FF: (NIRAJ) I Was ALWAYS Yours (Part 15, Page 30) 10/04/15 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Sorry Fariba,I was held up in so much of work so didn't get time to comment.

Read your two updates in one go.

Poor Viraj trying hard to say sorry to Nisha and she is avoiding him like anything.

Kabir's drama to make Niraj together,so making an excuse and flying to Dubai.

You have written so well,amazing,keep going girl.👏👏
Edited by Rinu08 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Rinu08

Sorry Fariba,I was held up in so much of work so didn't get time to comment.


Read your two updates in one go.

Poor Viraj trying hard to say sorry to Nisha and she is avoiding him like anything.

Kabir's drama to make Niraj together,so making an excuse and flying to Dubai.

You have written so well,amazing,keep going girl.👏👏


Haha no. Its completely fine. 😃
Thank you so Much Rinuuu 😳
Really glad that you liked it. 😳 😛 Yes and don't worry about anything. Everything will be sorted. 😆
Edited by Fariba100 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Aditi_28

Hi Fariba! :)
I finally got a chance to catch up with your story! Had bookmarked it when you began.
I like the way you write. It's light and appeasing :)
Also, not only Viraj, I love your sensible and sane Kabir too! :P
I like that he is understanding and not demanding.
Loved it till now, will wait for the next updates! :)
Oh, and I might comment on updates together, I'm not sure how much time I will have. (Assuming you want to know why I didn't comment abhi tak :P)
BTW, you're pretty quick with your updates!
Thank you! :D


Hii Aditi. Haha. 😆 I am glad that you like it. Well, coming from you. Wow. You are just Fab. I love your piece of writing.😳
Well, yes. We literally had no classes for like what? .-. Around 3months. Had lots and lots of time. Was just utilizing it. 😆 but it was like I thought I might forget what I wanted to write, thus I thought of being a bit quicker than usual. 😆 😆
But from today, my school started. [:X] So might not have all the time in the world. 😳
But yes. Thank you soon muchhh 😃
Edited by Fariba100 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
its really nice update yar plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: kiranashraf

its really nice update yar plzzz continue soon


Yes. 😆
Will update soon. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
UPDATED (PART 7)

Nisha woke up the next morning. She was all alone in the room. After a very long time, she was alone in a room which was actually 'Hers'.
Nisha- Wahh, Kya baat hain. Kitne Dino ke baad main akeli hu 'Mere' kamre me.
She got up from the bed, and washed her face and got down. She went down and grabbed an apple. Vasundhara wasn't up yet, but Viraj was there for breakfast.
Viraj- Good morning.
Nisha smiled at him.
Nisha- Hi. Good morning. Maa kaha hain?
Viraj- Unka vraat hain. Toh breakfast me aakar Kya karengi? Wo nahi ayii.
Nisha- Oh accha. Aapne kha liya?
Viraj- Nahi.
Nisha- Aap bohot kaam khate hain ajkal. Main coffee bana du?
Viraj- Umm, sorry? Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hain. Hum khate hain. Ha, thik hain. Coffee sounds good.
Nisha went to the kitchen, and made two cups of coffee for Viraj and herself. She handed his coffee mug to him. This wasn't unusual for him. She often made coffee him, as she knew that he loved her coffee.
Viraj- Thank you.
Nisha- Your welcome.
Viraj- Aap ne Maa se kaha?
Nisha looked at him in a weird way.
Nisha- kaab batati main unhe? Matlab, kal hi toh aap se baat hua tha Aapse. Toh kaab unse baat karti main?
Viraj- Oh. It's okay. Aap bata dena Maa ko.
Nisha- Kyu? Aap baar baar kyu puch kahe hain? Hmm? Main nahi bataungi. Aap bataenge. Nisha started giggling.
Viraj- Kyu?
Nisha couldn't stop giggling. Viraj stopped talking. She was so pretty, she was back. This wasn't Mrs. Nisha Rathore. This was the old Miss Nisha Gangwal. She was carefree.
Viraj- Hum nahi, aap. Aap bataengi. Kyuki... I am very tired, aur main maa se ye baat kehne ke liye ab upar nahi ja paunga. Aur Nisha? Aap aaj bilkul pehle ki tarha lag Rahi hain.
Nisha stopped giggling. Now was smiling at him. He was surely in love with her. She knew it. How could this not be love?
Nisha- Thik hain. Main bataungi Maa ko. Par aap tired nahi hain. Hume office Jana hain!
Viraj- Toh jaiye? Batake aaiye jaldise!
Nisha- Viraj?
Viraj- Hmm?
Nisha- Aap aaj bhi mujhse pyaar karte hain na?
Viraj couldn't believe his ears. What had he been asked! OMG. Was he in his senses?
Viraj- Umm. Nisha? Aap ye Kya puch Rahi hain Humse?
Nisha- Kuch nahi. Main Maa ko Bol kar aati hu.
She smiled at him and left.
Viraj was more that surprised. Did Nisha actually ask that to him? What did she expect as an answer?

Nisha was at ease. She left so good after asking Viraj that question. Yes. She really wanted to know. She wanted to know if his love was still there. She was so happy. Well, she had asked Vasundhara, and she gave then her permission.

Nisha decided that she would go to LA with Viraj in his car instead of taking her scooty. She wanted comfort for a change. They were in the car.
Viraj- Aap ke packing kar liya hain?
Nisha- Nahi. Aapne?
Viraj- Nahi.
Nisha- Aapko meri madat chahiye? Main apna wala kar lungi aaj hi.
Viraj- Umm, it's okay. I will manage. I guess.
Nisha- It's okay. Aap Bol sakte hain. Main kar dungi aapki madat.
Viraj- Okay. I think I kinda need help. Bohot kaam hain Hume. So, yeah.
She smiled at him. She really cared for him. She felt sad that for her, he had to go through a lot. He only loved her. That's all. She only loved him. That's all too. But, alas. It was so not right. The circumstances. But did they deserve it?

They reached the academy. When Nisha and Viraj reached the academy, Saurav came running to Viraj.
Saurav- Good morning sir. Sir ek ladki aayi hain. Bol Rahi hain ke aap ki dost hain, nahi sorry, aapki dost thi, pata nahi. Bas usse Aapse milna hain.
Viraj- Naam Kya hain Unka?
Saurav- Jiya? Jiya Sharma?
Viraj looked at Nisha, and then he again turned towards Saurav.
Viraj- Bhej dijiye unhe humare Cabin me.
Saying this he left.

Precap- (I will tell you who this Jiya Sharma is. You could just google and see her face X'D) Nisha will get too keen to know who this Jiya is and she will blurt out her feelings for Viraj to him.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Yippee first to comment
Its awesome as always 👏
Hmm... Slowly slowly feelings are developing again and that essence is there in air❤️
But a twist in tale is now upcoming

Edited by cherrynicolem - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Finally nisha will do her confession just 2 good update...
Waiting for your next update pls update soon can't wait to read ur update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Another awesome update.

My mood was totally off today thinking what is going to happen on next week.

But this update lightened my mood and happy to see the old Nisha back at least in your story and thank you.

By the way who is this Jiya sharma.

Waiting for next one.
Edited by Rinu08 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Awesome
😳 😳 😳
Waiting fr her confession now
Juldi update kerna lol
Everyday kerdu
It's fun to read it everyday
👏 👏 👏

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