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rocking_bhawna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

amazing update...omg nisha kidnap ho gayi..kahi maya ne toh nahi kiya ye sab...

i know we nirajians are in depression...but lets not lose the hope.and plzzz keep niraj magic alive in forum by ur wonderful stories..

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Grishu30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Thanku very much dear fr updating...even I m very upset wid d nibir marriage...pls continue soon...

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Achira

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

awesomely wrote

viraj convincing sid and nisha convincing maya...ming blowing...and now they are friends!!
but ye nisha kaha hai...aur precap ne toh aur confuse kar diya..

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Sonakshi Sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Excellent written

Am waiting for ur os since yesterday

Pls nishu ko abhk kidnsp mat kar lls

Kuch aur niraj moments dikha de

Waiting

Cont soon

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aarvi123

@aarvi123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Here is the next part

Part 20

All are in the mission of searching nisha..Suddenly jwalu screaming

Jwalu :aaahhh

Keerti :jwalu kya hua kyun chillayi ..tu teek hai na

Viraj : jwala kya hua?

Sukku : bolna jwalu (all are worried even sid also )

Jwalu : yeh nishu bro ki chain (viraj snatched chain from jwalu )

Viraj : sacch main nisha ki hai..aapko pakka yakin hai

Keerti : dhikayiye mujhe and she sees that chain ..(in tension) hann jiju ye nishu ki hai..ye dadi ne nishu ko di thi

Jwalu : (cring) jiju ,...

Viraj: kya hua..nisha ko kuch nahi hua hai hum sab hai na ..vo yahi kahi hogi

Jwalu : jiju ye dhekiye yaha khoon

Sourav : khoon !!ye kya hai nishu kaha hai ye sab kya ho raha hai (tensed)

Sid : yaha nisha ka chain milna or ye khoon..iska matlap koi tho ishara hai kuch tho hua hai sir yaha

Aman : bhaiyya nisha ko dundo vo kaha hai vo teek tho hai na ,,

Umesh : aman ab mijhe bhi dar lagraha hai

Sukku : hum police ke pass chalete hai

Kabir: k minit..mujhe lagta hai nisha yahi kahi hai..

Viraj: (in teary eyes) aap yekaise kehsakte hai

Kabir :dekhiye bahi yaha sab securities hai..yah se office staff ke alva koi bhahar nahi gaye hai kyun ki main or sourav ne entrance ke pass kahde hokar sab log jaate vaqt dhekhi hai or tho or nisha andar vapas aate huye watchman bhi dheka hai

Sourav :aur maya se baat karke vo kisise phone main baat karne gayi thi..iska matlap nishu yahi kahi hai bahar nahi gayi hai..

Sid :sir ek kaam karte hai mere pass ek idea hai

Kabir ; kya ??

Sid : sir vo ek mahina pehle hi office ki har jaga camera fix kiya hai uska use ab hoga hum uska footage dheke kya aaj ka ??

Viraj : I think u r right !! chaliye(everyone started to leave suddenly sukku heres nisha's voice saying maa maa)

Sukku : jiju nisha

Viraj :kaha ??

Sukku : mujhe uski awaz aayi maine ne suna nisha maa maa kehrahi thi

Aman : iska matlap nisha yahi hai ..

Kabir : lets find guys

Keethi : jiju iss kamrese awaz aarahi hai

Sourav : ye kamra yaha tho purana saman pada hai .ye store room

Suuku : ha tho kya hua yaha nisha hosakti hai na

Kabir : chalo dekte hai

Umesh : yaha ho thala lagaya hua hai

Sid : yaha tak mujhe yaad hai yaha kabhi thala nahi lagaya tha aaj pehli baar dekrahi hu

Sourav : han sir yaha ham kabhi lock nahi karte hai

Kabir : bhai kuch tho gadbad hai ..dhekiye yaha ye naya thala hai ..itni chamk rahi hai

Sukku : iska matlap kisine janbuchkar nishu ko iss kamre main band karke lock kiya hai

Viraj : sourav kuch leke aayiye ham iss lock ko todenge(than sourav brings some stone and broke that lock and went in side)

All are shocked bye seing nisha in unconscious state

Viraj : nisha nisha apne aanke kholiye utiye nisha please utiye

Keerti :nishu kya hua tuje ye kisne ki nishu aanke khol apna

Sukku : nishu please uto (sukku is crying )Than suddenly he noticed blood in virajs hand ..jiju ye khoon

Viraj : ye ..yee kya hai ..dam it nisha ke sir pe chot lagi hia

Aman : bhai hum jaldi se doctor ke paa leke chalet hai

Kabir : guys relax abhi hame jyada sochneki time nahi hai ..hamara ghar yahi hai na vaha leke chalet hai ..or mai doctor ko vahi bulata hun.

Sukku : jaldi chalo..jiju aap idar ayiye main nishu kogod mai uthalunga

Viraj:nahi mai hi godh main uta lunga (and all are went to viraj's home

In viraj's home

Vikram ; vasundar beta aaj hamara badmash pota kaha hai ??

Vasundara : kahi bahar gaya hai aate hi hoga

Vikram :or viraj kaha hai ?? aaj der se aayega kya ??

Vasundra : pata nahi bauji ..kaam jyada hoga shaadi bhi pass aarahe hai na isiliye overtime kar raha hoga(doorbell ringed)

Vikram ;aagaya hoga beta zara dhekho

Vasundara: ji bauji (and she opens the door ) ..beta ye kya hua nisha ko

Kabir : maa main bata ta hun par please abhi hame ander tho ane dijiye

Vasundara :haan ajo main pani leke aati hun

Kabir: bhai aap nisha ko aapke kamre main leke jayiye.

Nisha in virajs bed and all the cousins sourav,viraj,sid ,viraj's dadaji and mom are around her

Vikram :ye sab kisne kiya hoga

Sukku : ek baar pata tho chale uska muh tod dunga mai(in aggression)umesh : nishu ne kiska bura nahi chaha par ye kisne kiya

Kabir : bhai doctor aagaye

Doctor: aap log bahar jayiye main chekup karti hun

Viraj: nahi main yahi rahunga inhe chodkar main kahi nahi jaunga

Sourav : doctor please inhe yahi rukne dijiye

Doctor :teek hai (and all went out side )and doctor bandaged on her head

Viraj :doctor kya hua nisha ko (than all enters)

Doctor : dhekiye gabraneki koi zaroorath nahi hai sir pe chot lagneki vajhase todi gabra gayi hai isiliye unconscious hogayi hai..todi der rest karne dijiye sab teek hojayega ...vaise maine pain killer ki injection to de di phir bhi aapko koi zarurath pade tho bulalijiye,main chalti hun

Kabir ; thank u doctor(than she leaves)

Viraj : come near nisha ..main aap ko kuch nahi hone dunga..kuch bhi hojaye

Sid: sir main ghar chalti hun der hogayi hai ghar main sab wait kar rahe honge

Viraj: thank u sid aapne aaj hamri bohot madat ki hai

Sid: its k sir ye mera fars hai ..(and he leaves)

Umesh :aree ghar se call aaraha hai main kya kahu

Viraj ; jo sacch hai vahi bata dijiye

Sukku ;nahi maa tho pehlese tension leti hai ab ye pata chala tho vo vaha behosh hojayegi

Keerti: I think sukku teek kehraha hai

Aman: vo tho teek hai par ab call araha hai kya kahe

Kabir: ek kaam kijiye ..boldiji ye ki aap log raste main hi hai

Viraj : par nisha ko abhi tak hosh nahi aayi hai

Kabir: bhai aap tension mat lijiye umesh aap receive karke boldijiye

Umesh: hello ..

Virendar: umesh kaha ho tum log itni der hogayi hai

Umesh : paapa vo hum

Virendar: tu rehne de umesh ..aree bhai dolly ne bataya kabir ki party main gaye ho par tumhe itna hi yaad nahi tumhare saat aman,keeri,jwalu,nishu 4 ladkiya hai ..ye koi time hai ladkiyonko bahar ghoom ne ka..tum jante hona hamre ghar ke rit riwaz...tumhare dadji bhohot gusse main hai

Umesh ; kya dadaji !!

Virendar: han ji ..jaldi se aajao bas

Umesh : han paapa hum raste main hi hai(he ends the call)

Keerti: kya hua bhaiyya kya kaha tauji ne

Umesh: singham ko gussa aaya hai ..aap ladkiya bhi itni der se ghar se bahar hai na

Vasundar :ek kaam kijiye aap log ghar jayiye nisha aaj yahi rehegi ..chahe to main baat karlungi aapki ghar walon se

Sukku ; nahi aunty nishu ko ham leke hi jayenge..koi baat nahi ..yaha tak dant kahne ki baat nishu keliye hum kuch bhi sehlenge

Keerti ; haan aunty bas nishu teek hojaye

Nisha : maa ..maa

Viraj : nisha ko hosh aaraha hai shayad...nisha apne anke kholiye please(than she open her eyes)

Nisha: ( looks around the room ) look at viraj ..viraj ...!! And hugs him and started crying

Vasundara : beta roon kyun rahi ho ..tumhe kuch nahi hua hai ..shant ho jao beta..

Viraj : nahi ab aage ek bhi ansu aapke aankho se nahi nikhlega ..maine kaha aansu pochiye(wipes her tears )

Sourav : nishu ..kya hua tuje aise achanak

Nisha ; voh main vo (she started berating heavily )

Aman: nahi nahi nishu ab tu kuch nahi batayegi calm down abhi bataneki koi zroorat nahi..relax

keerti ; han nishu tum stress mat lo

umesh :tu teek tho hai na nishu .

kabir : nisha relax kijiye aur koshish kijiye bataneki aap ko kya hua ??

niaha : (in her mind) agar main ne bata diya tho phir se ristonki bich main kadvahat aajayegi ..main nahi bataungi

sukku : kya hua nishu kya soch rahi ho ..

viraj : kya aap bata sakte hai ki ye sab kisne kiya

nisha : vo ..pata nahi(and than sid enters)

sid :joot..

everyone looks at him

kabir: siddarth aap ..aap tho ghar keliye nikle the na

sid : han par kuch kehana tha isiliye vapas aagayi

viraj : kya kehna tha ??

sid : ye hai ki nisha joot bol rahi hai ..

viraj ; what ??

sid: haan sir nisha ko pata hai ye sab kisne kiya aur kyun kiya par vo bata nahi rahi hai

umesh :aap aise kaise yakin ke saat kehsakte he

kabir : han aap ko kaise pata ??

precape :revolution of truth

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aarvi123

@aarvi123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: heart_nishkala
Arey yar ! I was waiting for your os ...
Res ...
Unres...
Sorry that I couldn't comment on your previous chapters..but really adore your os ...
Coming to this chapter ... ..
Ab tum ye mat kaho ki Nisha ki kidnap hogayi and that too shekar se ...Please ...
Anyway , the misunderstanding sometimes brings happiness ...
Totally loved it ...
And thank god that atleast I got to read niraj engagement and marriage in your os

...
Will tell lots more on your os Wednesday but now got to go...and yeppe ! 1st one to like and comment 😛

Thank you and I will be waiting for Wednesday 😳

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aarvi123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Thank you guys for all ur comments thanks a lot @rocking_bhawna,@ grishu, @achira, @ sonakshi...guys I have updated part 20 also please read it. .

Edited by aarvi123 - 10 years ago

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Sonakshi Sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Nishu injured

Suspense jaldi khatam karo na pls

Waiting eagerly

Update soon

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aarvi123

@aarvi123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Hope you all are enjoying with my updates ..here is the next

part 21

Sid: sir mai ghar keliye nikli thi par mera gadi ka key main office main bhul gaya tha isiliye usse lene office gayi ..key leke vapas aate vaqt main vaha giri hui nisha ki khoon dheki aur mujhe laga kuch to baat hai pata karna hoga isiliye main vo camera main record hui footage dhekne gaya aur mai dhekar hairan huyi

Keerti: kya tha usme..

Sukku ; boliye koun hain usme batayi main tho usse chodungi nahi

Nisha ;sukku ..chup hojao ..koi bhi nahi ..mujhe ghar chal na hai chaliye

Viraj : par hame sacch jan na hai ...aap boliye siddarth

Sid: sir ek lady aayi thi office..vo hi kiya ye sab

Kabir: lady ?? koun hai vo ???

Sid ; pata nahi maine kabhi nahi dheki par shayad aap log jante hogi ..

Aman: nishu koun hai vo ,..

Nisha : aman tu bhi na inski baat mat suno ..ghar chalo na

Sourav :tum aisa keh rahi hai tho mujhe ab doubt horaha hai nishu tu kuch chupa rahi hai humse

Keerti : exactly ..mujhe bhi aise lag raha hai

Sukku : bol nishu koun hai vo lady??

Nishu : aree bataungi ghar chale pehle maa wait kar rahi hongi

Viraj: maa itni der tak wait karhi rahe hai aur kuch der kyu nahi karege ..jo bhi sacch hai aaj aapko batana hi hoga

Umesh : tu nahi batyegi na nishu ...

Kabir :koi baat nahi hum office main jake dhekar aate hai tab pata chalega

Sid : ek minit sir ..

Kabir : kya ??

Sid : sir main ne mere laptop main copy karke aaya hun ..vo kya hai na camera main voice capture nahi hua hai ..vo log kya baat kar rahe hai vo nahi pata chala par kya kar rahe hai vo hai

Sourav : koi baat nahi vo lady koun hai pata chala tho sab pata chal jayegi ..tum dikhana

Nisha: sid nahi please

Vasundara : beta mujhe ye samj nahi aara hai tum aisa kyun keh rahi ho isme chupane wali baat kya hai ..

Viraj : maa unse kuch mat puchiye abhi pata chal jayega..baad mai vo sab sacch batadegi

Sid shows the footage and all are shocked bye seeing that its none other than gayatri buaji

Kabir and viraj : buaji !!!

Vasundar and vikram : gayatri !!!

All the cousins and sourav : yee ye sab kyun kiya ??

Sid :aap sab jante hai inhe..vha kya baat kar raha hai or unhone aisa kyun kiya ye sab sirf nisha hi bata sakti hai!! Nisha baat kya hai sab ko sacch sacch bata

Viraj : (angry ) maa dhekha aapne pehle hamari zindagi ko barbad karneki koshish ki ..ab phir se nisha ke saat aisa

Kabir : nisha sacch batade ye sab kya hai

Sourav : nishu bol na kya baat hai..agar tum nahi batyi na meri kasm tume

Nishu : sourav tu ye kya keh raha hai

Keerti ,sukku,umesh,aman,jwalu : ham sabki kasam tumhe abhi sacch bata na hoga

Vikram : nisha bolo beta usne aisa kyun ki tumhare saat aisa

Nisha : (crying)vo dadji (she started explaining)**** Flash Back sance*****

(After convincing maya nisha and maya happily coming out from restroom)

Nisha : abhi ham sab party enjoy karenge

Maya : main na dance karungi

Nisha : zaroor kyun nahi (nisha's phone ringing) its unknown number

Maya : kiska phone hai sir ka ??

Nishu :nahi kisi or ka main baat karke aati hun tum jaa party main

Maya : teek hai jaldi aana

Nisha: aaungi tu jaa..(nisha receives the phone) ..hello .,hello koun hai,phone kiya tho baat kyun nahi ka rahe hai..??(suddenly some one come behind her and nisha ke sir pe zore se mara,and than some drops of blood fall on the floor, nisha turned back )

Nisha : buaji aap!!

Gaya: oh my my darling pehchana aapne hume

Nisha : aap mujhe kyun mara ??

Gaya : kyun darling dard hua ??(and than she holdsnisha's hair (,at that time nisha's chain fall down)..gayatri dragged her towards the store room

Nisha : buaji aap mujhe yaha kyun layi hai

Gaya : darling vaha aapki honewale devar ne party rakhi hai..or hum yaha aapkeliye bohoti bada arrangement ki hai

Nisha : aapka matlap

Gaya : (in anger) tumhe kya laga hame pata nahi chalega tum viraj se shaadi kar rahi ho..kitni koshish ki maine tum donoko alag karne ki or tum tho badi smart nikli ..apni jaadu chalake pataliya na viraj ko

Nisha : aap mujhe jane dijiye vaha sab wait kar raha hai

Gaya : karne do wait ..aajke baad vo log tumhare liye wait karte rahenge or tum nahi jaogi vah

Nisha : aap ye kya bakwas kar rahe hai

Gaya : bakwas hum nahi tumne kiya miss.nisha gangwal ..aaj tak hamare ungliyoke ishare se nachne wale viraj mera muh tak dhekna pasad nahi karta ..or mere paapa bi mujse baat nahi karte aur vo vasundara,kabir vo bhi ..ye sab tumhari vajase

Nisha : ye sab meri vajah se nahi ,,sab aapne hi kiya hai.aap main property ki lalaj nahi hoti tho ye sab bilkul nahi hoti

Gaya :han maine apni pariwar mere paapa ki property pe aank dali thi tumhari tho nahi thin a..tumhe insab ke bich main padne ki kya zarurat thi

Naish : na mujhe aapke property main intrest na aap ke iss baton pe..mujhe jana hai

Gaya : oh may my ..mujhe barbad karketum acchi zindagi jine ki sapna dhek rahi ho na..aaj main vo sab sapne katam kardeta hun ..tumhari shaadi viraj ke saat iss janam main tho nahi hosakta bye bye miss nisha ghangwal ..bhagwan ne tumhari aatma ko shanti de and again took the rod and phir se nisha ke sir pe mari or nisha unconscious hogayi

After that she come out of the store room and locked it and ran way from that place

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Viraj ; (crying) kya buaji ne ye sab kiya and hugs nisha agar aap ko kuch hoja tha tho main tho zinda nahi rehti

Aman :bhai please aap log aisa royiye mat ..dhekiye aap donoka na rab ne bandi Jodi aap donoko koi alag nahi kar sakta

Vikram : han beta ye sahi keh rahi hai..chahe to aaj kuch bhi hoskta tha muth se ladkkar aayi hai tumhari nisha ..usse kuch nahi hoga

Sid : han dadaji aapne teek kaha jiske paas aisa pyar karne wale cousins dost,or viraj sir ke tarah pyar hai bhala nisha ko kya hoskta hai ..

Sukku : tumhare saat ham sab hai nishu tumhe kuch nahi hone denge..chahe muth bhi aaye usse tum tak pounch ne se pehle humse guzarna hoga

Vasundar : acca baccho der hogayi hai aap sab ghar chale jao ghar main sab pareshan horahe honge

Keerti ; nishu lakshmi chachi ka phone aaye tha vo tho bahot gabhragayi thi .nisha se baat karni hai nisha se baat karni hai bol rahi thi

Nsiha : aap log ne maa ko bataya kya??

Umesh : nahi yar joot bolke sabal liya

Aman : maa tho maa hi hoti hain na..chchi ko shayad pata chalgya hoga unke beti mussibat main hai isiliye vo bohot tension main thi bechainisi horahi jaise bol rahi thi

Nsiha : accah phir tho hame ghar chal na chahiye..maa ki yaad aarahi hai

Viraj : ek minit main aur kabir bhi aap ke saat challenge

Sukku : jiju uski zaroorth nahi hai hum sab hai na

Sourav :hann sir ham sab sambal lenge ..waise ghar jake ab dant bhi kahni hai

Kabir : jo bhi ho ham challenge aapke saat

Viraj : chaliye ab(and all left for ghangwal house)

Its 9.45 p.m singam was in angry mood..all the gangwal members gathered in hall and waiting for cousins gang

Dolly : dadi aaj tho shayad earth quick hi hone wale hai

Dadi: aaj mai bhi kuch nahi karpaungi beta

And than sukku,jwalu,keerti,sourav,umesh and aman enters

Dadaji : time kya hua hai aap ki ghadi mai?

Sukku : kya dadaji ghar main itne sare ghadi hai aap humse puch rahe hai

Umesh : ( gives killing look to sukku ) dadaji vo hum

Lakshmi : nishu ...nishu kaha hai

Daadaji :nsiha kaha hai??

Sukku : vo aarahi hai !!

Dadji :arahi hai matlap ..aap sab yahi par hai vo akeli aaarahi hai kya ??

Nisha enters with kabir and viraj

Laksmi and ramesh was shocked seeing nisha in that state and they ran towards nisha

Laksmi : ( crying ) kya hua nishu..ramesh maine kaha tha na kuch gadbad hain ..dhekliya nishu ko ye bandage ye sab kya hai ??

Ramesh : beta kya hua ??

Nishu : lakshmi relax me ..kuch nahi hua hai todi si chot lagi hai bas teek hojayegi

Dadi: nishu mari bacchi ye ke hua,kaise hua ??

Sukku : dadi vo gay ( nisha stops him)

Nisha: dadi vo main akeli apni gadi se kahi ja rahi thi chotice accident hua ( she signaled all the cosines and viraj ,kabir not to tell the truth dolly observe that)

Virendar: aajo beta andar tho aajo

Viraj : dadaji hum jante hai ki aapko itne der ladkiyonko bahar rehna pasad nahi hai ..please iss baar maaf kijiye ye aakri baar hai..nisha ko hosh aane main vaqt laga isiliye sabko rukna pad

Mohan: par beta aap log pehle phone main bata dete tho accha hota na

Kabir : uncle agar humne aap logo ko phone pe batade te aap yaha chainse bait pate the kya .aap sab tension main aaja the especially lakshmi aunty(and than nisha falls down )

Sukku : nishuuu...kya hua hai utho maa pani le aauo(and they spray water on her face )

All are worried

Ramesh : beta kya hau ?tu teek hai na

Viraj ; doctor ko bhulu kya?

Nisha : nahi ..main teek hun todasa chakkar aagaya bas

Dadi : ye ji aap bhi na baccho ko yahi khade khade kya paresha kar rahe ho..tak gaye honge aram karne dijiye jo hua so hua chodiye aage se aisa kuch nahi hoga

Daadaji : teek hai bahi ..nisha ko uske kamare main leke chalo (all the cousins and viraj and kabir went to nisha's room)

Dolly : chichi nishu ko ek glass garam milk le aayiye wo bhi haldi wala

Ramesh : han lakshmi le auo ,main abhi aati hun tu aram karo nishu

Lakshmi : han main bhi abhi dood leke aati hun

Dolly close the door

Keerti ; dolly di apne darwasa kyun band kiya??

Dolly : I knowns aap logone bahar jo kuch bhi kaha vo joot hai

Nishu : kya dolly di kiski baat kar rahi hai aap

Dolly : maine dhekha nishu tu ne sabko signal dete huye ..aakhir main tumhari behan hu ..mujhe itna bhi nahi patachalega tum logo ke man main kya chal rahahai ..mai itna janti hun ki tum log kab joot bolege kab sacch ..ab batao kya baat hai

Sourav : dolly vo ( he explains everything)

Dolly : sacch!! thank god nishu tujhe kuch nahi hua hai (she cries)

Nishu : di aap ab ronmat ..varna maa ajjayegi or han iss bare main aap kisiko nahi batogi promise kijiye

Dolly : par kyun nishu ??

Nisha : nahi dolly di sab pareshan hojayenge

Viraj : aaj se kisiko pareshan honeki zaroorth nahi main rahunga nisha ke saat hamesha

Kabir: bhai mujhe lagta hai hame police complaint karna chahiye

Viraj : mujhe bhi ais alagta hai hamre pass proofs bhi hai..phir bhi ek baar dadaji se puch na hoga aakhir unki beti hai buaji..

Nisha : nahii..bilkul nahi ..sab bhul jayiye koi complaint nahi karega bas

Kabir : par kyun ?

Nisha : issi vajah se main sab sacch batane main dar rahi thi ..nahi agar aap log aisa kiya tho meri kasm

Sourav : sir chodiye na..agar aap complaint kiya tho gusse main gayatri mam ne phirse kuch kiya tho