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Posted: 8 years ago
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CONTINUE...
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At school, navya ansh with Ranbir and piya exits from classroom
RANBIR - are wah ansh. Your class teacher was praising you. Good boy
Navya smile at ansh
ANSH - thank you mama
NAVYA - ansh, piya wait here only. We both will come in few time after meeting your principal
Instructed navya to the kids while ansh and piya nodded in agreement. Navya and Ranbir goes from there
ANSH - piya.. Let's go to our school temple
PIYA - no no ansh. Bua told us to be here only
Piya denied while ansh pouts
ANSH - come on piya. We will be back before mamma and mama comes
Suggested ansh to piya. She nodded in agreement and they both runs near a big tree infront of their school gate. Below that big tree a small temple was there. Ansh and piya goes near it. They both joins their hands to pray
ANSH - bhagwan ji.. Mamma kehti he, aapse kuch true heart se mango to aap wish puri karte he. Me bhi apko true heart se apne papa mangta hu
Ansh looks at the small Idol of ganesha while piya smile at him
ANSH - Please bhagwan ji. Listen to my prayers
He prayed silently.
PIYA - ansh.. Let's go
Piya said to him while he agreed. They both started running when ansh got hit with a rock and was about to fall when someone holds him and saves him from falling
PIYA - ansh...
Shouted piya. Ansh got frightened and looks at the man who holds him. He was Anant who was looking at him smiling. He makes him stand properly
ANANT - are you fine?
ANSH - yes. Thank you so much
Anant smile and looks at him in amusement
ANANT - are wah. You are such a good boy
ANSH - ha. Meri mamma kehti he agar hamari koi help kare to hume thanks bolna chahiye. It is called good manners
Anant smile impressively
ANANT - good. Lagta he apki mamma ne bohot kuch sikhaya he apko
PIYA - come on.. Let's go. Papa aur Bua ko agar hum waha nahi dikhe to bht dat padegi
Said piya getting afraid. Anant looks at both of them
ANSH - now I have to go. Thanks to you again
Saying ansh and piya runs from there. Anant looks at them and smile in disbelief
PAYAL - chachu
Payal calls him and he looks back
ANANT - so princess.. Chale?
Payal nodded in yes and they both started walking from there. Anant looks back at ansh and smile
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At bajpayee mansion, Dadi was having discussion with pandit ji
PANDITJI - agle hafte ka muhrat ekdum sahi rahega sagai ke liye
Suggested pandit ji to Dadi
DADI - we don't have any problem pandit ji. Waise b Om aur sugandha yahi chahte he ki shadi jaldi hojaye.
Said Dadi in a disbelief. Anant and Payal enters there
DADI - are agayi meri bacchi?
Payal goes towards Dadi and she hugs her
DADI - go and get fresh
PAYAL - ok badi dadi
Payal goes from there. Dadi looks at Anant who was now resting on sofa thinking something
PANDITJI - mataji.. Hum chalte he. Namaste
DADI - namaste
Pandit ji left from there. Dadi goes near Anant and sit beside him
DADI - what happened? Payal's results in school are fine?
ANANT - ha Dadi. Nothing to worry about Payal. I was thinking something else
Dadi looks confused
DADI - about what?
ANANT - Dadi.. Aaj ek bohot ajib si chiz hui mere sath
Anant started telling her everything what happened with ansh
ANANT - pata nahi kyu Dadi but I felt something different talking with him. Something... Attachments...
Dadi looks more confused. Anant took a deep breath.
ANANT - well its ok. What about engagement date Dadi?
DADI - wow great
Anant became happy while Dadi was still thinking about what Anant told her
ANANT - I'll just come
Dadi nodded in agreement. Anant goes in his room. Sugandha and Rama enters there
SUGANDHA - mom did pandit ji told you the muhrat?
DADI - yes.. It is of next week
Hearing her sugandha gets happy
SUGANDHA - wow. Ek bar sagai hojaye then jald hi shadi
Said sugandha dreaming while Rama and Dadi looks at each other
RAMA - Dadi. Did Anant and Payal came?
DADI - ya they both are in their respective rooms
RAMA - is anything to worry about Payal?
DADI - not at all Rama bahu. Our Payal is sincere
Rama smile and nodded in yes
SUGANDHA - she should be sincere. Rama don't worry about Payal. She is my grand daughter. We will secure her future
Rama smile lightly. Dadi looks at sugandha in anger
DADI - apni badi poti ke future ki chinta he tumhe bahu, and what about your another grand child? About Anant and navya's child?
Sugandha gets surprised hearing her
DADI - Hume to pata bhi nahi he ki hamari bahu ne hume pota diya he ya poti? Use dekhna to hamare nasib me hi nahi
SUGANDHA - please mom. Is ghar me ye topic allow nahi he. As a head member you should know that
Dadi looks other way while Rama bows down
SUGANDHA - aur waise bhi wo ladki hamari kabhi hui hi nahi. To uske bacche bhi hamare pariwar ke koi nahi lagte
Saying she goes from there. Dadi sheds some tears while Rama console her
RAMA - Dadi.. Please
DADI - pata nahi kaisi hogi meri navya?
Said Dadi getting teary. Rama feel bad for her
***
Here ritika and navya were working in kitchen
NAVYA - today when again ansh's teacher asked me about his father I was quiet. I was not able to speak anything
Said navya cutting the veggies. Ritika who was standing besides her doing other things listen to her
NAVYA - then ansh told her that my mamma is only my papa. I felt very proud of him
Smile appears on her face
RITIKA - you should be navya. Umar hi kya he uski ye sab samajhne ki then also hi handle it very maturely. Just like you
Navya smile at her
NAVYA - truly speaking, Mera bohot dil karta he ki ansh ko uski family se milau. Uske badi dadi, Dada Dadi, chacha chachi, Bua sabse milau. Specifically uske papa se
A small tear drop from her eyes
RITIKA - usse kya hoga Navya? Kya Anant samjhega? And bajpayees they will never understand you
NAVYA - no ritika, mom dad ko chodkar everyone will be happy. I know Dadi loves me truly. And everyone is waiting for me
ANU - no one is waiting for you di.
Navya and ritika looks back to witness anu. She moves towards them
ANU - apne dil ko samjhana band kardo. No one miss you in that house neither anyone is waiting for you
Navya gets teary. Ritika looks at her
RITIKA - anu... Please
ANU - why please di. Akhir Kab tak ye sab chalta rahega. Di have wasted her 6 years of life. Did she want to continue it further?
Navya goes from there in her room. Ritika looks at her going.
RITIKA - anu why did you said that?
ANU - I just said the truth nothing else
RITIKA - and you think it is the truth?
ANU - yes absolutely.. Di ke Pati, jinse wo itna pyar karti he, Anant, he doesn't know anything about her. And no one is going to tell him
Said anu getting angry. Ritika smile lightly
RITIKA - you know what anu. Jo pyar karte he na wo ek dusre ke bare me jan hi jate he. Unhe milane ki zarurat nahi hoti. Wo apne aap mil jate he. I agree Anant doesn't remember anything about navya. But I am sure one day definitely he will remember. Aur us din un dono ko ek hone se koi nahi rok sakta
Ritika gets emotional. Anu looks elsewhere
ANU - bhagwan kare ye din kabhi aye hi nahi di. I don't want my di to live with any murderer
Saying anu goes from there while ritika nodded in disbelief at her...
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TO BE CONTINUED...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
what!!murderer???what she meant???..it's being so emotional.pls bring anya face to face soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
So many surprises. Looking forward to read more and I felt happy how anant felt about ansh
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Anant ki memory loss hogayi h kya??? Murderer who??? Hope anya jaldii milein :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
oh m getting what's happening ...
Next update plz ;))
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: NAVANT28

what!!murderer???what she meant???..it's being so emotional.pls bring anya face to face soon...

Thanks alottt. Anya milenge jald hi don't worry
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ganganavya

So many surprises. Looking forward to read more and I felt happy how anant felt about ansh

Thank you. Will continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -meru-

Anant ki memory loss hogayi h kya??? Murderer who??? Hope anya jaldii milein :(

Yes Anant had a memory loss. Keep reading to know more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: silla

oh m getting what's happening ...

Next update plz ;))

Is it? Oh great but please keep it a secret ;-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
CONTINUE...
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Navya was in her room sitting on bed crying. Tears were continuously flowing from her eyes. She was thinking about the days spent with Anant
FLASHBACK...
It was Anant and navya's second day after marriage. She was dressed in red saree totally looking as a newly wedded bride. While Anant was in red kurti and off white pyjama. She was crying while Anant was consoling her
ANANT - navya.. Please don't cry
He tried to console her while she looks elsewhere
NAVYA - what don't cry? Hamari shadi ko 2 din bhi nahi hue and you are going Australia for 1 week? Me is ghar me kisiko janti bhi nahi Anant
Anant cups her face
ANANT - work jaan. You know na if it was not important than Mohan bhai have not asked me to go
Navya looks at her teary. Anant smile and wipes her tears
ANANT - only for one week navya. There are Dadi, nimmi bhabi for you. And I have asked ritika also to visit you regularly. And if you want you can go to ma papa and meet them. Anu must be missing you
He tried to explain her. She nodded lightly.
ANANT - aur waise bhi me hamesha ke liye thodi ja raha hu
As soon as Anant Said this Navya keeps her palm on his mouth
NAVYA - chup.. Stupid. Aisa nahi kehte. You know very well I can't live without you
Navya hugs him. He tighten the hug
ANANT - you also know very well I can't live without you too. Hmm?
Navya nodded in yes. Anant kiss her forehead
ANANT - don't worry me jaldi ajaunga
She tighten the hug while Anant smile at her
FLASHBACK ENDS...
A tear drop from navya's eyes on Anant and navya's photo. She lightly touch it
NAVYA - you told me that you can't live without me. Then how you are doing it from last 6 years? Kya tumhe me sachme yad nahi hu anant?
Said navya looking at the photo
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Here Anant was sitting on bed writing his diary -
" It is rightly said, we need only one incidence to change our whole life. That one accident have also changed my life. Pata nahi kya hua tha us din. I don't remember anything besides my family, my best friend Ranbir and that girl... "
He stopped and thought about his dreams
" Pata nahi kon he wo. Jiske mujhe sapne ate he. Me uska chehra nahi dekh pata, na hi uska nam pata he. Janta hu to bas itna ki har rat wo mere sapne me ati he. Dadi says everything will be fine soon after I get it's solution. But I am not getting it from last so many years."
He stopped. He took a deep breath and keep his diary on the table situated beside bed. His eyes falls on Dadi who have arrived in his room
ANANT - are Dadi. Aap?
He moves towards her
ANANT - you didn't sleep?
DADI - you too are awake
Said Dadi caressing his face
ANANT - sone se to darr lagta he Dadi. Pata nahi kab chauk ke uth jau
Said Anant smiling. Dadi too gave him a sad smile
ANANT - don't know till when I have to suffer with this
DADI - darr se jitne ke liye uska samna karna hota he beta
Anant looks at her in a jerk
DADI - if you will be afraid of sleeping will be afraid of getting dreams than how will you overcome these situations?
Dadi's words makes him think something.
DADI - try to find the matter behind it Anant.
She said patting on his shoulder while he nodded in yes
DADI (in mind) - me tumhe kuch bata to nahi sakti beta. Par tumhe tumhara past apne aap yad ajaye uske liye koshish to kar sakti hu
Dadi smile lightly looking at him while he was busy in his thoughts
***
Next morning navya was dressed in white palazzo with dark blue long kurti. She was arranging her purse sitting on sofa at hall. She heard anu coming downstairs ready to go for college. They both looks at each other. Navya continues her work while anu moves towards her
ANU - di.. I am leaving for college
Navya just nodded in agreement. Anu looks sad. She was about to go when navya stops her
NAVYA - anu...
She looks at navya. She goes near anu and gave her some money
NAVYA - your pocket money
Anu was surprised. They both had an argument again yesterday but still navya cared for her. Anu took it from her. Navya smile lightly at her and looking at her elder sister smiling anu hugs her
ANU - sorry di. You are world's best di. I am so sorry I hurt you
Anu sheds some tears. Navya patted on her back softly. She release her from hug
NAVYA - anu.. You hurt me for reasons. I know you care for me
She caresses her face and wipes her tears. Suddenly they heard piya and ansh coming there while ritika behind them
RITIKA - go fast. Your school bus is waiting for you at stop.
Shouted ritika. Ansh goes towards navya and hugs her
ANSH - bye mamma bye masi
Saying they both left from there. Ritika sigh relief
RITIKA - ye bacche bhi na. They play video games till late night and at morning gets late for school
Said ritika complaining. Navya nodded in disbelief. Her eyes falls on sofa where a hundred rupee note was there. She became surprised
NAVYA - oh god
ANU - what happened di?
NAVYA - I forgot to give ansh his pocket money.
Said navya getting tenses while anu and ritika looks at each other...
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TO BE CONTINUED...

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