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Posted: 8 years ago
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CONTINUE...
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Next morning, ansh and piya gets down from their school bus. Their eyes falls on Anant who was dressed in green check shirt with pant waiting for them leaning to his car. They both runs towards him
ANANT - hey kids
ANSH - good morning stranger uncle
Said ansh with a smile. Anant looks confused
ANANT - stranger uncle?
PIYA - Bua have given you name because we were not knowing when she asked about it
Anant smile looking at their cuteness
ANANT - I think your whole family is cute
Said Anant laughing
ANSH - why didn't you came yesterday? You know my mamma herself came to meet you and to give your 25 rs back
Said ansh in a pout while Anant feel sorry
ANANT - I am so sorry buddy. Yesterday I was busy in a meeting
ANSH - my mamma waited for you for long. She even got late for her office
Anant holds his ears
ANANT - sorry. Well.. I have an idea
Ansh and piya looks at each other in confusion. Anant goes near school gate where a flower shop was there. He buy a yellow rose and comes towards ansh
ANANT -give this to your mamma and say sorry on my behalf
Ansh took the flower and nodded in agreement
PIYA - ansh.. Let's go
Ansh nodded. They both said bye to anant and runs from there in their class
ANANT - ansh... Nice name
Smile Anant looking at them
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At a mall, nikhil brought navya who was dressed in green anarkali suit
NAVYA - Why we are here nikhil? Ab to batao
Asked navya while climbing through elevator
NIKHIL - navya.. I know your choice is fantastic. Therefore I decided to bring you with me for shopping
They both enters a gift shop
NAVYA - shopping.. For whom?
NIKHIL - navya meri sagai he Parso. I have to buy a gift for my fiance
Said nikhil getting shy while navya smile
NAVYA - oh ho.. Romantic...
NIKHIL - now come on. Suggest me something
Said nikhil moving around. Navya started looking here and there. Her eyes falls on a beautiful crystal bracelet
NAVYA - what about this?
Nikhil's eyes goes wide in a wow
NIKHIL - it's beautiful. Dekha.. That's why I brought you with me
Navya smile at him
NIKHIL - from where did you get so brilliant ideas navya?
Asked nikhil for which navya smile lightly
NAVYA - my husband used to give surprises like these
Nikhil's smile faded. He patted on her shoulder
NIKHIL - it's ok
Navya nodded in yes
NAVYA - what I suggest is you can give a beautiful card too with some romantic lines written
NIKHIL - perfect. Come let's choose there
Nikhil shows her the greeting card section and they both moves there
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At evening ansh and piya enters from school. Navya and ritika were sitting on sofa
RITIKA - agaye mere bacche?
Ritika hugs both of them. Ansh moves towards navya
ANSH- mamma.. This one is for you
Ansh took out the rose and gave it to navya for which she became surprised
NAVYA - oh my my.. It's so beautiful
PIYA - stranger uncle gave it for you Bua and said sorry
Navya scrunched her eyebrow
NAVYA - he again met with you?
ANSH - yes mamma. He told yesterday he was busy in his work so didn't came
Navya nodded in agreement
RITIKA - so you gave his money back na?
Ansh and piya looks at each other. Navya's eyes goes wide in a shock
NAVYA - you both again forgot?
Ansh nodded in yes. Navya looks in disbelief
RITIKA - let it be navya. Next time they will surely give him back. Right kids?
PIYA - yes mamma. Promise Bua
Said piya for which navya smile lightly
RITIKA - come on kids let's go in and have some snacks. But before that change your uniform
Ritika took both of them inside. Navya looks at the yellow rose and thinks something. She gets flashback...
FLASHBACK
ANANT - navya..
Called Anant heading downstairs in hall. He was dressed in red t-shirt and trouser. Navya was sitting in hall with Rama and Dadi. She was in her off white anarkali suit
ANANT - navya.. I am calling you
NAVYA - sorry Anant. I was busy in making this grocery list
Said navya while Anant nodded in disbelief. He moves towards Dadi
ANANT - Dadi.. Your Anant doesn't get chance to spend some quality time with his wife. We are just one month old of our marriage
Said Anant in a pout. Rama giggle while navya bows down feeling shy
DADI - oh.. So my Anant want to take his wife in his room?
Asked Dadi pulling his ear while Anant nodded in yes
RAMA - Dadi.. Let her go. Nahi to devarji hamari devraniji se hi gussa hojayenge
NAVYA -bhabi..
Rama and Dadi laugh while navya became more embarrassed
DADI - ok baba.. Navya.. You can go
Said Dadi while navya nodded in yes. Anant became happy. They both headed towards their bedroom
NAVYA - Anant.. Tum b na.. Kya soch rahi hongi Dadi aur bhabi
She stops when her eyes falls on full decorated room. Anant smile looking at her. He closed the door and locks it. Navya was still admiring the room which was decorated with roses and candles. Anant back hugs her
ANANT - how's it?
NAVYA - beautiful
Said navya looking at the bed which has rose petals. Anant lightly kissed her neck while she closed her eyes
NAVYA - par... Ye sab. Kisliye?
She asked almost in a whisper. Anant looks at her still back hugging her
ANANT - meri romantic shadi ko aur romantic banane ke liye
Smirk Anant. Navya smile shyly
Anant makes her look at him
ANANT - navya.. When we were in college we were enjoying each day with each other. But after marriage we rarely gets time for each other
Said Anant complaining. Navya smile at him and hugs him. He hugs her back
NAVYA - You know na Anant. I am trying to make space for me in this family
He kiss her cheeck
ANANT - I know. But this time is for us
Said Anant leaning towards her. He lightly took her lips in his and kissed softly. She kept her hand on his chest while he tugs her hair behind and hold her from face. After much time he left and looks at her. She was red due to shyness. She turned around when Anant holds her dupatta. She keep hand near her shoulder saving it from falling
NAVYA - Anant.. Please
ANANT - yes navya. I know you are waiting. You are saying please Anant do it fast
She playfully hits him by her elbow
NAVYA - besharam
ANANT - besharam to banna padega navya. Nahi to hamari cricket team kaisi banegi?
Said Anant in a smirk. He holds her hand and makes it at her back pulling her towards him. She was struggling but his grip was tight. He leans forward and she looks aside. He kiss her earlobe and took out her earring softly by his teeth. He does same with another. He left her one hand so that he can took out her mangalsutra. He took out her bangles making it fall on ground. They both looks at each other. He takes her in his arms and moves towards the bed. He kept her on bed while she looks down. He moves towards her and whispers
ANANT - I will just be back
He kissed her and goes near cupboard. He took some roses and moves towards her
NAVYA - what is this?
Asked navya in confusion. Anant gave her a white rose
ANANT - this is for you because I am worthy of you
She smile and took it from him. He gave her pink color rose
ANANT - this one is to thank you for being in my life
She except it. He gave her a yellow rose
ANANT - this is for our friendship
Navya laughs and took it. Finally he gave her a red one
ANANT - and this is because.. I love you the most
She took it and smile. She was having tears. Anant wipes her tears by his thumb
NAVYA - I love you too Anant
Anant smile at her. He kissed her lips. He makes her sleep on bed.
ANANT - are you ready? To experience another lovely night
Asked Anant rubbing his nose at her neck. She closed her eyes and nodded lightly giving him permission. He smile at her and switched off the lights. They made their love.
FLASHBACK ENDS...
Navya was still admiring the yellow rose infront of her. She was having little tears. She rubs her eyes and smile looking at the rose
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TO BE CONTINUED...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Wonderful flashback. I miss Anya. Rose, great going pls continue
NAVANT28 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Emotional one...waiting for anya meet ...pls continue...
Saumya96 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: NAVANT28

Emotional one...waiting for anya meet ...pls continue...

Thanks alottt dear
-meru- thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
I just loved it alottt pls. Cont asap
Saumya96 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: -meru-

I just loved it alottt pls. Cont asap

Will continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Really emotional I wish Anya meet asap ;) anant Ki memory nahi ...but navya would recognize him ;)

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