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Lovely anya scn.. Loved it alot
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Originally posted by: -meru-

Lovely anya scn.. Loved it alot

Thank you so much
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Sorry for late ..I read yesterday itself ..thanku soo much for wonderful updates keep it up ;)
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Originally posted by: silla

Sorry for late ..I read yesterday itself ..thanku soo much for wonderful updates keep it up ;)

It's ok dear. I thought you all didn't like the update. thank you so much for reading
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CONTINUE...
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Next morning, deepak Om and Ranbir ritika were sitting at dinning. Meeta and sugandha brought breakfast from kitchen. Navya enters wearing pink top and blue jeans.
NAVYA - good morning
OM - good morning bete. Aaj Sunday so holiday right?
NAVYA - yes uncle
SUGANDHA - are navya beta ek kam karogi? Anant ko bula lao room se
Navya gets happy hearing sugandha. She nodded in yes and goes in anant's room
***
She enters in anant's room to find no one. She called him.
NAVYA - Anant
She got no reply. She was about to go when she heard washroom's door sound. She looks at the direction to find Anant in towel. They both looks at each other. Navya turns at other side closing her eyes while Anant looks embarrassed.
NAVYA - I.. I am sorry.. Anant
ANANT - aah it's.. Ok navya.. Actually... Mujhe door lock karna chahiye tha
NAVYA - no wo.. Mujhe knock karna chahiye tha
While talking navya's bracelet falls from her hand. Anant looks at that. He goes near her and picks it
NAVYA - me jati hu tum breakfast ke liye ajao
She was about to go when Anant hold her hand. She gets surprised. She closed her eyes tightly. Anant moves towards her and smile looking at her.
ANANT - navya..
Anant whispers her name. Her heart beat became fast.
NAVYA - what.. What are you doing?
Anant came near her back. He was staring her but she was looking down feeling nervous. He takes her hand and makes her wear her bracelet. Navya smile shyly. Suddenly ritika's voice disturb them. They both gets away from each other. Ritika enters in room to find navya standing while Anant searching his clothes. She looks confused
RITIKA - tum dono ab tak aye kyu nahi. Ma bula rahi he navi
NAVYA - ha.. Wo. Yahi ayi to pata chala Anant ji naha rahe the. Isliye inko late hogaya
Navya said jokingly. Ritika gave a light smile. Navya goes from there while ritika looks at Anant who was staring navya.
RITIKA - Anant
Anant's eyes falls on ritika.
RITIKA - jaldi aao
ANANT - ya
Ritika goes from there while Anant smile in himself
***
At dinning all were having breakfast.
SUGANDHA - Om, Kal wo meena masi he na unka phone aya tha meeta bhabi ko
OM - acha kya kaha unhone?
SUGANDHA - yad kar rahi thi hume. Me kya soch rahi thi hum mil ate he unhe
MEETA - ye thk rahega bhaisahab. Aap dono ho ayiye.
DEEPAK - are sirf Om aur bhabi hi kyu. Hum sab chalte he
As soon as deepak said this Anant thinks of an idea
ANANT - papa.. Ma.. Aap log jayiye na. Hum yahi rahenge.. He na Ranbir?
He hits his elbow to Ranbir while he agreed.
RANBIR - yup. Aap bade logo me hum kya karenge?
Ranbir looks at ritika and wink while she nodded in yes
RITIKA - ha ma. Me aur navi bhi rukenge
NAVYA - huh?
Navya asked in questioning look while ritika nodded in yes
NAVYA - huh ha... Q nahi
MEETA - par tum log rukkar karoge kya?
OM - rukne dijiye na bhabi. Aapas me enjoy kar lenge bacche
MEETA - thk he bhaisahab. Me tum logo ke liye Khana bana deti hu
NAVYA - ma aap uski tension mat lo. Me bana dungi
Meeta smile and nodded in yes
SUGANDHA - dekha bhabi? Ab to aap tension free hogayi na
Everyone started chatting. Anant looks at navya and wink while she looks confused and nodded in disbelief.
***
At afternoon, Om deepak along with meeta and sugandha left at their relative. Anant navya and Ranbir ritika sat in hall
RANBIR - so come on guys. Kuch interesting karte he
RITIKA - interesting matlab?
ANANT - abhi parents ghar par nahi he so kuch youngsters wali masti karte he
Anant said getting excited while everyone started thinking of a game
RANBIR - truth and dare khele?
Ranbir suggest the game for which everyone became happy
RITIKA - amazing. Let's play
RANBIR - chalo. Tumhe mera kaha hua kuch to acha laga.. Ritu.
RITIKA - shut up
Ritika throws a pillow at him while Anant laugh. Navya gets up to go
NAVYA - aap sab khelo. Me khana banati hu
Anant holds her wrist while ritika looks at him
ANANT - wo sab badme navya. Tum khelo na. Masti karne ke liye hum ghar par ruke he
RANBIR - ya navya. Come on. Don't be a spoil sport
Anant requested navya. She sits down and said yes to play
ANANT - ok. So I will spin this bottle. Is bottle ka cap jiske taraf ruka use task perform karna he and dusra part jiske taraf ruka use wo puchega
RITIKA - done
ANANT - so let's start
RITIKA - pehele bottle me ghumaungi
NAVYA - ritu.. Tu bhi na
All four of them sat in a circle around a table. Ritika spin the bottle. It stopped at Anant while other part at ritika. Ritika became happy
RITIKA - so anant. Truth ya dare?
ANANT - hmmm truth
RITIKA - ok.. So.. Ha. Tum London me padhe bade ho, so tumhari koi girlfriend to zarur hogi
As soon as ritika said this Anant looks at navya while she controls her laugh. Anant nodded in disbelief
ANANT - yar tum logo ko aisa confidence kaha se ata he ki meri girlfriend hogi hi
RITIKA - Matlab nahi he
ANANT - no
Ritika sigh relief and gets little happy
RITIKA - koi crush? Tell yes or no
Anant smile and looks at navya. Navya also looks at him
ANANT - yes
Ritika again smile hearing him while navya looks down feeling shy
RANBIR - ok now next
Ranbir spin the bottle. Now the bottle stopped at Ranbir.
ANANT - oh ho.. Bro.. Come on navya ask him
RANBIR - ask wagera kuch nahi. I am gonna do dare
NAVYA - ok let me think
She was thinking when ritika got an idea. She said something in navya's ear. Navya wink and ritika goes from there
NAVYA - ok so Ranbir. Ritu jo layegi tumhe wo khana he
ANANT - navya what is this yar.. Itna simple dare
NAVYA - wait baba. Ritu ko ane to do
RANBIR - don't worry guys. Me sher hu aur sher kisi se nahi darte
RITIKA - hello Mr sher
Ranbir looks at ritika and gets shocked. Ritika was carrying a bowl full of green chillies. Ritika smile looking at him
NAVYA- Ranbir. You have to eat atleast 5 chillies.
Ranbir gets a shock. Anant control his laughter. Ritika kept the bowl infront of him and indicates him to have
ANANT - come on Mr sher. Do it
Ranbir gulped and took a chilly. He started eating it. Anant was cheering for him while ritika was laughing. He eat 2-3 chillies while tears started coming from his eyes. Navya felt bad for him
NAVYA - Ranbir. Stop it
She brings water for him. He have it
NAVYA - oh god. I am so sorry Ranbir. Ye ritu bhi na
RITIKA - what?
NAVYA - say sorry
Navya asked ritika to say sorry. Ritika looks angry and said sorry to Ranbir
RANBIR - it's ok yar guys. Chalta he
ANANT - ok now let's continue
Anant spin the bottle. It stopped infront of navya now
RANBIR - ohk.. Navya. Truth or dare?
NAVYA - truth
ANANT - Ranbir.. Can I ask?
RANBIR - sure
Navya gets little nervous. While Anant smile.
ANANT - navya.. Tum love story padhti ho na? So tell us tumhare liye love that is pyar kya he?
Navya looks at Anant while Ranbir and ritika gets eager to know her reply.
NAVYA - mere liye pyar... Mere liye pyar meri life he. Pyar mere liye sabkuch he. Pyar ka matlab sirf pyar ka izhar karna nahi he. Pyar bina kuch kahe bhi pyar hi he
Anant smile and was staring her. Ritika looks at Anant while Ranbir at ritika. Navya continues
NAVYA - pyar kurbani he. Pyar ek dusre ke liye chup rehna bhi he. Pyar ka matlab sirf pyar ko pana nahi he. Pyar kisi aur ki khushi ke liye apni khushi mitana bhi he
Navya looks at Anant. They both were staring each other. Ranbir and ritika started clapping by which their eye lock broke
RITIKA - wow navi. Superb
They side hug each other. Anant smile and thought about him and navya. They continued their game.
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TO BE CONTINUED...
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Such a awesome update ;)) thank u soo much
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CONTINUE...
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At evening, everyone gets back at home. Ritika bring water for them
DEEPAK - so. Kya kiya din bhar?
RITIKA - dher sari bate aur bht sari masti
Ritika sits beside deepak. Navya enters with a tray of tea. She gave it to everyone
OM - thank you so much navya. Me abhi tumse Chai hi mangne wala tha
SUGANDHA - come on Om. Abhi meena masi ke ghar me apne chai pi he. India akar na apka khane pine par dhyan hi nahi raha he. Kal se me apki strictly dieting shuru karne wali hu
All kids laugh while Om pouts in anger
MEETA - rehne dijiye na bhabi. Aap chutti par aye he na so dieting ki bhi chutti
DEEPAK - ha bhabi. Enjoy karne dijiye mere dost ko
Sugandha nodded in disbelief. Suddenly something strikes to deepak
DEEPAK - are navi. Ye tera letter aya he. Bahar drop box me tha. Dekh shayad London University ka he
Deepak gave the envelope to navya. Anant and rest looks confused
ANANT - London University? Tum waha kya padh rahi ho?
NAVYA - child's psychology. Actually mene online courses ke liye apply kiya tha. Usi ka letter he
ANANT - wow. So. Kab arahi ho hamare sheher?
NAVYA - kya pata Kab ana pade
Anant and navya smile looking at each other. Ritika looks at them
RITIKA - navi to bachpan se hi aise he. Padhaku
ANANT - ya true. Mene us din clinic me bhi kitne bade bade books dekhe. Salute to you yar navya
Navya smile while ritika gave a light smile
RITIKA - Anant Kal tum mere sath mere office chalo na
ANANT - no no. I am not at all interested in fashion house
As soon as Anant Said no ritika's face drop which goes notice by navya. Navya looks at Anant and convinced him to say yes. Anant smile and nodded in yes
ANANT - mujhe interest nahi he. Fir b for you ritika I will come
Ritika gets happy hearing him. Navya smile at them. Deepak looks at smiling ritika
RANBIR - me bhi chalunga
RITIKA - no need
NAVYA - ritu..
RITIKA - dekh na yar navi. Ye hamesha mujhe tang karta he
ANANT - ok ok chill. Kal me aur Ranbir tumhare sath chalenge. Ok?
RANBIR - ya. Navya tum bhi chalo na
NAVYA - no Ranbir. Kal mujhe ek important case he
Anant became sad. Navya looks at him and ask him to smile. He smile nodding his head in disbelief.
***
At night, in navya's room, she was changing clothes. She was in her red night suit with just a strip as sleeves. She was about to wear over jacket when Anant enters. Navya gets shocked
NAVYA - Anant.. What are you doing here?
ANANT - kya kar raha hu matlab. Tumse bat karne aya hu.
NAVYA - piche mudo.
ANANT - what?
NAVYA - udhar dekho na
Anant nodded in disbelief and turns around. Navya smile shyly and wears her jacket. Anant also smile
NAVYA - tum bhi na Anant. Knock karke ana chahiye na
ANANT - tum bhi na navya. Lock karke change karna chahiye na. Aur waise bhi subah tumne bhi to mujhe dekh liya tha
Navya's jaw drop
NAVYA - Anant.. Tum ladke ho
ANANT - are so what? Ladko ki izzat nahi hoti kya
NAVYA - waise tum ab yaha dekh sakte ho. I have done
Anant looks at her and smile while navya nodded in disbelief
NAVYA - tum bhi na Anant. Tumse me kabhi jit nahi sakti
Anant sat on bed while navya sits beside him
ANANT - to tum kal nahi arahi ho?
NAVYA - no Anant. Meri ek important case he
Anant folded his hand in anger
NAVYA - sorry
Anant looks at her from corner of eyes and laugh. Navya also smile
ANANT - ab itna cutely bologi to kisika bhi dil pighal jayega
Navya smile shyly and looks down. Anant looks at her
ANANT - navya..
She looks at him
ANANT - tum kaise sabko sambhal leti ho?
Navya scrunched her eyebrow and looks confused
NAVYA - Matlab?
ANANT - aaj tumne ritika ka mann padh liya. Wo hume uske office lejana chahti thi. Mene mana kiya to wo udas hogayi. Tumse dekha nahi gaya na?
Navya smile hearing him
NAVYA - shayad ise hi dosti kehte he. Ek dost hi to apne dost ke dil ki bat samajh sakta he
ANANT - mere dil ki bat kab samjhogi tum?
Said Anant staring her. She gets little shocked. They both were staring each other
Here ritika was standing infront of her parent's photo
RITIKA - Anant mere dil ki bat kab samjhega. Me use pasand karne lagi hu. Kya wo bhi mujhe pasand karta hoga?
She said dreaming about him. She remember what Anant Said that he will come to office only for ritika. Smile appear on her face.
RITIKA - me janti hu. Kahi na kahi wo bhi mujhse pyar karta he. Par me apni ye feeling kiske sath share karu?
Ritika was thinking when she thought about navya.
RITIKA - navi... Nahi nahi. Wo Anant ki bohot achi dost he. Wo use bata degi
Just then Ranbir enters her room
RITIKA- to fir aisa kon he jisse me apni dil ki bat kahu?
RANBIR - kiska he ye tumko intezar me hu na
Said Ranbir standing at door. Ritika looks at him in surprise.
RANBIR - dekh lo idhar to ekbar me hu na
Ritika looks other way. Ranbir came near her
RITIKA - tum. Yaha kya kar rahe ho?
RANBIR - ab tum itna dil se yad karogi to ana to padega na.. Ritu..
Ritika looks angry and goes towards bed. Ranbir follow her. She looks at him
RANBIR - kya?
RITIKA - tum jaoge nahi to me soungi kaise?
RANBIR - itne jaldi kyu sona he tumhe?
Ritika looks at clock and then at him
RITIKA - rat ke 12 baje aksar normal log sote hi he
RANBIR - to normal logo ko sone do. Hum bate karte he
RITIKA - mujhe tumse koi bat nahi Karni he. Did you get that?
Ritika shouted at him. Ranbir sits on bed
RANBIR - uff. Kitna gussa karti ho tum. Ms nakchadi
Ritika's jaw drop. Ranbir started laughing while she sits beside him
RITIKA - agar me nakchadi. To tum.. Mr irritating
RANBIR - so to me hu. Waise bhi har ek ke life me ek irritating dost hona chahiye
RITIKA - aur tum mere dost kab bane?
RANBIR - abhi ban jate he. Mujhse dosti karogi?
He moves his right hand forward. Ritika looks at him in disbelief
RANBIR - mere dost kehte he me kafi acha dost hu
Ritika smile and shakes her hand with him
RANBIR - sambhalkar rehna. Kahi tum mere pyar me na pad jao
Ritika remove her hand while Ranbir laugh
RITIKA - kitne bade feku ho tum
RANBIR - to kya hua. Feku hona acha hota he
Ritika nodded in disbelief. They both started arguing. There Anant and navya were talking about each other and their school days...
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TO BE CONTINUED...
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Wow waiting for anya confession;)
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Thank you so much
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CONTINUE...
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Next day, it was evening and navya was in her clinic. She was wearing golden color chudidar suit with a clip tied to her hair. Her assistant enters in her cabin.
NAVYA - aaj ke case ki reports tayar rakhna. Patient ko call karke bata dena wo receive kar lenge
NURSE - ok doctor
NAVYA - aur koi patient he kya?
NURSE - no mam. All done for today
Suddenly Anant Ranbir and ritika enters
ANANT - hi
NAVYA - are tum log. Aao na
All gets inside and sat on sofa. Nurse leaves from there
NAVYA - so kaisa tha aaj ka din?
RANBIR - very boring
Ritika's jaw drop hearing him
RITIKA - to tumhe kisne kaha tha ane ke liye. Mene to anant se kaha tha
ANANT - hold on guys. Ranbir tu bhi na. Bilkul boring nahi tha. Infact ritika I enjoyed it
Anant said keeping his hand on ritika's hand. Ritika looks at him and smile. Anant looks at navya while she also looks at him and nodded in yes that he didn't hurt ritika
RANBIR - hogaya tum logo ka? Now let's come to the point. Navya hum log tumhe lene aye he
NAVYA - q? kaha jana he?
RITIKA - movie
As soon as ritika said this navya gets happy
NAVYA - wow. Shahrukh ki he?
ANANT - no no. It's Hollywood and that too horror
Navya's face drop. Her change in expression gets notice by Anant
ANANT - what happened? You don't like Hollywood?
RITIKA - aisa nahi he Anant. Actually... Navi is scared of horror movies
Ritika said and started laughing
RANBIR - to Ms nakchadi tum nahi darti kya?
RITIKA - ritika kisi bhut se nahi darti
RANBIR - ha.. Tum khud ek bhut ho
Everyone started laughing. Ritika gave a punch on his shoulder
ANANT - to thk he. Ticket cancel karwate he. Koi dusri movie chalenge
NAVYA - are nahi nahi. It's ok chalte he
RITIKA - ha aur waise bhi everything is decided Anant
RANBIR - ok so kiska wait kar rahe he? Let's go
RITIKA - are navi.. Tujhe change nahi karna he kya? Aise hi chalogi?
Ritika said looking at her dress. Anant inturpts in between
ANANT - ha so what? Navya tum aise kapdo me jyada achi lagti ho. And Indian wears always rock
Ritika gets little sad as she was wearing jeans and top. While navya smile looking at Anant
RANBIR - finally, chale?
NAVYA - ya
Everyone left from there.
***
At night door bell rang of Mishra house. Meeta came to open the door and find all four of them infront
MEETA - agaye? Aao
All enters inside and sat in hall where Om deepak and sugandha were already there
OM - dekh li movie?
RANBIR - yes dad. It was wonderful
Suddenly sugandha's eyes falls on anant's arms
SUGANDHA - Anant.. What is this beta? Ye hath pe kya hua
As soon as sugandha said this navya looks down feeling embarrassed. Ranbir and ritika started laughing.
MEETA - kya hua
RITIKA - ye aap Anant se hi puchiye ma
Anant controls his laughter.
ANANT - ha aunty. Dekhiye ye mere hath pe kya hogaya he
MEETA - he bhagwan ye to nakhun ke nishan he
ANANT - ha.. Aur ye aapki navi ne kiya he
Everyone started laughing while navya became sad
RANBIR - horror film dekh kar navya khud billi ban gayi. Itna dar gayi ki Anant bechare ka hath to gaya
SUGANDHA - chup karo. Q tang kar rahe ho bechari ko
RITIKA - Ye to kuch nahi aunty. Plane me ye kya karti he na pucho hi mat
Everyone again started laughing. Navya runs from there in her room
DEEPAK - lo meri ful si bacchi naraz hogayi
RITIKA - navi kabhi naraz reh sakti he kya papa? Don't worry abhi bahar ajayegi
Anant looks at navya's room and goes there
***
He enters in her room and looks at navya who was sitting on bed looking little angry. He goes and sits beside her. She looks other way
ANANT - hey navya.. Sorry
He holds his ears. She looks at him and smile. He too smile looking at her
NAVYA - it's ok. Waise bhi me kuch jyada hi darpok hu. He na?
ANANT - nahi bilkul nahi
She smiled at him and he nodded in yes
ANANT - to kya hua. Thoda bht darna chahiye. It's scientifically said that insan ka dar uske andar hi hota he
NAVYA - acha? Aur ye tum ek child psychology ki student ko bata rahe ho?
Asked navya for which Anant laugh. Navya also smile at him
ANANT - tumhe sachme meri bat ka bura nahi laga na?
NAVYA - no Anant. Tum to mere dost ho. Aur dost ki bat ka kabhi bura thodi mante he
She smile while Anant looks at her
ANANT - kya me sirf tumhara dost hi hu navya?
As soon as Anant asked this question navya looks at him in surprise. They were staring each other. Suddenly navya looks away
NAVYA - hum dinner ke liye niche chalte he
Saying she was about to go when he holds her hand. She stopped. He moves towards her
ANANT - tumne mere question ka answer nahi diya. Kya hum dono me dosti ka hi ek rishta he?
Navya gets little nervous. Anant observed her.
ANANT - 15 salo se jaise me tumse milne ka wait karta tha waise hi kya tum bhi karti thi navya? Kya tumhe bhi mere tarah milne ki bechaini thi? Bolo navya
He came near her. Navya was standing straight while Anant join his forehead to her back head. Suddenly meeta's voice disturb them
NAVYA - tum niche ajao
Saying navya goes from there. Anant smile in disbelief.
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TO BE CONTINUED...

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