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Yeh aap kya kar rahi hai jee 🤣

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Natzeee I wl comment here for chapter 1😉

Excellent Plot U selectted to explore👏👏👏👏👏👏 Claps 4 that first😉

Den I loved How U detalied Nishu's Harkatein with hands 👍🏼

Her changing expressions made Kabir Understand Wat Was She feeling👍🏼 NiBir understands eachother so well😉

He offered his help & at dat pt Nishu's reaction was genuine...😊 I liked dat😃

My most fav sentence was @PINK👏👏👏👏👏 It was painful which clearly showed How Helpless Kabira is feeling + It gave an IRONY too.. See Nishu is searching 4 his father & she knws him very well abt the places ramy can be found etc.. bt Kabir he is just Clueless abt the facts👏👏👏👏👏 Excellent Natzee👍🏼

" I understand what it feels like to search for a person you love so dearly. But you atleast know whoyou are searching for"

I loved How Kabira Made Nishu to stop cry & think wisely.. Yaa I knw he told it a little sarcastic way but still his intension was very clear + it proved he cant see her in tears...

Now Going to read Next CHap as I didnt expected next chap🤣 I thought U stoped aftr writing chap 1😆🤣

I want a TITLE for this Story😛 Pls jaldi se title dhoond lo aur laga doo

Will comment on Chap 2 in different post😉

do continue pls😊...

Originally posted by: picadally

Yeh aap kya kar rahi hai jee 🤣

main ne kuch nahi kiya🤣 bas ek res kiya😆😆 res karana galat bath hai kya🤣

Kash aisa kuch show main hua hota

Natzeee Chap 2 Was Soo Much EMOTIONAL🤔👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

JItna bhi aapki tareef karu utna kam hogaa 4 this Excellent Chapter👍🏼 I wish this cud have been shown in the show😛 I dnt knw How U always make me to say the same with ur works.. Kashh.. App NAUC CV's ke Team mein hothiii

This Chap was BEST bcz of RN bond + NiBir bond

Kabira's Gift 4 Our Shaadi dialogue was nice...😆🤣

@BOLD Genuine Reaction Shown...👏👏👏

Now if this explanation is enough for you can we go inside" she was annoyed that she had to tell Kabir about a secret which was only between her and Ramesh, but then Kabir already knew many things which he shouldn't have.

My fav parts Jisse padke DIL BHAR aayaaa🤗@PINK❤️

Nisha raced towards Ramesh, but was stopped dead in her tracks by Kabir. Kabir caught hold or her arms, Nisha tried to loosen his grip. "Nisha!!" Kabir shook her to get her back to her senses. "Get a grip on yourself. I know this is your personal matter but I have seen your father fight with your uncle at the bus stand. To see that no good has come off him fighting for your happiness will break him even more. You need to console yourself first before you console him". Nisha had realized that Kabir was time and again giving her the right advice.

I loved How Kabira sensibly made Nishu to understand The necessity of controlling her emotionss...👍🏼👏👏👏 See How easily He made Nishu to understand which inturn reflecting NiBir's bond which has just started bcz of UNKNOWN DESTINY factor...☺️ "You need to console urself b4 u console him" Bestest👏👏👏👏👏👏

He gently pushed her towards Ramesh as a motivation.

Again NiBir bond Proven

Natzee I m quoting major part of RN scenes bcz It made me feel CONNECTED...❤️ As I always See Me & My Papa in RN❤️

Nisha placed her hand over Ramesh's shoulder. Ramesh was appalled to see Nisha. She sat besides Ramesh. "What are you doing here? You are here with your bag that means you haven't gone home" he said noticing her remove her backpack from her shoulders and placing it aside. "Who told you I was not at home" Ramesh inquired getting a little impatient now. He tried to study Nisha's face. She dropped her eyes to avoid his gaze. Ramesh realized who it could be he closed his eyes and shook his head. "Laxmi!! She shouldn't have..." he whispered. Nisha looked at Ramesh and frowned. "Your right papa, maa shouldn't have told me anything" Ramesh short her a questioning look. "You should have papa, when I had called to ask you if everything was ok back home, why didn't you tell me anything" she asked with a grim face.

Nishu ke bina bole hi uske face ke expressions dekh kar samaj jaana .. maan ki sari baath jaan lethe hai Ramy... Just like My papa😳 Aww...❤️

Nishu ke last dialogue which I felt was a complain dat was also genuine😛 dat instead of Laxmi Ramy shud have told her abt all... Awww...❤️


He pulled her cheeks and said "Because I wanted you to concentrate on what you had intended to do... Find yourself!!! Everything else is secondary" he assured her not a hint of regret in his tone or on his face.

To which Ramy's answer was indicating Wat ur happiness comes first baaki sab secondary❤️ Every Dad Makes His daughter to feel like PRINCESS...❤️ & wl do anything 4 her happiness 😳see the same thing happened here tooo❤️

The last @PINK Portion Made me feel same like Kabira.. OVERWHELMED WITH RN BOND
❤️❤️❤️

"Aa chal ke tujhe mai le ke chalu, ik aise gagan ke tale" Nisha started to sing, Ramesh tried his best to hold back his tears. Nisha paused and offered him her finger in the same way Ramesh had offered his finger when she had faced her heartbreak."Jahan ghum bhee naa ho aansu bhee naa ho, bas pyar hee pyar pale" Nisha continued to sing. Ramesh looked at Nisha with affection. He extended his hand to take nisha's finger. Instead she opened all her fingers and held out her hand. Ramesh placed his hand in hers and hugged her tightly. "Please come back home papa, I need you" she pleaded like a kid. Ramesh broke the embrace and wiped Nisha's tears and placed his hand on her head to bless her. Smiling he said "You do know how to fulfill a promise given to your mother. Lets go home!!" he patted Nisha's cheek like he always did when he was happy.

Excellently penned down Natzeee... 👏👏👏👏👏Dats Wat I can Say abt this para... and abt this chapp👍🏼

I dont knw whether U wl continue this FF...😊 Still I want U to keep this in mind dat Whenevr U feel like updating this one.. Pls Dnt Forget To PM ur Choti sis😳🤗

THank U 4 Writing this FF Sooo PERFECTLYyy🤗❤️

Originally posted by: naina.majik

do continue pls😊...

very well written story😳👏

Amazing

Thanks nishu 😉

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Kash aisa kuch show main hua hota

So beautiful

Yeah even i wished the same while writing this 😆

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

My reaction🤣

RES
🤣

UNRES😆

Natzeee I wl comment here for chapter 1😉

Excellent Plot U selectted to explore👏 Claps 4 that first😉

Den I loved How U detalied Nishu's Harkatein with hands 👍🏼

Her changing expressions made Kabir Understand Wat Was She feeling👍🏼 NiBir understands eachother so well😉

He offered his help & at dat pt Nishu's reaction was genuine...😊 I liked dat😃

My most fav sentence was @PINK👏 It was painful which clearly showed How Helpless Kabira is feeling + It gave an IRONY too.. See Nishu is searching 4 his father & she knws him very well abt the places ramy can be found etc.. bt Kabir he is just Clueless abt the facts👏 Excellent Natzee👍🏼

<font color="#FF0099">" I understand what it feels like to search for a person you love so dearly. But you atleast know whoyou are searching for"

</font>I loved How Kabira Made Nishu to stop cry & think wisely.. Yaa I knw he told it a little sarcastic way but still his intension was very clear + it proved he cant see her in tears...

Now Going to read Next CHap as I didnt expected next chap🤣 I thought U stoped aftr writing chap 1😆🤣

I want a TITLE for this Story😛 Pls jaldi se title dhoond lo aur laga doo

Will comment on Chap 2 in different post😉

This is what i wanted to portray that while nisha knows what she is searching for kabir doesnt yet he manages to show nisha the right direction

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Natzeee Chap 2 Was Soo Much EMOTIONAL👏

JItna bhi aapki tareef karu utna kam hogaa 4 this Excellent Chapter👍🏼 I wish this cud have been shown in the show😛 I dnt knw How U always make me to say the same with ur works.. Kashh.. App NAUC CV's ke Team mein hothiii

This Chap was BEST bcz of RN bond + NiBir bond

Kabira's Gift 4 Our Shaadi dialogue was nice...😆🤣

@BOLD Genuine Reaction Shown...👏👏👏

Now if this explanation is enough for you can we go inside" she was
annoyed that she had to tell Kabir about a secret which was only between
her and Ramesh, but then Kabir already knew many things which he
shouldn't have.

My fav parts Jisse padke DIL BHAR aayaaa🤗@PINK❤️

<font color="#FF0099">Nisha raced towards Ramesh, but was stopped dead in her tracks by Kabir.
Kabir caught hold or her arms, Nisha tried to loosen his grip.
"Nisha!!" Kabir shook her to get her back to her senses. "Get a grip on
yourself. I know this is your personal matter but I have seen your
father fight with your uncle at the bus stand. To see that no good has
come off him fighting for your happiness will break him even more. You
need to console yourself first before you console him". Nisha had
realized that Kabir was time and again giving her the right advice.

<font color="#000000">I loved How Kabira sensibly made Nishu to understand The necessity of controlling her emotionss...👏
See How easily He made Nishu to understand which inturn reflecting
NiBir's bond which has just started bcz of UNKNOWN DESTINY factor...☺️ "You need to console urself b4 u console him" Bestest👏

</font></font><font color="#FF0099">He gently pushed her towards Ramesh as a motivation. </font>

<font color="#000000">Again NiBir bond Proven

Natzee I m quoting major part of RN scenes bcz It made me feel CONNECTED...❤️ As I always See Me & My Papa in RN❤️

</font>Nisha placed her hand over Ramesh's shoulder. Ramesh was appalled to see
Nisha. She sat besides Ramesh. "What are you doing here? You are here
with your bag that means you haven't gone home" he said noticing her
remove her backpack from her shoulders and placing it aside. "Who told
you I was not at home" Ramesh inquired getting a little impatient now.
He tried to study Nisha's face. She dropped her eyes to avoid his gaze.
Ramesh realized who it could be he closed his eyes and shook his head.
"Laxmi!! She shouldn't have..." he whispered. Nisha looked at Ramesh and
frowned. "Your right papa, maa shouldn't have told me anything" Ramesh
short her a questioning look. "You should have papa, when I had called
to ask you if everything was ok back home, why didn't you tell me
anything" she asked with a grim face.

<font color="#000000">Nishu ke bina bole hi uske face ke expressions dekh kar samaj jaana .. maan ki sari baath jaan lethe hai Ramy... Just like My papa😳 Aww...❤️

Nishu ke last dialogue which I felt was a complain dat was also genuine😛 dat instead of Laxmi Ramy shud have told her abt all... Awww...</font><font color="#FF0099"><font color="#000000">❤️

</font></font>
<font color="#FF0099">He pulled her cheeks and said "Because I wanted you to concentrate on
what you had intended to do... Find yourself!!! Everything else is
secondary" he assured her not a hint of regret in his tone or on his
face.</font>

To which Ramy's answer was indicating Wat ur happiness comes first baaki sab secondary<font color="#FF0099"><font color="#000000">❤️ Every Dad Makes His daughter to feel like PRINCESS...</font></font><font color="#000000">❤️</font> & wl do anything 4 her happiness 😳see the same thing happened here tooo<font color="#FF0099"><font color="#000000">❤️

The last @PINK Portion Made me feel same like Kabira.. OVERWHELMED WITH RN BOND</font></font>
<font color="#000000">❤️</font><font color="#000000">❤️</font><font color="#000000">❤️</font>

<font color="#FF0099">"Aa chal ke tujhe mai le ke chalu, ik aise gagan ke tale" Nisha started
to sing, Ramesh tried his best to hold back his tears. Nisha paused and
offered him her finger in the same way Ramesh had offered his finger
when she had faced her heartbreak."Jahan ghum bhee naa ho aansu bhee naa
ho, bas pyar hee pyar pale" Nisha continued to sing. Ramesh looked at
Nisha with affection. He extended his hand to take nisha's finger.
Instead she opened all her fingers and held out her hand. Ramesh placed
his hand in hers and hugged her tightly. "Please come back home papa, I
need you" she pleaded like a kid. Ramesh broke the embrace and wiped
Nisha's tears and placed his hand on her head to bless her. Smiling he
said "You do know how to fulfill a promise given to your mother. Lets go
home!!" he patted Nisha's cheek like he always did when he was happy.

<font color="#000000">Excellently penned down Natzeee... 👏Dats Wat I can Say abt this para... and abt this chapp👍🏼

I dont knw whether U wl continue this FF...😊 Still I want U to keep this in mind dat Whenevr U feel like updating this one.. Pls Dnt Forget To PM ur Choti sis😳🤗

THank U 4 Writing this FF Sooo PERFECTLYyy🤗❤️
</font></font>

I wanted something like this to happen in the show as well, cauz nisha understood ramesh well and vice versa

I dont think ill be cont this saru 😆