*A Tale of Two Brothers*by Aditi & Jhanvi *Stopped* - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyselfMihu

*Waves hand *
*Jumps until being noticed *
Yeah so finally Mujhpe dhyaan aya.
Aditi and Jhanvi ! .
It was Pulse exciting. Really looking forward to read it. Gona bookmark it ❤️



Hey Mihu! I'm glad you found it exciting! By the way Belated Happy Birthday! May the whole year be full of festivities for you 🥳

Edited by jhanvi.123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Will wait for both Aditi. 😊
All the best for everything!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Grishu30

Awesome prologue...really it seems very interesting..eagerly waiting to read..pls try to continue soon..


Thank You Grishu! 😊 Max limit for updation of chapter 1 is by Sunday!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Guys, here's the character Sketch without further ado!

Character Sketch


Viraj Singh Rathore : Ace shooter, Viraj Singh Rathore has just faced a huge road block in life. He has recovered from his paralysis under his father's care and is now rebuilding his dream - Lakshya Academy, an academy that coaches shooters to become the best. He is scared to pick up the gun now, and doesn't know where life is taking him. Viraj is the most eligible bachelor in town, yet he is modest. Calm, calculating and very charming. Supremely polite, he believes in people and always gives them a second chance of redemption. He misses his mother who left him when he was only 7.

Kabir Singh : An outwardly cheerful twenty two year old, he knows to charm his way into anything. A beautiful surface with a terrible depth. Kabir lives in London with his mother. He loves her and yet hates the fact that she never divulges into details of their family. He is strong willed, straightforward and smart. With a love for Sherlock Holmes and strong dislike for secrets, Kabir wants know everything people don't tell him. He respects lineages, as he thinks he doesn't have one. He is the Portia who can make anyone believe anything.

Nisha Ganghwal : A completely atypical tomboy, Nisha is known to be fearless. Very sensible, smart and sweet, she is just recovering from her disturbing childhood experiences. She is a support to all her cousins and family, solving everyone's problems while forgetting her own. She has joined the Lakshya Academy and unbeknownst to her, a great turn and a huge surprise awaits her.

Arjun Singh Rathore : Arjun is a doctor by profession but has been unable to work after his wife abandoned him. He guides Viraj and supports him, but is a broken man. He respects his father Vikram and loves his sister Gayatri and his niece Priyanka.

Vasundhara Singh: Like Shakespeare's Prospero, she is a princess who has been forced into hiding... She has raised Kabir to believe in the power of Goodness. She continues to bid her time, longing for a glance of her eldest son and husband.

Vikram Singh Rathore: Jelous of his brother in childhood, anger and greed in youth and hatred in old age, Vikram has known only negative emotions all his life. He has an uncanny ability of gaining useful information and rarely falters in using any means to achieve his aims. He is the Shylock, for whom, no pound of flesh is sufficient. All those know him and his family are amazed at the stark difference of nature between him and his son Arjun, who is a kind hearted righteous man.

Gayatri Chauhan : A single mother Gayatri tends to forget that she is a princess no more. Sponging off her brother and nephew, she leads a luxurious life. A sadist with a spineless conscience, she is known to flirt with people half her age. Outer beauty and show off are the only things that attract her.

Priyanka Chauhan : A beautiful daughter of a beautiful mother, Priyanka is a typical frivolous girl. Canopied under the love and care of her elder brother and uncle, she can be a snob or a sweetheart, depending on the bank balance of the person.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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fantastic...loved the prologue
it will be interesting...do continue...and best of luck to both of you..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Why u do this? Hum kaise padhenge if you pique my curiosity this way? *goes into a corner and cries*
Beautiful character sketch.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: achirasingh16

fantastic...loved the prologue
it will be interesting...do continue...and best of luck to both of you..


Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _UptoNoGood_

Why u do this? Hum kaise padhenge if you pique my curiosity this way? *goes into a corner and cries*

Beautiful character sketch.



Shivi, Aditi has already gone off to study phone off kar ke :D
P.S. I'm glad you're liking it :) and Aditi will be replying tomorrow ;)
Edited by jhanvi.123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Perfect depiction of characters dear...really like the straight forwardness of ur writing skill...just to the point character r given..,,, waiting for ur story to unfold ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
nice concept
aditi n jhanvi looking forwrd to it:))

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