ek ladki ki ajab kahani!! - nisha SS!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey guys... i simply felt like writing it... chappals/tomatoes throw karna aloud hain😆😆...hope u like it!!

Ek ladki ki Ajab Kahani!
nisha's mother was searching for nisha...
mother - nishu...kahan hain tu??
while nisha was trying to climb a big tree outside...
suku - cmon nishu...tu yeh kar sakti hain...
dolly - (in a scared tone) nishu... sara sambhalke...
nisha - haan...dolly di...aa..aap chinta mat kijiye...
kirti - oh god...tum log na apne skin ki kabhi dhyaan nahin rakte na... yeh tree climb kargi toh skin main scars sab aayenge...oh main toh yeh sab soch bhi nahin sakti...
nisha - kirti..yahin toh difference hain tujhme aur mujhme...
jwaala - vese mujhe na kal ek zaroori project submit karna hain...tum logo ne mujhe bulaya isiliye main aagayi... ab main jaaon??
umesh - oho...thoda tho ruk na jwaala...nishu bass pohonchne he waali hain...usske baad chale jaana...
suku - haan yaar...usske baad chale jaana...
jwaala - acha... tho theekhe...

while they were chearing for nisha... nisha's mom came there...
mother - (screaming) nishu...
everyone turns... nisha looks down...
mother - yeh sab kya chal raha hain?? nishu forun niche aao...
nisha - aree ma... ek minute main bass uppar thak pohonchne he waali hoon...
mother - haan... lekin kahin esa naa ho jaaye ki tu uppar pohonchte pohonchte...swarg main na pohonch jaaye...
nisha - oho maa...kesi baat kar rahi ho?? main aapki beti nisha hoon... kabhi nahin giroongi...ok...
mother - (whispering to herself) beti jagah beta bolna chahiye tha...
suddenly nisha screams...
nisha - yeee...main uppar pohonch gayi... suku, umesh bhayiyaa, kirti, jwaala, ma dekho main uppar hoon...
everyone looks up to see nishu looking down at them...

evryone chears loudly... thts wen bunty cms eating a packet of ladoos...
bunty - yeh kya ho raha hain yahan?? tum log chilla kyun rahe ho?? aur nisha di kahan hain??
suku - aree bunty ussi keliye toh hum chilla rahe hain...
bunty - acha..lekin kyun??
nisha - (screaming) oye bunty uppar dekh...main yahan hoon...
bunty - (looks up) aap vahan?? wow...aapne record poora kiya??
nisha - (screams) haaan!!

nisha comes down...and they all each other... yeh hain ek ladki ki kahani... ek ladki ki ajab kahani... ek ladki jo sabse alag hain...

The End!!

how was it guys...pls do like and comment...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is awesome 👏
Loved it and yayyy first comment!!!!! 😃 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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such a cute story loved it plz write more dear😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhiya4life

This is awesome 👏
Loved it and yayyy first comment!!!!! 😃 😆


thnk u... and my story is the first story in this forum!! ek party tho banta hain...🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvnishal97

such a cute story loved it plz write more dear😃


thnk u... yeah sure!!!!!😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was cute 😳😃
Continue soon 😊
Edited by Barbievishi20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely start😊. Continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

That was cute 😳😃
Continue soon 😊


thnx😉...but this is just one story😕😕...no continuation is thr...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aparajitasona

Lovely start😊. Continue soon😊


thnx... but there is no continuation...this is just a small story... it was just a small try!! i'll surely rite an ff...which will hv a lot of parts!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS!! I liked the way u included everyone's comment on basis of their nature. Keep writing more OS/SS.
Congo shongo for 1st story of forum. Party toh banti hai!!😊

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