'Beautifully Broken' Niraj SS updated Part 6 page 12-012/02/ - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: bhagya25

Now here we go with the most different story!
its was just amazing can u plz not let us wait anymore n update soon? Like seriously I want to know viraj ki nimrit ki mom kaun hai ji!!



Ji viraj ki nimrit ki mom ! 😆 mom's suspense is not gonna open up soin . but yup there are gona b loads of Viraj-Nimrit family scenes.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ishqnme

When are you updating next????


kal behen! aaj toh "Judge me" walae ff ki turn h
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: titlimihu

part 2 tomorrow!
i will update on alternate days


WOW THAT 'S GREAT

Originally posted by: titlimihu


kal behen! aaj toh "Judge me" walae ff ki turn h


YAY !!! OK
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...nice and different story...cute part..nimrit and viraj and daaji..update soon...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dffrnt cncpt..
is she nisha's child?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: titlimihu



ooiwwwuee thats a bada wala compliment!
😳
aha Nimrit is Nimrit! she's main element


Ab story itni interesting hai, toh compliment bhi bada hoga 😛
Hmm...Nimrit is pretty interesting waise toh..I'm sure she'll spice up the story well 😆
Jaldi post karo na 😛 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved that last goodbye between niraj wala part...you sounded like a frustrated kid...hope ki asli mein aisa kuch toh bilkul bhi na ho...

nyc plot...plzzz continue ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aaahhaaa...new story with new concept...that's great...
Awww chotu baby nimrit...that's sweet...
As others I m also going to ask same question" are Bhai nimrit ki mamma kaun hai????"...anyway eagerly waiting for next update...till then I will think who is nimmis mom...nany bani jagga jasuus...lovely story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nany

Aaahhaaa...new story with new concept...that's great...

Awww chotu baby nimrit...that's sweet...
As others I m also going to ask same question" are Bhai nimrit ki mamma kaun hai????"...anyway eagerly waiting for next update...till then I will think who is nimmis mom...nany bani jagga jasuus...lovely story...


hihihihaha jagga jasus 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2.
Title-Passed the point of no return.
Viraj's POV
I was driving back to my government cottage. The Mexican government was generous enough towards me in fulfilling my needs and accommodation. Lol Viraj U are Prince for God's sake.
I looked at Nimrit was by now was grazing the meadows on the lane.
Her dark black and Auburn hairs were sweeping right across her face. But being a freak what she is she chose not to remove them.
"Nimrit ? Baby watcha seein" I asked
"Daddie ! Nothing" She replied
And a girl's Nothing means something.
" Please tell me Nimrit! Popr daddie is curious! " I pretended.
"Okay! look at those Trees ! I wants to make my own Christmas tree" Nimrit said with a goofy grin.
"Okay! may in India. Jaipur certainly will have good pine trees love" I spoke absent mindedly.
Wait! Halt! What ? Jaipur . No ways. There is no way I am gonna go to that city of bonkers.

I felt like banging my head on the steering wheel. How I could b so stupid! They just handed me over Air tickets to Jaipur! And I like a greasy giy accepted it. Bang your head now on steering Viraj right now.

"Daddie dont bang youl head on steeling wheel" Nimrit giggled in between my chain of thoughts.
" Was I that loud?" I too giggled .
Nimrit and her infectious giggles.
" No ! but youl facial expression told me" She said
"India beta Nimrit! Hum India ja raha hai" I spoke all exhausted as I reached the cottage and threw open the doors.

I and Nimrit were both busy in packing.
Jaipur ! f**king Jaipur .
Seemed like circle of life had come to the same point and why am I talking Om_shanti_Om crap ? _
I am no Ok and neither have lost my Shantipriya.

"Stupid Daddie! mai kuch bol rahi hu! " Nimrit poked my shoulder.
I zonned out? like again . God.
"Yes !" I said as I locked my suitcase.
"Mera suitcase! Daddie its light as feathers but still it u who will picks it up " Nimrit spoke.
"And Something more ur Highness!" I said as I picked her up . Giving her a full circled round.
"Geeez! daddy now i will walk like a drunkard" Nimrit spoke while maintaining her balance.
"Okay Nimriy Rathod! Here we go to airport." Viraj said as she pulled Nimrit .
Nimrit's small hand fitted in Viraj's bigger one smoothly.
" Did I say I love u to u? " Viraj asked walking as the chauffeur loaded the things
"Nope daddie" Nimrit answered.
" I love u Nimrit" Viraj said .
"I love u innna sara daddie" Nimrit replied. Viraj smiled and they Left for the airport.
"I still love u Arthi! Still" Viraj said mentally.
He had passed the point of no return . Nothing except Nimrit was Left for him to love.


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Meanwhile in Jaipur.

"Nisha!" Kabir shouted from the balcony.
" Kya hai Kabir?" Nisha who was busy dancing on the tunes of 'Joganiya' retorted back.
"Ramesh Uncle" Kabir signalled her.

Nisha ran towards her room.
"Anae do usse choduga nahi Yeh Nisha ko!" Ramesh was pacing back and froth the room
"ha papa" Nisha caught a hold of her breath
"Tu mere marrnae k baad karegi shaadi na?" Ramesh fumed in anger
"Papa pls! " Nishu stump her foot.
"I am not gonna marry and have kids! my academy is good to b married off with me" She continued.
"Pehli baat! Wo Viraj Singh Rathod ki academy hai aur dusri baat ! Kabir tu Nisha ko propose nahi kar paya kya?" Ramedh snapped in anger at Kabir ,who had just entered the room
"kia toh uncle! yeh ladko hai ki maanti hi nahi hai" Kabir shrugged his shoulder.
Nisha immediately left the room. She couldnt handle Kabir and Papa at the same time.
Eversince Viraj Sir left. Correction she left Viraj sir ! Starting the academy from start was main focus of Nisha!.
She worked her arse off to start it.
Not to forget her job as a kindergarten teacher .
She loved this job of hers..
But in her love life ! She had loved Viraj with all the power she had.
She had passed the point of no return in her life. Nothing could come in between her and her dream to b a Shooter.


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Precap:
When Viraj and Nisha finally come face to face.

guys! eeeips hwz it?

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