a story please read (nauc ff)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys im new to nauc forum i always wanted to see a nice scene where nisha would bring ramesh home after convincing him. So just thought of writing a story on that line hope you guys enjoy reading it.

this is when kabir and nisha are back to jaipur.


"Oh hello", Kabir called out to Nisha. Nisha turned around folding her hands. She was determined to win this argument. " In case you have forgottenlet me remind you, I have no money with me thanks to you". "Ofcourse I rememberthat's the best thing I have done in this entire trip, losing your bag" shereplied smugly. " You have to pay for my exp enses till I am in Jaipur, you hadpromised" he said pointing a finger at her. " I had promised to pay for yourstay in Mt. Abu, now that we are back in Jaipur you are on your own. Do notpush your luck too much. Get it" she said snapping her fingers. He opened hismouth to argue further, but before he could say something Nisha's Phone rang.She threw up her hands in the air and clapped them as if to thank god forsaving her from Kabir's non stopblabbering. Pouting she removed her phone from her jeans,she was delighted tosee who was calling her. "Hi Laxmi " She chirped. "Nishu ... Please get Rameshback" is all Laxmi managed to say through a choked voice. "Laxmi Just relaxme!! " Nisha tried to calm down Laxmi, alltraces of humor gone from her voice. " Now tell me what happened to Papa" .Laxmi informed Nisha about the entire incident that took place in her absenceand how Ramesh had left the house without informing anyone. " Nisha pleasebring him back only you can do that please... " she said crying her heart out. "I will Maa, I will bring papa back, I promise you, but you need to stop cryingand be strong atleast for Bunty and Sukku. I'll call you back once I find Papa,till then be strong. Bye Maa". She stood there her phone still to her ear, shestared blankly, confused if what she had heard right now was true or just anightmare. "Anything serious" Kabir enquired sensing something was definitely wrong. "I assume you need tofind your father, let me come along with you." "That's none of your business Idon't need your help" Nisha thundered at his interference and at the fact thatKabir now knew a very personal thing about her family. " I understand what itfeels like to search for a person you love so dearly. But you atleast know whoyou are searching for" he replied politely ignoring Nisha's rude behaviortowards him. Nisha instantly realized what Kabir was talking about, she nowknew how difficult it must be for him to search for that boy in the photo whenhe knew nothing about him, he was right atleast she knew who she was searchingfor. Pity had taken the place of anger, she nodded slightly in affirmation andallowed him to come with her. They spent the next two hours searching forRamesh. Not getting a single clue about Ramesh made Nisha slowly loose all hopeof finding Ramesh. She had searched for him in all the placec where he couldhave gone in a situation like this, friends, family, hotels everywhere.Dejected she sat on a bench next to a tea stall. Kabir sat besides her. Sheshuddered at the thought of Laxmi being shattered if she went home withoutRamesh. Just the thought made tears roll out from her eyes. " Does crying helpfind someone, I would have done it as well, no problem I can try it now" Kabirdeliberately taunted her on her weakness. " Cant you ever be serious" how couldhe be so insensitive she thought to herself. " No I cannot be serious, but Isee you are... have you managed to get any solution" Nisha dropped her eyes inresponse. " I thought so, crying will not help you in anyway, it will never letyou think clearly. So just clam down close your eyes and think again. You mayhave missed out on something" he said in a soothing voice. Nisha thought he didhave a point here, she closed her eyes and recollected all the places she hadbeen to, searching for her father, had she really missed out on some place.. ohyes she had. Her eyes flew open, staring incredulously at Kabir she said " LetsGo, you do talk sense at times". She started to go. "Oh Hello, where are yougoing" Kabir said offended at her comment. " ill tell you on the way, now hurryup I cant wait to see Papa".
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice 👏
please continue 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nic story Dr...continue waiting for next update😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi this is very interesting. 👍🏼 Do continue.


PS: Dear, do add to the title what type of ff this is- nauc FF or if any pairing is there then their FF, so that more ppl will check it out. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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do continue pls😊...very well written story 😳👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@lifez_beautiful thanks for your suggestion will edit the post name and thank you all for your comments
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Ch 2
About an hour later Nisha and Kabir reached a bunglow which appeared to have been closed for a long time now. There was no lock on the gate, which seconded Nisha's speculation that Ramesh might be inside. "Nisha will you just tell me whats going on and why are we standing outside this bunglow. Has your father invested in some property, if yes then I like the bunglow it's a good wedding gift for us" Kabir winked at Nisha. Nisha smacked him on his head. "This is Papa's friend's bunglow. He doesn't stay in India, he had asked papa to take care of the bunglow while leaving. He holds sentimental value for the bunglow and he could trust only papa to care of it. Whenever papa needs time for himself he comes here. No one knows about this place except me. Now if this explanation is enough for you can we go inside" she was annoyed that she had to tell Kabir about a secret which was only between her and Ramesh, but then Kabir already knew many things which he shouldn't have. Nisha paved her way towards the garden area thinking all the way how she would convince Ramesh to come home. As soon as she reached the garden area she found Ramesh perched on the grass singing his heart out. "Mai jahan rahu, mai kahee bhee hu, teree yaad saath hai Kisee se kahu, ke nahee kahu, yeh jo dil kee baat hai..." He paused for a while as the memories of his never ending struggle for acceptance by dadaji, the struggle with himself whether to inform Laxmi before leaving the house all flashed before him while singing the song. Yet he continued because this was the only way he could vent out his frustration. "Kehne ko saath apane ek duneeya chalatee hai Per chhupke iss dil me tanhaayee palatee hai, Bas yaad saath hai, teree yaad saath hai." The last few lines had emotionally drained Ramesh. Nisha who was watching her father from a distance, convey his frame of mind through the song, was now crying uncontrollably. What had she made of her father she thought to herself. Her father had sacrificed his own happiness in return for hers. She had unintentionally put her father in a situation like this.

Nisha raced towards Ramesh, but was stopped dead in her tracks by Kabir. Kabir caught hold or her arms, Nisha tried to loosen his grip. "Nisha!!" Kabir shook her to get her back to her senses. "Get a grip on yourself. I know this is your personal matter but I have seen your father fight with your uncle at the bus stand. To see that no good has come off him fighting for your happiness will break him even more. You need to console yourself first before you console him". Nisha had realized that Kabir was time and again giving her the right advice. She took a deep breath and wiped her tears. She turned took look at Ramesh, by then Kabir had taken his hands off her. He gently pushed her towards Ramesh as a motivation. She smiled at Kabir weakly. Nisha placed her hand over Ramesh's shoulder. Ramesh was appalled to see Nisha. She sat besides Ramesh. "What are you doing here? You are here with your bag that means you haven't gone home" he said noticing her remove her backpack from her shoulders and placing it aside. "Who told you I was not at home" Ramesh inquired getting a little impatient now. He tried to study Nisha's face. She dropped her eyes to avoid his gaze. Ramesh realized who it could be he closed his eyes and shook his head. "Laxmi!! She shouldn't have..." he whispered. Nisha looked at Ramesh and frowned. "Your right papa, maa shouldn't have told me anything" Ramesh short her a questioning look. "You should have papa, when I had called to ask you if everything was ok back home, why didn't you tell me anything" she asked with a grim face.

He pulled her cheeks and said "Because I wanted you to concentrate on what you had intended to do... Find yourself!!! Everything else is secondary" he assured her not a hint of regret in his tone or on his face. "Papa lets go home and sort everything" Nisha said hopeful that Ramesh would not turn down her request. "No Nisha. I have found solace over here. Please let me stay, give me some time, I hope you understand" he said placing his hand on her face. "Papa I understand but I have promised Maa that I will bring you back home" she placed her hand over his. "I will not go home right now Nisha" Ramesh pulled back his hand from hers. "Bauji's words are still fresh in my head and I cannot expect Laxmi to understand me right now. If I go home now I will never find peace which I am so desperate to have" he looked away from Nisha to hide his pain. Nisha kept staring at Ramesh hoping he might just stop being so rigid. But he was not going to budge. She got up to leave. How would she face Laxmi, she had to do something. She racked her brains for a minute or two and then sat back besides Ramesh. "Aa chal ke tujhe mai le ke chalu, ik aise gagan ke tale" Nisha started to sing, Ramesh tried his best to hold back his tears. Nisha paused and offered him her finger in the same way Ramesh had offered his finger when she had faced her heartbreak."Jahan ghum bhee naa ho aansu bhee naa ho, bas pyar hee pyar pale" Nisha continued to sing. Ramesh looked at Nisha with affection. He extended his hand to take nisha's finger. Instead she opened all her fingers and held out her hand. Ramesh placed his hand in hers and hugged her tightly. "Please come back home papa, I need you" she pleaded like a kid. Ramesh broke the embrace and wiped Nisha's tears and placed his hand on her head to bless her. Smiling he said "You do know how to fulfill a promise given to your mother. Lets go home!!" he patted Nisha's cheek like he always did when he was happy. Kabir stood far away overwhelmed by the father - daughter relation. He longed for his father and truth behind the photo even more.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice emotional update 👏

pm kar yaar so many nirajians posts that they push away nibirian posts 😭
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Originally posted by: I...

very nice emotional update 👏

pm kar yaar so many nirajians posts that they push away nibirian posts 😭

sure i will
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