~|| NAUC TS: Rainbow Series ~ Devils ki Picnic ||~

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hola guys ๐Ÿ˜Š
I am Vish ๐Ÿ˜Š
Presenting my first ever TS on NAUC ๐Ÿ˜Š

I have not proof read this.. ๐Ÿ˜Š
Please ignore typo errors ๐Ÿ˜Š

Happy Reading ๐Ÿค“
Blue = Nishu



The Land of Devils i.e Hell..
Messiness all around..
Lake of fire..
And I am the biggest devil ... Or should I say Devil of Devils... This defines me better..
In the world of darkness there comes a white light... And there enters the king of angel in devilish world to convert evils into angels through his powers... Oh nooo... We are happy being devils and now here comes angels to convert us into angels...



Oh damn here I felt as if some one splashed bucket of water on my face...
I finally opened my eyes and realised that was my dream ..
But now the question is who splashed water on me?
I am sure its Bunty
I won't leave him today..
But to my surprise it was Rukmawati..
Rukmawati tu? I asked
๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜•
Rukmawati: Vo mujhe maaf kar dijiye didi... Mujhe laga apke andar phir se maata ghus ayi isilye toh aap aaj itni der tak so rahi hai

Der tak... Oh damn 9 baj gye.. I checked my watch... Time to face house of angel aka Dada ji.. Who must be ready to give task of torture to our gang of devils.. I asked Rukmawati to go.. As I need to fresh up or else I ll get more late..

***9:20 AM***
Finally I am ready... But wait a minute! Where are my devils?
I went down..
Good morning Nishu.. Roopal Chachi wished me.. I smiled and wish her the same..
As I was looking for my devils...
There comes chotu devil..

Bunty: Nishu di ... ๐Ÿฅณ
Jaldi se ready ho jao... Aaj hum sab picnic pe ja rahe hai... Yipeee
I can see the excitement on his face... I wonder why no one informed me about this? ๐Ÿค”
'Oye Bunty ye sab kab hua?' I asked

Bunty: Ye sab Dada ji ka idea hai ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Wat? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ... Its not that I am not happy about picnic but Dada ji planning outing sounds weird..
Bunty left to pack his bags..

I made my way to Vimla chachi's kitchen..
Yo There is my Umesh Bhaiya who is as usual busy cooking..
'Umesh Bhaiya' I whispered..

Umesh Bhaiya: Nishu Tu yahaan ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
'Yaa Bhaiya I am here ๐Ÿ˜ณ
So ye saari cooking picnic k liye ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I asked'
Umesh Bhaiya: Haan Nishu ye sab bus journey k liye... Dekh na Maine sabke liye sandwitches bana liye hai.. Aur meri speciality gajar ka halwa bhi ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜ณ
Aur baki ka khaana Forest wonderland jake banaunga.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Soch Nishu ye sab kitna adventures hone wala hai ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
'Wow bhaiya ... Mere muh mein toh abhi se hi pani aa gya ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ... par sochne wali baat toh ye hai achanak se ye picnic plan kyun? [:]'

Isme sochne wali Kya baat hai Nishu ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ye sab mere liye ho raha hai ๐Ÿ˜‰ Dolly Didi whispered.. And hugd me from side..

'Really Dolly di?' I asked
Dolly Didi nodded ๐Ÿ˜Š
There enters another devil my bro Suketu..

Suku: Oye Nishu tujhe nai pata.. Vo Kya hai na Ye saara idea Sumit Jiju ka hai jo humari Dolly Didi se milna chahate the isilye unhone plan banaya aur apne parents ko picnic k liye pataya aur unke parents ne humare Dada Ji ko pataya ๐Ÿ˜‰ Its chain you see ๐Ÿ˜‰
'Oh tabhi main sochu iss heaven k angel ko devilish idea Kaise aa gaya ๐Ÿ˜› Waise Dolly di apke in laws bade cool hai ๐Ÿ˜Ž' I whispered
'Kya khaak cool hai?' Whispered Kirti.. Who too joined us in kitchen..
'Ab tujhe Kya hua kamli?' I asked
Kirti: Nishu Tu toh ek adventures person hai tujhe toh Kuch farak parega nai but look at me.. Meri toh puri skin hi kharab ho jayegi
Dolly Di k in laws ko forest hi mila picnic k liye ๐Ÿ˜›
Suku: Haan toh problem hi Kya hai? ๐Ÿ˜•
Kirti: Guys plz bahar chal k baat kare.. Its too hot here..
'Madam Kamli ka order hai bahar toh chalna hi parega' I whishperd and we all left kitchen ..
Suku: Haan ab Bol Kirti Kya problem hai?
Kirti: forest mein toh problem hi problem hai
Waise it sounds interesting.. Mazaa toh bahut ayega but Kirti beauty conscious hai so guys forest mein thorns , sunrays uff pata nai Kya hoga
Suku: Kirti Tu hai nai forest ki mud apne face pe laga leyi phir sun rays Teri skin ko spoil nai kar payegi
Kirti: Kya forest mud ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
'Haan Kirti Suku sahi keh raha hai aur Maine toh suna hai ki forest ki mud lagane se skin bahut glow karti hai' I wishpered and winked at Suku..
Kirti: Really wow... Hugs dolly di.. Sorry dolly di apke in laws toh bahut cool hai... M super excited ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
'That's why I love my devils... They are not crazy but there mind is crazy...
There comes Jwala..
Umesh Bhaiya: Jwala Teri packing ho gyi?
Jwala: haan Umesh Bhaiya packing toh hogyi bas books rakhna baki hai ๐Ÿค“
'Tu picnic pe books kyun leke jayegi Jwalu?' I asked
Suku: simple forest mein animals ko padhane k liye *gigles*
Jwala: Kya Suku Bhaiya
Vo Nishu bro. 2 days baad mera test hai isilye books bhi leke ja rahi hoon ๐Ÿค“๐Ÿ˜Š
Dolly Di: Jwalu par tujhe wahaan padhne Kon dega? ๐Ÿ˜‰
I gave hi5 to dolly di..

'Ye Kya ab tak tum log tayaar nai hue? packing bhi Baki hai.. Itnna kaam bacha hai' said my tensed mom

'lakshmi relaxme I made her relax as she was again geting hyper due yo tension'

Dolly Di: Chalo guys jaldi jaldi sab packing karlo ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

We all left to pack pur stuff..

****-******-********-*******

Its almost 12PM now... Everything is ready..
All set to go..
Chachus, Chachi, Dadi , Rukmawati and my devilish gang all look cheerful specially Bunty ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I called Saurav too.. My best buddy.. Who was sleeping till 11AM.. I can't blame him for this.. Because I am the one who was chating with him till 2:30AM yesterday..
Actually Saurav is my dairy.. Like some people writes personal diary and shares there thoughts with diary I am one who shares my thoughts with Saurav .. ๐Ÿ˜Š I was lost in my own thoughts when I heard Bunty jumping and screaming yay Dada Ji bhi aa gaye let's go ๐Ÿฅณ


Dadaji: Koi kahi nai jayega..

Oh not again... Don't know what this angel upto?
All I know is I can see latka hua chera of my family members and a question mark on everyone's face.. Not only this rota hua chehra of my chotu Devil bunty too ..


Will Nisha be able to bring smile on Bunty's face?
Will they go on picnic?
For answers to these questions stay tuned for next part ๐Ÿ˜‰


How was it?
OK fine Chappals tomatoes all are welcome ๐Ÿ˜›
But no eggs as I am veggie ๐Ÿ˜›


Where are you going?
Hit Likes and Comments ๐Ÿ˜Š
For next update PM like this post ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Vishi- thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res for my speechwa ๐Ÿคฃ index
Klaroline.Lover thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...
1st fiction story in our forum...
Amazing...
loved it...It was fun reading...
Continue soon... :)))))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cucking_Frazy

Wow...

1st fiction story in our forum...
Amazing...
loved it...It was fun reading...
Continue soon... :)))))

Thankyou ๐Ÿ˜ณ
its not first as evaana started ss today ๐Ÿ˜Š
BTW plz Hit like on the main post if you need PM for next part ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Thankyou ๐Ÿ˜ณ
its not first as evaana started ss today ๐Ÿ˜Š
BTW plz Hit like on the main post if you need PM for next part ๐Ÿ˜ณ

ur welcome buddy...
ya I just now noticed her ss in d 2nd page...
So urs is d first TS anyway :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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LOved it. The first series of our forum.
i liked the way u wrote it from Nisha's POV. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Let's see what's in store for Devils.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OSM...continue soon...๐Ÿ˜‰
PS -I luvd your title...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cucking_Frazy


ur welcome buddy...
ya I just now noticed her ss in d 2nd page...
So urs is d first TS anyway :D

yup ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow amazing ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ.. loved it..
do continue ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
loved the update
enjoyed reading it
do continue soon

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