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Posted: 10 years ago
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A chota sa Nibir os , hope Nibirians like it.

Kabir walked out from the mela deeply hurt, why wouldn't he be that Viraj just accused him for dashing into Kaira intentionally and Nisha also believed that, after all that he tried to do to make her happy during the trip she didn't consider him even as normal friend if not anything else. Kabir new who it was to get hurt, to get your heart broken, he had faced it many times. Kabir's mother was quite rich after his uncle and aunt died in a car accident when Kabir was very young his mother took care of all the business, so he started to get less time from her and spend more time with his nanny, who he loved dearly, but sadly she died a few days before his seventeenth birthday. Kabir never knew who his father was also he was very rich for these reasons whenever it came for friendship there had been only two situations for him either it was friendship for money, or those few people who weren't money minded seemed to love asking the question "where is your father?" When he had met Nisha on the trip, something clicked in him, he just wanted to make her smile, smile so bright that it could light up her whole world and maybe his to.

Nisha was extremely angry at Kabir, she apologized to Viraj from Kabir's side and left the place.
Nisha (to herself in anger): First this guy will make a thousand mistakes, than others will have to apologize for them. (Pause) Face the situation, when he said that I thought that he had some sense, but no, his definition of face the situation actual means to trouble others by childish tactics. (Long pause) I haven't scene kirti, sukku or bunty for a long time, let me see where they are.

Nisha calls kirti, she tell them where they are and she goes to that area.
Nisha (still in anger): what are you guys doing here.
Kirti: Nishu, why are you so angry, we haven't made that big mistake.
Nisha is about to say that she is angry on Kabir not them, when sukku speaks up
Sukku: Yes Nishu, we only threw a balloon.
Nisha: You guys threw that balloon
Kirti:ya, that is why you are angry.
Nisha: Did Kabir no what you guys were going to do,
Sukku Kirti-No
Bunty: yes nishu di, when sukku bro was aiming at Viraj sir, Kabir bhaiya was running towards us, I guess to stop him.

Nisha is feeling bad for all she said to Kabir, she also realizes that he must not have dashed into Kaira purposely, it must have all been a coincidence, she thinks she should find him and apologize foreign rude and say thank you for standing by her cousins.

Kirti: Nishu where are you lost.
Nisha: Kirti that Kabir
Sukku: Kabir??

Nisha looks down guiltily and tells them every thing, Kirti thinks she has got a very good jeeju, sukku feels bad for not treating Kabir well.

Nisha: Kirti, I should apologize to Kabir, god knows where he his.
Bunty: I had seen him leaving the mela around half an hour ago.
Nisha: I 'll try his phone (calls) no one is picking. (Pause) I know where he is going to be.

At the bus stand
Nisha: where is this boy? I can't see him anywhere but am hundred percent sure he is here.
After a while Nisha spots someone sitting on bench legs folded, and face buried in between.
Nisha: Kabir (placing a hand on his shoulder) Kabir am sorry, please forgive me.
He doesn't reply.
Nisha: I am apologizing Kabir at least look at me (she lifts his head up)
Nisha gets shocked seeing Kabir's eyes red and watery, filled with pain, Kabir doesn't no what to do and hugs Nisha, Nisha hugs him back.
Kabir: Am not a bad guy, I'm not (he kept mumbling )
Nisha: I know your not.
Kabir (wipes his eyes and back to jolly mood): wifey you love me so much that for a few moments I was away from your eyes and you came to search for me all by myself.
Nisha: If my hubby goes missing why shouldn't I get tensed.
Both laugh.


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Tressa thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it.. Especially the last line..wifey.. hubby. I can even visualize the scene. 😃 😳
I guess I have lost it. good one though. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written.. I can actually visualize the sequence taking place.. I adored how realistically you portrayed the scenario.. the ending was too cute.. did Nisha just say she came looking for her hubby.. 😆😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow first Nibir Os i have read. Congrats. Looking forward to some more beautiful stories of Nibir.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please do write some more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally a NiBir story 🥳 this was just Awww! yaar Cho cho sweet!! I really liked the background story u have given for kabir and that last scene ❤️i totally was able to imagine and visualize it happening, hubby.. wifey.. So NiBir 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow first nibir Os
loved it dear beautifully written
and do write more
Edited by SONAL30 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome blossom 👏🤗
see sun day we do not have nauc so can you give us updates
every sun day ?we will not feel restless then.

please do write more.

and according to telly tadka poll kabir leading with 51% votes


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Posted: 10 years ago
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At last NiBir OS...this was so cute...love it...the ending brought a smile to my face..wonder when we will get to hear her say hubby
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww how cute they are ...very nice os ...luved their patch up😳
Edited by hemanthra - 10 years ago

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