: guys humhe kaise bhi karke ye lady rowdy ko holi mel main jaane keliye mananahi padega. .
Keerti:aap logoko lagata hai ki vo aayegi
At the time nisha enters all are convincing her
bunty started crying (acting) finally nisha agrees and all are get redy and left for holi fair
As soon as they reach that place..While entering Sukku and Keerti s frns joins them and they started to play with colours...nisha was observing everything by standing in the corner
Nisha:(in her mind) sab log kit na kush hai ek dusre ke saath and smiles
At that time viraj enters
Nisha saw that viraj comming she hide herself in the corner after some times viraj sees nisha and also nisha saw him alone tears come out from both of their eyes which has a lot of pain. .both looking at each others
Nisha: ( in her mind) kaash hum aaj ke holi main saat hote tho kitna accha hota
Viraj:(in his mind) aap hamare liye bahot khas hai nisha ..hum aapse pyaar karne hai par guilt iss baat ka hai ki ye ehasas hume aapse door honeke baad pata chala hai ..aap humare saat hote tho humara zindagi bhi iss holi ke rangoke taraha colourful hojata Hain. ..hum aap ko hamare zindagi mai vapas lakarahenge (smiles)
Viraj come forward and coming near to nisha and nisha sees that he is comming near to her and remembered some past argument with viraj and feels bad and left from their
Viraj felt bad
all the peoples are busy in playing with colours..nisha joins with her cousins
Nisha : Sukku mujhe ghar jaana hai abhi ke abhi
Sukku:kya! !! ghar ...abhi tho aye hai hum teek tara se enjoy hi nahi kiya hum ne kya yaar nishu..
Keerti : how blah nishu dhekna mere sare frns kitna enjoy kar raja hai todi der or rukte hai. .
Bunty and jwalu.: han nishu Di plz na todi der or plz
Sourav: nishu kya hua sab teek hai na tu teek tho Hain na
(Bunty saw viraj standing )
Bunty: Sukku bhaiyya vaha dheko koun hai(everyone looks at viraj)
Keerti :accha teek hai tum chati hai tho hum sab ghar chalte hai chal Sukku
Nisha : nahi ..aap sab log khelo main ghar chalti hun
Sukku: nahi hum sab chalte hai
Sourav : accha teek hai aap sab yahi rahoon mai chalta hun nishu ke sat usse akeli Jane nahi dunga main
Nisha : abee yaar sourav mai koi chori bacchi hun kya akele janese dar nekeliye
(After some discussion she successful convinced all of them and they all are started playing she left from their)
While she is living some one holds her hand ..she turn back and she surprised seeing kabir and his mom ..
Nisha; arey aap log yaha...she takes blessing from vasundara (viraj s mom) and hugs her
kabir: jaan ji him ..aap kaha jaage hai. .and puts colours on her
Nisha : main bas ghar jaarahi thi
Kabir; ghar !!! hamare saat holi khele bina aap nahi jasakti
Vasundara:todi der rukna beta
Nisha: nahi bas kuch zaroori kaam tha aunty
Kabir: accha teek hai ek minit rukiye mere bhayi bhi yaha par aaye huye hai aap unse milkar hi jaana
Nisha : duniya choti hai aap log yahipe tho kabi na kabhi kahi na kahi mulakat hojayegi. ..
Kabir: kabina kabhi kahi ba kahi ka was kyun karneki zarurat kya hai aaj hi hojayegi mulakat. ..aap meri maa ke sat rukhiye main yun gaya yun aaya. .(and he left to bring viraj)
nisha and vasundara talking with each others
Kabir; lo ji mai aagaya ..ye mera bade bhayi hai ( nisha turned back) Hain na ek dam handsome
( nisha and viraj both are shocked ...nisha shocked because kabir and vasundara viraj s family and viraj shocked to see nisha with his mom)
Precape : Sukku scolds viraj in front of kabir and his mm
Aaj keliye itna tha ..guys egarly waiting for ur replys. .kaise laga aap ko. .?The lesson

Thank u guys for the support. ..and really sorry for the late update ...and plz guys do comment ..how was update and if it's k than I ll continue ...I know it's quite boring but in my next part there is jealousy, romance l, love everything is there :)

Story sounds interesting...do start the story soon.

really nice!!...it was interesting update soon!!