FF: JANE DIL ME KABSE HE TU...!!! Updated @page 46 - Page 21

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: silla

Ek stupid ritika ke lye teen logon ka dil toota hai ;) anyways thankuu so much for lovely update

Ya true. Thank you for reading.. Stay tuned
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for reading
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -meru-

Ab ye aditi kon haii ... Nice one cont soon

Aditya... Well you will know soon. I can say he is a farishta to make anya United.. Welcome keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
really a good update keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: storywriter098

really a good update keep it up 👍🏼

Thanks alottt dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
CONTINUE...
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Next morning everyone were sitting on dinning for breakfast. Navya was dressed in multi color top and jeans.
SUGANDHA - me kya keh rahi thi Om, shadi ki shopping thodi bachi thi. So let's go for it
OM - ok
ANANT - mom I will not be able to come
Navya and ritika looks at him in surprise
DEEPAK - kyu beta?
ANANT - uncle, actually I have some important work
RITIKA - shadi ke ek hafte pehele bhi tumhe important work he Anant
Navya looks down. Anant smile lightly
ANANT - yes ritika. Abhi bhi bohot sare important decisions lena baki he
Said Anant looking at navya while she also stare him. Ritika looks confused. Ranbir inturpts
RANBIR - Anant.. Do one thing. Finish your work and directly come to the mall. Is it fine mom?
Sugandha nodded in yes and so as Anant. He gets up to go when Aditya came there. Anant and Aditya hugs each other
ANANT - early morning buddy?
ADITYA - ya I thought mujhe thoda jyada time yaha spend karna chahiye
Anant looks jealous
ANANT - you doesn't waste your time right?
ADITYA - ya right. Waise bhi kehte he na kal kare so aaj kar aaj kare so ab
Joke Aditya while Anant smile in disbelief
ADITYA - and I think it's bit difficult to win navya's heart
ANANT - ya who else knows better than me
Said Anant looking down while Aditya looks confused
ANANT - well.. Got to go.. See ya
Anant left from there and Aditya moves towards dining
ADITYA - hello everyone
RITIKA - hi Adi
He sat beside navya and ritika smirk
MEETA - take beta. Have something
Meeta offered Aditya some breakfast
RANBIR - so buddy.. Itni subah? Kuch kam tha?
ADITYA - no nothing.. I was just passing by so thought to say you all good morning and go
RITIKA - good morning... Now??
Teases ritika to Aditya while he looks embarrassed
NAVYA - come on ritu.. Adi tumhe ritika ki bat ka bura manne ki koi zarurat nahi he. Ye to aisi hi he
Smile navya lightly. Meeta gets up and indicates deepak to follow. Sugandha looks at them and meeta indicates her too to come
SUGANDHA - Ranbir.. Just come with me
Ranbir nodded in yes and follow sugandha. Ritika looks at them and sugandha indicates her to keep Aditya and navya alone
RITIKA - uncle, chaliye mujhe apko kuch dikhana he
Om looks confused while ritika blink at him. He nodded in yes and gets up to go. Now only navya and Aditya were there alone. Meeta sugandha and ritika were listening them quietly
ADITYA - aise achanak sab chale gaye?
Asked Aditya getting embarrassed. Navya looks at him straight
NAVYA - I know why you are here Adi
Aditya smile at her while she looks down
NAVYA - see Adi.. Mene tumse milne ke liye ha sirf ma papa ke liye ki he. Genuinely speaking I am not ready for this. Not ready to get married
Said navya looking down. Meeta sugandha and ritika looks sad and so as Aditya. He nodded in disbelief.
ADITYA - so who told you that I am ready?
Navya looks at him while everyone were confused
ADITYA - navya.. First time I saw your photo on Facebook, I decided to meet you. But then I got to know that you doesn't want to. Fir ek din pata chala tum mujhse milna chahti ho. Yesterday I saw you at engagement and I thought that you need a friend
Navya smile lightly. Aditya smile at her
ADITYA - tumhe kya laga? Me engagement party me ladkiyo ke liye gane gata hu?
Joked Aditya for which navya laughs mockingly
ADITYA - I just want to become your friend. No, promises, no relationship. Only friendship.. Mujhse dosti karogi?
He makes his hand forward. Navya goes in thoughts. Meeta and rest were praying silently.
ADITYA - mere dost kehte he me kafi acha dost hu.
Navya smile and meet her hand with his. All became happy
ADITYA - soch lo. Aksar ladkiya mere pyar me pad jati he
Navya quickly take her hand back and Aditya laugh. Ritika makes meeta believe that everything will be fine
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Anant was in his office working. Suddenly ritika's call disturb him
ANANT - Hello
Sounded Anant in a low voice
RITIKA - me yaha ghar par bor ho rahi hu aur tum office me Kam kar rahe ho
Said ritika complaining. Anant took a deep breath
ANANT - I am having little work ritika
RITIKA - how much work you will do Anant! Remember we have to go for shopping at evening?
ANANT - sorry ritika. I will not be able to join you all
Decline Anant for which ritika gets upset
RITIKA - what yar Anant? Chalo na please
ANANT - ritika bye.. I am busy
Saying Anant disconnected the call. Ritika became sad. Ranbir was passing through when he saw ritika looking sad. He moves towards her
RANBIR - ritika..
She looks at him and smile lightly
RANBIR - Come for lunch. Mom is calling
She nodded in yes. Ranbir smile lightly and was about to leave when she stop him
RITIKA - wait Ranbir
He looks at her. She gets closer to him
RITIKA - tumhe kabhi pyar hua he?
Ranbir gets surprised hearing her question
RANBIR - what?
Ritika sigh relief and nodded in nothing
RANBIR - what happened ritika?
RITIKA - mene suna tha, pyar jaisi beautiful chiz nahi hoti.. Ab dekho na, Anant loves me, so when he gets angry I didn't feel sad about it
Said ritika smiling. Ranbir looks elsewhere
RITIKA - Pyar sabkuch sikha deta he
RANBIR - ha.. Sabkuch.. Agar kuch nahi sikhata to uske bagair jina
Ranbir gets emotional and before ritika ask him anything he left from there. Ritika looks at him in confusion...
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TO BE CONTINUED...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice updt ritika ko kch smjh kyun nhi arHa arghhh
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -meru-

Nice updt ritika ko kch smjh kyun nhi arHa arghhh

Ayega jaldi.. Don't worry
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hate ritika. Love u Anya. Thanks for the update dear. Love u love u love u anya
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for ur update... puri ki puri khandaan pagal ha!!! sab mere anya k piche pare hue ha..damn ritika.

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